diaperpt Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 I'm surprised only by the lack of conflict if only in Ellie's mind. What has happened to her dreams of college? The pride in her adulthood? I can understand somewhat the comfort of the diaper and of being held close...I'd like that about now, myself! But still, she doesn't seem to feel any confliction (invented word) what so ever. Even with that thought, I am enjoying and the story and looking forward to more. Link to comment
thedman Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 I am loving this story. The set up with tough girl Ellie was an amazing lead in. Showing her as independent and strong set her up as the least likely of little's to be taken forcefully by an Amazon, much less willingly. I love seeing how she has not been forced into the role but has instead chosen it of her own free will and is so far embracing being babied. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 7, 2015 Share Posted September 7, 2015 I look forward to reading about the changes in wardrobe. Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 7, 2015 Author Share Posted September 7, 2015 (edited) Edited September 7, 2015 by DKN117 Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 7, 2015 Share Posted September 7, 2015 Loving it so far...keep going!! Link to comment
Shotgun Diplomat Posted September 8, 2015 Share Posted September 8, 2015 Actually, I was referencing Jeff Corwin; the hand-in-the-hole thing is a gag he does. "A wildlife show with an eccentric yet knowledgeable and entertaining host", indeed... Huh, well either way it was a good piece of writing. You Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 8, 2015 Author Share Posted September 8, 2015 (edited) Edited September 8, 2015 by DKN117 Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 9, 2015 Share Posted September 9, 2015 Great addition!! Love the way the story is going so far! Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 9, 2015 Author Share Posted September 9, 2015 The next few hours were much the same 1 Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted September 9, 2015 Share Posted September 9, 2015 (edited) For what it's worth, I have been thinking about making my own contribution to this universe, though I'll likely wait until at least a couple of these stories have been brought to completion. Edited September 9, 2015 by WBDaddy Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 9, 2015 Author Share Posted September 9, 2015 However, I feel like there's a bit of a schism here between Ellie's tough-as-nails personality and how she responded to the babying, but we're already over that bridge, I suppose. Well, Ellie's toughness was partially something she made in an attempt to drive Amazons away; she's softer-hearted than she seems. Plus, one reason she was so dour and serious was because she had nobody else, and had been that way for a long time; she was actually quite lonely. So, being given so much gentle, loving affection and attention is having a considerable effect on her, more than she'd expected. Everything that's happened and is happening is doing a number on her emotional 'barriers', too, leaving her more 'vulnerable' to it all. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted September 9, 2015 Share Posted September 9, 2015 See, that's something I have to watch out for myself on a regular basis. Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 10, 2015 Share Posted September 10, 2015 Love it, love it, love it! Please keep adding I am thoroughly looking forward to reading more about day 1 and the other things you mentioned. Will there by any chance be a trip to a doc at all? Look forward to reading more!! Link to comment
enigma_66 Posted September 10, 2015 Share Posted September 10, 2015 Have really enjoyed the story. Not necessarily even a critique, and I can understand what you just explained to WBDaddy, but it kind of seemed like she went from completely distrustful of the giants, and opposed to being babied to being the optimal baby awfully fast. She just seemed to give in a bit quicker than you'd expect. Like I said, im not necessarily critiquing your story; just an observation. Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 10, 2015 Author Share Posted September 10, 2015 As a couple more hours passed by, Ellie was coming to enjoy having such a Link to comment
Jayme Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 It is nice to see that Ellie is genuinely cared for by a compassionate person who has her health and well being in mind. I can't wait to see what happens next Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 I love the story please please continue. It is a slow but detailed development that works quite nicely! Link to comment
diaperpt Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 While I too had some negative feelings about Ellie's "before" and "after" differences, I thought about the fact she has been without parents for a while and misses them a great deal. The attention and seeming warmth Katie is showing her probably would feel good to her. This wouldn't be the first person in the world to have that tough exterior who has convinced herself that some people are not to be trusted, that some things are not to be allowed, that she would hate having this being done to her only to find out she really does like what she'd been so vehement about before. Maybe the character is a little overdrawn and maybe under-explained, but I do think the story is interesting and pretty well put together. Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 11, 2015 Author Share Posted September 11, 2015 After cuddling Ellie for about 10 more minutes, Katie had decided it was dinner time ( Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 While I too had some negative feelings about Ellie's "before" and "after" differences, I thought about the fact she has been without parents for a while and misses them a great deal. The attention and seeming warmth Katie is showing her probably would feel good to her. This wouldn't be the first person in the world to have that tough exterior who has convinced herself that some people are not to be trusted, that some things are not to be allowed, that she would hate having this being done to her only to find out she really does like what she'd been so vehement about before. Maybe the character is a little overdrawn and maybe under-explained, but I do think the story is interesting and pretty well put together. Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 Great new addition! I look forward to reading the daily updates! Link to comment
DKN117 Posted September 12, 2015 Author Share Posted September 12, 2015 Day 2 Begin ------------------------------ At about 8:10 the next morning, Ellie awoke, though she did not yet move or open her eye. The memories of all that had happened yesterday came to her, and she felt her face heat up with a blush. Cracking her eye open to see a slowly spinning mobile and the top walls/bars of a crib confirmed it was no dream: she was Katie Emery Link to comment
JonhSmith13 Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 good chapterMaya and Ellie, play: pretty scene.What happened with the previous family, of Maya? Link to comment
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