Bully Turned Baby Chapter 8 03-21-20 (updated!)

[Tfmonkey]

Hey everyone!

I know a lot of people wondered where this story went and I want to let everyone know I really needed to edit this story. I only started writing around 6 months ago and I am still learning a lot. I am trying my best to become the best writers I can and I have such a wonderful teacher helping me currently. I have edited the story out and I am thinking that it will be a lot easier to read and know whats going on. Please Enjoy!

 

Chapter 1:

 

Anna stared looking into the mirror in her room she smiled with excitement looking over her graduation gown knowing the day had finally came. She was finally leaving the hell hole which gave her a sense of hope that she would never have to deal with Bethany ever again. Anna’s mind began to play what felt like a broken record through her mind as she thought back to all the terrible things the girl had put her through. She thought back to one in particular where she was standing in the girls bathroom in gym class and Bethany had pushed her into one of sinks landing in a puddle of water as Bethany yelled for the other girls to come into the room as they all chanted that she had wet her panties. She tried to tell them what really happened, but Bethany’s popularity always powered through the truth. Anna wasn’t even hearing the door open as the sound of her mother wasn’t even being picked up by her mind as she jumped feeling a hand being placed onto her shoulder. 

 

She turned around to see her mother behind her looking with a bit of worry asking, “is everything ok?”  

 

Anna nodded to her mother saying, “just ready to get this day over with”

 

Ms. Giles smiled to her daughter asking “is this about Bethany?” as Anna slowly nodded. 

 

Ms. Giles smiled at her daughter beginning to take a seat on her daughter’s bed patting the bed motioning for her to come take a seat.

 

Anna smiled at her mother who felt like she was the only friend she ever had growing up and walked over and sat next to her.  

 

Ms. Giles smiled saying “my little girl is finally growing up and I think when you start your intern program next week your mind will begin to get off everything Bethany had ever put you through” 

 

Anna shrugged her shoulders saying “hopefully”

 

Ms. Giles rubbed her daughters back saying “girls like Bethany have a lot of growing up to do and when she realizes what the real world is like she is going to have a tough time adjusting”

 

 Anna smiled at her mother asking “you think so?”

 

Ms. Giles nodded at her daughter saying “I know so, besides what is that spoiled brat evening majoring in college in?”

 

Anna remembered back to her day in class where everyone spoke what they were going to major in or do after graduation.

 

“Bethany said she was going to become a model” 

 

Ms. Giles giggled at her daughter as Anna asked, “what was so funny?” 

 

“it kind of makes since for that little tramp to do something that takes no knowledge” as they both laughed. 

 

Anna looked at her mother reaching in for a big hug telling her “how much she loved her”

 

Ms. Giles returned the hug telling her “always and that they needed to get her to her ceremony”

 

Anna walked to her dresser to grab her camera and followed her mother out of the room. 

 

After Anna walked over and had finally gotten her diploma, she listened to giggles coming from the front seats staring down at Bethany who couldn’t help but yell out a word she didn’t like, the word “freak” as Anna took her seat. She began to feel emotionally depressed like she had for most of the year as she looked over at her mother who smiled knowing that she was right about what she said earlier. She was just so ready to start her internship and to get away from all this as the principle of the school congratulated her and her class and they all tossed their caps officially making them graduates. Anna quickly hurried over to her mother telling her that she was ready to leave as Ms. Giles saw how upset her daughter was hoping that it would get better before getting worse. 

 

2 years later

 

Anna had music blaring in her music as she stared at all her recent photos she had taken inside her black room. She stared at how beautiful her recent work was knowing how far she had come since her high school days. She tried to never think about them anymore and only tried to look towards the future and knew her last day of her internship was today and she would officially be a professional. She was focusing so hard on the photos she was developing not even hearing the door behind her open as her teacher Mr. Sparks walked inside. 

 

Anna felt one of her ear buds leave her ear and quickly turned around to see her teacher smiling at her and her pictures telling her “how amazing everything look” as Anna smiled thanking him. He grabbed a photo of a small child she had recently taken when she was working her side job at a local daycare and was amazed to see how everything had developed in the picture and spoke telling her “you have come so far Anna and I am going to hate to lose you, are you applying anywhere?”

 Anna shook her head telling him “I am still looking unfortunately, but my mother’s sister owns a modeling agency back home and I may try to get in with her.” 

 

Mr. Spark smiled at Anna telling her “I am sure they would love to have you after they see all of your amazing photos”  

 

Anna smiled thanking her teacher before giving him one last hug saying, “I will have to stop by after I get settled down" 

 

“I would like that” 

Anna finished developing her photos after Mr. Sparks had left the room she continued thinking about her job at the daycare wondering to herself if maybe her aunt could help her get a job working with children or even babies, but her mind began to think she never really knew what her aunt Melissa’s studio did and began to think back to the last time she saw her, but remembered she hadn’t seen her since she was at least 10 or 11. She smiled as the last of her photos watching as they finished developing and hung them to dry. She began to wonder what life outside of school was going to be like but knew she had come so far to let anything from keeping her away from her dreams. 

 

She walked out of the dark room and out of the classroom door knowing she needed to get to her dorm. She opened her door to see the once full room now compacted down to just a suitcase and carried the bag out of the room and towards her car. After getting her luggage strapped into her car, she pulled out her phone to see she had a missed call from her mother and began to tell herself she would call her on the way home. It had been a whole year since the last time she had spoken to her mother and knew her mother would be shocked when she would see her.  It’s kind of weird to think, but it felt like she had hit puberty late and she had grown almost a foot taller and had much larger breast. 

