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I agree with the others. This was a very good ending to this story. I’m a sucker for happy endings.
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My guess is that the miscreant Bigs who are sent to Dark Cliff are reduced to Littles. (The DCI, referenced in the story, probably means something like the “Dark Cliff Initiative,” or something similar.) The violent, unredeemable ones are regressed and put up for adoption. The others are given sentences of varying lengths depending on the severity of their crimes and told to report back to Dark Cliff after their sentence has been completed. Those that have survived life as a Little and able to get back to the prison would then be restored to their original Big status. I’m still wondering about the 20% of shrunken Bigs that were unable to be restored (like, I assume, the one that Sophie almost ran into and thought she recognized).
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Interesting chapter. Sometimes, I wonder if you tweak the plot line based on some of the discussions from the readers. Personally, I’m a little disappointed at Paul’s downward emotional and cognitive slide. Given Sophie’s widened perspective about Littles, I was hoping their relationship would ultimately become one of between trusting and respectful individuals. I like your stories since they have a plot that’s more than just the protagonist becoming incontinent, needing diapers, and being infantilized. I’m looking forward to what comes next.
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At this point, I have to rethink my guess of the doctor’s assistant being the mole. At most, she could be a collaborator, but she’s not in a position to affect LPS policy. Of the characters we know of so far in the story, only Aetos or Maxine seem to have that kind of position and power. Aetos is fast becoming the prime suspect. Unless, of course, a currently unknown character comes out of left field.
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I did miss something or forgot it from the 2nd paragraph of chapter 1. In the blue powder attack, it was implied that the powder could affect the Bigs, since they were all covering the noses or holding their breath when the powder was released. A chemical agent like this would likely attack the nervous system, so no amount of retraining or medical intervention would be successful. Therefore, any collateral damage to innocent bystander Bigs would result in them becoming incontinent and needing protective underwear.
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I thought Sophie still was an LPS agent. Did I miss something. I also wonder why it is so devastating for her to need diapers. Surely, other Bigs must have been affected by the chemical warfare against the Littles. Personally, I think the mole (assuming singular) is the doctor’s assistant.
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Given the origins of the Diaper Dimension, it’s understandable that that the DD world doesn’t necessarily have to be coherent like any Earth based society. However, I’m glad to see you are fleshing out some aspects of the DD. I never saw Amazons working so hard to obtain Littles and infantilizing them as making much sense. Those actions don’t perpetuate the species or contribute to the development of the society. It mostly seems like a bunch of overgrown girls playing with living dolls. In the last chapter, though, you allude to having Littles around as a means of combating Seniorosis. That begins to explain part of the reason Amazon women want to have Littles around the house. It will be interesting to see what other explanations your stories provide for other aspects of the DD world.
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It’s going to interesting to see how Grace explains her appearance to Steve and how she gets him to believe that she is really Will. One editorial item: blinder -> binder Looking forward to more of the story.
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Your stories have more twists than a snake, which is one of the reasons I enjoy them.
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Thanks for the help. The index makes a great reference.
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I’m new to reading your stories and I enjoy stories with interesting plots. Earlier diaper dimension stories by other authors just didn’t get my interest. Your’s do. Is there a story or background document that provides the history of the diaper dimension. You make side references to the war and the fact that most Big women are infertile. However, there must be a lot more history that has been developed through the years to explain, why Earth citizens continue to travel to this dimension; why this dimension has an apparently stable population in spite of the infertility of the women; and why the Littles haven’t resorted to chemical guerrilla warfare against the Bigs, surely the Littles could find ways of accessing chemicals to infantilize the Bigs. Another question I have is, “How many clones do you have working to produce these chapters as quickly as you do?” Just typing and editing chapters of this length must take a lot of time. Add in the creative process and I’m surprised you have any time to eat or sleep. I look forward to reading your future works.
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I wholeheartedly agree with that sentiment.
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I suppose I base my expectations of Grace’s reactions on my mother’s reactions as she deteriorated and lost her ability to talk coherently as the result of brain cancer. While she was still lucid and able to talk, my mother expressed her fears as she signed each document turning over each jointly owned and personally owned property to my father. The last item was a mutual fund account in which she had invested her own money. Her statement was, “Now I have nothing.” It was said with a great deal of sorrow and feeling of loss. Being much older than Grace and having lived by myself for over 50 years, I’d find it terrifying to suddenly be completely dependent on others for my care and wellbeing. Having to give up my house and dogs, who are my kids, I’d find so totally demoralizing as to make life not worth living. Will/Grace is just starting out on his/her independent life, so this is a reversion to a not so long past condition. However even so, in her place, I’d be thinking of what might have been. All that being said, I find the story thought provoking and look forward to see how it progresses.
