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Was terribly busy and missed a day, but happily found two chapters waiting for me. 🙂 I love the detail you’ve brought to Isabelle’s dreams and the connection to astronaut undergarments. That should make her transition to diapers a little smoother or at least easier to rationalize. Although this story reads like a slow burn, Isabelle has lost ten years in a very short span of “actual” time. I’m truly curious to see just how far her regression will go. This is really an adorable story and I like how invested you are in building characters with some depth.
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The LETO Syndicate - Epilogue (7/5/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Indeed. I’m curious what the one-on-one session might reveal.- 147 replies
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Doesn’t take a rocket scientist to figure out who “one of mommy’s friends” is. Since there’s no mention thus far of Isabelle’s father (unless I totally missed it), there’s no hint of how she might react to another person in her mom’s life. The slippers have already caused her to wet without realizing it during the day, but with no physical regression recently. It’ll be interesting to see what tomorrow brings.
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The LETO Syndicate - Epilogue (7/5/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
There are a couple of thoughts I can’t seem to shake. First, this situation (ultra-wealthy mystery clients operating beyond the law for designer human toys) is eerily reminiscent of a certain island-of-evil from LiL. You’ve provided only a few details of this world…enough to make it seem like our earth, but not enough to entirely rule out another one. Second, I don’t recall you saying this was to be a totally non-crossover story. You said it would be “different,” and it certainly is. So in my mind it’s still possible for Freya or another character to suddenly pop up in a way that would only make sense in hindsight (I mean, there is precedent). If nothing else, you should smile that you’ve got me scratching my head and wondering about veiled storylines.- 147 replies
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The LETO Syndicate - Epilogue (7/5/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
You are so very good (😈) at building mysterious threats and hidden forces into your stories. They lurk just below the surface so we never get comfortable with a situation, even a warm fuzzy one. It’s yet another layer that makes your writing so interesting. ❤️💕- 147 replies
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Changing the Future - Chapter 22 (1-25-2025)
FloridaKid replied to Tisha's topic in Story and Art Forum
Flashbacks and time jumps in stories usually give me a headache…mostly because my mind races to try and fill in the blanks instead of being patient and waiting for the author to roll out the rationale behind things. I’ve read a couple of your stories and I know if I can manage to find that patience here it will pay off. The “problem” is confusing, but I trust you to weave a good story. 🙂- 84 replies
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Emerald Princess - Revised Edition - Epilogue (5/18/2023)
FloridaKid replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
Ohmygosh how much I love this story. All of the elements you bring to life wonderfully woven into two worlds’ worth of adventure. As much as I enjoyed it the first time, this revision is indeed a seamlessly smooth read. As a side note…I’ve noticed other authors’ stories where you comment and I tend to gravitate toward those. I love your writing style and the stories you choose to comment on reflect that to a certain extent. I’ve not been disappointed. 🙂- 262 replies
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I have really enjoyed your world building so far, but I have to say your vivid description of the daycare is next level. I love the detail…making it very easy to build an image in my mind, presumably of the place Isabelle will eventually spend time and probably find her own name on the potty chart. Honestly, seeing the growth in your storytelling has been almost as interesting as the story itself. It’s particularly impressive given the short time frame in which it has happened. I hope you will continue writing and posting after Isabelle’s story is complete.
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The LETO Syndicate - Epilogue (7/5/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Only you could take creepy humiliation, add a layer of warm and fuzzy, and make it work. I love it. Can’t wait to see how much of their newborn conditioning and newfound feelings spill over into their toddler phase.- 147 replies
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I love how at each step of Isabel’s regression you keep threads to the previous stage, like certain decorations or furnishings, which help her accept the warped reality. No slippers today, so perhaps no further regression? This really is an adorable story. I find your formatting easier to read now, so thanks again for being open to suggestions!