 

She began to wonder if her mother would even recognize her or even anybody in her old town. She walked back inside the classroom and into the black room seeing her photos had finished drying and tossed them all into her photo box. She looked around the room one last time knowing how much she was going to miss this place as she flipped the switch and walked out the room. She didn’t even see Mr. Spark waiting for her outside the door and almost ran into him as she spoke saying “I am going to really miss this place” as Mr. Sparks smiled saying “were going to miss you Anna, but we know you’re going to do big things” as Anna smiled giving her teacher one last hug goodbye as Mr. Sparks handed Anna a large picture frame. She about cried seeing her name written on the diploma seeing she had finally graduated and knew her last seconds were coming to an end at the school and thanked her teacher for everything as she walked out of the classroom and towards her car. 

 

Anna put her new diploma along with her camera bag and picture box in the back seat and buckled herself in ready to get home to start her career wherever it would take her. Anna began to think about the last time she had went home and knew her old house hadn’t changed much, but slowly wondered what her mother was going to think when she saw how much she had grown since she had seen her. It took her almost 2 hours to reach her city limits smiling knowing she had finally made it back home.

 

 She looked around her old city looking at all the mom and pop shops and her old high school still in the same place as the thoughts of her tormentor Bethany filled her thoughts, but Anna wasn’t going to allow her to take control of her again and shook them off as she finally made it into her old neighborhood noticing nothing new and pulled into the driveway. She put her car into park grabbing only her camera and photo box feeling exhausted from the drive and told herself she could get her bag in a little while. She opened her front door and walked inside not hearing anything coming from inside as she turned to walk into her leaving room as a multitude of people jumped from different directions yelling “surprise” as Anna jumped looking around the room to see her mother and the rest of her family even her aunt Melissa. She couldn’t help but smile as her mother was now in her face saying “I wanted to throw you a surprise graduation party!” as Anna hugged her mother thanking her for this as Ms. Giles hugged her now taller daughter asking “did you grow since I last saw you?”  

 

Anna giggled saying “we have a lot to talk about momma.”

 

Anna was glad she didn’t have that large of a family but was happy to have the ones that came here as her eyes made their way over towards her aunt Melissa who was pouring herself a glass of wine. She walked over to her with her camera and photos still in hand and spoke saying “hey Melissa”.

 

Melissa turned around to see her niece standing behind her and spoke saying “hello Anna, it has been such a long-time since I have seen you” 

 

Anna laughed at her aunt’s comment saying, “almost 10 years” 

 

Melissa couldn’t believe it had been so long and asked, “has it really been that long?” as Anna nodded.

  

Anna stared smiling at her aunt knowing she needed to stop beating around the bush and finally spoke saying “so mom told me years back that you owned some type of modeling studio?” 

 

Melissa giggled saying “she did, did she” 

 

Anna nodded waiting for her aunt to stop smiling and listened as she spoke telling her “I am guessing now that my niece is a photographer she is wondering if I can help her with a job?” 

 

Anna nodded nervously fumbling with the photo box in her hand pulling out some of her recent photos she had taken from the daycare and handed them to her aunt saying “these are some I recently took at my last job”  

 

Melissa took the photos seeing the children and babies in each photo asking, “did you work at a daycare?”

 

Anna nodded telling her “I kind of have a thing for childcare” 

 

Melissa giggled telling her “I think I may be able to get you a position at my studio” 

 

Anna's eyes grew wide and spoke with pure joy saying “really” 

 

“I would love for you to come by tomorrow while were shooting and you can meet some people and see the type of things we do”

 

Anna felt butterflies going through her spine thanking her aunt and wrapping her arms around her and giving her a hug. 

Anna couldn’t believe that this was really happening watching her aunt writing down the address of the studio on a piece of paper and handing it to her and explaining to her “be there at 8 and tell them your with Melissa Giles” 

 

Anna nodded thanking her aunt once again

 

 Melissa smiled telling her “your welcome Anna” as she watched her walk away. 

 

She felt like her heart was beating a million miles an hour and couldn’t believe she had a possible job tomorrow so quickly and began to wonder what her mother was going to think if she was going to work with her sister.  

 

After the party had settled down and everyone went home she watched her mother wave good bye to her last relative as she turned around to stare at her saying “I am so happy to have my little girl home or should I say big girl” as both of them laughed at one another. 

 

Anna smiled at her mother saying “I have really missed you mom and we have a lot of catching up to do" as they made their way into the kitchen. 

 

She knew her mother wasn’t fond of her sister very much, but never really understood why and began to wonder how she was going to explain tomorrow as her mother walked to the fridge asking, “can I get you something to drink?” 

 

Anna shook her head saying “mom, I really need to talk to you about something”

 

 Jackie Giles turned around and saw the worried look in her daughters eye and walked to the table and sat down asking “what’s wrong sweety?”

 

“Mom I know we have some catching up to do, but I may have possibly my first real job tomorrow and I want to ask you if you know anything about it”

 

Ms. Giles asked her daughter “who is the job with?” 

 

Anna nervously bit her lip saying, “your sister Melissa”. 

 

Jackie stared at her daughter saying “Anna I know you chose the photography scene and I figured this conversation may come up one day so if you think I am upset with you about talking to Melissa I’m not, my sister owns a business that runs something that isn’t very respectable, but that was also 10 years ago” 

 

Anna began to wonder what she was talking about asking “what do you mean not respectable?”

 

 Jackie sighed saying “your aunt Melissa ran a porn studio” 

 

Anna stared wide eyed at her mother saying “seriously?” 

 

“yes, that’s why we never really spoke in a while, are mother wasn’t happy about it and she felt like your aunt was a disgrace to our family” 

 

Anna looked down starting to wonder if going tomorrow was such a good idea as her mother saw her down look and spoke saying “I still think you should go tomorrow”

 

Anna spoke asking “seriously?”

 

“I do and even if you work in that line of work you will always be my daughter and I will love you with whatever work you choose to do.”

 

Anna felt so overjoyed and got out of her chair and walked around giving her mother a hug telling her “how much she loved her and that she was going to give tomorrow a shot and who knows her aunt might be shooting something totally different now” 

 

“your probably right, how about we get some pizza and you can tell me all about school” 

 

Anna smiled opening the photo box and pulled out the photos she had taken over the last year and watched as her mother picked up the phone to place the order knowing tomorrow was going to be a total new adventure. 

