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It's the Little Choices - NEW Epilogue (Updated 2/8)


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Yeah, the first time around, it was WOW!, OMG!, and several other things.

OK Kimmy, the new Epilogue did provide more closure, especially to those before who still wanted Fiona at the end.  But it lacks the closure for the Carol fans still, and how that restaurant messed her up.   However, it does provide me a new place to give you a point whenever I get one!

Thanks for reposting!  As always, it was a lot of fun!

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3 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

I know, right?

Wendy's death always hits me hard too. :)

Honestly for me it was seeing Aimee broken, but I think I understand Wendy more. I can't necessarily feel sympathy for her, but even monsters can have hopes, dreams and aspirations. To me the tragedy is what this clearly bright and loving person could have been had someone seen the growing darkness and helped them before it got to this point.

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Also I think I got the fridge horror of what a "bunny" is.

 

I seriously want that drink but I have work to do...

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48 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

No I'm not about to cry it's my fucking allergies.....

 

I need a drink and it's only 11 am

I figured you'd be gleeful - Carol did almost exactly what you said you wanted to do... they traced the feed and she showed up and killed her.  I'm surprised that sadness is your reaction.

41 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

I know, right?

Wendy's death always hits me hard too. :)

Wendy was Best Girl - it would have been Happily Darkly After with them... but Carol was unstable and drugged from the Catalon cuisine she consumed daily for a week (and she had no tolerance).

I remember writing this scene and barely blinking, my hands were shaking when it was done.  I am extremely proud of the shock that comes with this one.

Did you like the new epilogue?

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5 minutes ago, bbykimmy said:

Did you like the new epilogue?

What new epilogue? It was the same as the old one, wasn't it? Aimee got adopted by Helen and continued her career as a Little porn star.

I was actually confused when I couldn't find a new epilogue. :/

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43 minutes ago, ELLIE52 said:

Yeah, the first time around, it was WOW!, OMG!, and several other things.

OK Kimmy, the new Epilogue did provide more closure, especially to those before who still wanted Fiona at the end.  But it lacks the closure for the Carol fans still, and how that restaurant messed her up.   However, it does provide me a new place to give you a point whenever I get one!

Thanks for reposting!  As always, it was a lot of fun!

Oh!  We started a 5th page and I didn't see it!

I never understood the Fiona fans... Fiona wasn't even a good friend, and she never wanted to be a mommy.  Getting someone to do something that you want deeply and they don't that requires a long-term commitment is a recipe for resentment and disaster - I know, I've lived it.  I've been with partners that I had to beg and cajole to indulge my Little side... it doesn't end well.

Dang, I should have added a news report or something about the Catalon restaurant that got shut down - I only mentioned it briefly and it's easy to miss.

40 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Honestly for me it was seeing Aimee broken, but I think I understand Wendy more. I can't necessarily feel sympathy for her, but even monsters can have hopes, dreams and aspirations. To me the tragedy is what this clearly bright and loving person could have been had someone seen the growing darkness and helped them before it got to this point.

Ah yeah... Aimee was really attached to her, and she felt wanted and loved for the first time in her life... and it was taken away.

39 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

I'm confused. Isn't this the same epilogue as before?

It's not!  I reused the board game and the very very ending, but the restaurant scene is new, Charles is new, and I was more explicit about Aimee's feelings and activities, as well as Helen's.  The old epilogue was 1400 words, the new one is 2300.

25 minutes ago, ThomasG said:

Aimee still got her dream. Just not the way she wanted.

It's more that Wendy awakened her to possibilities she had never considered.  If Wendy had never come into her life, Helen would have been her perfect match.  But Wendy showed her a whole new, dark world that revealed desires and cravings she never knew she had.

After Wendy.. it was hard to find joy in the innocence of being Little.

8 minutes ago, Lil_Eevee said:

This epilogue is relatively mostly the same, but Fiona's professional little is new... Which, dang, that just really hit me hard lol amazing as always and really cant wait to see what else you brew up Kimmy ^^ 

I was going to post the start of my new story, "The Biggest Little Vacation" the day after I finished up reposting Little Choices with the new epilogue... but for some reason I thought that was going to be on a Wednesday.

I'll post the first chapter of the new story on Monday!

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20 minutes ago, bbykimmy said:

I figured you'd be gleeful - Carol did almost exactly what you said you wanted to do... they traced the feed and she showed up and killed her.  I'm surprised that sadness is your reaction.

 

Honestly my earlier reactions were out of fear/anger. I can't take joy in the death of someone even if they were completely reprehensible in their actions. Even if they were closest thing to an actual monster I can see them as a person and understand their motivations. At least once the fire and fury cools. Then it's sadness, exhaustion, frustration, and low smoldering exhausted anger at a universe that allows things like this to happen.

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Thank you to everyone who read the story, an even BIGGER thank you to all of you who commented - the comments and discussion are a large part of WHY I write, and a very special thank you to all of you who take a moment to "Like" the posts you enjoy.

I'm a gamer, so getting points for things feels really good :D

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2 minutes ago, bbykimmy said:

Thank you to everyone who read the story, an even BIGGER thank you to all of you who commented - the comments and discussion are a large part of WHY I write, and a very special thank you to all of you who take a moment to "Like" the posts you enjoy.

I'm a gamer, so getting points for things feels really good :D

Your 100% welcome

 

I'm going to sit in the corner and listen to Leonard Cohen now

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Gosh I almost wish there was a multiple ending to this story. I love Hellen personally but she still seems to lack confidence to take control like Aimee needs. It’s really sad to me. And I know Wendy was a little coo coo but that’s a sad end for her. I almost wish she could have lived. 

