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I'm a little worried about the change making Conner/Carly yell when it wasn't supposed to. It will be really interesting to see if the shot that is supposed to undo the change will actually work when they're done shooting. No. It will be interesting to see how surprised anyone is when it doesn't work when they're done filming and try to change Carly back to Conner. Well, as I commented to TerranV, I suspect that jolt does mean someone is trying to do something. I'll be amused if there is a, "Mwahahaha! Because of the special nanites that were used you will never be a boy again!" "Oh. Cool. I wasn't sure how to ask not to have the nano sculpting undone. Thanks. What about adding a few more inches of height, is that locked out? I promise not to dislocate your kneecaps if you don't have that locked." "Didn't you hear me?" "Blah blah, I'll never have those annoying dangling bits again, blah blah. I heard the important part. Again, thank you. Now do you want to be able to run away from my friends and relatives or not?" "Stop thanking me for my revenge!" đ That's probably just some psychic sense kicking in and commenting on the next project where they do a screen adaptation of The Biggest Little and Charlotte plays poor Amy.
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I was about to ask if there was any difference and then I realized it's probably like men's and women's razors. One is functional, maybe industrial looking. The other comes in pastel plastic with flowers or other cute designs. And in the pair of possibilities Beth gave both would lock on without the wearer having the ability to easily remove them. Might as well be driving a windowless van with FREE CANDY painted on the side. It would be less suspicious. And Conner thought there might not be enough for Beth if they split a plate. Okay, so it's not as blatant as one might expect. That said, if she can't take it off that could be problematic for the remaining scenes to be filmed. Even with it being priced that way on the class budget, the mere fact that this is something that can be made available to the classes with simply a classroom economy of fake money to control the use is just another sign of how far ahead of us the technology of this world is. Then again back when Conner's mother was there they had phones and laptops with multi-year battery life if I am remembering correctly. Just, wow. Ha! Knew something was going to happen! But is it intentional? Maybe a bare nanite or two survived in Conner and have been spending the intervening time trying to reproduce enough to do their job again? An old enemy got him with a dose of something earlier that they intended to trigger later that's interacted with these nanites? Maybe professor Ponce didn't do anything nefarious but someone else tampered with the nanites? What will they do? I predict Conner will have both the physical gender changes and lose some size. But will there be any other surprises? I expect that at least at the time of installation everything was legal by the letter of the law. Highly unusual, expensive, and possibly not all in the spirit of the law, but I expect it was all legal when installed. Now whether it would be legal to install everything in the current day? Maybe, maybe not. But unless any changes to the law required modifying existing installed security systems they're probably good so long as they haven't done any construction since then major enough to require bringing everything up to current legal standards. That sort of rule is why you will find places where landlords are reluctant to do any significant maintenance work. So long as they don't do anything much more substantial than slapping on a new coat of paint then things that met code when the place was built can continue to be grandfathered in under the old rules. But hiring someone to upgrade the old climate control equipment or fix the actual issues that result in water leaks from the roof instead of patching over them might require the entire building to be brought into compliance with current building codes. I suspect Amanda's house may be like that. They might occasionally have some sort of code enforcement officer start to write them up for illegal security measures only to get handed paperwork that shows that the system was legal when installed and that until and unless they do any work that requires bringing everything in compliance with current laws they're grandfathered in under the old rules. If they involved a good lawyer at all then I would suspect as mentioned about, "Legal by the letter of the law even if possibly violating the spirit." And of course the combination of money, lawyers, and being able to point to prior events to show that this isn't mere paranoia (I can't remember who it was who said that just because they are actually out to get you doesn't stop it from being paranoia. It just makes it justifiable paranoia). So the local prosecutor knows that they can go after this household and have a very loud fight on their hands where the other side will be able to show that they had previously been targeted for assaults and presumably also show that the security system hasn't caused any issues. Or they can spend the same time getting a dozen open and shut convictions against people who have no justification for what they're doing. One choice opens them and the administration over them up to PR problems if anyone in the press sides with the family and they may very well lose in court after spending months or years and a great deal of money on the case. The other builds up a nice resume to step up to a higher office. Choose wisely prosecutor, choose wisely. "Well Conner, I'm afraid that with how those nanites were programmed the sex change is irreversible." [Insert the Top Gear, "Oh no! Anyway," meme here] "Oh darn. Anyway, I suppose I should get back to my homework now."
