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  1. FloridaKid
    Happy Birthday! (Although given our time zones I’ve missed it by now… hope it was wonderful!) No shock that being cared for as a little is exactly what Nia needs. I love how you’ve built up to this, though. Your character development has always been one of the things I enjoy in your writing. I expect this will eventually lead back to the mansion’s nursery and tie into Victoria’s lost love.
  2. FloridaKid
    Ditto here. I didn’t think this universe had crossover characters, but feel like Elizabeth should ring a bell. ??‍♂️
  3. FloridaKid
    I’ll admit to being unfamiliar with the universe on which the original EP story was based, but kind of figured this was about the point where changes would be noticeable. Knowing what’s around the bend in “Ireland” does make it interesting reading this time. I love how you build worlds…so easy to imagine and relate to the settings, characters and emotions.
  4. FloridaKid
    Love that Nia is still trying to be bratty but struggles with her feelings for Beatrice and Victoria. This is just adorable. ❤️?
  5. FloridaKid
    Alright, m’amour…you’ve teased with ghosts, clandestine operations, forbidden relationships and academy-verse crossover characters! With only a couple of chapters left, I’m dying to know who (or what) is behind the academies and what the littles are candidates for.
  6. FloridaKid
    Kind of wish I had a copy of the original for comparison, but even without that I am pretty sure I know where more significant world building changes will come in Sofia’s near future. Great first couple of chapters (again)!! ? I’m being super picky here, but your work is so good it seems a shame to leave even slight mistakes. In one paragraph you say it’s a yellow sweater and in the next refer to it as a sweatshirt. ?
  7. FloridaKid
    Loved the original! Based only on what I recall, this seems very similar so far. I’m looking forward to seeing the changes you’ve made, though! So glad to see you posting again!
  8. FloridaKid
    I’m joining the Nia-is-too-much-for-demons-to-handle camp and they’re worried. With Bea’s help, I think sooner or later both she and Vic will realize that. I also think Vic’s reason for wanting to end the world (at least humanity anyway) will come back around to the lost love and something people did to cause their death, which is probably how Vic met Bea in the first place.
  9. FloridaKid
    Bea is connecting the dots. I think she understands exactly who Nia is, but is waiting for confirmation before telling Vic. I love how you’re revealing bits of Vic and Bea’s past. Seems there’s quite a lot going on there.
  10. FloridaKid
    Love the direction you’re taking this story and the relationship. My guess is the reality warp will take another “little” turn overnight and she’ll end up in progressively more infantile clothing
  11. FloridaKid
    Another great chapter. So looking forward to two-per-week. ?
  12. FloridaKid
    Interesting start. 3…strikes?
  13. FloridaKid
    <deep sigh> You made this hopeless romantic happy with that ending. Truly as close to the best of both worlds as Ellie was likely to get. Kinda called it with Eve, but didn’t see Freya coming. Very nice crossover! I love your writing, particularly your value of an individual’s needs and feelings. Even in the dark moments those values aren't lost and because of that there’s always hope. Thank you for delivering another wonderful adventure! It would truly warm my heart to hear that you are able to find your happy place. I hope you find relief from whatever is causing your stress. ?
  14. FloridaKid
    Really enjoying your story. Hope Elise finds her happy place, whether with Danny or Julie (both somehow?). The last loop brings in the possibility of Elise getting brain-fried and Eve helping to unscramble things if the loop doesn’t reset. It’s getting harder and harder to figure out who really wants what Elise wants and who has ulterior motives. Even if the motive is love, they’ve chosen some very odd ways to show it. Can’t wait to see how you resolve this. ?
  15. FloridaKid
    Curiouser and curiouser. And your earlier comment about names got me to thinking about yours, also deliberately chosen, I’m sure. Mia Moore possibly a variation of m’amour? Just a crazy guess.
  16. FloridaKid
    So, am I to take from this that Danny has a clue about the loops?!
  17. FloridaKid
    In my heart I am, but I’ve read enough of your stories to be wary. ??
  18. FloridaKid
    Why do I get the feeling you’re setting Julie up to be the real reason all of this is happening? I really hope not, but I can see it as a definite possibility.
  19. FloridaKid
    Such a great story. Love it ? I love how respect for others is always built into your stories. Says a lot about the author…
  20. FloridaKid
    Love and jealousy can make you crazy. All Julie had to do was respect Elise enough to talk, and she blew it. Not ready to give up on Julie and her love for Elise just yet. I’ll be interested to see how this all plays out and what (or who) is behind the loops/mind games. If all paths truly lead to adoption, I hope Elise can get Julie to see how Catherine and Tom approach it.
  21. FloridaKid
    Now that you mention the intentionality, I’ll have to dig into your other protagonists’ names. I did appreciate the multicultural approach. I have family connections to China, so that one caught me right from the start. As far as the name Ai, I’m going to go out on a limb and guess that it’s possible there’s an Artificial Intelligence at work here. Which leads me back to Lyra Silver. Her story is called Luna, and it’s about an artificial intelligence-based app. It’s a fairly quick read and very good. Check it out if you have time. She mentions at the outset an editor named Sophie…maybe your Sophie? I hope your holidays are wonderful and you get some rest between semesters…but don’t leave Wendy hanging there too long! ? <Follow up: Did look up the names. Nice touch!>
  22. FloridaKid
    BTW…I hope your finals went well. I know it can be stressful. ??
  23. FloridaKid
    *walks away…head down…might go in a corner and pout* Not entirely shocked, but definitely disappointed in Julie. You gave me hope, then pulled the rug out from under me. Rats. (I still love the story) I mentioned after one of the early “loops” that this might all just be a head game…looks more and more likely.
  24. FloridaKid
    @Mia Moore I’ve binged your Academy series, and although they are a tad darker than my usual fare, you’ve quite captured my imagination! I love your psychological mind game approach and how you’ve built an interconnected world of plots and characters. I am particularly gratified that you took the advice of @BabySofia and added another point of view. It adds so much depth to your characters and your Academy-verse. It’s a device she and @LittleFallenPrincess use quite effectively. For me, one of the things that stood out in A:I, and honestly one of the reasons I was so captivated, was the name of your Asian character, Ai. I don’t know if you realized it, but “ai” is the Chinese word for love and the written character for it has the radical for heart at its center. I am super curious about the appearance of Lyra and Mr. Silver at roughly the same time. Any chance that’s a nod to author @Lyra Silver? (also one of my favorites). That said, I am thoroughly enjoying your writing and can’t wait to see how you tie everything together!
  25. FloridaKid
    Wondering how long it’s going to take them to realize they can’t trade Nia for the Child of Darkness because she is the Child of Darkness. I think they got the incantation right, they just got something they didn’t expect.
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