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13 minutes ago, Josiesol1 said:

Gosh I almost wish there was a multiple ending to this story. I love Hellen personally but she still seems to lack confidence to take control like Aimee needs. It’s really sad to me. And I know Wendy was a little coo coo but that’s a sad end for her. I almost wish she could have lived. 

My next story will be much gentler, much closer to Act 1 of "Making the Best of It"

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This new epilogue really made Fiona look worse, with her adopting a little for her own uses. It looks like she never really loved or cared about Aimee. I was really rooting for her the first time you posted this story too.

7 hours ago, bbykimmy said:

I never understood the Fiona fans... Fiona wasn't even a good friend, and she never wanted to be a mommy.  Getting someone to do something that you want deeply and they don't that requires a long-term commitment is a recipe for resentment and disaster - I know, I've lived it.  I've been with partners that I had to beg and cajole to indulge my Little side... it doesn't end well.

I guess, the first time around, it looked like Fiona was a better friend. The kind of friend that could grow into something more. Still kinda sad that it wasn't her or Caitlyn that won, but Helen's obviously good for Aimee.

Really looking forward to your next story!

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1 hour ago, herezulo said:

This new epilogue really made Fiona look worse, with her adopting a little for her own uses. It looks like she never really loved or cared about Aimee. I was really rooting for her the first time you posted this story too.

I guess, the first time around, it looked like Fiona was a better friend. The kind of friend that could grow into something more. Still kinda sad that it wasn't her or Caitlyn that won, but Helen's obviously good for Aimee.

Really looking forward to your next story!

Honestly, her "relationship" with Charles is much less heinous in my opinion.  They have a business arrangement - he plays the Adopted Little during the day, they go home and they each do their own thing, he does his finances, she plays games and they live a solitary life together.

She was USING Aimee, her lifelong best friend, manipulating her desires to get what she wanted.  Now, Aimee was WRONG to try and force her desires on Fiona, but Fiona was WRONG to accept those advances when it became convenient for her.

It's a big lesson in boundaries, something a lot of people (in my life) need to work on.

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6 minutes ago, bbykimmy said:

Honestly, her "relationship" with Charles is much less heinous in my opinion.  They have a business arrangement - he plays the Adopted Little during the day, they go home and they each do their own thing, he does his finances, she plays games and they live a solitary life together.

She was USING Aimee, her lifelong best friend, manipulating her desires to get what she wanted.  Now, Aimee was WRONG to try and force her desires on Fiona, but Fiona was WRONG to accept those advances when it became convenient for her.

It's a big lesson in boundaries, something a lot of people (in my life) need to work on.

Yeah Aimee and Fiona could have really benefited from group therapy.

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4 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Yeah Aimee and Fiona could have really benefited from group therapy.

No doubt.  In my opinion, EVERYONE needs to go to therapy.  It doesn't matter if you're the most well-adjusted person in the world, there's a lesson to be learned and improvement to be made.

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7 minutes ago, bbykimmy said:

No doubt.  In my opinion, EVERYONE needs to go to therapy.  It doesn't matter if you're the most well-adjusted person in the world, there's a lesson to be learned and improvement to be made.

I second this, annual mental as well as physical checkups.

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what a rousing ending.   Did not see it coming, and actually felt sad for losing wendy.  Loved the twist of Aimee going on cam for listeners at the end, seems she really took to that side of the relationship.  Look forward to your next tales - hoping there will be another dark one. 

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5 hours ago, the diaper mike said:

Oh my God you shocked me and you make me cry that's so sad but oh my God great story great  ending

I'm glad you enjoyed it!  I really loved making the audience hate and fear Wendy and then making them so sad she died.  The story was a LOT of fun to write.

4 hours ago, kirababy said:

what a rousing ending.   Did not see it coming, and actually felt sad for losing wendy.  Loved the twist of Aimee going on cam for listeners at the end, seems she really took to that side of the relationship.  Look forward to your next tales - hoping there will be another dark one. 

This story was a repost, I actually did start writing another dark story, wayyyyy darker than this before my life fell apart last year.

Here's another pretty dark DD tale that I reposted last night, you might enjoy it (it's a short story): A Bedtime Tale in Eire

The dark dark dark story is called "Save Yourself" and I hope to finish it soon, but I'm going to write a lighter, happier story first.

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6 minutes ago, thedman said:

I loved it the first time around and I just binge read it and loved it again. So good to see you back in the saddle Kimmy

It's good to be back <3

I missed commenting back and forth with everyone, and I missed sharing my stories.  I reached a few new people who had never seen my stories before with this repost, and it felt really good to share the twists and turns with them.

At this point, I have reposted all of my finished stories.  I won't repost "Save Yourself" until I have more progress on it and it's clear that I can finish the story.

I will have a brand new story starting tomorrow, when I post chapter 1 of "The Biggest Little Vacation"

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10 minutes ago, bbykimmy said:

It's good to be back <3

I missed commenting back and forth with everyone, and I missed sharing my stories.  I reached a few new people who had never seen my stories before with this repost, and it felt really good to share the twists and turns with them.

At this point, I have reposted all of my finished stories.  I won't repost "Save Yourself" until I have more progress on it and it's clear that I can finish the story.

I will have a brand new story starting tomorrow, when I post chapter 1 of "The Biggest Little Vacation"

No...no...no...no...no...

Stomps feet and falls to the ground flailing and screaming

Save Yourself, Save Yourself, Save Yourself

I don't want the other stories wahhhhhhh

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