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1 hour ago, CDfm said:

I certainly enjoyed the newest chapter. I am enjoying how Ella is struggling between wanting to be a big girl and at the same time enjoy the childhood she missed out on.  I am sure the Preas is also causing some of the regression feelings. I hope she is able to find a happy balance.  I know Nikkole will help with that too. 
I normally wouldn’t do such a thing but I want to offer just a bit of advice and you can take it or leave it.  I am quite a bit older than most around here and life has taught me that it’s never a good thing to hold a grudge or keep in anger. Being “a very petty asshole” will shorten your life and keep you miserable doing so. I understand your feelings (I have been there) and I know it’s very hard to let go but when you do, you gain a great freedom. If you are like me you would actually remain awake thinking about the wrongs and hurting.  Then thinking of ways to get even or cause them the same kinds of pain and suffering. Letting go frees you of that though and you feel so much better in yourself.  You don’t need to care if they are still holding onto their problems. 
Now enough of that, I am looking forward to more of YOUR story. 

glad you are liking it. the Preas aren't causing the regression, but do affect her emotions. Ella's problems are no blader control (she gotten around it by being very cautions about when she pees and how much she drinks.) and she has highten emotions, which makes it hard for her to control them at times. though in the next chapter, due to how much she messed up her body, she now has one more problem not related to the Preas.
as for the advice, while I appreciate it, I'm all good. i don't let most things bother me and can look past or just ignore most things. very few people manage to piss me off.  but when you do, yes, i can hold a grudge and be petty when i want to be.  and to be fair, i told them repeatedly to leave me alone. they didn't listen. 

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I read this and I ended up feeling just like I said like somebody sucked me right into the story! Shut up this is awesome and it's really cool that you were able to do it in such a way that the Reader wants to be in the same position as the characters then you have done something that's awesome! When you end up doing it that way, it's really cool and you put the reader in a position where you feel like you are the character, and like I said before this is a mark of a good writer! If I can be set up so that I feel like I am part of the story then you have done an awesome job!

I think Ella will find that this will be a good place for her to be. Sounds like Nicole really loves her, and really wants her to stay and it sounds like Nicole is allowing her to stay and Ella wants to stay. I'm glad that she was able to set it up the way she did, and I hope that she Will stay there long term, and that she will be able to get the love and attention and everything that she needs. Based on her history, I wouldn't want a father that did what he did 

I hope Miss Ella and Miss Nicole will be together for a long time! They deserve each other! Nicole sounds like the type of person that would be an awesome auntie or mother or whatever, and if she was an auntie, it would be like one of my aunts that I think is pretty cool, and always loved and respected and everything else. It shows that she does actually love her and that's a good thing. ella needs the stability of an environment where she can thrive and where she can be the girl she needs to be and wants to be, and not be afraid that she had an accident, She pees herself or messes herself, or has other types of accidents. This way I think that she can heal, because Nicole is allowing her to make steps backwards so she can get better, and enjoy herself. She gets to live her childhood over or in part, so that makes a difference. Only making reference to this because it seems like this is where it's going, but I'll be interested to read the story some more and I love what you have done!

Brian

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  • PinkTheDinosaur changed the title to Tinny Intruder ch8 (formerly The little thief) (9-19-23)

chapter 8

A scream woke Nikkole from her sleep in the early morning as she shot out of bed.

Nikkole burst into the nursery to check on Ella, who was screaming and crying at the top of her lungs. She didn't even see Nikkole until Nikkole picked her up.

"What's wrong, baby?" Nikkole asked as she put one arm under Ella to help support her and felt a big squish from Ella's diaper.

Ella cried louder as she felt the squish and the stench hit Nikkole.

"Oh dear," Nikkole said as she laid the crying child on the changing table and undressed her.

With the pajamas off, Nikkole could see the well-used state of Ella's diaper.

"It's OK, Ella. I'm here. I'll get you all clean." Nikkole told the crying girl.

