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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
I'm not asking for a retcon. I preserve the validity of the original volume in its completed form. I merely seek an appendix or accumulative companion short concerning. At no point did I request any prose committed to paper with pen, effectively, to be changed, I merely so much sought supportive body of work. Lord of the rings was born of the hobbit, silence of the lambs from red dragon. It's not unheard of. I'm no stranger to almost dystopia foray. More inclined to a kafka-esque world.but even in those the met characters get a conclusion served - the house maid in America, and in the trial when K sticks the knife in his neck himself to not give the authority the satisfaction of doing so. Giving a connected character an end is just a platitude offered. When said character is more concerning than where the two main characters close the book is just the cause of the irk in me. I never inferred a rewrite, hence the not wanting to emulate misery in real life. This body of work has been presented in a forum open for critique. Requesting more can not be construe as negative. Addy still choose to sell her shares and up sticks,but she spins it as poor me. For the most part yes - always one of the first comments or observations in his monologues is a comment relating to her chest, a flashback to a previous event in close proximity, or noticing their size. It's pavlovian. If a partner, God forbid is in traffic accident and is left in a vegetative state, someone you were imminently to marry. Just because they can no longer communicate as they did, do you instantly stop loving them, cut them out of your life, and never think positively of them again and look for a new romantic partner as quickly, rebound, replacement?? That's the comparative in the non diaper dimension. Not at all- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
I cannot stand the idea put forward that addy and cam could take her. That is not acceptable. I really do think beth deserves afew chapters or some appendix after the fact. I don't think addy fans, and I accept there are many of them, would tolerate a delay or hiatus for the epilogue to benefit and in recognition of the 'other girl' in their eyes. Theres clearly something more human in the exposure we had to beth that has enamoured her to us, and I myself can't put my finger on it. It may be an abdl, but it's not an exotic fascination with desiring the recognition of beth (I'm non sexual) it's not some morbid thing either, in wanting to learn more of the horrible details of what's happened. It's deffinitely a pure, hoping she's OK, almost concern. Everytime we see her at the start, she sad or worried, when shes waiting to say goodbye to came and go to the adoption centre, she was so anxious, but backed into a corner, but she didn't want to leave without explaining to cam, she puts others first. When cam visits her at home after her dad gets her back, she down plays her situation, and smiles, she's just happy to see cam, but puts such a brave face on it, to keep the time she has with him fun, because she knows she's going to tell him to not come back again for his safety. After that we only interact with her through speaking to her dad. Then when she comes to the house after emancipation, it's the first time we see her happy, and that shes put herself first. But even then she doesn't let her previous years experience define her, barely mentions, almost trying to pretend it didn't happen so cam would just see her as normal. I feel it's like she was only allowed one instance of each human emotion throughout the story. And conversley addy is the opposite. In opulence and over indulgence, and always thinking of herself. Addys immature and a baby, just in different ways that keep her panties clean and dry. I think cam has has the least development really. He's one dimensional. I really want to get behind him. But for a learned person, he has pretty unintelligent thoughts, lead by the hand and needy.- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
It's a general consensus that beth deserves more....., sofis I genuinely think this might require an appendix or short after the epilogue. Unless youd like to hold off on the epilogue and write something for sake of continuity. I don't want to sound like Kathy bates. But it's evident you've created a character that people connected with, that you didn't expect people to connect with, more so than the protagonist and duetoagonist (< that means second lead character, right??) I think readers created the character development in their minds by taking the initiatives from the updates when she reappeared in the story. I loved it when she came back emancipated..., no insult to her, but I would have loved if she came still having accidents. In her own words, seven years locked in diapers, that was a success for the character. Everybody reading it was happy. It was pretty cruel to take all that long work and personal struggle and growth away from her so nonchalantly. I'm sure beth and her mum would have been aware of safefoods reputation, and would not have tried to products so readily. I think now unfortunately you can't leave beth as a vehicle for a bad taste in his mouth, a metaphor for what could have been him, and lost love. Beth has taken on more embodiment and personality than cam, maybe because we the reader have padded out her story ourselves, which makes the connection more personal. I do value that you have finished the