Samriis Posted October 20, 2016 Share Posted October 20, 2016 Heh, gotta love a good cliffhanger. .. and like always, Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted October 20, 2016 Author Share Posted October 20, 2016 Thank you all for the nice words. I'm sorry I don't reply so often, 'cause I like to keep my story-posts clean. Link to comment
'Lil Wendi Posted October 21, 2016 Share Posted October 21, 2016 Holy Katz!! That is some very powerful writing, you 2 are amazing! Link to comment
babytom2 Posted October 22, 2016 Share Posted October 22, 2016 All those colors giving me epilepsy XD Link to comment
Pudding Posted October 22, 2016 Share Posted October 22, 2016 You think reading them is bad, you should see my macOS color picker favorite panel XD there's ~85 colors saved in it at all times! Link to comment
Samriis Posted October 22, 2016 Share Posted October 22, 2016 Well, I'm a fan of color coding it the way you have. Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted October 23, 2016 Author Share Posted October 23, 2016 PART III: Queen of Hearts 1 Link to comment
CDfm Posted October 25, 2016 Share Posted October 25, 2016 A very touching chapter. What a horrible thing for someone so young to have to experience. Having seen the horrors of combat and 25 years as a police officer I couldn't say I have seen or Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted November 1, 2016 Author Share Posted November 1, 2016 PART IV: The King and the Castle Link to comment
CDfm Posted November 3, 2016 Share Posted November 3, 2016 Another fantastic chapter. I really I mean REALLY like this story. Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted November 8, 2016 Author Share Posted November 8, 2016 I'm glad you're enjoying things. Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted November 11, 2016 Author Share Posted November 11, 2016 PART V: Curiouser Link to comment
CDfm Posted November 15, 2016 Share Posted November 15, 2016 Well things are starting to make a little more sense. Especially with your explanation LOL. I am still torn though, Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted November 26, 2016 Author Share Posted November 26, 2016 ..again, I've been very busy. >_< Ugh. Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted November 26, 2016 Author Share Posted November 26, 2016 PART VI: Magic Words Link to comment
CDfm Posted November 27, 2016 Share Posted November 27, 2016 Wonderful warm, well actually hot, new chapter. Realizing just how messed up that treatment facility is. To actually cause someone to be turned on by a messy diaper is Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted November 28, 2016 Author Share Posted November 28, 2016 PART VII: Painting Roses Link to comment
CDfm Posted November 29, 2016 Share Posted November 29, 2016 That was definitely an intense chapter. I feel so bad for all three girls. I wish there was something I could do to help with their struggles. I have a feeling Velvet is doing what the thirds did at the bar to earn major points. Only in this case she is earning money. Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted November 29, 2016 Author Share Posted November 29, 2016 PART VIII: Till the Summer Comes Again Link to comment
CDfm Posted November 30, 2016 Share Posted November 30, 2016 Shoot, I knew it was coming but I didn't expect it to go down this Link to comment
CDfm Posted December 8, 2016 Share Posted December 8, 2016 This was s awesome chapter. It explained so much. Now the one thing I am still unsure of is how Valery could have gone through the program herself if she was the one responsible for coming up with the majority of the programming? Loving the story though and am eagerly awaiting more updates. Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted December 9, 2016 Author Share Posted December 9, 2016 PART II: Where Loyalties Lie Link to comment
CDfm Posted December 12, 2016 Share Posted December 12, 2016 That was wonderful. I now have a new question after reading this chapter though. What has Valvet done that is so bad that everyone in the facility wants her? Link to comment
Sophie ♥ Posted December 17, 2016 Author Share Posted December 17, 2016 Pudding and I have actually written about half of a Velvet origin story! Link to comment
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