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Boo! Boo! It doesn't sound like they rewrote it enough to shift her credit to, "Based on a story by," but at least she should only get a cowriting credit and not the sole writing credit. And they can always have some bonus tracks and have someone mention, "I'm so glad they did those rewrites, everything our first audiences said they loved was added in the rewrite." But all of my teachers say sharing is good. I don't know, that sounds more like a you problem and less of a me problem... Well what do you know, Beth's mom certainly seems to agree. Once again, sounds like a you problem to me. Much sympathy for Conner, especially since that's probably 115â plus humidity. 115â without humidity is already pretty bad. As in you can be well into the shade and getting a breeze and you will still be sweating. 120+â is just miserable. But at 115â I've long since stopped with the, "Arizona, it's a dry heat," joke. Don't worry Conner, you simply did an embarrassing scene in front of someone you will be seeing a lot of, who also knew your mother. No biggie.
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How slow is too slow for a slow burn?
LittleFenny replied to LessThanSavory's topic in Critiques and Writer's Discussion
I'd say that for me a large part of what determines how slow burn a story can be is whether I can tell that there's something burning. With the diaper dimension stories you know it is near inevitable that a protagonist is going to end up in diapers and you will probably see it happening to other characters. So it is like the old TV program 24 or any number of suspense shows or scenes: even if you can't see it you know there is a clock counting down to when the bomb blows upcharacter is in diapers. So there should be something that at least hints that something is going to happen. Maybe the character is wetting the bed. Or someone more dominant than them is showing signs that they aren't happy with how the character is acting. Or a change in social norms is happening and the character is having to deal with changing that come before the diapers show up. Maybe we can just see that the protagonist is more and more desiring a change in their life (and since this is Daily Diapers we know what that will end up involving). So I would sum it up as you need: Either a setting that tells the reader the diapers are coming, or possibly a history as an author that makes the reader comfortable that the diapers are coming, or events that hint that the diapers are coming. On the last one I would also say that they should ideally be different hints each time. If the character wakes up in a wet bed in chapter one, there should be more than simply waking up in another wet bed in chapter two. Perhaps they wake up in a wet bed and discover they fell asleep while reading a borrowed book and now it's soaked and will have to be replaced. And as Spark and others have mentioned in the thread, make sure there's actually something for us to enjoy during the slow burn. If it's nothing but the clock counting down then there's no story taking place and you should cut the words and start closer to the actual story. If there 10,000 or more words before reaching the diapers then we should have events taking place that make us care about the characters and set things in place so we believe it when the diapers come into play. I have a story idea that I've occasionally been taking out and examining which is not the same sort of slow burn, but has some slow burn to it. It is set in a world that starts as a cyberpunk like scifi dystopia where the punks are fewer and fewer in number to a more hard science fiction version of a diaper dimension setting. The protagonist is actually wearing pull-on training pants style diapers from the beginning due to bed wetting and wants out of them because of teasing and the fear that they will cost him any chance of a future. Part of what I need to do with this is work out the details of what happens so that when thousands, probably a few tens of thousands of words later they say, "What if we put everyone in diapers? Would that fix everything that's wrong with the world?" you don't wonder why the character who wanted out of diapers is now embracing them and you don't read it and say, "Yeah, the only reason they are suggesting that is because the author put that down as a plot point in the outline." -
My guess would be either someone who either was a former SafeFoods manager or researcher or the kid of one of those or maybe someone from a still existing Venture. Someone who sees Kelly as a useful tool to strike at those they blame for their problems. Pretty much tradition for one like her to ignore a restraining order or expulsion and show up to cause trouble again. I suppose she might have a redemption arc, but I'm expecting she'll show up to cause trouble. "Her mother, a mere Little, dared to oppose us and make threats. Are we supposed to ignore that? We will her her son, her relatives in this dimension, his friends, and even her little dog Toto too!" The ominous silhouette in the shadows starts paging through notes. "Wait, when did a little dog come into this? Did she somehow find out about the Furry Littles dimensions we discovered? Call a meeting of the board!" More shouting to people off the video call happens before the caller remembers and hangs up. âšī¸ We never get to see into the crystal pacifier. âšī¸ Stay safe and dry! Remember to wait for the big to unbuckle the car seat! And have fun!