story, and you have gotten so much positive feedback, this to me is up there with my favorite stories. I know it must take so much time and effort to write a novel. there's a but coming....... But, alot of the audience would really appreciate consideration given to beth. It's testament to your writing how well she has translated. But we don't want fanservice. Completely out of your mind, in the world you created, afew chapters returning to beth. Not back tracking the time line, going forward. I don't think any of us would expect it to be a quick turn around, but could you please consider it. Ok, as a gauge of mutuality and agreement, could people only like this comment if they would appreciate this. And maybe let's set a glass ceiling, if it reaches that threshold could it least be considered?? This really isn't meant as an insult or knock to your story. There have just been a few comments that resonate with my own inner turmoil over this, so it's like a last ditch attempt. It's weird, because nobody is asking for resolution for the kid with the autoinjector from daycare, or the girl from school that went back to diapers for 3 weeks minimum, or Stacy back in her reality, or even merges continued adjustment to pretty much just being like she was before, but now dependant on diapers......, beth some how has captured the audience. It's a bit like the scene in the fault in our stars where the kids go to meet Peter van houten (who I relate to alot!) and ask him what happens to the hamster. I just wondered if you could atleast consider it. I feel like she has more character than cam. In the short interaction we were privy to, she was self aware, and knew the risks she lived under, later paralleled and mirrored by Megan. She had drive and determination, even when regressed, she put others first knowing she was monitored, told the man she loved to stay away. And then we leave her completely on her own to potty train an get tested in court. Then when we meet her again,she is confident, happy, no sign of trauma, and carries her history well, her family is reunited, her ability to simply use the potty again completely fixed her family. But even then she is modest and grounded. She calmly approaches cam and slowly romantically connects with him, a less composed person would not act so well after seven years. And just like that she's gone. But she's not gone, she's just not written about, cam doesn't consider her worth anything anymore, because he can't suck her boobs. It's a disservice to the character. We fought for her name in the court and won, but we don't see the rewards from that. Winning is just a plot point, it's not followed through to mean anything.- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
I disagree that I am inventing characteristics with addy. Based on her behaviours, reactions and things she says, you can build a persons traits. People are creatures of habit. The way a person acts with their significant other, in response to external impacts on a significant other (the daycare) is usually their most pure and uncompromised or watered down self. Isn't it serendipitous for addy to reconnect with cam just as he lands a new job, high paid, high status job, whilst addy has become some transient out of mostly guilt. It's too much coincidence. I think once an amazon has adopted or has breastfed, that's a turning point of no return, making them into irrespective quasi maniacal maternal monsters blinkered to one way of thinking. How is addy still producing milk if it's been such a long time without a little to require it or cause it? Addy is no different to any other amazon. Shes admitted her desires and intentions, from day one of meeting Cameron. But she plays some kind of mock regret and apologetic demeanour, that is enough to disarm Cameron, she knows what buttons to press to win cameron over... (©)(©)...., like she's done a million times before to get the way she wants, Cameron is a paper soldier and invertebrate in anything but the courtroom. Will bend for addy without much resistance. A goldfish memory. This girl made his life shit, broke his heart, directly linked to beths demise, and forced him to live as a baby girl for almost a month. ......, but it wasn't addys fault. Please. Addy doesn't see cam as an equal or partner, she sees him as a baby girl, with the addy bonus of sexual relationship gratification on the side. Addy didn't even "lose everything", she chose to distance herself from the company,and from people associating. She could go back to the company tomorrow and resume her role. But she plays hard done by to sort of shirk responsibility, complicity, and guilt. She's running from it constantly. But again Cameron is too breast-blinded to logically see sense. Addy doesn't like to be told no, addy doesn't like to not be the one making changes to a baby (addy wasn't against the daycare reducing Cameron, she wanted to do it herself if she could, she was just angry they breached the court rules. She happily parades him in the blowout onesie afterward. Addy doesn't consider other people, she doesn't feel guilt over what happened to beth,( I think she's happy beth is out of the picture, but is still also classified as rival in her brain), but she knows other people are, and would expect her to be, so she has to force pretend interest or concern. On the times she's been in this situation she's only offered "how is she"/"how is she doing"?, doesn't personify it or say beths name. And doesn't really react or offer conversation after cam has told her, because she doesn't care, so