 

 

 

 

[Cya]

It's looking much better now with the separations made for the dialogue.  Still rough, but you're getting better. 

[Tld17]

Don’t listen to cya someone who has never written anything of note on here. Your story is not rough at all. Your story is great.

[thedman]

The story was allright the way it was originally posted. I'm sorry that you felt you needed to take it down and re post it in a different format

[kasarberang]

While personally I find this format easier to read (excluding the bold text) I didn't see anything wrong with the previous version or it's formatting.

If this is a change you personally wanted to make than I'm happy you did, because the most important thing is that you make a story that you enjoy.

If you did this do to anyone else's critique/comment, just know what matters in the end is what you think of the stories you write, other people will love what you make if you love what you make.

 

Love your stories by the way.

[Cya]

5 hours ago, Tld17 said:

Don’t listen to cya someone who has never written anything of note on here. Your story is not rough at all. Your story is great.

 

Wow, that's one of the most disrespectful things anyone has ever told me. It's one thing if you don't like my stories, but you don't have to shit on me like that.

[kasarberang]

1 hour ago, Cya said:

Wow, that's one of the most disrespectful things anyone has ever told me. It's one thing if you don't like my stories, but you don't have to shit on me like that.

I agree that was absolutely uncalled for,

[Windelbaby]

I really like your stories, you always write them very well!

 

I just wonder how big Bethany is?

[Tfmonkey]

20 minutes ago, Windelbaby said:

I really like your stories, you always write them very well!

 

I just wonder how big Bethany is?

That was one problem I had when I posted it the first time I didn't say, but it does get posted in the next couple of chapters.

[Tld17]

4 hours ago, Cya said:

 

Wow, that's one of the most disrespectful things anyone has ever told me. It's one thing if you don't like my stories, but you don't have to shit on me like that.

But it is ok for you to call other people’s stories rough. You are the one who has zero respect for people on this forum. You have not contributed anything to this place and have always attacked people. You think the story is rough, send them a pm. If not keep your mouth shout. You have an attitude like your better than everyone else.

[Windelbaby]

2 hours ago, Tfmonkey said:

Das war ein Problem, das ich hatte, als ich es das erste Mal veröffentlichte, als ich es nicht sagte, aber es wird in den nächsten Kapiteln veröffentlicht.

Cool that was the last time I asked myself.

 

The story seems a little shorter than before? and never let it get you down and never let anyone tell you it's bad.

[Tfmonkey]

I had 3 chapters up last time, I will post them up over today. still editing.

[Tld17]

Don’t kill yourself editing. This is suppose to be fun. They were perfect the way they were.

[littleTomás]

Well, I think our girl has an opportunity to make a lot more money in photography at this studio than taking family photos. I guess plan B could always be doing weddings. She could also make bank doing porn on weekdays and weddings on the weekends, lol.

 

Great story!

[Windelbaby]

3 hours ago, Tld17 said:

Töte dich nicht beim Bearbeiten. Das soll Spaß machen. Sie waren perfekt wie sie waren.

that's right it should be fun and as long as it is a hobby it can always be fun even if you sit for hours or weeks.

1 hour ago, littleTomás said:

Nun, ich denke, unser Mädchen hat die Möglichkeit, in diesem Studio viel mehr Geld mit Fotografie zu verdienen als mit Familienfotos. Ich denke, Plan B könnte immer Hochzeiten sein. Sie könnte auch Bank machen Pornos an Wochentagen und Hochzeiten am Wochenende, lol.

 

Tolle Geschichte!

yes as a flower girl would be funny ?

[Windelbaby]

 

18 hours ago, Tfmonkey said:

Hallo alle miteinander!

Ich kenne viele Leute, die sich gefragt haben, wo diese Geschichte hingegangen ist, und ich möchte allen mitteilen, dass ich diese Geschichte wirklich bearbeiten musste. Ich habe erst vor ungefähr 6 Monaten angefangen zu schreiben und lerne immer noch viel. Ich versuche mein Bestes, um die besten Schriftsteller zu werden, die ich kann, und ich habe derzeit einen wunderbaren Lehrer, der mir hilft. Ich habe die Geschichte herausgeschnitten und denke, dass es viel einfacher sein wird zu lesen und zu wissen, was los ist. Genießen Sie bitte!

 

Kapitel 1:

 

Anna starrte in den Spiegel in ihrem Zimmer und lächelte aufgeregt, als sie über ihr Abschlusskleid blickte und wusste, dass der Tag endlich gekommen war. Sie verließ endlich das Höllenloch, was ihr ein Gefühl der Hoffnung gab, dass sie sich nie wieder mit Bethany auseinandersetzen musste. Annas Gedanken begannen zu spielen, was sich wie eine gebrochene Platte anfühlte, als sie an all die schrecklichen Dinge dachte, die das Mädchen sie durchgemacht hatte. Sie dachte an eine, in der sie im Fitnessstudio im Badezimmer der Mädchen stand, und Bethany hatte sie in ein Waschbecken gestoßen, das in einer Wasserpfütze lag, als Bethany die anderen Mädchen aufforderte, in den Raum zu kommen, während sie das alle sangen Sie hatte ihr Höschen nass gemacht. Sie versuchte ihnen zu erzählen, was wirklich passiert war, aber Bethanys Beliebtheit beruhte immer auf der Wahrheit. 

 

Sie drehte sich um und sah ihre Mutter hinter sich, die mit ein wenig Sorge fragte: "Ist alles in Ordnung?"  

 

Anna nickte ihrer Mutter zu und sagte: "Bin gerade bereit, diesen Tag hinter uns zu bringen."

 

Frau Giles lächelte zu ihrer Tochter und fragte: "Geht es um Bethany?", Während Anna langsam nickte. 