As Nikkole untabbed the diaper, Ella cried louder, primarily out of pure shame.

Ella had only ever had three messy accidents in her life. While she couldn't help having bladder problems, she had no trouble controlling her other needs.

The first time she had an accident was when she was young and on a long car ride. Her dad refused to make a stop, saying they already did and she should have gone when at the rest stop. But the stop was over two hours prior, and she didn't need to go then. She wound up messing with her, at the time, "big girl" panties, and she was severely punished for that.

The next time wasn't her fault but her sisters. Her sister put a laxative into her food, and she pooped herself at her sister's birthday party. But no one would believe her when she told them what happened.

The final time happened when she was sick and couldn't reach the bathroom two years ago.

But each time, she was awake when this happened. She at least tried to make it to a bathroom. Never has she unconsciously pooped herself. And never in a diaper. It just made her feel even more like a baby!

As Nikkole finished taping on the new diaper, she lifted the primarily naked girl up and held her as she bounced the girl up and down like a toddler.

"It's ok, it's ok," Nikkole repeated for 10 minutes before Ella started to calm down.

Nikkole sat down on the rocking chair and had Ella in her lap.

"You ok?" Nikkole asked.

"No. *hic*" Ella replied. Her eyes were red and puffy from crying.

Nikkole kissed Ella again.

"It's ok, sweetie, it was just a messy diaper. I'm not mad." Nikkole told her.

"I-it *hic* not that!" Ella told Nikkole. "I-i pooped myself! I *hic* never poop myself!"

That last part was just a white lie but had some truth to it.

"It might be because you ate more than your body is used to," Nikkole told Ella. "I'm sure this is only temporary as your body adjusts,"

"B-but I don't want to poop my diaper!" Ella yelled, on the verge of crying again. But Nikkole hugged the girl before rocking them.

"It's ok, sweetie. Think of it this way: your body is telling you it's changing. That it's finally getting what it needs, and this is just a small hiccup to a better you." Nikkole told her.

"But, but!" Ella said as she looked up at Nikkole and received another kiss and smile.

"It's ok. I'll be here to help you." Nikkole told Ella.

Ella let out another small whimper but buried her face into Nikkole's cleavage as she tried to calm herself down.

"Ella, you're a good girl," Nikkole told Ella.

*******

When Ella finally calmed down, Nikkole helped dress and brought her downstairs for breakfast. Ella was still in her new diaper but didn't want to say anything to Nikkole about getting into her training panties. Not after what just happened.

Nikkole set Ella down on the counter as she got eggs into a bowl.

"Could you stir this up for me, sweety?" Nikkole asked.

"yes," Ella replied.

With Ella distracted, Nikkole got everything else ready. When she came back to Ella, the mix was only half done. But Nikkole expected that with Ella's tiny body.

Nikkole took the bowl and gave it a few quick mixes before thanking Ella for the help. Ella blushed a little, and a small smile formed at the thought of helping.

Nikkole finished making the scrambled eggs and got them ready before getting out the Preas formula.

"What's that?" Ella asked in confusion as she saw the container. Then, she realized what it was and started to whine a little. "I'm not a babe!"

Ella blushed even harder after realizing how she sounded.

"This isn't for babies, sweetheart," Nikkole told her. "This is for Preass to help them get the necessary vitamins, minerals, and protein. I gave you some last night, and you loved it."

Ella looked confused and remembered the bottle, and her face grew redder.

Nikkole could see it made her uncomfortable, but she thought of something.

"Ella, would you like to make a deal?" Nikkole asked. Ella looked up, a little confused. "I want you to still use the formula until you are at a proper weight. Is that ok?"

Ella was going to protest about it but didn't. As usual, Nikkole was right. It was better just to go with it.

"OK…" Ella tells her.

"Good girl," Nikkole responded to Ella and gave her a pat on the head before picking her up and putting her on the ground. "Go start on your eggs, and I'll bring your milk in just a moment."