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Eep! Hey everyone, it's Holly! Hi Holly! Good thing they have a doctor they can trust on hand. They've got Grandpa, but being retired and family he can't take care of everything. Why do I expect there is more than one memo by this point that says, "If Professor Westerfield shows up regarding Conner, shut up and cooperate fully. Failure to follow this memo may result in being reassigned to the campus daycare. As a student." Oh! Well, that explains that connection. But I suspect things are much more complicated than just this. But was Kelly a parallel danger or was she being manipulated by others who were taking advantage of her anger. Uh huh, they tricked you. Probably with such dastardly and sneaky techniques as avoiding the scary and angry Big and leaving her alone as much as they possibly could, and then because they were young kids pointing and laughing when their evil, evil not doing anything caused her to piddle herself. Then again looking at how she's behaved so far in the story I can imagine there were a few cases of being such a pain to her fellow orphans or students at school for some Little or Mid to risk doing something to her. Perhaps even enough of a pain for other Bigs to either look away and not see what was happening or even help. I hadn't noticed on my first read, but has Conner already been effected by something or is it just due to this being his first fight with someone as big as Kelly? Kelly, you should have listened to my Muse instead of BabySophia's. You'd still be in trouble but it would only be academic trouble for sabotaging an assignment and not assault. If she's giving an accurate description. I would not be shocked if it was a refusal to believe that she a Big could possibly still have daytime accidents or wet the bed. So obviously those naughty Littles must be responsible. I have the suspicion that in most Diaper Dimensions you have a weird dichotomy where a Little making a complaint about treatment from a Big is unlikely to get much help. "I'm sure they're just trying to help. Are you sure you didn't actually wet your pants?" "Oh, so she spanked you? And just what were you doing to earn that spanking?" But at the same time, you get caught harming a Little or attempting to do so in a situation where the impression isn't Big disciplining a Little but a Big abusing a Little? Expect to be in for a bad time and pray for good legal representation. And if you go to prison? Oh boy are you likely in for a bad time. "If it isn't Kelly the child abuser. Hey everyone, let's all show Kelly what we think of people who beat children." Kelly, if you actually get jail time then you might want to try and spend as much time in solitary as you can. If you'd just jabbed them in the back with whatever was in that needle weeks ago and you could have probably had both adopted and spent the next few decades tormenting them with the system as your protector. But no, you had to make a game of it and try to make them suffer before you won. Someone needs to review the Evil Overlord rules.
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Here's to many more! So many of these have been such great posts. What if we super duper pout? While holding out breath too! Eep! Don't fall behind on your naps! I do that to myself far too often. I suspect it's Kelly in the room too. But my inner muse just pondered whether it might not be the obvious case of Kelly trying to make an embarassing edit or collection of pictures of Beth (and Conner) to show. Might Kelly be spiteful enough to try and sabotage the project because of her behavior being criticized and her obviously (in her mind) wonderful writing being unappreciated and changed. I really hope the crew is making plenty of backups of all the footage!
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Here, let me file the serial numbers off and box it up for you. đ It's one of my all time favorite shows where I saw many of the episodes when they were new. As opposed to Hogan's Heroes or the original Star Trek and the original animated Star Trek which were well into reruns by the time I was old enough to appreciate them. From around the same time period Seven Days and The Invisible Man also got too little appreciation. But Stargate has so much going for it both in canon and fanfic potential. O'Neill's clone, is probably the one with the most obvious AB potential to me. Just bend things a little so either the cloning issues resulted in a grade school age Jonathan O'Neill instead of high school, or that an additional side effect of the cloning process's growth issues was a weak bladder. Or both. As the taco kid said, why not both. From there you could go several directions. Sticking to Earth, heading into space, and if into space who is to say there isn't an Amazon world out there somewhere. Or maybe a goa'uld that took on the identity of a god of motherhood went native and made herself a world where the majority of the population are kept in childhood one way or another. So many directions you could take it. Otters really would make great sitters. They're furry so they'd be fun to hug, and they'd make you a sea food meal or some nice breaded fish if they are freshwater otters. Go otters! Oops, how did that thermos of warm water suddenly end up spilled on Talia. It's a mystery that may never be solved. But at least we know there's a bag of spare clothes where Talia can find something to wear. I'm going to choose to believe that at some point when she goes to spill something on a customer it will instead be spilled on her, and the manager will use that as an excuse to both fire her and challenge her maturity. In a pinch I'm sure something from that diaper bag can stretch enough to fit until something better is found.
