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  1. Little Lamb
    This last chapter Was such a banger. Your work on the craft really shows, and it's just... WOW, Damn effing wow... Much eager for more, cant wait for What's coming next
  2. Little Lamb
    I really like the way this narrative is heading. Not only it's well written and thoroughly thought out, the implicit comentary on the relation between kink and mental health professionals is presented very well and with much respect for the parties involved and us readers. Cant wait for more entries.
  3. Little Lamb
    Finally got time to do a closer read and comment. The execution of the premise felt really marvelous to me. I'm anxious to see where it'll go when climate change reaches a popular debate. And also how, or even if, the developmental studies on education and psychology will change in any way.
  4. Little Lamb
    The more you write, the less I think the plot's staged by any character, makes me feel a weird mix of wanting to be even ritgher (is that a word???) And waiting for the drop that twist my whole view of the story... dunno really loved the premise you have set here
  5. Little Lamb
    My suspicions were there too, but the last conversation between the "mommies" make the 'all as planned' route less likely to me. They could be just pretending, or it could be a ruse from just 1-2 of the 4 characters so far...
  6. Little Lamb
    I really dunno how I feel about the furry angle. (Literally, I just Dont know, gotta put on some smartpants to think about it...) But I really loved the aproach and PoV of a conflicted yet most adorable mommy who just dont really get what is it that she's doing. Like, she really has the heart in the right place, i think. But her head and all the rest really are all over and she's just clueless about it all... (but what do I know of dragon anatomy, Im just a sheep...) Hoping for new entries soon.
  7. Little Lamb
    Short, to the point, and inventive. I really loved the way it transitioned from eager and sad to hopeful, then fantastic and very much blissful in the end
  8. Little Lamb
    The premise here is kinda New, but also believable. Im really eager to see where it goes and how deep will the the boy fall.
  9. Little Lamb
    This is a great setup, cant wait for whats to come...
  10. Little Lamb
    My poly-autistic-teacher-sheep brain is loving this arrengement My poly-autistic-kinky-writer heart is telling me there's a lot of room for things going awry at any moment. Specially because no one's talking about the (lack there of) proverbial stake in the room. Also know as Avery's crazy stupid siblings... And there's probs more things We've already forgot that are going to bite us back right on our padded bums...
  11. Little Lamb
    This sheep is also eagerly waiting a New chapter...
  12. Little Lamb
    Okay... I trust the oh so perfect human mommy even less now. But she got an effing crossbow bolt with her bare hands. That's... not normal... for humans at least. My bets are on her betraying the hunte(s) recently or smth like that. It explains Fiona's reaction to her smell, her morbid sense of humor and curiosity, and how she knows so much. But that's just my guess, what do I know, Im a sheep... beep beep.
  13. Little Lamb
    I must say, that as a polyamorous sheep myself, it's really hard to relate at all with the only one of them shtick. I get it, but it's so very weird for me... Also, the lipstick scaring Fiona makes me think it's not just the 'another date' thing, and thus making it much more likely that Avery's a hunter undercover... And Lucy's in very deep trouble right now, so much so, and at such a timely manner, that the hunter hypotesis sounds even more likely... (my bets are on IP tracking as the way they first found lucy)
  14. Little Lamb
    Im still throuple team all the way... But Avery gives me some very very weird shivers, like she's not just in the know, but also into some dangerous stuff... She's also such a darn frigging perfect of a mommy it makes me doubt her reasons and motivations, specially cus she's always overstepping implicit boundaries. (Not that I dont like it, actually, the exact oposite was what made me wonder about what her deal really is.) Anyway, she doesnt seem to be a huntress... But it could be bait...
  15. Little Lamb
    I swear... if she's a hunter this lil' sheep will cross oceans to hunt ya!!! Also, the creeps Avery gives made me think she's trying too much, like too too much, so much that maybe she's trying hard to do or be something... At the same time, maybe she's just a natural mommy and somehow knows about the monstrum by some alternate channel... Maybe both and she is a huntress... I dunno, too many possibilities, too little me to speculate
  16. Little Lamb
    Humummy gives me some shivers... but in a kinda good way!? Please dont make her be evil... Still rooting for team throuple!!!
  17. Little Lamb
    Love the characters' dynamic, hope there's more to it soon...
  18. Little Lamb
    I think You've got the númber wrong there... or maybe not, chapter skip? Anyway, very nice start to a story, I wonder how deep we'll get into mastermind's well... mind. Heheh Lots of very fun and complex thoughts and feelings to be had with his specific power-set and situation. And of zoey's too. Hoping for more chapters soon.
  19. Little Lamb
    Im surely biased, but tem human+wolf in a lovely triangular película would be damn awesome and so so cute by the feels till now. Lamia Lady seems hot but dangerous, predatory even... maybe even in a more literal sense
  20. Little Lamb
    Yey!!! Finally a Lucy story!!! Nice start, looking foward for developments on her vampiric love life
  21. Little Lamb
    I'll just say my monday got a lot more interesting and much much more blushy all of a sudden... Eager for whats to come, specially if it entail readers as well...
  22. Little Lamb
    Loving this so very much, wanna know so much more bout the characters and world!!! Your craftsmanship really shows also, cramming this much worldbuilding and character development in just 2 chapters is really masterful. Cant wait for more
  23. Little Lamb
    You have a nice scenario set up here, with plenty of potential and some very hot scenes indeed. But at the same time its written in such a male gazey way that it makes really hard for me to enjoy it most times. Maybe consider taking the f/f tag? I know there's clear interaction between Lara and Stacey in a kinda kinky manner, but as a lesbian, it's hard not to see the tag in your story till now and not cringe whenever they are interacting with one another. Be it privatelly or with ted. Not to say you're writing them wrong or badly, not at all. It's just that I associate the f/f tag with relationships between women that have a much more intimate nature. Sorry for the long ramble around the tag issue. Felt it had to be said. That out of the way, you write very well albeit in a mostly clinical/matter-of-fact manner. It's pretty logical and comunicates without doubt every detail meant. But feels a little dry of emotion in some scenes, makes me wonder how much of the romance angle you pretend on playing.
  24. Little Lamb
    Ha! I knew it!!! Well played friend. Very well played! My suspicions were mostly on Jessica. I mean, kinda obvious on that dramatically ironic way... but still, for a few seconds I doubted myself and thought maybe Beth's sister was an unknown 3rd party, maybe a complicated ex from Emma's... Still, nice foreshadowing and "twist?" Anyway, eager to see more of Jess and Alex. Also loved that you didnt overplay breastfeeding as this magical mystical divine experience like what we're used to see being the norm. Im sure its awesome, still dream of it on the regular... (have you seen my mommy???) But I must say its tiring to always read about it like its this religious/spiritual experience that rivals nirvana. All in all a very nice chapter. These snippets of whats in Emma's head are damn tantalizing... I really wanna know whats haunting her, cus till now she's been so much of an awesome mommy... Makes me wonder if she's compensating for something in her past, or if she's just as much an insecure scaredy cat as us not so big kids, and should talk it over with a grown up to make it all better...
  25. Little Lamb
    Cant say much that havent already been said. Except that Im loving every bit of the story till now. Wanna know even more about Emma as the chapters go by. And it's such a joy and delight to see Roxie's friendship blossoming too. Wonder where that will lead and if Beth's sister is who Im thinking or another 3rd party...
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