Ella totaled off to her breakfast; sure enough, Nikkole returned with the milk. Thankfully, it was in a regular cup. Ella was a little skeptical about the milk, but after eating more eggs, she needed to wash some of it down. After drinking some milk, she had to admit the milk wasn't that bad.

Nikkole was smiling as she watched Ella eat. Thoughts of what they were going to do floated in her mind.

She wanted to take Ella shopping and get her a few things, primarily for her, like new clothes and other things.

Nikkole also wanted to talk to Ella about school and possibly help with that.

But as Nikkole thought about Ella attending school, something troubling came to mind. What about her birth certificate?

Nikkole realized that despite Ella wanting to live with her, her family declared her missing. What was she supposed to do?

Ella was the first one done and looked up at Nikkole.

"What's wrong?" Ella asked, seeing the slightly upset Nikkole.

"Oh, nothing sweety," Nikkole said as she smiled at Ella. "Just thinking about something not important. What would you like to do today?"

Ella didn't really know. What could they do today? Then Ella remembered last night and the boxes still in the living room.

"I-i want to look th-through my stuff and s-see what I have," Ella told Nikkole.

"That's a wonderful idea," Nikkole said, then thought of something else. "Ella, would you like to go shopping with me later?"

"S-sure, Nikkole," Ella said with a slight smile.

"How about this, why don't we go through your clothes and see what you have and what we should get you," Nikkole suggested, and Ella's eyes lit up.

Nikkole helped get Ella's stuff into the nursery so that Ella could use the mirror there.

"N-Nikkole?" Ella said as Nikkole brought up the last box.

“Yes, sweety?” Nikkole asked.

"I-is this going to be my room?" Ella asked.

At first, Nikkole was confused about the question. Then, She realized Ella was only staying in this room. She never gave it to Ella. This also brought up thoughts about Alex. This was her room. This was her space. Was it really right to give this room to Ella?

"I-I don't know yet, sweety. But we can talk about it later." Nikkole told Ella in hopes of dodging the question for now.

Ella was about to say something when Nikkole's phone rang.

"Let me get this real fast, sweety. You get started trying on clothes while I get this."

Nikkole answered her phone as she was walking downstairs.

"Hey, Nikkole! How are you doing?" Rose asked.

"Good morning, Rose, I'm doing fine. Ella and I were about to try on some clothes." Nikkole told her friend.

"Awesome. How is she doing, by the way?" Rose asked.

"She's doing very well. She's starting to eat." Nikkole told her friend.

"That's good to hear. Now, she just needs to get her weight up. Anyway, I was calling to ask if you wanted to meet up? I got tonight and tomorrow off." Rose asked.

"Yes. How about dinner at my place? Today or tomorrow would be perfect." Nikkole told her.

"Awesome. I'll let my baby know as well." Rose replied.

"MOM, IM NOT A BABY!" a young man's voice could be heard.

"To me, you always will be!" Rose responded. "I'll call you later as soon as we decide."

"OK. Talk to you soon," Nikkole said and hung up the phone.

Before heading back upstairs, the thought about Ella's birth certificate crept back up. What was she going to do? While Ella could avoid not needing it by no doubt sketchy means, now that she wouldn't be in that life, how would she adapt?

If something happened to Nikkole, could Ella get a job without it? What about an apartment? A bank account?

As Nikkole stared up the stairs to where Ella was handling her clothes, Nikkole knew she needed to do something. Something very hard.

As she did, she had a crazy thought and dialed an old number as she walked out the back door and into the backyard.

"Hellow?" a rough old voice said on the other line.

“Sampson, its Nikkole. I was wondering if you could do me one last favor…"

*********

Nikkole was now sitting on an old swing connected to a large tree in her backyard. A swing she used to love back when she was a kid.

Her phone rang next to her ear as butterflies fluttered in her stomach. Why was she so nervous? She had the moral high ground. She shouldn't have anything to be scared about the Metztlis. But Nikkole was.

