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Scarlet

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  1. These last two chapters have been great. The development and growth of their family has been very interesting to read. Rochelle situation was significantly more serious than I had anticipated. I am very happy that she has found people that accept her and care for her. The argument between Zack and Petra, and the the subsequent family meeting was an amazing scene. Very well done, Ducky really needed that. While such conflict and intense emotions can be hard, this was sorely needed for their relationship to move forward. The main thing I'm curious about is what's is the time gap between chapter 8 and chapter 9. Because it's been long enough, that Petra has been producing milk with enough regularity to lead to a "routine", it's been long enough that Rochelle has been a Baby for "too long", yet it's implied that it hasn't been long enough for Petra and Illiana to have worked out their differences fully. I want to know, how long was "too long" of "Full Baby" Rochelle. Looking forward to whatever comes next.
  2. Great to see this back. This was a really good chapter. It was a great way to end the parents visit. Very sad to see that Emily lost her job but at least it seems like it was more circumstances surrounding her department rather than a specific failure of hers causing her to lose her job.
  3. I'm thinking that Debbie has Munchausen syndrome by Proxy or something similar....... not sure about the ghosts though. This line was pure gold.???
  4. This chapter was great. The opening in the nursery as so sweet. My thoughts on Illiana as this chapter progressed has me seeing her as more of a "big sister" of sorts in terms of rp age that is "playing along", because at least initially it seems to be what she was doing playing along to be included, she didn't necessarily like the baby stuff, she liked being with the other girls and to do that she had to do the baby stuff, that's a very intriguing character trait you've brought in to this story, I love it. Some interesting conflict born of that, especially now that she seems to be wrestling with the fact that now she Does like some of it, to an extent. Again, Rochelle is best girl. I love how she takes advantage of her very short size to be as babyish as possible. Yeah, Ducky....... about that. Although she has an unfair advantage, I'd say that Rochelle definitely wins that contest. While I'm very happy that Illiana has finally broken out of her shell, to say that there are mixed feelings is an understatement. The web of complex feelings she's having is something that's not easy to deal with and I gained huge respect for Zach for handling it so masterfully. I was a bit surprised by how Petra and illiana met, I know you had mentioned that Petra introduced Illiana to the baby stuff but damn she literally seduced Illiana. Front he description of what happened, I definitely believe that Petra has done similar things many times, the confidence that Illiana described of Petra shows her experience, she's confident from experience and Success, hence part of why she's so brazen. I don't mind Petra and Duckys relationship dynamic, I think it adds an interesting layer to them but wow, they still have guests over. It feels a bit rude for them to have been doing that, not only at the dinner table but with guests. I agree with M statement a bit, while I wouldn't say I feel like he's being used, he is an amazing caregiver and Petra is his wife although I do get that it's a polyamorous relationship of sorts, that doesn't mean they shouldn't be a bit more respectful and at the very least wait for the "playdate" to be over, although it doesn't like Rochelle minded and I'm not sure about Illiana, her web of emotions needs some entangling first, it seems that it bothers her a bit but not necessarily in the way one would normally think it does. See M, now there's a problem with this statement. Rochelle already IS the Best Character ?. However, I look forward to her getting even better.
  5. I loved this chapter. It was great. I loved that despite Lyon being a bit of a jerk about it, Maisie kept her cool and was able to end the relationship in a very direct and respectful manner while also acknowledging her own hypocrisy in the relationship, that's not easy to admit.
  6. I really liked this chapter. I found it very funny that Duckys character just kept saying "hoe!" as an exclamation of sorts. Very intrigued by what Zach mentioned about Illiana. Makes me very curious about how she met Petra. The fact that Ducky is possibly moving in is very interesting and that they have a sort of poly relationship between Zach, Petra, and Ducky. Very intriguing dynamic between them. Very surprised that the first D&D session ended already. I'm guessing then that the story will progress across a few days and nights?
  7. I find it intriguing how I liked Lyon initially but as the "Nice boy" mask was peeled back and his true self is slowly being shown, I find myself disliking him more and more. He's not a bad person, but his arrogance and presumptions annoy me. I loved this scene, I was a bit intrigued by Maisie transformation and acceptance, I'm glad to see it's happening on her terms and that she's still herself. And this is what I mean by arrogance, his assumptions that just because Maisie is wearing diapers he can touch her, despite knowing that she doesn't like that, when she has clearly told him before, it irks me. I understand that his assumptions are born from the culture of Lilikol but still. That's fine, though. That means your story is very good, it has characters with personality, complexity and development.
