“Oh does little can make bad ones” Hailey asked as she piled the bread a bit and placed it down in the pan before she sprinkled the 3 Cheeses on it.” It doesn’t bother me much but sometimes it can catch you off guard.
Good chapter!
Sucks about her clothes and her money. Good thing Erica is there to help her in such unfortunate circumstances.
In all seriousness this could all be a coincidence but Erica was pretty quick to pull out the highchair, sippy cup, pull-up and diaper. On the other hand she did give her the warning about how the college is aware of the effects of the portal and the demerit system.
Actually, are the portal effect even real or is it just a cover for poisoning portal littles?
Nice opening three chapters.
In LCW, it seemed like Holly (chief of pediatrics at University Teaching Hospital) and her mom Ivy (CEO of the same hospital) idly watched as Holly's subordinate Erica manipulated Katie via hypnosis, coming from the same dimension as Holly.
Thus, I have a feeling that this was written to clear the name of these two characters, and at the same time, something tells me that you are planning to clear Erica's name as well. I'm beginning to suspect that Erica is not responsible for the state Katie was in when the students from our dimension met with Professor Owens.
In my opinion, Katie's hypnotizing was either an accident (e.g. Erica's niece, in the same way that then four-year-old Kristina made Stacy watch the hypnotic Amazonian equivalent of Sofia the First) or the bitch who was waiting tables in the hospital cafeteria when Connor, Beth, and Reila were there for lunch.
As for Erica talking to Katie like a preschooler, first of all Erica suffers from maternal fever like all Amazons and secondly how are you supposed to talk to someone who is mentally on the level of a preschooler? And as for Erica's promise to adopt Katie, that situation basically has no other solution than adoption.
Further, I'm assuming you don't want to leave Katie with her brain on mush, so I'm quite looking forward to the anti-hypnotic treatment from the perspective of a hypnosis-affected person.
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