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????. Omg, that puts it in a different perspective. Poor Margaret!!???

Hi! Loved the story. Can we please get an Epilogue or something about Margaret's perspective? How she felt and what exactly happened to her at the end? I was intrigued given that Molly was apparently able to take control of the Shen traits and herself. So, I was curious if Margaret could've done something similar or failed.

Wow, that was intense. A very good ending. Interesting that the Mommy personality "melted in" and now she's not being compelled to do so but rather wants to. I had suspected Mark had a Shen tattoo given the way he acted towards Margaret. Will there be some kind of Epilogue? I would like to see this ending from Margaret perspective.

Very interesting, looking forward to seeing how it develops. Looks great so far.

Wow, that was an amazing chapter. I laughed, I got disgusted, amused, sad, horrified, wow. That bus pervert was something else. From what he sounded like, the entire seat must've been flooded in sweat ??. Seriously, though that picture was too far and I was happy that Molly shut him down. I laughed at the genius that was going to Monkey Mania, I got worried at the way the manager responded, especially given that Margaret answered for Molly when they entered. I was horrified, at what happened to Molly. Seriously, what was that?!!! That came out of left field. I liked it for the suspense and how suddenly it was but oof, it got intense. And Margaret legs not working anymore is very worrying. Although happy that she got some adult fun for once. I found the contrast of the guy doing horsie for "Baby" Margaret and Margaret getting off from it hilarious. Overall, great chapter. Very worried for the characters and looking forward to seeing what happens next.

This story is great. I love how the transformation can be both subtle and drastic at the same time playing on their emotions and sneaking in rationalizations. And that explanation, oof. Did not expect it to be divine ink.

Ok, well that was quite a cliffhanger. Looking forward to the next chapter. Great job. This story is great and very interesting.

????, okay fair enough. You are a foolish, adorable fool and bestest searcher. I think I actually remember that poll now that I think about it, that disclaimer doesn't appear on the DA version which is where I read it and so I didn't see it. The actual civil war premise was kinda meh, I just really enjoyed how outlandish the idea of an abdl history documentary was and how for the most part it was working pretty well for what it was and that's why I liked it so much. The very ridiculousness of the idea made it very funny and thus enjoyable for me. I can't argue with you Lamby. Soo, I guess it's Trash ????. Thank you for settling this. Hope you had fun reading our little discussion. Have a goodnight, everybody.

Completely understandable. Don't worry about it. I'm just glad to have such an interesting and fun discussion. There was no such foreword/disclaimer in the story, there is a tease in the credits towards "all the people who thought this would work as a story" though. But I understand what you mean, it is so different from her usual stuff that some of her fans are inevitably not going to be as into that story as her other ones due to the differences in tone and style. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing, it's just how taste/likes and dislikes work.

I definitely agree with the unique. It was different to a lot of her work, but I think that's what makes it special. I really felt like it was the deleted scenes/directors cut of a documentary. I really liked it. I thought it was funny and did it's job, I think the Morgan Freeman narrator idea was hilarious. And the credits were great, coffee the real mvp. The beginning was a bit ehh though, you kinda have to push through it a bit. At least I didn't like that beginning. But you can definitely tell how much fun and passion Ramble had writing it. I liked the satirical nature of it, the parodying of the abdl community and "representatives" and just internet culture in general. Although I am curious what you mean by a "certain fanbase" and how that differs from "her fanbase" as it seems like you're referring to 2 different things there.

Why? Did you read it? If so, what did you think?

You can go on RambleLamb Deviantart, under the "Short Stories" folder. It's there. That's where I read it. If you can't find it here then it may have been taken out with the server issues that happened a few months back. Or DD is just being uncooperative.

Don't listen to Lamb. Infantile Infantry is better than she makes it sound. It's very different to most of her stuff but that's why it's so good. It's very funny. She's just downplaying it, she's a much better writer than she gives herself credit for. Go read "Infantile Infantry (A civil War documentary)" and then you can come back here with what you thought about it.?

Definitely, and i just realized that I accidentally cut a whole sentence from that section I wrote about avoiding the D word. It was that it impacted me because I can't say that word, when I try I get nervous, I start blushing, my voice gets low and the word just cuts off, even if I'm trying to say it alone, which is most, if not every time I've tried to say it. Like if just uttering will reveal my secret, as if just mentioning it will plop information about abdl and my Little side onto the minds of everyone in the vicinity. When I hear it being mentioned, my brain just turns on a radar and starts scanning for the source, when I hear it mentioned in non-abdl content/media I stay reading the word over and over or rewind the scene multiple times. The negative space of a painting is a great analogy for the absence of the D word.

Definitely, I think what I loved about this story the most was how you characterized the anxiety and nervousness of the character. It really connected with me and I'm sure most people who read it given the topic at hand. The way you avoided saying "diapers" was impressive. I've learned from essays and stories in English classes that it's very hard to replace a noun with something where you know what is being talked about without mentioning it. Well at least for extended periods of time like stories, obviously that doesn't apply in conversations much because the subject has usually been mentioned before and is being referenced, ugh I got on a tangent and started to ramble(no pun intended). I loved the "terrible scenarios" and the commentary on the register lady and her possible personality based on the puzzle book really made me giggle. It really gave the story some comedic contrast to the anxiety, and the missing wallet also hit hard. I remember one time I was going to drive and while making sure I had everything, I couldn't find my wallet and I started panicking until I realized I'd put it in one of those side compartments of the car.??, silly me. Well, great job. Looking forward to whatever you come up with next. Have an awesome day!

Yeah, the way it ended, it definitely seems possible to have a sequel of some kind focused on the effects and influence of The Innocent on the world after going public.

??, Consider me very intrigued.

Great story. You're very talented, your stories have this unique and unusual flair and theme. Out of curiosity, was the setting here inspired by Goblin Slayer?

That was Awesome!! I have to ask, was the whole diaper touching Crystal summoning them inspired by Into the Spiderverse? Because that is very similar to how all the Spiders are brought together in that movie.