  8. That's one Ominous picture. Kinda reminds me of Slime monsters in Anime. Although from what I read about it, I'm guessing this one doesn't stop at just basic materials like leather and cloth bags, clothes,etc? Tbh, it's Transparency is probably one of it's most dangerous traits, without high perception, it can and will surprise you very easily and thus are at a high disadvantage. I'd say that so far, you've achieved this very well. It's one of the things I liked the most. ?, yeah. It was a bit weird against the rest of the story but it was entertaining. Oh?! Color me intrigued.?. I believe this.☝️
  9. I Ioved these last two chapters. So proud of Kodi. Poor Maisie, that conflict is quite the conundrum. Thankfully, it seems Kodi has helped her find the way to an answer.
  10. Very intriguing cast of characters and setup. I love how different they all are. Gabby has a very caring motherly attitude, it shows very well in both her gentle care of the scared Hyolyn and her annoyance at Victoria not being there. Hyolyn seems to be smart, but shy. I would like to see how she acted when she first signed up for the exchange program. While her fears are very understandable, how intense her fears is in contrast with the fact that she, I assume, willingly signed up for it. It does seem like her friends tales intrigued her and she decided to have the chance and didn't consider how nervous and scared she truly is about going somewhere so completely different, so new and foreign until it was too late to back out. Leah seems to be really torn up about having to leave Victoria and her life there due to going to the Military. But it seems like there might be a bit more to it than is said here. So I'm gonna wait and see how it plays out. Excited and interested in seeing how this story progresses.
  11. Read this last night but I was tired, so I went to sleep afterwards. But I want to give my thoughts. So far, I like the cast of characters and how different they are in personality, while it does seem Petra has an uncanny ability to attract abdl girls. Deandra/Ducky and Petra dynamic is fun. It gives off that best friend so close that they act like sisters vibe, which can be evident in the back and forth teases. Illiana seems to be a bit shy and just going with the flow. I found that the way she addressed Zack exemplified this well. Even though it's been long enough that she should be comfortable with caring him by name while playing. She's shy and nervous enough that she called him formally by his last name, to be respectful just in case. And Rochelle intrigues me, she seemed to really get into the spirit of things, while she wasn't as "enthusiastic" as Ducky. She did introduce her character very well and very proudly in-character. The thing that intrigues me is how Zack met her only two hours ago. And the description makes it more interesting, I'm interested to know how she and Petra met. Given that she apparently needs a "booster seat" of books to reach the table, is she like 5'1, 4'11. I love how her size is indirectly accentuated by the earlier indication that Deandra is a bit short, so Rochelle being even shorter is emphasized more because of that comparison between them. I love how they're all actually genuinely interested in playing the game and it's a proper d&d game, at least at the beginning. I'm sure they'll be some abdl elements thrown in for the girls and our enjoyment. I like how well it flows from the game to the "real world". Although this was mainly an introduction, so we'll see how it progresses. I do like the way the lines between their babyish behavior and them being actual adults is shown. How it differs per character and how despite that, they're all drinking alcohol out of baby bottles. It feels like a very realistic game night for a group of friends.
  12. Didn't expect that reference, did ya???. Ngl, she was probably one of my favorite characters in that story, as short as it was, her side story did a gold job of developing her. Oh!?. I guess I glossed over it due to how short her mention was. Yeah, I agree with this. Definitely for the best, given the circumstances. Yeah, this is a good way of explaining it. While I hadn't seen it that way exactly, I had noticed that Heather attempts at mothering and trying to force Ella into "normal" and Ella's quiet reluctance to let her know this was bothering her were making each other feel worse about it and retreat more into their bad solutions. Ohhh! Yeah, this makes a lot of sense. To be fair, some public bathrooms are disgusting, like in some parks and random roadside stops. It's like the Janitor only comes once every 3 months or something. I remember one time I walked into a bathroom and someone had not flushed and it was nasty because either that person was part elephant or multiple people did it and it smelled like it had had a while to permeate the stall.??.
  13. Oh no, yeah that's most definitely not what I meant. I meant that things have escalated, the nurse has crossed a line that hadn't been crossed before, and that I'm looking forward to seeing how something like that will impact the story moving forward. Like will Maisie report it, if she does will it be dismissed as normal, will it be taken seriously, will she be too anxious to report it, etc. I just wanted to point out that this was a turning point for the story for me, a significant story moment. My apologies if my comment did give anyone that wrong impression.