just offers a sorry, or sticks her boobs in his face as distraction and is like" you know, I really am * soooooo * sorry about what happened. Addy has entitlement issues, that's a huge character flaw in a person. It's from her upbringing. She gets her way. She drives badly on the road because she thinks she owns it and it's down to others to get out of the way. She just wants Cameron as a baby girl, she knows Cameron will do so, as has done it before, without any protest and completely negates and ignores Cameron request to move slow and work on the relationship first. From the moment cameron, already really weak will was broken and he dropped the silent treatment in the car in the too small diaper, for really no good reason, addy knew he was malleable and at her whim. Had their been no court case, addy didn't really have an issue with what her mums company was doing, it was her income source.now it all fell apart on her doorstep, shes having to pretend to. Addy is alot of pomp and pretence. I can't really think of any point in the narrative where addy was real with Cameron at all. He's always just been her plaything. She distanced herself from all the people involved because it's unbearable to have to pretend to be THAT sorry, and THAT remorseful all the time. Just my take on justifying why I cannot abide addy. It's really nice to be able to engage with a story beyond just reading it and interact with others- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
Getting together again out of some kind of 'survivors guilt', or "because it's better than being depressed alone" is really shallow and superficial, which I'm learning that cam is that kind of weak person. Addy just knows how to play that role to get what she wants........,beths all alone, where's the love for her? Surely making her not so alone would be more important to him. But I guess cam just likes immediate gratification of sucking tit more. I don't think I'm giving addy any undue scrutiny. In her own words she has now admitted that she wanted can to be her little(girl), many years prior to Stacys activation of maternal affection nanites,which conscious or not, everything she did she wanted to do, and by association, wasn't as apposed to her mother's business plan as she implores you to believe. She doesn't want cam back, she wants to have a baby girl again. That's two separate things, the baby position could be replaced with absolutely anybody else in the world and she would act the same, this way she just knows that the for all intense an purposes, little is willing and won't fight. What's the use of his extra fraction of an inch. But can is too one tracked mind to see it. It's infuriating. Can even says, to paraphrase, "I want to make sure I'm still romantically compatible with you" And addy replies that he HAS to agree to play baby sometimes. And barely minutes later, cams resolve is gone, addy gets the big guns out and cam is on the teet and in pull-ups straight away. It's not a healthy relationship. She's manipulative. And I still believe addy was never in danger from her parents, she just had a part to play she enjoyed more. To your other question. I have no medical degree, I just read a hell of alot and learn. Knowledge is vital.- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
Beth's dad is getting old. He's been through the absolute ringer. He thought he had her back and it was taken away, including his wife, who he was finally able to live with and be married to again. He can't look after her forever. Maybe Cameron should take her, work part time as the court position, the president wants him there as much for positive pr and public image as cam wants to practice, he could negotiate reduced hours, as beth was involved in the case that increased cams visibility to the president. It's the right thing to do. Is what I'd do, the care place is just deaths waiting room. That's what you'd do for a person you love. No way. That's a conflict of interest, addy (finally my phone didn't autocorrelation to andy) knows that cam loves beth, even in her diminished state, beth is a rival, and you know how girls treat rivals..., add to that mother Increased hormones levels. Absolutely no way, beth is still in there, is not brain death it's signal transmission, its horrible but I believe she's lucid and fully aware, but the connection between nerve receptors and muscles don't relay it to the external faculties. I would abhor it if beth was forced to live in a house with a woman that replaced her, a woman who caused her physical situation. To hear them having sex or see them making eyes or kissing. That's more torture, and addy would relish it, really rub it her face, because that's the kind of person she is. Look how she treated that women in daycare after she caused cam to blowout. It's totally not fair to beth. Also addy would do everything to stop any experimental advances towards repairing the damage the company that lined her pockets and bought her car, being given to beth, because again, it brings her rival back.- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