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I really ought to do this for some of my story ideas. I keep too much locked up in my head and sometimes I find things have escaped while I wasn't watching. We know the bell tolled, but for whom did it toll? Best be careful Kelly, the bell may soon toll for you. We can only hope having recorded footage of her behavior makes it easier. Maybe someone should start assembling a Best Of Kelly's Tantrums super clip video. "Here's Kelly whining because her line edit wasn't chosen. Here's Kelly yelling because her catered meal didn't have her favorite dessert. Here's Kelly stomping her feet when told she will have to leave the set if her behavior doesn't improve..." Hope life starts treating you better soon. Good at least you're somewhere you don't have to hide things? Actually, hope life starts treating all of us better soon. Where's life's manager? I need to write a complaint email to them. I don't know, I'm sure Kelly could make it big. So long as she or her future caretaker is willing to have to fill the niche bratty big baby niche role. The nanny off to the side with paddle in hand should keep her bratty behavior on set down to mostly just the scripted bratty behavior. But given that's probably one of the few jobs open to a Big ruled to be too immature to run their own lives the competition is probably pretty fierce for the handful of roles. The powerful of society would want only a few highly visible examples so they can tell the Mids and Littles that those examples prove their society is fair, intimidate Big troublemakers into conforming to expected behavior, but not so many that the Mids and Littles can make too much of a fuss. Just enough. Not enough that trouble making Little Rights agitators can point to them and try to say Bigs aren't any better than Littles and Mids. Ooh, so is it that she really wants to protect him and keep him from being regressed or does she just have really strong opinions on film plots and can't stand that they're doing such an old cliche? And we'll force you to accept another pile of likes, whether you like it or not. đ And if you complain we will have no choice but to give even more likes and comments. I hadn't considered that possibility. But now I'm wondering if it might be something like that. Sure there's the old Show Don't Tell rule, but there are limits to that. Consider the Stargate Episode Window Of Opportunity, if they showed every time loop then the show would likely have been cancelled earlier than it was with the story unfinished, but assuming they stayed on air they would still be showing time loop episodes. At the end of the episode the best the know is that the time loops lasted a minimum of three months. Much better to skip many loops and put the whole 3+ months into one episode. I agree with @APhil I think you've balanced it well.
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I may need to go back and reread, have we been told anything of Kelly's background. It's really coming through that this is someone who is not at all used to being told no. Dear lord, the storage technology this world must have. This is a student studio and they have enough storage capacity to record three dimensional imaging that they can just leave it set to record while they are there. The sound you just heard was half the producers and directors in the world saying they're willing to diaper up and call someone, Mommy, so long as they are given access to this tech and will still be free to make films. And more of this world's filmmakers reenact the Futurama EyePhone scene, only shouting, "Shut up and take my undies!" I'm pretty sure that guess is a swing and a miss... Hello Isabella, and welcome to the reader Suspicion List. Don't worry, it just means we will be watching every action you make from now on. Every. Last. Action. đ Uhoh. Did the note happen off screen or did someone forget to get a note before heading back to the dorm? You need to be careful Conner! Ugh, subscriptions. But I suppose I should keep a bookmark for this in case Timeline JS proves too fiddly.