'What if they deny Ella?'
'What if they try to bring the police involved and they learn of Ella's past?
'What if they try to take my baby?'

Those were Nikkole's thoughts until she heard the phone answered.

“Hello, Metztli residence. Maid speaking." the maid said over the phone.

"H-hello. I'm sorry to bother you, but I hoped to speak to Mr. or Miss Metztli. It's about their daughter."

"I'm sorry, but Nia is not interested in scholarship or fundraiser projects. Her schedule is already busy." the maid told Nikkole. That line sounded rehearsed, like it was said a hundred times over.

"N-no, not Nia. I'm talking about their other daughter. Ella Metztli." Nikkole told them. There was a long pause as Nikkole said this. "Hellow?"

"Is this some joke?" the maid asked as her tone shifted from slight announce to slightly pissed. "Because if it is, I swear…."

"N-no! This isn't a joke, my name is Nikkole, and I currently have Ella in my care." Nikkole told them.

There was another long pause.

"Just one moment, miss." the maid said before there was a sound of someone rushing around with a phone in hand. Then Nikkole could hear two people talking briefly.

"Hello? Who is this?" another woman answered.

"Hello, my name is Nikkole. Is this Miss. Metztli?" Nikkole asked.

"Yes, this is. Now get to the point. What is this about my missing daughter Ella?" Miss. Metztli said that, and Nikkole had the urge to slap her for some reason.

"I'm calling because your daughter is not missing. She is currently in my care at the moment." Nikkole told them.

"Look, I don't know what type of game you are trying to play, but I'm not going along with it. My daughter Ella is gone. And if you call back here again, ill…"

"Ella has Preas, and you were ashamed of her," Nikkole said, cutting her off.

There was a slight pause.

"What do you want?" Miss. Metztli asked. Her tone was now solemn.

"Excuse me?" Nikkole replied.

"You heard me. What do you want to keep quiet about all of this?" Miss. Metztli replied and stunned Nikkole. "As far as we're concerned, Ella is gone, and we would like it to stay that way."

Nikkole could feel her blood begin to heat up.

"WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!" Nikkole screamed.

"Nothing is wrong with me. Ella is the one who attacked my daughter. Set our home on fire and stole valuable items before running away. So, as far as I'm concerned, Ella is better off missing and forgotten." Miss. Metztli told Nikkole.

Nikkole was stunned. None of that was in the articles she read. But part of her knew that they were somehow wrong.

"She is your daughter!" Nikkole yelled.

"No, she was my mistake. And one that rapidly brought into question the Metztli name. All her failures forced us to try to hide her until she finally showed how deranged she was and attacked Nia before running away. When we couldn't find her after she ran away, we announced her missing and eventually called off the search. We are done with her."

For the first time in Nikkole's life, she wanted to get her gun and shoot someone.

"Why would you want me to stay quiet?" Nikkole asked.

"It would be better for everyone if Ella stays missing. If she were to pop up and cause a stir, we would be forced to ensure no more problems come from that mess." Miss. Metztli told Nikkole coldly. "Now, tell me what you want to keep quiet, or we'll be forced to settle this in other ways."

There was so much Nikkole wanted to scream and yell at this cold-hearted bitch. But she had one thing she needed to ask for.

"I want custody of Ella," Nikkole told her.

"Custody?" Miss. Metztli asked.

"Yes. I'm adopting Ella and need her birth certificate and other legal documents. Seeing how you want just to throw away your child, I will take her." Nikkole told her. "After that, we want nothing to do with your disgusting family.

There was a slight pause before the woman on the other end began laughing. 

"I'll get the documents ready." Miss. Metztli told Nikkole after a while . "As soon as you and that thing sine them, she will no longer be our problem but yours and will have nothing to do with us."

"That's fine by me," Nikkole told her.