 

Frau Giles lächelte ihrer Tochter zu, als sie anfing, sich auf das Bett ihrer Tochter zu setzen und auf das Bett klopfte und ihr befahl, sich zu setzen.

 

Anna lächelte ihre Mutter an, die sich als die einzige Freundin fühlte, die sie jemals aufwuchs, ging hinüber und setzte sich neben sie.  

 

Frau Giles lächelte und sagte: „Mein kleines Mädchen wird endlich erwachsen und ich denke, wenn Sie nächste Woche mit Ihrem Praktikantenprogramm beginnen, werden Sie allmählich von allem abkommen, was Bethany Ihnen jemals angetan hat.“ 

 

Anna zuckte mit den Schultern sagen „hoffentlich“

 

Frau Giles rieb ihre Töchter zurück und sagte: „Mädchen wie Bethany müssen viel aufwachsen und wenn sie merkt, wie die reale Welt aussieht, wird sie es schwer haben, sich anzupassen.“

 

 Anna lächelte ihre Mutter zu fragen: „Sie denken so?“

 

Frau Giles nickte ihrer Tochter zu und sagte: "Ich weiß es, außer was ist das für ein verwöhnter Görenabend mit Hauptfach am College in?"

 

Anna erinnerte sich an ihren Tag in der Klasse, an dem alle sprachen, was sie nach dem Abschluss in den Hauptfächern machten oder machten.

 

"Bethany sagte, sie würde ein Model werden" 

 

Frau Giles ihre Tochter kicherte, als Anna fragte: „was so lustig war?“ 

 

"Es macht irgendwie Spaß, dass dieser kleine Trampel etwas macht, das kein Wissen erfordert", während sie beide lachten. 

 

Anna sah eine große Umarmung an ihre Mutter zu erreichen ihr zu sagen, „wie sehr sie sie liebte“

 

Frau Giles erwiderte die Umarmung und sagte ihr "immer und dass sie sie zu ihrer Zeremonie bringen mussten"

 

Anna ging zu ihrer Kommode, nahm ihre Kamera und folgte ihrer Mutter aus dem Raum. 

 

Nachdem Anna rübergegangen war und endlich ihr Diplom erhalten hatte, hörte sie ein Kichern von den Vordersitzen, das Bethany anstarrte, die nur ein Wort hervorbrüllte, das sie nicht mochte, das Wort „Freak“, als Anna ihren Platz einnahm . Sie begann sich emotional deprimiert zu fühlen, wie sie es fast das ganze Jahr über getan hatte, als sie zu ihrer Mutter hinüberblickte, die lächelte und wusste, dass sie recht hatte, was sie zuvor sagte. Sie war einfach so bereit, ihr Praktikum zu beginnen und von all dem wegzukommen, da das Prinzip der Schule ihr und ihrer Klasse gratulierte und sie alle offiziell ihre Mützen warfen, was sie zu Absolventen machte. Anna eilte schnell zu ihrer Mutter und sagte ihr, dass sie bereit sei zu gehen, als Frau Giles sah, wie verärgert ihre Tochter hoffte, dass es besser werden würde, bevor es schlimmer wurde. 

 

2 Jahre später

 

Anna hatte Musik in ihrer Musik, als sie all ihre letzten Fotos anstarrte, die sie in ihrem schwarzen Raum aufgenommen hatte. Sie starrte darauf, wie schön ihre jüngste Arbeit war, zu wissen, wie weit sie seit ihrer Highschool-Zeit gekommen war. Sie versuchte, nie mehr an sie zu denken und nur noch in die Zukunft zu schauen und wusste, dass ihr letzter Tag ihres Praktikums heute war und sie offiziell eine Fachkraft sein würde. Sie konzentrierte sich so sehr auf die Fotos, die sie gerade entwickelte, dass sie nicht einmal die Tür hinter sich hörte, als ihr Lehrer Mr. Sparks eintrat. 

 

Anna spürte, wie einer ihrer Gehörknospen ihr Ohr verließ und drehte sich schnell um, um zu sehen, wie ihre Lehrerin sie anlächelte und ihre Bilder ihr sagten, „wie toll alles aussieht“, während Anna lächelte und sich bei ihm bedankte. Er schnappte sich ein Foto von einem kleinen Kind, das sie vor kurzem aufgenommen hatte, als sie ihren Nebenjob in einer örtlichen Kindertagesstätte hatte, und war erstaunt zu sehen, wie sich alles auf dem Bild entwickelt hatte, und sagte ihr: „Sie sind so weit gekommen, Anna und ich gehen zu hassen, dich zu verlieren, bewirbst du dich irgendwo? "

 Anna schüttelte den Kopf und sagte: "Ich sehe leider immer noch nach, aber die Schwester meiner Mutter besitzt eine Modelagentur zu Hause und ich könnte versuchen, mit ihr zusammenzukommen." 

 

Mr. Spark lächelte Anna zu und sagte ihr: "Ich bin sicher, sie würden dich gerne haben, nachdem sie all deine tollen Fotos gesehen haben."  

 

Anna lächelte und bedankte sich bei ihrem Lehrer, bevor sie ihn ein letztes Mal umarmte. 

 

"Das würde mir gefallen" 

Anna beendete die Entwicklung ihrer Fotos, nachdem Mr. Sparks den Raum verlassen hatte. Sie dachte weiter über ihren Job in der Kindertagesstätte nach und fragte sich, ob ihre Tante ihr vielleicht dabei helfen könnte, einen Job mit Kindern oder sogar Babys zu finden, aber ihre Gedanken begannen, sie nie zu denken Ich wusste wirklich, was das Atelier ihrer Tante Melissa tat und begann, an das letzte Mal zu denken, als sie sie sah, aber ich erinnerte mich, dass sie sie nicht gesehen hatte, seit sie mindestens 10 oder 11 Jahre alt war. Sie lächelte, als die letzten ihrer Fotos sahen, als sie fertig waren entwickeln und zum Trocknen aufhängen. Sie begann sich zu fragen, wie das Leben außerhalb der Schule aussehen würde, wusste aber, dass sie so weit gekommen war, um sich von ihren Träumen abhalten zu lassen. 