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Don't worry Kelly, I'm sure you'll be done up just as cute by the end of the story. Well, so long as the observers are only considering outer appearances and not inner as well. That will probably take longer to improve. Like I said Kelly, no need to worry, I'm sure you'll have your chance to be a cute little padded Big (or former-Big) by the end of the story. I'm sure if anyone reading this has any involvement in stage or screen they're likely drooling and daydreaming about having that sort of technology available. I'm suspecting that she somehow manages to mess with the nanites (or add some of her own). If she somehow managed to get her phone added to the authorized controllers list for Conner and Beth she could hit them with one of the makeup presets while they're in public. Or push and activate a new one. I can easily picture her designing some wildly over done babyish appearance. Puff the cheeks and add blatantly plastered on blushes to the cheeks, plastic baby doll smooth skin, something to make the eyes look bigger and rounder. Wow, no kidding! My laptop's fan actually spun up viewing that. And it has a four core Ryzen cpu and 16GB of ram to work with. I sure hope whatever program you created it in isn't has hard on your computer. Ouch. I need to do another search for timeline software or bite the bullet and learn Timeline JS. I'm sure the rest of the crew would be willing to chip in to pay for the daycare time. đ Then again the daycare staff could spank her and put her in the corner without getting in trouble. If any of the rest of them do it, it would be students fighting. đ Oh! That's why you use that emoji, it's so fun to use! Sadly I didn't get the chance until today. But that does mean I avoided being caught up past bedtime.
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I was lucky last winter I was able to get hold of a case of Seni Quatros locally and together with the little stash I'd put together of other padding was warmly diapered every night for three months. As hot and sweaty as they can get in summer in winter it's a nice soft warm layer to keep the chill away. It's rough for us non snowbirds too. I didn't feel the cold near as much when I was younger. But the last few years I've felt it much more. It's not supposed to feel this cold. If I wanted to feel chilly I could move to Denver or even further north.
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Oh! I hadn't thought of either of those possibilities! That would make for only a passing but memorable (for the other person) contact. Or maybe everyone will be shocked when she turns out to be the daughter of two Mids who had one heck of a growth spurt. I don't remember if we've been told how tall she is. Probably only realistic if she's a short Big. Or it could be a mixed-size marriage like Beth's parents. A Mid and a Big, and her size takes after the Big. You're welcome! Thank you for the chapter!
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Oh! The government saves face when Doctor Benson can't be saved by having Kelly (and whoever has been going after Beth if it isn't Kelly) regressed and sent back with the surviving students with the suggestion that they're either adopted or sent to a juvenile facility. Although I'd also find it amusing if somehow by the end of the school year Kelly has a successful entry into the world of acting -- type cast as the immature Big who is always getting in trouble and every episode is either in diapers, pull ups, or having an accident that shows she should have been in them. The actual stars of the shows sighing when asked about her in interviews and telling the laughing audiences, "Those weren't special effects and worse she's even more of a brat off screen than she is on screen." I look around to see if any Bigs are watching, then poke my tongue out in Kelly's general direction, "Nyaaa! You're not wearing those big girl panties much longer. And you'll be happy to have that padding so you can still sit." Thankee for the chapter!
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If anyone remember where to find this, I'd love to read it. I'm a chapter behind so I'm not sure if it comes up at all in the next but my guess, if there were forces planning to grab the entire year's batch of Littles then the professors were probably set as the first targets to get rid of the best advocates from their worlds that might try to stop things. Even within the dimension I expect an older Little with degrees and experience will get at least a little more respect that someone who are barely out from being considered a kid in their own universe. Yeah, Barnes knew or should have known. My guess is he knew things were being done and either agreed with what was being done or else personally disagreed but didn't think it was worth expending political capital on. Besides, it brought in money and if it was ended he would risk being known as the one who ruined the colleges budget, or if they raised tuition then being known as the one who angered students and their families with unexpected and higher than normal increases. Better to turn a blind eye to what was going on in that part of campus, right? Right? Right until the people more directly involved (assuming he wasn't in it up to his neck) decide to get greedy and try to grab every last Little in every last nest. Whoever made that decision must have been planning to grab whatever the kickbacks were and run, because that's just not sustainable. The college needs Littles to graduate and even make it off campus after graduating so other Littles will decide to come to Emerson allowing a portion to be fed into the university's adoption system for the cash that brings. Scare them away and the whole racket collapses. The outside contractors were either similarly shortsighted and didn't care if Emerson's Little Adoption Mill continued to function or they assumed that Emerson's Little Mill could be allowed to collapse on the assumption they'd have involvement with wherever else the Littles might try to go in the state, or they assumed there were changes coming. The last is the worrying one. Does Venture 2: Electric Boogaloo think they are in a position to reverse the last couple of decades? Either assuming they have people in political office who can force through changes in the law or expecting to be able to make wider use of things like drugs, nanites, and hypnotics to take over. But that might just be paranoia talking. But in the Diaper Dimension paranoia is simply the smart move if you're a Little or a little Mid.