"Good. I'll send someone over with the documents in a few hours. Just let them know where to deliver the documents. Well, handle the paper trail. So long as that child never uses the Metztli name, we will have no problems." Miss. Metztli told Nikkole.

"Good," Nikkole told the heartless bitch.

After giving her address and setting up the time, Nikkole finally lets out a frustrated yet relieved yell.

Soon, Ella won't ever have to be a part of that nasty family.

Nikkole made her way back inside and went to check on Ella.

As Nikkole peeked in, she could see clothes scattered everywhere. Most were Ella's clothes, but a few surprised Nikkole. They were Alex's clothes.

Looking at Ella, she saw her in a bright pink skirt with a Hello Kitty tank top. She was looking at herself in the mirror and blushing.

"I look ridiculous," Ella said to herself before pinching her short hair. "I look like a boy dressing up like a girl."

She used to have longer hair, but after getting caught in a chain link finance during a getaway, she decided it was best to cut it off just to be safe. And besides, with her body, any long hair made her look "cute" when she wanted to look mature. 

But as she stared at herself in the ridiculous and childish outfit, She did a small twirl, and her skirt revealed the diaper underneath.

Ella giggled as she saw this and couldn't believe she was having a bit of fun dressing up. With her small size, she could pass as a young kid, maybe even 5 or 6...

"Having fun, sweety?" Nikkole asked and Ella jumped.

"M-mo, Ni, th-this isn't what it looks l-like!" Ella yelled.

"Oh, you weren't just giggling and having fun dressing like a little girl?" Nikkole asked and poking fun at Ella.

Ella's lip quivered as she was about to cry again.

She tried on her clothes, but none of her pants fit over the diaper, and she wasn't sure where Nikkole put the training panties. Ella then wondered if she could try on one of Alex's skirts to see if it covered the diaper but decided to also try on a matching shirt.

But Nikkole wasn't supposed to see her like this. She was an adult and didn't want to be a baby. This was just supposed to be a little fun.

Nikkole knelt down and rubbed Ella’s head.

"Ella, you can have Alex's clothes whenever you like. I'm sure she wouldn't mind." Nikkole told Ella.

“B-but I'm-im…” Ella started, but Nikkole put a finger over her lips.

"I know, sweety, this will stay just between us," Nikkole told Ella. "If you ever want to wear these clothes, they will always be here for you. Even if you just want to use them to relax at home."

"R-really?" Ella asked and blushed a little.

"Yes. you can, and you look adorable." Nikkole told her, "You're my adorable little tomboy Ella."

Ella was still blushing, but she had the faintest of smiles.

"Ella, I want to ask you something," Nikkole said as she turned serious.

"What?" Ella asked as he heard Nikkole's tone shift.

"Do you really want to live here?" Nikkole asked. "You can always go whenever you want."

"N-no! I-I want to stay with you!" Ella yelled

Nikkole smiled.

"Then would you like to be my daughter?" Nikkole asked.

Ella was a little shocked.

"I-i don't k-know," Ella replied as she felt a bit ashamed and looked at the floor.

She was a Metztli. She had done many terrible things. Would it really be alright?

"Ella. I talked to your mother." Nikkole told Ella.

Ella's face shot up in shock.

"WHAT!" Ella screamed.

Nikkole nodded.

"Your mom, she's…" Nikkole stopped as she tried to think of the right words to say about her but just couldn't think of anything. "anyway, I needed to get your birth certificate. And the only way to get it was to call them and ask them If I could adopt you. If you would like, you don't have to fear them ever again,"

Ella was still in shock. So much going through her mind. There was so much she wanted to say or ask.

"D-dose that m-mean y-you'll b-be m-my…" Ella asked, unable to finish the sentence as tears began to form in her eyes.

"Only if you will have me," Nikkole told Ella as if proposing to one's love.

Ella had tears in her eyes, but she wiped those away. Replaced by a bright smile.

"I wan-want to l-live here with you," Ella told Nikkole.

Nikkole pulled Ella over to her and gave her a great big hug.

