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diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
The reference is in chapter 7 of “Lights, Camera, …What!?” and mentions other dimensions, including Paige and Alex’s “water dimension.” When I commented on it, this is what BabySofia had to say: “I have always tried to have some little ties in with other stories that I feel like are at the top level of writing in the dimension. LittleFallenPrincess wasn't the first to have multiple other dimensions, but definitely the first to really explore many of them the way she has. (Brilliantly!)” I can hardly wait for her to get back to that story, but understand she needs a break. You each take DD to a completely different level in your writing, taking care to focus on relationships and character development. I completely agree with her that you do it brilliantly. -
Awwwww. Each gift is quite special. With IoT, I guess there’s theoretically no limit to what kind of input Luna might eventually have access to. You’re developing this so well and I’m really enjoying the story!
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diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Indeed. I shall endeavor to be more attuned to those crossovers! I thoroughly enjoy your writing, especially when you thread stories together. For what it’s worth, I even caught a reference to the LittleFallenVerse in one of BabySofia’s stories. Kinda fun feeling like you’re in on the little secret (pun intended). ? -
diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Dr. Eve Wilson is Eve from LiL. Feel kinda dense I missed that, especially since I posted weeks ago how I hoped LIBRA would somehow save the day and Eve is one of their associates. *bounces in anticipation of more crossovers* -
diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Couple of nice little tidbits revealed in the appointment. Love and maybe a job prospect? Nice. Tom the bad guy? Hardly seems like it, but not too much of a stretch, I guess. Then again, maybe Elise makes it to tomorrow and has a chance to follow up with the doctor and Danny. Or one of the other sharks in the water pops up at Elise’s apartment. Gettin’ loopy just considering the possibilities at this point. ? -
Infernum Infantem - Epilogue (4/23/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Intrigued at the connection between the unknown trauma and the unknown “her” now that we have Niathruxzon (may I please call you Nia?) in the picture and Victoria is so fascinated with her. Oooohh…how will snarky Niathruxzon play this hand in Victoria’s world? Love her sassy character so far! -
Gyaaah!! You’ve been working overtime on this cliffhanger. I love the way you’ve developed Luna’s personality and begun regularly referring to how she feels about Sophie as opposed to what she has inferred from actions. It’s consistent with your explanation of machine learning. So now Luna has hope. What’s next, love? Seems the next logical step given their “mutual symbiosis.”
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diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Mmmmaybe. No worries. New loop. I still have hope for the one relationship @LittleFallenPrincess has been teasing us with: Julie. If she pulls that rug out from under me I may just go in a corner and rock back and forth for awhile. ? -
diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
I like this doctor so far. How will this variation in the loop impact Lisa’s visit? Can’t wait to see the trigger. -
diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Elise going off script…how could that possibly go wrong!? At some point she has to see Julie as more than just a coworker. If there’s anything “cruel” in what you’re doing here, it’s teasing us with the prospect of a relationship but never pursuing it. Now that’s just mean ?. *but said with love and respect for such a wonderful writer as you* -
And Luna Mommy went for it…but then you knew that and played me like a violin. ? Nicely done. ?
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Infernum Infantem - Epilogue (4/23/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Great beginning! Hooked me again. Can’t wait to see where you take this one. -
diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
And there it is…Lisa lives down to expectations and you’re keeping TomCat in play. It’ll be interesting to see where you take them in future loops. I agree with @Moon3ye that it seems you’re setting Elise up to view adoption as something other than a death sentence. She may not be ready to accept it, but she has seen that it’s not all bad for Danny. I don’t think you’re mean, although this has been more of a mind game than the LiL series. You do seem to derive pleasure from squeezing our brains just a little. ? Hope your stressful situation is resolved soon. (I really enjoy your comments.) -
Of Ice Cream, Cake, and Fifth Dimensional Travel
FloridaKid replied to Personalias's topic in Story and Art Forum
Great short story. Looked for a second like you were headed into Quantum Leap territory, but happily you twisted that on its head rather nicely. I’m with @YourFNF here…little brain melting going on in my skull. -
I haven’t mentioned it up to now, but I love the lines of code at the beginning of each chapter! This is a terrific story and I really like your approach. ?? Indeed. I hereby rescind my quote marks on the word relationship. Go for it, Luna. Still creeped out and worried where Sophie will end up. ?
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diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Tom and Cat. Tomcat!? Should we be worried? Lisa is a piece of work. Tomcat catching a cute mouse for her? ? -
Love how you’re developing this “relationship.” If AI didn’t creep me out before, it does now. Although I wouldn’t necessarily object to Luna’s style of care, the idea that it could be off the rails in other directions is scary. Your narrative is pretty plausible. Looking forward to future chapters!
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diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
So Elise has reached the “WTF…go for it” stage. Julie is still a sweetheart (thank you for that) and she keeps dropping little hints at how much she cares for Elise. Definitely interested to see where you go with that. I love the romantic side of your stories…so here’s to hope. You’re making Danielle’s Mommy seem not so bad here, but the unexpected guests have me flashing back to the robot from Lost in Space shouting “Danger!” *pulls down the safety harness and prepares for the coaster ride* -
I’m finally all caught up on BabySofia stories. Woohoo! I love this story and the continuation of the Exchanged story thread. I have a question that I’ve been dying to ask since chapter 7: Are the “four different dimensions” and in particular the “water” world an allusion to LittleFallenPrincess Little in Love dimensions? I don’t recall dimensions other than ours and DD in your other stories (unless you include Emerald Princess). LOVE this story and really hope you get some rest before tackling it again. As much as I love the story, like others here, I’m genuinely more concerned for your well-being. ❤️?
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diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
@smokie 03…yep. What you said. I wonder if the connecting thread here is Elise’s deep seated fear of adoption and that is triggering psychological episodes instead of actual time loops. She did study psychology and maybe this is a side effect of a study she’s involved with…as in, she’s still in school. Hailey, Danielle and her Mommy are all known to her at that time and are central to her episodes. I know it doesn’t explain the other characters well, but I recall a few of those required psych participant deals from college. They usually left me a little uneasy and I never really knew what the true point of the study was. There is one interaction that doesn’t vary at all from loop to loop: Alicia. Scores 10/10 on my curiosity meter. Julie is still a sweetie. You wouldn’t take that away from Elise, would you? Silly me, of course you would. ? -
Luna’s “suggestion” is fairly predictable, particularly given where this story is posted, but I’m curious to see how the relationship progresses. Just how far is Sophie willing to go and at what point will Luna’s side hustle allow her to make real world purchases to “benefit” Sophie? Interesting story. Thanks for sharing it with us!
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diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
OK @LittleFallenPrincess, you’ve got me going back for those clues, and now it seems like Julie has enough going for her that she bubbled to the top of my (now very short) list. She’s sweet, clearly cares for Elise, has even asked her if she ever considered dating an Amazon, and treats her with respect. I just want to drop a piano on all of the others. Don’t know enough about Alicia yet, so not totally ruling her out. Going back and seeing things through a different lens, I’m not sure why I was so hung up on Hailey. Well, saving Elise’s butt did help, but now we know why. -
diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Whelp. Damn. Just damn. Have to wait and see what Hailey’s explanation is. She still might be the best “option” if her motivation is love. I just hope it’s what Elise wants. That or you’re just teasing us. You, being mean? Say it isn’t so. -
diaper dimension Regression Echo - Ch. 40 (1/7/23)
FloridaKid replied to LittleFallenPrincess's topic in Story and Art Forum
Gotcha. (Count me in as a Star Trek fan…)