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We all know the protestors are accurate but both of them, especially Conner are at risk of being swept up if campus security is called in to remove the protestors. If campus security was called in I can see at least some of them being willing to grab and detain any Little within sight whether or not they are actually among the protesters. Poor Kelly. I'm sure she will take this scolding to heart and begin to behave in a more mature and proper manner. Heh. Excuse me, I need to go visit the potty chair before I laugh so hard I have an accident. She's just going to see this as cause for further acting out isn't she? And it is now my headcanon that in the Diaper Dimension's version of Terminator the Skynet AI develops from a Little Care/Day Care AI and isn't out to exterminate humanity but to wrap all of them from the smallest Little to the tallest Big in its protective arms, no matter how many spankings and and time outs it takes to bend those valiantly resisting Bigs to its will. A shame that the Mids keep wanting to join the fight instead of being good big kids and babysitting the Littles the resistance movement has gathered up. The ending is of course now considered politically controversial in many areas, what with the Amazon, Kyle Reese, going back in time both to protect Sarah Conner and share with anyone who will listen the importance of maintaining, "Proper social structures," in which Bigs are the only adults, only the most mature well behaved Mids can be considered teens with the rest mere kids, and no one should mistake a Little for anything but a toddler at best. "Allowing Littles to pretend to potty train and go to school was the start of our downfall. When we couldn't keep straight ourselves who was a child and who was an adult why should we expect our creations to do any better?"
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Oh my, are they starting to work on the hypnosis before the new students even make it to the other side of the portal now? Because I'm not sure I trust that helmet one bit. They just wont mention that the health pass portion includes what Little helper medicines are most compatible with your body, which diapers will fit best, and the I-don't-believe-it-is-innocent helmet's analysis of which hypnosis techniques will be most effective at preparing you to shift your major at Emerson over to Little Studies (a set of classes that are quite difficult to tell apart from kindergarten and daycare). Have a follow, this looks like it should be interesting.
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I could use an extra paycheck. Proper padding makes for difficult budgets on a non-managerial government paycheck. Uh, do they allow cross dimensional remote work? The cliffhangers do make me eagerly check back for more. But still, boo! Boo! I've run into the same situation. There have been some times I've had two documents open so I can alt-tab between them if someone walks by (who else here remembers games with Boss Key keyboard shortcuts?). I like to write in a text editor rather than a word processor and my personal computers run Linux so I also have the option of opening an extra virtual console (control+alt+a function key, traditionally F1 through F6 are text terminals and F7 takes you to the GUI console) and writing in vim or another terminal text editor. Then a quick key combo to go back to the GUI and no amount of alt-tabbing would bring up the terminal that the other text editor was open in. And unlike Windows where you could potentially make an extra user account just for writing and switch between accounts there wouldn't be a listing in the start/windows menu equivalent showing that there's another session going either. So long as you aren't trying this at work where a computer savvy admin might be checking on things that's probably more than enough. At least as long as you aren't so caught up in what you're writing that you don't even notice someone walking up and looking over your shoulder, which has happened to me but fortunately never when working on something that I wouldn't want them to see. (Still, remember to always use your techie knowledge for good!)