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I found one editorial item twelfth -> twelve. One recommendation I have for when you repost the completed story is to have a time line included either in the chapter headings or embedded in the text so readers can get a scale of how events are unfolding. Right now, I find I have to go back and reread the previous chapters to remember how long it’s been since she came out of the coma or how many days it’s been since the symptoms first started. If I were in Grace’s position, I would be terrified of what the future holds. I know you addressed this in one of the chapters, but I’d say she has accepted the new pronouncements of her regression with uncharacteristic calm. If I were told that my body could regress to a one year old condition and that my brain and nervous system were also regressing, I’d be losing it. Even with the reassurances from her parents, my feeling is that she’d be constantly thinking about and fearing her future. Personally, I’d be praying that my intellectual capabilities would also regress and that I’d fade away into a fuzzy, happy world of infancy. To retain an adult intellect and memories of what I once was and be trapped in an infant’s body with no possibility of ever regaining my independence would be an absolute nightmare. In her current state, she’s marginally able to perform some actions independently. At 12 months, she’d be completely dependent on others for feeding, dressing, and even mobility. At that point, even the use of a computer would be beyond her capabilities. An 18 month girl and her mother comes by the park where I take my dogs and regularly comes over to greet the them and give them some treats. If Grace ends up with the fine motor skills and mobility that this girl has, I don’t see how Grace will have an intellectually satisfying future; unless you have plans for her to become the next Stephen Hawking.
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Given the latest update in changes to her mental maturity, it seems like there is likely a need for another legal document giving her parents legal guardianship. She has a lot of adult knowledge, but increasingly becoming more the toddler she looks like. Her parents should consider putting parental monitoring software on her cell phone and computers to make sure she doesn’t get into trouble. I had an interesting thought about her physical regression. Most of what comes out the rear end is the residue left after food is processed through the alimentary canal. That being the case, where is the large quantity of poop coming from? Some is obviously from the liquid diet she is getting from the feeding tube. Her body is deconstructing and digesting itself, however, I can’t think of a mechanism of how the waste products would be reintroduced into the alimentary canal for excretion. It’s just an interesting anomaly. I’m still enjoying the story and looking forward to more chapters.
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I think you should be careful about using a catheter so soon after the surgery. You don’t want to irritate the healing areas and cause another stricture. At some point, chronic strictures can’t be repaired and the only option becomes a urethrostomy. Sitting for a long time causes the bladder to fill because the diaper is pressing on the urethra pinching off the urine flow. It’s possible that the surgery has affected the sensory mechanism that causes the bladder to contract reducing its sensitivity. So, you might trying standing or walking around periodically.
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I found that the hair tends to retain some of the urine odor or at least inhibits complete cleansing of the area. So, I prefer to remove the hair. My personal solution is to use Veet, sensitive skin formula, cream to remove the hair.
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I did see Dune 2 and I agree with you that it is a far better movie than the original Dune movie or the mini-series version of Dune.
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I don’t think it’s surprising at all for people to warn about fecal incontinence. From my standpoint, urinary incontinence isn’t even an inconvenience, it’s simply another way of emptying your bladder. With the right choice of diapers and clothing, no one will even know what kind of underwear you’re wearing or when you are wetting your diapers. However, if you mess your diapers, anyone within 10 feet of you will know what happened within seconds (not minutes, as another poster stated). Deodorant pills change the smell and make it less repulsive, but they certainly don’t eliminate the smell. So, if someone says they wish for fecal incontinence, I would also try to let them know what they are getting into. Fecal incontinence is far, far different than urinary incontinence and will have a far greater impact on their professional and social lives.
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Interesting chapter. In spite of her apparent adult intellect, Grace is increasingly displaying the emotional development of a two year old; reaching to get picked up, nodding or shaking her head instead of verbalizing her responses, crying about messing her diapers instead simply being annoyed with her lack of control. I’m wondering if this is the direction you’re heading with the story. Is she going to have a two year’s emotional behavior with a 27 year old grad student’s knowledge. I hate to think what happens if she goes through the “terrible twos” phase. Easter eggs are kind of lost on me. I seldom watch network TV. If you work in Star Wars, Star Trek, Dune, and other Sci-Fi references, I might find them.
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Glad you’re happy with the results. You’ll be learning fast how to manage being diapered.
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Here are a couple of editorial corrections. The biggest concern will be to make sure she does not get any inflections infections from the I.V With all this being new to us, we are working under the assumption that any inflection infection It will be interesting to see how the story unfolds. I’m always looking forward to the next installment.
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Best of luck on your recovery. Hopefully, the results will match your expectations.
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Kind of shame to go all that way and not at least find an interesting restaurant nearby.