 

Sie ging aus dem dunklen Raum und aus der Klassenzimmertür und wusste, dass sie in ihren Schlafsaal musste. Sie öffnete ihre Tür und sah den einst vollen Raum, der jetzt zu einem Koffer zusammengepresst war, und trug die Tasche aus dem Raum zu ihrem Auto. Nachdem sie ihr Gepäck in ihr Auto geschnallt hatte, zog sie ihr Handy heraus, um festzustellen, dass sie einen verpassten Anruf von ihrer Mutter erhalten hatte, und begann sich zu sagen, dass sie sie auf dem Heimweg anrufen würde. Es war ein ganzes Jahr her, seit sie das letzte Mal mit ihrer Mutter gesprochen hatte und wusste, dass ihre Mutter schockiert sein würde, wenn sie sie sehen würde. Es ist komisch zu denken, aber es fühlte sich so an, als ob sie spät in die Pubertät gekommen wäre und fast einen Fuß größer geworden wäre und eine viel größere Brust hätte. 

 

Sie begann sich zu fragen, ob ihre Mutter sie oder irgendjemanden in ihrer Altstadt überhaupt wiedererkennen würde. Sie ging zurück in den Klassenraum und in den schwarzen Raum, als sie sah, dass ihre Fotos vollständig getrocknet waren und warf sie alle in ihre Fotobox. Sie sah sich ein letztes Mal im Raum um und wusste, wie sehr sie diesen Ort vermissen würde, als sie den Schalter betätigte und den Raum verließ. Sie sah nicht einmal Mr. Spark, der vor der Tür auf sie wartete, und wäre fast auf ihn gestoßen, als sie sagte: "Ich werde diesen Ort wirklich vermissen", als Mr. Sparks lächelte und sagte: "Wir werden dich vermissen, Anna, aber wir." Ich weiß, dass du große Dinge tun wirst. “Anna lächelte und umarmte ihre Lehrerin zum Abschied. Mr. Sparks reichte Anna einen großen Bilderrahmen. 

 

Anna legte ihr neues Diplom zusammen mit ihrer Kameratasche und ihrer Bilderbox auf den Rücksitz und schnallte sich an, um nach Hause zu kommen und ihre Karriere zu beginnen, wohin sie auch führen würde. Anna begann darüber nachzudenken, wann sie das letzte Mal nach Hause gegangen war und wusste, dass sich in ihrem alten Haus nicht viel geändert hatte, fragte sich jedoch langsam, was ihre Mutter denken würde, als sie sah, wie viel sie gewachsen war, seit sie sie gesehen hatte. Sie bBlahte fast zwei Stunden, um an ihre Stadtgrenzen zu gelangen, während sie lächelte und wusste, dass sie es endlich nach Hause geschafft hatte.

 

 Sie sah sich in ihrer alten Stadt um und schaute sich alle Tante-Emma-Läden und ihr altes Gymnasium an, an der Stelle, an der die Gedanken ihrer Peinigerin Bethany sie erfüllten, aber Anna würde nicht zulassen, dass sie wieder die Kontrolle über sie übernahm und schüttelte sie ab, als sie es endlich in ihre alte Nachbarschaft schaffte und nichts Neues bemerkte und in die Einfahrt einbog. Sie stellte ihr Auto in den Park und griff nach ihrer Kamera und ihrer Fotobox. Sie fühlte sich erschöpft von der Fahrt und sagte sich, dass sie ihre Tasche in einer Weile holen könnte. Sie öffnete ihre Haustür und ging hinein, ohne etwas von innen zu hören, als sie sich umdrehte, um in ihr Verlassen des Zimmers zu gehen. Eine Vielzahl von Menschen sprang aus verschiedenen Richtungen und schrie "Überraschung", als Anna sich im Zimmer umsah, um ihre Mutter und den Rest zu sehen von ihrer Familie auch ihre Tante Melissa. Sie konnte nicht anders als zu lächeln, als ihre Mutter jetzt in ihrem Gesicht sagte: "Ich wollte dir eine Überraschungs-Abschlussfeier geben!", Als Anna ihre Mutter umarmte und sich dafür bedankte, als Frau Giles ihre jetzt größere Tochter umarmte und fragte: "Hast du?" Wachsen, seit ich dich das letzte Mal gesehen habe? "  

 

Anna kicherte und sagte: "Wir haben viel über Mama zu reden."

 

Anna war froh, dass sie keine so große Familie hatte, war aber froh, dass die hierher kamen, als ihre Augen zu ihrer Tante Melissa wanderten, die sich ein Glas Wein einschenkte. Sie ging mit ihrer Kamera und den Fotos noch in der Hand zu ihr und sagte „Hey Melissa“.

 

Melissa drehte sich um und sah ihre Nichte hinter sich stehen und sagte: "Hallo Anna, es ist so lange her, seit ich dich gesehen habe." 

 

Anna lachte über den Kommentar ihrer Tante: "Fast 10 Jahre" 

 

Melissa konnte nicht glauben, dass es so lange gedauert hatte und fragte: „War es wirklich so lange her?“, Als Anna nickte.

  

Anna starrte ihre Tante lächelnd an und wusste, dass sie aufhören musste, um den heißen Brei herumzureden. Schließlich sagte sie: "Also hat Mutter mir vor Jahren erzählt, dass Sie eine Art Modelstudio besaßen?" 

 

Melissa kicherte und sagte: "Sie hat, hat sie" 

 

Anna nickte und wartete darauf, dass ihre Tante aufhörte zu lächeln und hörte zu, als sie sagte: "Ich vermute, dass meine Nichte ein Fotograf ist, den sie sich fragt, ob ich ihr bei einem Job helfen kann?" 

