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Bonsai

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  1. I like the concept, but find some logic holes in it. Why for instance do they wish to give up knowledge? Isn’t it possible to just unlock their emotional side & “inner child” without giving up their “adult” skills? Also, who does manage The Great Work? If going through Purification means, among other things, progressively giving up responsibilities, then who makes choices for the Church? I suspect there’s an A.I. beyond everything. That, or maybe Purification is not the final destination and, after some time as Babies, Purified persons are allowed to become adults once again. That would explain why Katrina said that Edenites do “archive” their adulthood memories, and not delate them. Maybe, after experiencing Purification, those memories, together with the knowledge and skills acquired in a lifetime’s span, are given back together with responsibility.
  2. I like how you don’t go for extremes. How for instance caretakers aren’t all good or all bad, or how the reactions of clients aren’t fully emotional or fully rational, but a mix of the two. Also, the helplessness feeling in the shower scene was particularly appreciated.
  3. No more stress for George! Dear little Susie knows how to undo all those nasty knots and get things flowing freely!
  4. It’s not necessarily the bad ending (btw, I love ❤️ bad endings) but more the fact that you like to capsize the initial assumptions. If your title is “When the lamb meets the butcher”, I expect that the lamb will be the evil character. What a sharp chair!
  5. Knowing who wrote this, it was clear from the start that something nasty was set for the the relaxing victim.
  6. Shitting his diaper in public is indeed the first act of complete freedom that any male college student does in his life. There’s of course always a cute female college student nearby that immediately notices it and ends up writing her phone number on the “disposable”. Every male student’s dilemma is then how to preserve such token of affection and at the same time neutralize the smelly burden inside…
  7. Reminds me of “Hard Candy” with Ellen Page interpreting the Candy. ?
  8. I’ll pass this one, but would be interested into the new Supersoft model made for guerrilla environment and/or suitable in case of chemical/bacteriological warfare. Special feature: if burned (after usage), it can provide enough heat to warm your bunker for a whole winter night. It would be more in line with our current predicament.
  9. Being allowed to get in front of the toilet, but without the knowledge on how to use it, is true sadism. Well done! ?
  10. Surely not! If he looked Caucasian, he had to be a cyber hacker. Asian? Making inspections for future burglaries. Black? Crack dealer, and so on. There’s a different stereotype for each ethnic group.
  11. The delivery boy is an undercover terrorist, that is enough educated (through google-translated documents) to make perfectly efficient bombs. He plans to blow up an elementary school next week. Contacts with customers, in his delivery cover-job, also serve to fuel his rage and keep him convinced that western civilization deserves to be destroyed.
  12. I love how the desire to act is still there but the ability to do things is irreversibly placed out of reach. I love Academy’s “magic”. ❤️
  13. From the moment you introduced the concept of a re-absorbing stent, I knew this was going to end badly. My guess was a plugged urethra, an extremely swollen bladder and an embarrassing visit to ER. Prototype testing would likely be done on pigs or other large mammals. That would be a concept that could be used for further fiction.
  14. The standard tickling clause in our contract would have covered her from all this. Are we sure we cannot sue him for nose bleeding on us? Because, that’s a crime too!
  15. The tentacle sex monster is dead, long life to the tentacle monster! Maybe, just like Alien, it got into Sandra’s underwear and laid some eggs…
  16. Seems like both the betters don’t really find inconvenient to keep playing. Too bad for the others in the apartment that a time limit wasn’t defined for the bet duration.
  17. That wasn’t expected….? Almost like John Snow getting assassinated. ? Your story is riveting.
  18. Now, since his last anchor is Tracy, I expect some sort of betrayal also from her…
  19. War is peace, freedom is slavery, ignorance is strenght. (…and, they are always listening…)
  20. The whole Academy process has similarities with steel heat treatment, the process that transforms soft iron into hard and yet resilient steel. First, you have to heat the material into austentitic region (over 900 C), so that the MEMORY of the previous lattice is totally lost. Then, the alloy is dropped into oil to fast quench it. This way, the austenitic lattice is “frozen”, but atoms world like to rearrange into a more comfortable position. The structure (martensitic lattice) is extremely tense (= hard), but also brittle. It still wishes to evolve into something else. Finally, and here comes the finest part of the art of metallurgy, there is the tempering: a slow and gradual heating that preserves most of the hardness acheived through the martensitic transformation, but also makes the material more resilient. Each steel is different, depending on how much carbon and other metals are alloyed in it. Heat treatment needs to be fine-tuned according to the exact chemical composition of the alloy. Some elements are considered “poisons” for steel: if they somehow enter into the alloy, they will irreversibly compromise the final result and the manufacturer will have to scrap the steel. Bala has been brought up to the austenitic region and now is about to get quenched. How will her chemical composition react to the treatment?
  21. Will Ai corrupt/redeem Bala or will Bala corrupt/redeem Ai? This (and much more) in... Academy C! Soon on the screen of your favourite device!
  22. Narration from Ashley's or Veronica's POW would be interesting.
  23. I guess Bala did not fully consider the implications of shifting from liquid diet to solid diet. She will soon learn, I guess.
  24. Stockholm syndrome is already kicking in. Soon, any idea of revange will evaporate.
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