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It is sad that she’s missing out on her old friends, but she’s forming new relationships at each “stage” of her regression so far, so there’s hope she won’t be lonely for long. It seems her regression is accelerating a bit, so it’ll be interesting to see how long until she’s dancing that toddler recital (with a slight bulge in the tights?). I do like how you’re keeping her feelings and emotions such an important part of the story. I look forward to your updates!
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Understatement of the week. I was about two-thirds of the way through this chapter when I realized I’d have to reread it to sort everything out. In fact, I might have to go back to the referenced stories and skim a bit. I do love your connections and thank you for carefully keeping things straight (I know that is a challenge!). Dare I hope for a happily ever after for Beth and Connor? The hopeless romantic in me refuses to give up on that! And I’ll second @Guilend, your character and relationship development is extraordinary. It’s one of the things I love best about your stories!
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The LETO Syndicate - Epilogue (7/5/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
You truly have a gift for taking a common stuck-in-a-bad-situation theme and making it exceptional. As is your style, you make it as much about the relationships as the experience, and that’s what sets this apart from the others. I can’t wait to see where you take Judy and Sarah. 😍- 147 replies
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Emerald Princess - Revised Edition - Epilogue (5/18/2023)
FloridaKid replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
Still reading and still loving it! ❤️💕- 262 replies
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Unfair: A Diaper Dimension Novel (Chapter 129 Uploaded!)
FloridaKid replied to Personalias's topic in Story and Art Forum
Wow. That was crazy-intense. I love a good roller coaster and oh my, what a coaster you’ve created. -
I’m touched by your appreciation post! I love what you’ve done with this story and the fact that you are willing to incorporate readers’ suggestions. There are several things that stand out to me. You pay great attention to detail in the ballet sequences/scenes. As a musician I am familiar with ballet solely from the perspective of an orchestra pit and the music history/appreciation courses I took in college. However, I am quite impressed by the level of detail in your writing and the apparent knowledge you possess. I am also impressed with how easily you make Isabelle a relatable character. I find it easy to feel her emotions and empathize with her trials. Given the strength of your writing, I am not surprised by the number of hits this story has. You have every right to be proud of your effort! ❤️💕
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Emerald Princess - Revised Edition - Epilogue (5/18/2023)
FloridaKid replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
Ahhhh…love the post-battle calm. This is one of those times I really wish I had a copy of the original version for comparison. I feel like you’ve made some changes in the recovery part of the story…or perhaps it’s just that the battle itself left more of an impression on me than the recovery the first time? In any case, it’s a great read, so count it as a win for the revised edition. 🙂 Now I’m very much looking forward to their return to classes and upcoming end-of-course assessments.- 262 replies
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The LETO Syndicate - Epilogue (7/5/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Wow. The LFP touch on this theme is just whole-other-level. I can already see the depth of things to come… What mind games will be played? Who are the buyers? Where does the super strength come from? Bonding? Returning to a normal adult state at the end of every day knowing you’ll just fall back into baby mode as the conditioning kicks in? Either terrible or blissful depending on your point of view. Seems from certain hints that Judy may ultimately fall into the latter category. Once again I’m hooked on one of your stories. 🙂- 147 replies
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Indeed a great slow burn. I’m really curious to see if Isabelle figures out how Mel fits into this warped reality and her original reality (assuming of course that she ever returns to her original reality). Seemingly everyone else has a place in both worlds, so why not Mel? Unless she is somehow tied to the slippers solely through the warped reality. Definitely enjoying your work on this story! 💕
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Unfair: A Diaper Dimension Novel (Chapter 129 Uploaded!)
FloridaKid replied to Personalias's topic in Story and Art Forum
This is quite possibly my favorite chapter so far. I am glad that Clark is starting to see Janet as more of a person…yes, I understand why he would hate her, but his brattiness toward her was beginning to wear thin. I, too, am puzzled by Beouf. I don’t see that her view of Littles has been rocked even though she was clearly shaken by the whole situation with Tracy. I am really interested to see where you go with this. Thank you again for posting chapters here. It’s greatly appreciated.