"I love you so much, Baby girl," Nikkole told Ella.

"I love you too," Ella told Nikkole as she unknowingly started to pee into her diaper. "Mommy."

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  • PinkTheDinosaur changed the title to Tinny Intruder ch8 and 9 (formerly The little thief) (9-19-23)

chapter 9

 

When Ella let go of Nikkole, she was blushing like mad for what she said.

Nikkole, on the other hand, didn't mind at all.

"Ok, Ella, since we're going to go through these clothes, want to start with Alex's clothes first?" Nikkole asked. Since Ella was still wearing her diaper, it would be better to start with the clothes with those in mind.

"S-sure," Ella replied shyly, not knowing how she should act now.

Nikkole gave her a smile before going to Alex's closet and pulling out some clothes. Once she had them all in a large pile next to Ella, they started trying on T-shirts.

It didn't take long for things to return to normal as Ella swapped in and out of shirts.

Ella was just a little smaller than Alex, and she had a lot of shirts that were more on the younger side that Ella did not like. Those were put off to the side to be dealt with later.

The ones that fit and that Ella liked were returned to the closet.

Next were skirts, shorts, and pants.

"I d-don't think the shorts or pants will fit with this diaper on N-Nikkole," Ella told her.

"These are made for diapers in mind, sweety. And I promise these will only be for the special occasion. Nikkole told Ella, knowing that would be a bit of a protest.

But Ella didn't fight about it. She just pulled her skirt down and was ready to try something on.

"Oh my," Nikkole said as she looked at Ella. "How long has your diaper been wet?"

Ella looked confused, then looked down and noticed her diaper was a little yellow. A few of the cartoon prints on the diaper had faded a little. But Ella didn't even notice it. Even now, she could just barely feel it as slightly damp.

"I-i d-didn't notice!" Ella yelled and nearly started to panic.

Thoughts of her conditioning worsening or losing complete control flooded her mind. She had spent years trying to get some form of control of her weak bladder, and now she was losing even that.

The one thing that snapped her out of it was when Nikkole slipped a finger into her diaper.

"These diapers were made to hold a lot. I think you only leaked a bit, which is mostly dry." Nikkole told her. "It was just a small accident."

Usually, if anyone had said that to Ella, she would have been completely mad and upset just with a small leak.

But surprisingly, when Nikkole said it, Ella wasn't mad. She was still slightly upset but nowhere near what she would have been yesterday or the day before.

Instead, all she could do was blush from being checked.

“I-im sorry,” Ella told Nikkole. To which Nikkole kissed her head.

"Don't be, sweetheart." Nikkole told her. "that diaper can hold another wetting, or I can change you right now."

Ella didn't want to be in a wet diaper. She never liked the cold, damp feeling and preferred a dry one. But a part of her didn't want to waste the diaper she had. It wasn't that wet, and she didn't even notice till now.

"I-im f-fine. M-miss N-Nikkole." Ella told her shyly as she stared down at the floor nervously.

"Ok, sweetie, just tell me when you're ready for a change, and I'll give you one," Nikkole told her.

With that out of the way, they started trying on the pants.

The pants were designed with Preass and diapers in mind, having a little extra space in the back and front. Once Ella put them on, they felt a little strange. The closest thing to wearing something over her diaper has been sweatpants, so this was different.

But after looking into a mirror, while her butt did look slightly more prominent, if you didn't really pay attention, you wouldn't be able to tell there was a diaper underneath.

'Maybe they won't be so bad.' Ella thought as she examined herself in the mirror.

As Ella tried on more pants, they both noted that Ella was smaller than Alex, and most of Alex's clothes were big on Ella. This upset Ella a little bit despite trying to be more mature. She was still on the smaller side of most Preas.

After a while, Ella had tried on all of the pants, but only a few would really fit her. Something Nikkole took note of for later.

Next were the skirts. Half of them Ella didn't like, but the other half she did and decided to keep.