 

Anna nickte nervös und tastete mit der Fotobox in ihrer Hand nach einigen ihrer letzten Fotos, die sie aus der Kindertagesstätte gemacht hatte, und reichte sie ihrer Tante.  

 

Melissa nahm die Fotos, die Kinder und Babys in jedem Foto zu fragen sehen „haben Sie bei einer Kindertagesstätte arbeiten?“

 

Anna nickte und sagte ihr: "Ich habe ein bisschen was für die Kinderbetreuung." 

 

Melissa kicherte und sagte zu ihr: "Ich glaube, ich kann dir eine Stelle in meinem Studio besorgen." 

 

Annas  Augen weiteten sich und sprachen mit purer Freude und sagten "wirklich" 

 

„Ich würde mich freuen, wenn du morgen während der Dreharbeiten vorbeikommst und du ein paar Leute treffen und sehen kannst, was wir alles machen.“

 

Anna spürte, wie Schmetterlinge durch ihren Rücken gingen, sich bei ihrer Tante bedankten, ihre Arme um sie schlangen und sie umarmten. 

Anna konnte nicht glauben, dass dies wirklich passierte, als sie sah, wie ihre Tante die Adresse des Studios auf ein Blatt Papier schrieb und es ihr reichte und ihr erklärte: „Seid um acht da und erzählt ihnen eure mit Melissa Giles.“ 

 

Anna nickte und bedankte sich noch einmal bei ihrer Tante

 

 Melissa lächelte und sagte ihr "Willkommen Anna", als sie sie gehen sah. 

 

Sie hatte das Gefühl, ihr Herz schlug eine Million Meilen pro Stunde und konnte nicht glauben, dass sie morgen so schnell einen möglichen Job hatte und begann sich zu fragen, was ihre Mutter denken würde, wenn sie mit ihrer Schwester arbeiten würde.  

 

Nachdem sich die Party beruhigt hatte und alle nach Hause gingen, sah sie zu, wie ihre Mutter sich von ihrer letzten Verwandten verabschiedete und sie anstarrte und sagte: „Ich bin so glücklich, mein kleines Mädchen zu Hause zu haben, oder sollte ich großes Mädchen sagen?“ von ihnen lachten sich aus. 

 

Anna lächelte ihrer Mutter zu und sagte: "Ich habe dich wirklich vermisst, Mama, und wir haben viel zu tun", als sie in die Küche gingen. 

 

Sie wusste, dass ihre Mutter nicht gern ihre Schwester war sehr viel, aber nie wirklich verstanden, warum und begann sich zu fragen, wie sie morgen als ihre Mutter ging zum Kühlschrank erklären, würde zu fragen: „Kann ich Ihnen etwas zu trinken?“ 

 

Anna schüttelte den Kopf und sagte: "Mama, ich muss wirklich mit dir über etwas reden."

 

 Jackie Giles drehte sich um und sah den besorgten Ausdruck in den Augen ihrer Tochter. Sie ging zum Tisch und setzte sich und fragte: "Was ist los, Süße?"

 

"Mama, ich weiß, dass wir Nachholbedarf haben, aber vielleicht habe ich morgen meinen ersten richtigen Job und ich möchte dich fragen, ob du etwas darüber weißt."

 

Frau Giles fragte ihre Tochter: "Bei wem ist der Job?" 

 

Anna biss sich nervös auf die Lippe und sagte: „Deine Schwester Melissa“. 

 

Jackie starrte ihre Tochter an und sagte: „Anna, ich weiß, dass Sie sich für die Fotografieszene entschieden haben, und ich dachte, dieses Gespräch könnte eines Tages auftauchen. Wenn Sie also glauben, dass ich sauer auf Sie bin, weil ich nicht mit Melissa spreche, besitzt meine Schwester ein Geschäft, das läuft etwas, das nicht sehr ansehnlich ist, aber das war auch vor 10 Jahren. “ 

 

Anna begann sich zu fragen, wovon sie sprach und fragte: "Was meinst du mit nicht seriös?"

 

 Jackie seufzte und sagte: "Deine Tante Melissa hat ein Pornostudio geführt." 

 

Anna starrte ihre Mutter mit großen Augen an und sagte "Ernst?" 

 

"Ja, deshalb haben wir uns eine Weile nicht wirklich unterhalten. Mutter war nicht glücklich darüber und sie hatte das Gefühl, deine Tante sei eine Schande für unsere Familie." 

 

Anna blickte nach unten und fragte sich, ob es eine gute Idee war, morgen zu gehen, als ihre Mutter sie nach unten sah und sagte: "Ich denke immer noch, du solltest morgen gehen."

 

Anna sprach und fragte "Ernst?"

 

„Ich mache es und selbst wenn du in dieser Branche arbeitest, wirst du immer meine Tochter sein und ich werde dich lieben, mit welcher Arbeit du dich auch entscheidest.“

 

Anna war so überglücklich und stieg von ihrem Stuhl und ging herum, umarmte ihre Mutter und erzählte ihr, "wie sehr sie sie liebte und dass sie morgen eine Chance geben würde und wer weiß, dass ihre Tante jetzt vielleicht etwas ganz anderes schießt." 

 

„Du hast wahrscheinlich recht, wie wäre es, wenn wir Pizza bekommen und du mir alles über die Schule erzählen kannst?“ 

 

Anna lächelte und öffnete die Fotobox und holte die Fotos heraus, die sie im letzten Jahr aufgenommen hatte. Sie sah zu, wie ihre Mutter zum Bestellen abnahm und wusste, dass morgen ein völlig neues Abenteuer werden würde. 

 

 

 

 

but I have to admit that I liked the longer version a little better

[Windelbaby]

would it be possible to post both versions? i am not the only one who found the long version better.

[kasarberang]

7 hours ago, Windelbaby said:

would it be possible to post both versions? i am not the only one who found the long version better.