  14. Foe the most part, I've been okay with Lilikol, while some of there stuff is a bit questionable, of everybody is fine with it and they're comfortable. Then that'd their business, although it bothers me that they have to limit access to the real world/the internet, thus lie to maintain. Which is the main problem I have, beyond that, it's fine since everyone seems happy with it. But... this, this drug powder stuff. This was pretty much abuse, she was making Maisie not only sick, but very anxious. This was too far. Well, not in relation to your other stories obviously. But how Lilikol treats these powders is a no from me. Some of them are simple and short but the way the nurse used this "Heavy powder" was very not ok. Looking forward to seeing how this situation unfolds.
  15. Wow, just wow. Sasha you have definitely outdone yourself. This most definitely beats that futuristic vr internet split personality story you made before, by a longshot.(R.I.P, Dog girl fetish girl) I was kinda concerned when I saw that this was the last chapter but this closed it all up beautifully. The birthday party was so fun and wholesome, very funny moments. I was kinda sad to see her sitting from Heather but at the same time I recognized and wa proud of the amount of guts, love and self reflection that it took for her to be able to put her feelings on the line like that so, Ella could choose what she felt was best for her. Although the messy diaper change during the birthday definitely cemented that Rose was a better caretaker for Ella given the circumstances. I am so happy to see that Danielle and Ella maintained their Sibling relationship. I wish I would've seen a bit of Heather, why wasn't she there on Ella's 21st birthday party? I would've loved to see her reflect on how much Ella had grown. So sad to hear about Pedro having died, how long after Ella chose Rose did he die? And once I saw the true crime podcast thing pop up, I knew it was to reveal the true events of that fateful night. The litterbox thing had me cracking up. Very surprised about Kaylee and Brian being engaged, they pretty much tried to kill each other and or bother each other as much as possible as kids. Even with all my theorizing, I did not expect Ella's mom to have gone so deeply insane, but given the circumstances, it's just wow. Insane, pardon the unintentional pun, I wonder what she'd say if she knew that it would've been for nothing. That reveal must have hit hard. Even if deep down, in a way she knew subconsciously. The reveal must've still hit hard. Better ring up that Therapist for another session. So, given what Rose said, Ella stayed in diapers for around a year and a half more, I'm guessing? And then transitioned to being comfortable with the bathroom again. Weird that Ella forgot that she had a bathroom fear given that because of it, she was in diapers until pretty much middle school. Seems like something that's hard to forget but memory is weird sometimes.
  16. Wow, this was, wow. I had suspected there was a deeper connection but I thought it was more like the Coach had been her stepdad or soemthing, her mom was dating him. Not that he was Literally her Dad. And holy, now I'm both scared and intrigued, because the "lie" they came up with is pretty much what I thought happened. Now, I'm a bit confused, the only thing I can think of is that somehow Ella killed her mother or something, that's the only thing I can think of that is worse and has the possibility of destroying Ella's psyche.
  17. Holy wow, that was intense. I felt so bad for Heather. That's a cluster fudge and a half to deal with. I felt so sad for Ella when she compared herself to the last broken doll. Because it's true that she was the last option but that self-deprecation is kinda wrong despite the fact that given the context. If circumstances had been slightly different, Heather would've gone with a different option. Although I truly believe that Heather truly loves Ella. I love the relationship she's developed with Danielle and I'd love to see more of her involved with the story and Ella's problems, thinking about it, I notice we haven't seen Danielle talk in a while. I'm thinking about the context of the situation, how Ella seems to have woken up when the cluch was "kissing" her, how he was crying like something bad had happened and around that time her mother died. I can only speculate why he was there as there aren't enough details to form a proper theory but I do believe I know what he was actually doing. I think he was doing CPR, not kissing her but doing mouth to mouth resuscitation. Something might've caused Ella to drown in the bathtub, maybe her cancer or seemingly more likely given he context something shocking and Traumatizing happened in such a shocking way that she passed out from how overwhelming it was and she was in the middle of a bath then so she passed out and the eater and started drowning. The coach was in the house for some reason and managed to revive her. I say this because his actions don't seem like he molested her, the gifts too. It feels like more than a Coach. I think he was dating Ella's mom. The way hes presented, he seems to be acting in a sort of fatherly way but like distant, like a parent who for x reason can't be with their kids so they gift them stuff to help them.
  18. I liked this story, it's interesting to see how protagonist turned Tommy into Wendy and then have Ross do something similar to Protagonist. However, it does feel a bit weird to jump from the wedding to suddenly they have twins that are three years old already. Which shows around a 4 year gap between the wedding and then. It might've felt better if from the wedding it went to the pregnancy and then skipped the 3-4 years. Overall, it's a really good story and I love that tease at the end where protagonist thinks about what's happening to her in comparison to what she did to Wendy and tries to rationalize and reassure herself that she won't end up that way and it'll be fine, her "Daddy" wouldn't do that to her and then the "right?" at the end to show that doubt is really good.