It's a swerve and correction back on to the road. If the plaque around the brain is only encasing the outside, the synapses would be intact. The neurons don't fire outward towards the skull, they fire inwardly between to two halves of the brain. Beth was fully grown, so the plaque wouldn't stop the brain from needing to grow. As long as it has oxygenated blood flow through the brain stem, the brain should be intact. It's only when trauma occurs deep into brain from a impact or impaling, or restricted blood flow is the brain damaged. Plaque on the outside would just be like a second skull. We can have plaque on our teeth, but can still sense with, because the damage hasn't gone inside and affected the route. I'm just being lighthearted , I just want beth back ;p. This chapter is written really, it's paced better than the last few, and goes more places, it's not just in one room with two people, it's IN the world. It's more like the earlier chapters. It also felt alot longer to read than it actually was. But it didn't feel like "putting a bow on it" it had relevance and furthering of characters throughout. My opinions on Andy are well known ? she worms her way in again, conveniently just as he hits the bug time (my guess is she saw his story on the news when checked for danicas story by accident, now plays dumb, sticks her big tits in his face and reels him back in. Andy still gets what she wants, which doesn't sit right at all. Afew hairbrush smacks and a laxative drink isn't good enough. Is that really all Danica did while he was out, considering all the things they were doing to Cameron, should have been some medical instruments at hand..., damages sphincter muscles, removed her nipples prevent her breasts feeding....., it's almost like maybe Andy was in on it, and pretending to be captured (like the guys in scream pretend to stab each other). Nothing happened to her, when Danica came back for her at the house either. I'm afraid Andy is the only bit that's not good about this chapter. Sofia, this chapter was excellent- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
You by claiming something as free will, takes its free will away...., what if it didn't want to be free will? Free will is kind of an oxymoron. But this is sort of a bit leaning towards existentialism, which I am very big on. Free will is something people aspire to, but it doesn't exist. Nobody is truly free- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
I think it's healthy and intelligent to discuss and analyse narrative. Surely that's why authors write for readers, to engage and illicit response. When you have become engrossed in a story and are now pre aware of the end afew pages away, the crux and conclusion become more important. In earlier chapters you can let things slide because you know there's chapters and chapters for room for rebalanced.its almost like a bottle neck. You have you internalised idea or expectation of how it should end after spending 62 chapters in the bubble. And when it's not going as you expect, AND when the author is present and actually responds to readers, it's like an outlet to express the differences and take on the furthered arc. It's really weird to assume someone wouldn't continue to read it because of new events. I'm not forced to read, I choose to read, and I like to read. If somebody lacks tolerance to the point of in the written word, they need to look long and hard at themselves. I wish I could write like this. I'm never inappropriate or attacking of people with different desires to my own, just offering my observation and understanding, and perception, as myself as a male. Discussion is healthy- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
It's a * Risk * cancer later in life. That exists with anything, hrt for women increases risk of cancer, using sunbeds increases risk of cancer. The Dr didn't say he would get cancer just a risk. Just for sake of discussion, do either of you have a pre disposition or acuity to the idea of being a women in fantasy. Objectively this could create bias to your decision, as bias affects mine. I can appreciate both sides of the argument. People work in powerboats around nuclear energy, there's increased risk of cancer, and death there. But it's just part of their life. Add to the fact Cameron has got to be losing his shirt. Right now after just waking up and having an information overload, there's no way a man in that mental is going to then so easily accept the concepts of being a girl. I fail to believe in such an advanced, medically, society, where they can reduce the size of skeletal structure and change a penis into a vagina in an instant, like the guy at the daycare with the injector, that cancer would be such a danger to them anyway......, nanites would just fix it. Surely nanites would be used for conventional medicine first.- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
If the 'good' people are able to be killed off so abundantly in the story, there should be some kind of taoist balance, some of the 'bad' need to meet accumulative 'end of life' type fates. There has been no justice for beth. I feel more connection to beth then Cameron right now. Cameron has become an abdl trope really....., forced diapers, now needs diapers, now likes diapers, now wants to stay in diapers, now wants to be a girl, tickticktickticktick, the end. Beth's arc although not witnessed seems more full, having to be adopted, the downfall, the removal of teeth, coming home to your dad and seeing his genuine reactions at all the firsts, again, given hope by moving, missing Cameron, trying desperately to potty train, achieving it, being tested to use a potty, emancipation, sex and wearing panties again, life is good, tries to make money towards wedding, safe foods hit, wets her pants, drops to the floor, my nd goes, opens her eyes after the longest sleep...., Stacy what are you doing here, I thought you went back to your dimension?? Cameron just has become wooden or unrealistic. It's still written wonderfully. But I guess because I don't relate to the trans aspect, it's lost touch with me. NOT the fault of the writer at all ?- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
