aldl4811 Posted April 18, 2017 Share Posted April 18, 2017 Awesome ending, great work!! Link to comment
CDfm Posted April 21, 2017 Share Posted April 21, 2017 That was a great story. I did like the ending. It was nice to see the brothers finally come together. I still feel really bad for Steven though. If I had been in his shoes I would have done whatever was necessary to get out of that environment. Even going as far as taking my life if necessary. No way I could have put up with that kind of humiliation and hatred my entire life. I will be looking for more of your work. Congratulations on an amazing story. Link to comment
babyboydani Posted May 1 Share Posted May 1 On 11/25/2016 at 11:45 PM, CDfm said: Nice chapter. I can't help but feel sorry for Steven. It was his older brother picking on him that started the entire thing. Yes, he may have taken things to far but I still think his mother should have some concern for him. Thanks for the update, I will be looking for more. I swear😭 literally Richie was the one who made Steven’s life a hell and now this 😐 feel so sorry for Stev Link to comment
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