  19. Yay! I loved this story. So, I'm very happy that you're considering doing more with these characters someday. I had been thinking about possible paths that it could take. Given how "peculiar" the situation is and thus how unique/rare support groups for such situations would be. I think that exploring the other members and to and extent how the support group was formed could make for an interesting story. However, I believe that a "sequel" to this should focus on the relationship that was born in this story. I guess I should thank you for "kicking" Unknowns butt. I agree that some negative feelings born from conflict through the development of the relationship would be pretty "par for the course" for Unknown. Despite how sad it may get, it'll be worth it to see these characters grow and develop not only themselves but also their relationship.
  20. This chapter was great! Kaylee is my favorite character now. Most of the teachers are nice too. Jasmine and Mrs. Hernandez are great. I'm looking forward to seeing why the infamous Mrs.Garcia is known as such. Given all her stress, Ella learned Best word ??.
  21. Awww, thanks. I had fun writing it out. So far from these other two chapters, all I can gather is the pieces of Maisie past, which leads me to believe that Maisie parents probably did something to get kicked out of Lilikol and didn't actually leave voluntarily, that they rejected Lilikol culture and in some way abused Maisie or something, she seems to have some kind of particular dislike for diapers and using them beyond what I'd say an average person would be like in that situation. She seems to dislike being seen as childish/babyish as if she despises that yet seems to crave that special attention and affection given to a child or baby on some level. At least from her interactions with Sugar, it seems like she desperately needs some motherly love that she definitely didn't get enough of.
  22. While I can't speak for @TheMommyM. For me this was definitely not all doom and gloom and pain and panic. Although from her previous comments I'd say she will probably like it. The characters felt very realistic and the aftermath of the "incident" also felt very appropriate. So, I'd say you definitely succeeded in your goal with this one. I loved the support group and how different yet similar their situations were. Loved the progress and character development, Allison feels like a very matured and nice person. She's really done well with dealing with what happened to her. The only thing I'd say is I would've loved an "epilogue" of sorts where they go to a meeting as a couple, maybe a few weeks after the ending.
  23. Wow, I loved this chapter. I'm unsure if Lew is Trans or Genderfluid. But whatever they are, I love them. I was very surprised that the girl Lew ended up being Lyon brother but when she first walked up to Maisie and left so quickly, it did make me interested in her because it seemed like the purpose of talking to Maisie then was more than what she let on. This was funny. How every movie is very old due to needing to be curated for the island. Maisie description of Streaming services was a good way to explain it to someone who doesn't know what the internet is, but what a movie is. Although I was surprised that Lyon wasn't curious about something like that with how she described it, especially when she said hundreds and Lilikol selection of films is very small. ????, this was, without a doubt, my favorite part. I started laughing so much when she started moooing just to spite Lyon over his very rude and ignorant comments. I liked Lyon a bit at first, and to an extent I understand that the gender roles have played a significant part in influencing his behavior but omg, he's actually such a sexist dick. Cora was right, he at least, sees girls as trophies. The audacity of this dude, like wtf. Isn't this their second date? Like wtf. Kissing so aggressively too. Like if Maisie likes it fine. But when This is his thought process and reasoning for it. Fuck him, a total dick, a golden dick. But a dick nonetheless. "Golden" because of the "prince charming" casanova attitude he puts up for girls. And the diaper touch, I understand that diapers have become an integral part of romantic and sexual relationships in this culture, that they're a vital part of "courting" and stuff. But even then, it was said that diaper checks and changes are very intimate things. So, touching her diaper like that without permission, so suddenly is wrong not just generally, but even within their own cultural context, it seems that on the second date it wouldn't be appropriate.
  24. I knew it! Ok, while Reina definitely isn't normal. I'm not 100% convinced she's a Reichi. However the only example we've properly had was Nari, who can't be a proper example because their strength and longevity makes it an outlier. I say I'm not convinced because Nari was very possessive and abusive. However I suppose it would make sense for different Reichi to have different personalities and thus approach their targets in significantly different ways. It would be harder to separate the Reichi from the host if it were very supportive of them. I was suspect since they got home because while the cute sexy times they were having seemed normal and can just be passed off as Reina being very dominating,assertive and charismatic. It's clear that it went a bit beyond that as it seemed Midori was in a trance state of some kind after so many kisses.
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