I just hope the story swerves back on track and away from the trans offshoot, as afew have fed back to you it's not of interest. I have never fantasised about being a girl. It's a grossly over exaggeration and stereotype of abdl that I abhor (the other one being all abdl men are guy) I was hoping that from within the community, deep within, 62 chapters in, we would not perpetuate the stereotype the uninformed, potty trained, outside world put onto us. Cameron is masculine, he fucks women, he liked having a beard, he hates the girls clothes. If it came down to it, I think most men would take risk of cancer over sex change. It just doesn't make sense. I may be way off base, and maybe not read one of your stories before, if they are usually trans centric, then fool on me for not knowing the author. But it hasn't been alluded to throughout the narrative, it just seems stuck on to the end haphazardly. Cameron would never pick having a sex change. I know this is a fantasy story, and I wish the dimension existed, but some truths exist accross all 7 dimensions (string theory) no male would choose sex change. Even if a man's penis is damaged in a terrible accident, they don't turn the person into a girl, "because it would be easier to live" they just stabilise his condition and stitch up the wound. The ending just seems like its from a different story. Has the interest on this story, made you rush abit to complete it?- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
So, a bloke having long hair means he wants to be a girl? I had long hair since I was 17. I didn't want to be a girl, I wanted to be like Jeff hardy (a wwf wrestler/my formative years male role model) This ending went abit of track. It's disappointing. It's more a trans fiction ending than an abdl one. What is this a Stephen king novel, his parents die, beth 'dies', Cameron 'dies'. Basically addy gets her wish, by default. Just passive, no struggle, no forced, cam(___??) walks right into it like a cuck. No redemption, story arc option 2,either,despite Stacy zendaya understanding of nantes, she can do nothing, also means she's not coming back to fix beth. Addy is no better than danica- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
Cam doesn't love addy, he loves beth. I just found that sentence just so empty and superficial and throw away. Why ask to marry beth, if he still loved addy. This part just doesn't sit well at all. Still not really enough chapters for this turn of events to be so indepth or a real paradigm, it alludes to it, but will be a last minute rescue, the end was too similar to when he narrow avoided the surgery....., so he blacks out with fear alot, and loves any girl that shows him attention?? I find myself routing for cam less and less. I think he's become mentally ill since he parents died. And has one foot off the boat. Really sad that this story is ending In afew chapters, it's got legs. But everything must end. Wonderful writer!- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
He loved her as soon as she's was standing waiting for him before she was taken away to be adopted. He loved her when he went to visit, and was hurt that her and her dad told him he wasn't able to visit her anymore. That's all waaaaaay before she declined his proposal. Does cam just love any girl that shows him attention, thats not inferred in the story. To drop thoughts of beth so quickly while being in the home of someone who would be a constant reminder, and then falling in love with her, who herself is presently no mutual romantic acts. Doesn't really makes sense. She's not trying to fuck him or hold his hand or cuddle him...., she's making him wear girls clothes, shit himself, and suck her tits, all for her gain and desire, that wouldnt make him forget beth and go head over heels for her. Since she drove him home in the too small diaper, I haven't read one moment where Addy seemed affectionate or having the hots for cam..., it could be any other little, or mid, in his place and she would act exactly the same way.- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
I still maintain with only 6 chapters left to 65,not a lot of pages left for paradigms of any kind to shift. It's one of the best stories I've ever read. But it has bottle necked and become very small focus on just addy and cammie.it goes less places, and picks up on narratives placed down several chapters before alot less. I guess I just don't really like addy. How fickle can cam be to suddenly love her when maybe 2 weeks ago he was storming down the courtroom in the name of beth. Regressed or not that's still the person he loves, was imminent to be married, but suddenlt "oh, she's been reduced to a baby by a horrible corporation, oh well, I'll fuck the corporations daughter instead and suck her tits, I want to be a baby with her". I maybe internalising and projecting abit, it's not the same as someone dying but I think is comparable. The girl I loved died, my soul mate, for years I wouldn't even consider the idea of another girl, and definitely not a girl 6 degrees of separation from the thing she died of, whether I'd fucked her before or not. You get very bitter, and dismissive of people and the outside, all you focus on is the girl that died, for years. Whether she's an ex and has nice tits or not. The resolve he had at the start in the car seat, arms crossed, not talking