That would be asking Tfmonkey to literally maintain 2 stories, that would be asking them to put in a lot of extra work for something as simple as the format of the story.

Personally I think whatever format Tfmonkey decides is best in his mind will be the best option for everyone involved.

[Windelbaby]

4 hours ago, kasarberang said:

Das würde Tfmonkey bitten, buchstäblich zwei Geschichten zu pflegen, das würde sie bitten, viel zusätzliche Arbeit für etwas so Einfaches wie das Format der Geschichte zu leisten.

Persönlich denke ich, dass das Format, das Tfmonkey für das Beste hält, die beste Option für alle Beteiligten ist.

it was just a suggestion

[Diaper_goddess]

22 hours ago, Tld17 said:

But it is ok for you to call other people’s stories rough. You are the one who has zero respect for people on this forum. You have not contributed anything to this place and have always attacked people. You think the story is rough, send them a pm. If not keep your mouth shout. You have an attitude like your better than everyone else.

You do know Cya posts stories on here and currently is posting a story named even mother's need supervision and they can give criticisms if they want.

[Tfmonkey]

 

Chapter 2:

 

Anna stared at her mother taking the last bite of her pizza wondering if her mother was ok with her working with her sister tomorrow, but she also knew if it felt like it wasn’t for her she could always find something different. 

 

After finishing dinner Anna smiled at her mother telling her “I am going to go ahead and get my bag from my car and call it an early night before tomorrow” 

 

“that sounds like a perfect idea, is there anything I can do to help?” as Anna shook her head and walked towards the front door. 

 

She opened her car’s trunk pulling her large suitcase of clothes staring up at her house made her think of the last time she was here she had graduated and left for college, but now she was back and about to try and get her first real job and just really wanted to make her mother proud of her.  She walked back inside the house, making her way towards her old bedroom and opened the door to see her room hadn’t changed at all since she had left, her queen size bed still against the corner wall along with her dresser and computer desk that hadn’t been used since she had left. She placed the suitcase in the corner of the room telling herself she was going to be here awhile anyway and could unpack later if she needed to. 

 

After getting settled into her room and getting changed into something more comfortable she felt herself getting sleepy knowing tomorrow was going to be a busy day and needed to get to sleep. She pulled back her covers as her mind began to think about what her mother had told her early about Melissa’s business being used to make porn and wondered how totally true any of it was. After falling asleep she kept having these weird dreams of showing up at the studio and walking onto the set seeing couples having sex. 

 

The thought of her taking photos like this really didn’t sit well with her stomach and then the last dream had bothered her even more it was like she was back in high school and the couple she was shooting was her old high school tormentor Bethany and another man. She saw the girl who had bullied her all through school and began to feel scared and woke up to see her alarm going off. 

 

Anna looked around the room feeling sweat making its way down her head as she realized she was just having a bad dream. She reached for her phone swiping the alarm off calming herself down making herself feel much better knowing none of it was real.  

 

She looked at the time seeing it was 6 am and had 2 hours before she was due at the studio for her first day. She hopped out of the bed and quickly stripped out of her sweaty pajamas and headed for the bathroom and to get ready. 

 

After getting a hot shower and spending at least 30 minutes trying to figure out what to wear she finally had chosen something easy. She looked at herself in the mirror looking over the jeans she had chosen along with one of the shirts the daycare she worked at had given her to wear as a uniform hoping that this would be ok for the studio. After sliding some sandals on she grabbed her camera and purse and walked out of her room starting to feel confident for her first day.

 

 She walked into the kitchen to see her mother placing a plate of eggs, bacon, and grits on the table saying “well don’t you look professional”  

 

Anna giggled saying “ha-ha, I just wanted to be comfortable today” 

 

“I don’t really know what you can and can’t wear in a porn studio” as they both laughed.

 

Anna quickly finished her breakfast giving her mother a hug telling her “I will see you sometime later on” 

 

“don’t forget your lunch”.

 

Anna laughed saying “thanks mom” and headed for the front door towards her car.

 

After getting into her car she pulled out her phone and put the address into her GPS and noticed the studio was only a 5-minute drive from her home which made her feel even better knowing she would get there early and not feel like she was running late knowing it was already 7:30. 

 

Anna read the directions one by one finally pulling into a parking lot to read the sign out front “The Perfect Fit” and began wondering why she hadn’t ever noticed this place before and looked around the parking lot only to see 4 cars parked. She parked in one of the closet spots and began to take slow breaths motivating herself and telling herself she could do this. She grabbed her camera, purse, and lunch and headed towards the door wondering to herself what she was about to walk into and opened the door to a young woman sitting at the front desk. 

She walked up to the front desk seeing the woman on the phone and waited for her to get off as she watched her hang up the phone asking, “can I help you?” 

 

Anna nervously spoke saying “yes mam, Melissa Giles told me to be here at 8” 

 

Anna watched the woman look at her saying “oh your Melissa’s niece the new photographer” 

 

Anna smiled telling her “yes mam, is she here?” as the young woman stood up introducing herself as "Katherine” and Anna repeated the same introducing herself to the woman. 

 

Katherine smiled saying “yes Melissa came in about an hour ago and I think they started shooting about 30 minutes ago” 

 

Anna looked at her worried wondering to herself if she was late as Katherine noticed the worried look telling her “don’t feel like your late or anything” Melissa likes to shoot movies in the morning and do photos in the afternoon” 

 

Anna began to breathe a sigh of relief as she spoke saying “I just really want to impress my aunt”  

 

Katherine smiled telling her “I am sure you will do a great job, but what me and you are going to do is get you signed up in the system and get all of your information and by the time we are done it should be about lunch time and then I am sure Melissa will be ready for you” 

 

Anna smiled telling her “perfect”  

 

Anna followed Katherine through the large building beginning to realize how large the building truly was and was amazed to see all the rooms. She watched as Katherine entered a room at the end of the hall and looked inside to see they were entering a room that was full of boxes and storage supplies and in the corner of the room was a camera setup with a computer next to it. 

