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[Baby Billy]

I really like the story. One thng thou, there maybe something of with your program that it is not showing the ' in words like was'nt.

[Babypants]

Well done.  Looking forward to reading more of your work.

[kirababy]

great way to end it...or is it ended?

[Eagle0769]

2 hours ago, kirababy said:

great way to end it...or is it ended?

I hope it continues. I’d love to read what happens next. 

[Forced2wet]

I’m going to try finish previous stories I have posted here and then maybe revisit this one

 

 

[CDfm]

Well I really enjoyed the conclusion to this story. I thought you did a great job wrapping things up. I do think that you could have left off that little bit right at the end where DAN tells everyone he has been living with his two mommies for the last six months. That just makes me want to know what was happening during all that time and what did the mommies do to get DAN to move in with them. Hopefully we will get some answers sometime down the road. I was glad I could give this a like.