to her, would prevail. If he loved beth, he wouldn't soften. I don't think I would even care if addy Was in danger from nanites either. I guess it's lucky, the author clearly has not experienced loss. Bless you x. It just really cheapens cams and beths love. But maybe it's down to his naivety. He didn't love her until she was back in diapers, and now he doesnt lover her again now she's back back in diapers. It wouldn't be a satisfying ending to have addy as the end prize or immaculate player in the game. Stacy needs to come back and fix beth, fix the 6 collateral damage shrunk Co conspirators. Maybe cam and beth can go to stacys world. You write all characters eloquently. There's no fault in your work. I just cannot get on board with addy. She's not acting affectionately, like a girlfriend at all, so cam shouldn't be having increased romantic feelings for her. She's serving herself. I can't be the only one anti-addy??? Wonderful work...., have you started your next story yet? Lots of love x- 2,737 replies
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sherlock replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
If this story checks out at chapter 65,theres not a whole lot of story left for narrative, basically, he gets aquitted, resumes normal life, stays with Andy who chooses to get herself made slightly, happy ending, but no satisfying ending for beth. Stacy should come back to the dimension briefly do her nanite magic on beth, so she can operate normally with cam but stuck in diapers, you don't get lucky enough to report train twice. Plus one chapter is an epilogue where her mum gets what's coming to her. All the doors have been shut early, beths written off, even though she's the one he loves not add, adds nanites are hack locked, so no embarrassing return to diapers for her, and cams home free bar the legal process, so no sex change or sentence to life on diapers for him. The story has sort of already concluded really....- 2,737 replies
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Hello all. I'm looking for a story that I read recently. The premise is some sort progressive school is teaching a year about disability and accepting others. There's a meeting with parents and each pick out a random envelope that stated the disability the child would mimic for the year, and low and behold the protagonist was lucky enough to get the incontinence card. I can't find it now. I read it maybe a week ago. I was hoping it was here, with more chapters. Any brains??
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sherlock replied to Personalias's topic in Story and Art Forum
I got plenty of patience. The writing is good. I look forward to the next chapter here -
[Preston] From Jo to Joella (Ch. 36 added 8/27/20)
sherlock replied to CynthiaCM's topic in Story and Art Forum
Ignore the haters. This story is fantastic. There's no room for sjw ideology here. It's a male centric dystopia, also its FICTION. If you don't like it, here is the jump off point for you. This is a good addition to the narrative, it introduces a partner in crime, increased risk for breaking rules and punishments. I don't subscribe to contemporary identity politics, not to the extreme of shapiro, but I somewhat agree. I really hope you write more, and don't detract from you intended story to appease the easily offended. It's one of the best stories I have read in a really long time!!- 257 replies
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Is this story dead. I really enjoyed this read so far
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[Preston] From Jo to Joella (Ch. 36 added 8/27/20)
sherlock replied to CynthiaCM's topic in Story and Art Forum
I would like to see her sister break some small print law or some infraction that the city does not tolerate, and the committee come together and decide she loses adult status too. Maybe set to perpetual potty trainer status, not allowed to use the big girl toilet, but only given pullups and constantly having accidents as the only potty she can use is the little miss plastic potty at home- 257 replies
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I'm looking for a very old story....., I'm an old school abdl. So, it was a story where the boy was made to go back to diapers by his family. And there's a girl in a similar situation and she tries to get his attention by leaving a diaper pin on the floor in the library. He picks it up and in due course he manages to be in a situation where he is taken to her house. Her dad made her go back to diapers, and she explains to the boy that she now needs them. When he leaves her house he gets changed first and has to use one of her diapers. Can anybody remember this, and where to find it please????
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I'm looking for a long story. That was on deviantart, but I can't find it now. It's starts with 2 twins or sisters having to go to a daycare, the daycare workers are sympathetic to their plight, and plot with them to get the daycare stopped, although thet say they won't be able to stop their parents treating them this way. Then later on the plan is acted and they over power the woman that runs the daycare. The woman owner pleads with them to stop and says she will sell the daycare, so one of the workers offers to run it instead, with the proviso that the previous owner enrolls. Then it has a part with the new owner sitting in her old office and not bothering to hold on to pee as she's in diapers now. It was a good story but I think it's gone from DA......, help