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Really, I didn't have to peek in the filing cabinets to know that they would do that, it's basic sitcom logic. Given the creator I wouldn't expect any season long or series long plots. That sounds like more effort that she'd want to bother with when you can just go for simple stereotypes. Now if I was writing the pilot and series bible there would be both a first season plot and a sketched out series plot. The daughter would indeed eventually be potty trained, getting into training pants in the final season which would be soon enough that she might be late to start regular school but not so late as to be stand out too much. Meanwhile our Little girl and Mommy would be well meshed as a team by then with the Little still doing ever more work for the company behind the scenes as she's needed less and less as a training buddy. Hooks would be put in place for potential follow up shows. The obvious ones would follow the daughter as she starts school as a young child genius and the Little as she and Mom look to have her start working openly without giving up the now strong mother-daughter relationship, possibly having her biological mother show up as a source of either drama, comedy or both. But again, I doubt anything like this was so much as hinted in the document for this pilot as that would have required more work than simply vomiting stereotype humiliations onto the page. I'm going to be shocked if Kelly actually gets a truly good grade in the class. If she avoids doing something that allows karmic justice then sure she may pass, but unless we see better than this that's all I'm expecting. (Quickly pats to check that the lockpicks are still hidden in the back of his diaper, having carefully not lied. Didn't need to peek in the cabinets. Didn't say there wasn't any peeking.) Meanwhile, a whole new chapter! HURRAH! With a whole new cliffhanger! BOO! Down with cliffhangers! Hopefully the answer is that all the nanites are gone and there won't be enough of the nasty protein to cause permanent harm. But given the setting I'm predicting embarrassing side effects. My guess is that he will have weak bladder control and maybe even weak bowel control for the next week or so. Possibly long enough the continue past when the college is extending a waiver from losing points on his potty chart. I'm also going to make a guess that the results of the scan say they need to wait longer than they wanted or predicted before giving him a new full protective nanite suite. I really hope that they get to working on programming up controls that will allow making use of cosmetic nanites. Even if he gets hit with something else before they can give him new protective nanites they'll almost certainly want to still give him some even if only to control what else can happen. The big question is whether they can give him back to nanites he had before, maybe with altered programming, or if they'll have to either start with something new or perhaps clone from the nanites Bella has? Is it new chapter day yet?
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Oh I'm sure there would/will be plenty of episodes with potty training plotlines. Even some that look successful until near the end of the third act. But since I don't see Kelly as one to prepare a show with season and series long arcs it's almost certainly episodic so the status quo has to be restored at the end of each episode. Nearly every episode will likely have a comment about the next potty training attempt being, "a week away." The scary thought I just had however is wondering if someone realizes that Conner had nanites that had to be removed due to the LittleGo Plus and if whoever is after Beth will decide that this means that they should attempt to get her with some. Meanwhile unless a defense for Conner is come up with before the weekend is over then he will be fully exposed to the effects of things like the nightlight.
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No Mommy Sarah or being shrunk to Little size. Just a choice between having a security guard come in to keep him company until the police arrive and every available charge is dropped on him or just drink the bottle that's sitting on his desk. I'm guessing he's big enough that an entire bottle of LittleGo Plus should merely be permanently life altering and not hospital visit requiring. Of course this means Rob will have to deal with Guilend being jealous of him, but I'm sure our guy would behave himself. It seems perfectly reasonable to me, let the cuteness be shown!
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Takes his story idea set in a Diaper Dimension school after one of those commonly mentioned pranks gone wrong and hides it under a pillow. Cliche tropes, nope, we definitely don't like those. Don't like those at all. No ma'am. Until we got that little detail late in this chapter I was starting to wonder if Callie had been exposed to hypnosis that was supposed to be aimed at littles. Either purely by accident or from something in her behavior or something a staff member did triggering a daycare AI into changing her file to list her as a little. "Multiple wet accidents and a messy accident in one week at age six? Heuristic mismatch. Student Callie size matches Big but otherwise matches expected records for a Little. Updating record. Begin targeted hypnosis projections on next visit." I can imagine a version where that's what happened in the rewrite with Kelly losing more points in the team's opinion of her when she loudly objects to the script being rewritten that way to make it more than just a stereotype training buddy story only for the professor and other students to praise the original shock twist in the third act. Well, other than the ones who object to, "Feeding into the obvious paranoia of Littles who want to blame their immaturity on others." Somehow I expect that the breast milk reveal wasn't in the original and that the daughter was simply "suffering from maturitus" AKA "She acts like a baby because the writer wants to humiliate the actor she already has in mind for the part." Now we just have to wait to find out if the mother is somehow ignorant of a well known side effect of amazonian breast milk, if she knows about it but somehow thought it didn't effect Big children only "naturally immature Mids and Littles who would probably be wetting their pants even without it," or if something more troubling is going on.
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Hey, if you start writing it right away, Conner's group has a Big they'll probably be ready to offer the part to. Well, offer might not be the right word. Maybe more like, "You'll take the part and smile, or else." Say, does Aunt Bella do cross dimension special orders? I wouldn't mind a nice custom backpack myself.