 

Katherine pointed down at an “X” asking Anna to stand on the “X” so she could get her badge made for her as Anna placed both feet together and waited for more instructions. Katherine booted up the software getting ready to take the picture when her eyes caught what was on Anna’s shirt telling her “that shirt your wearing looks really cute”  

 

Anna smiled saying “thank you, I hope it wouldn’t be too inappropriate for the job” 

 

 Katherine giggled saying “it’s actually quite perfect” 

 

Anna stared confused asking “what do you mean?” 

 

Katherine smiled saying “Melissa doesn’t like us talking about what the studios does outside the studio, so I am going to keep it a surprise” 

 

Anna’s mind began to wonder what the studio could be doing starting to think that maybe they produced children shows or something as she stared towards the camera smiling ready to do the best she could. 

 

After getting her photo taken and have given Katherine all her information Anna continued to stare around the large storage room wondering what the studio could be doing with all the boxes. She knew Katherine couldn’t tell her much, but the thought of the studio needing this much supplies kind of shocked her.

 

 Katherine stared up at Anna staring around the room spoke saying “I am sure you have a lot of questions, but I have one more for you” 

 

Anna spoke asking “what’s that?” 

 

 Katherine spoke asking “it’s kind of a weird subject, but do you have a place to stay or would you like the studio to give you a room here?” 

 

Anna stared at the woman asking, “what do you mean the studio can give me a room?” 

 

Katherine spoke again saying “the studio has a lot of rooms that we use for different settings and if you like we can give you a room to sleep in when you’re working” 

 

Anna quickly spoke telling her “I am currently living at home with my mom, but if I decide to get a room later on will that be possible?” 

 

Katherine nodded her head saying “of course” 

 

“BZZ”

 

“BZZ”

 

Anna started to freak out hearing the sound of a ringer buzzing wondering if she had forgotten to turn her phone off but calmed down to see Katherine pulling out her phone to read a text.

 

Anna stared down at her soon to be coworker waiting for whatever she needed her to do next.

 

Katherine spoke saying “I have some good news! the movie in the studio is almost finished and Melissa wanted me to take you over so you could get a feel for what you will be shooting”

 

Anna smiled with excitement and a little bit of nervousness as she watched Katherine get out of her seat and head for the door. She followed behind beginning to wonder what she was going to be walking into as she noticed them walking towards a door labeled as “Set” and knew she was about to get her answer. She watched Katherine stop at the door and turning around to place her eyes towards her and listened as she spoke explaining to her “Anna I need you to understand that everyone in this room is getting paid to be here and if you see something that you find odd or different please keep it to yourself until the shoot is finished, do you understand?” 

 

Anna nodded her head as her brain began to fill with ideas of what could be going on behind the door and watched Katherine pull on the handle of the door and followed in behind her. 

 

Anna stayed close behind Katherine following right behind her inside the dark room, She looked around the large room beginning to wonder what was actually being shot when eyes shot towards a group of men and then noticed the woman next to them was her Aunt Melissa who had just started staring at Anna who was smiling at her. Melissa motioned Anna over towards her and began walking towards when she started to hear noises coming from the set of what sounded like something she had once heard at her past job, which didn’t make sense because she worked at a daycare. 

 

Melissa walked over giving Anna a hug and placing her finger to her lips and pointed towards something as Anna turned her head to something, she couldn’t believe that she was seeing. She was staring at what looked like a large nursery there was a large crib, a changing table, and in the middle of it a large sheepskin rug and laying in the middle of it was what shocked Anna the most a small woman nude except for a bonnet and a large diaper wrapped around her waist. Anna felt something tap her on her shoulder and turned to see her aunt motioning for her to start shooting. Anna felt like she was frozen and picked up her camera and started shooting shots slowly wondering what was going on.

 

She snapped shots slowly watching as the baby woman had climbed to her knees and now had her bottom faced towards the crowd wondering what she was doing as she continued to snap photos. She began to wonder if maybe they were shooting a commercial for a product or something and then noticed something, she wished she hadn’t the woman’s diaper bottom slowly began to turn a dark brown and then realized she was messing herself. She knew her mind wasn’t processing this fast enough and continued snapping the best photos she could as the baby woman placed her hands into the ground and turned her head saying “I made a big messy in my diapee” with a giggle.

 

Anna’s eyes instantly met the baby woman’s eyes and the two stared at each other for a brief moment until shock overcame her. Anna suddenly realized just who she was looking at. It was her former bully; Bethany! 

[Tld17]

1 hour ago, Diaper_goddess said:

You do know Cya posts stories on here and currently is posting a story named even mother's need supervision and they can give criticisms if they want.

Hence my comment. It also does not give them the right to call a story rough in public. They could have done that through pm. I gave them a taste of their own medicine.

[Cya]

9 hours ago, Tld17 said:

Hence my comment. It also does not give them the right to call a story rough in public. They could have done that through pm. I gave them a taste of their own medicine.

Why are you still talking about me in someone else's story? TFmonkey literally just posted a new update and you are ignoring the newest chapter and selfishly spamming about how you're defending Tfmonkey, but let me ask you a question: how does this comment help anyone?

 

Why don't you stop focusing on me and start focusing on the story?

 

 

Tfmonkey, you're doing a terrific job at improving your writing and I enjoy what you've done with this revised Chapter. This is your story to tell and I am proud of you for stepping back and rewriting it in the way you want it to be read. It's very rare for writers to do that.

 

Keep up the good work!

[Tld17]

I will respond to you in pm 

Look I was done commenting . That was until someone said something and I responded. I am walking away. I was a huge fan of his stories but god forbid I defend him when you went out of your way to call it rough. I thought it was real mean. So I went back at you. Sorry for that. I was wrong. However, calling a story rough is wrong too. I apologize for my actions. However, you were wrong too. 

[littleTomás]

Great chapter. I love how this is shaping up ?