Family Secrets

[baby kalie]

A young man tries to put his broken family back together which leads to his older brother regressing back to childhood. This is my first story I ever tried to write so it's probably not as good as some on this site. But, I try my best and Thats all I can do .

Family Secrets. 1

Where going to start this story off with a very true statement and that is �no one is perfect’, if only Gabe knew that earlier he may not be in this mess. Yes, Gabe was very handsome and very successful at his career, being the first born he felt he always had to strive be perfect. He always wanted to be viewed as someone that flourished and grew into his own, being as that may have been he felt he may never live up to his fathers standards.

Four years, two months plus extra hours for community services he had completed college and gotten his GED, but had that impressed his father?. No, but it got him to come to his graduation were his dad told him with a grimace of a smile “I’m proud of you son

[Jessica Rabbit]

Yes I would like to see where you are going with it

[Rockies Fan in Diapers]

Yes, this is a Good Start. Please Do Continue,

Rockies Fan. Go Rockies in 2011!

[BrownBobby]

What you have is an interesting outline for what might be an excellent story. Go for it!

[thong5]

Yes please do. I'd like to see where this goes.

[baby kalie]

K thanks guys