Lastly, it was time to try on some pajamas. Again, like with the others, the ones that were very big on Ella were put aside, but this time, Ella was less resistant to the slightly more babyish stuff, such as the footie pajamas. As much as Ella didn't want to admit, they did feel soft and warm.

One of the funnier ones was the cream-colored bear footie pajama with a hood, ears, and a little tail. Ella just looked so cute. Nikkole couldn't help but slightly pull the little tail, much to Ella's embarrassment.

With that soft, warm feeling of the footie pajama and waking up crying early in the morning, Ella let out a soft yawn.

"You tired, Ella?" Nikkole asked as she put away the last of Alex's clothes, now Ella's, in the closet.

"J-just a little," Ella said with a slight blush.

Nikkole took out her phone and checked the time. It was 10 minutes to 11 am.

"Why don't you take a little nap, and I'll wake you up when lunch is ready," Nikkole suggested.

"I'm not a baby. I don't need a nap." Ella told her.

Nikkole had to suppress a giggle.

Here was a little girl wearing bear footie pajamas with a slightly damp diaper telling her she wasn't a baby.

"So big girls don't take naps, too?" Nikkole asked.

Ella was about to say no when it hit her that some do, and Ella was in a bit of a trap. If she said no, Nikkole would point out she was wrong. If she agreed with Nikkole, then that proved her point. And while she could still go about and still refuse a nap, what would be the point?

So, instead, Ella released a small HUMPH and started climbing into the crib. But as she was halfway up, Ella's foot slipped, and she was partly stuck halfway up.

Nikkole smiled as she walked over to help push Ella's diapered butt onto the bed and tuck the small girl in.

"T-thank you," Ella said while blushing.

"I'll get you a step stool later," Nikkole told Ella, which only made Ella blush more. "We'll also finish going through your stuff after lunch."

"Ok," Ella replied as she yawned again and closed her eyes.

"Sleep well, Ella," Nikkole told her as she picked up Alex's old clothes before leaving the room and turning off the lights.

As Ella slept, her boxes lay on the floor. Their contents and secrets just waiting to be opened.

**********

As Nikkole got downstairs, she set the clothes on the kitchen table.

"Now, what should I do with you?" Nikkole asked herself as she looked at some of the clothes.

Memories of when she bought them with Alex came flooding back.

'We got these pants during a trip to the mall.'
'I got this skirt for her for Christmas.'
'I haven't seen this shirt in years. Not since Alex was 14.'
'Haha. Alex had to get this skirt when a little boy with chocolate ice cream ran into her and splattered the ice cream all over her butt. Everyone thought she looked like she had a major accident.'

"I guess I should put them in a box and put them in the garage," Nikkole told herself when something hit her.

She was storing Alex's clothes in the garage. As if they were just some hand-me-downs.

No! They were Alex's clothes! They should be with Alex's stuff!

But Alex wasn't here. She's gone. Gone for years. And now Ella is using Alex's things, wearing Alex's clothes, sleeping where Alex should be!

Dark thoughts began filling Nikkole's mind as she was forced to sit down and try to breathe. This was something Nikkole really needed to work out for herself.

There was a knock at the door, as she finally calmed herself down.

The knock startled Nikkole, but she quickly made herself presentable and went to open the door.

Standing in front of the door was a woman roughly around Nikkole's age.

"Good evening, miss. My name is Cathy Kame. I'm here on behalf of Madam Metztli." the woman told Nikkole.

"OH! Um, yes!" Nikkole said as she remembered she would be meeting with someone from the Metztlis. "Please come in."

Nikkole moved out of the way and let the woman into the house before taking her into the kitchen.

"Would you like some coffee?" Nikkole offered.

"No, thank you," Cathy said as she looked around the house slightly. "May I ask, where is Miss Ella?"

"Ella is taking a nap upstairs right now," Nikkole told Cathy. "Should I go get her?"

"N-no. it is ok." Cathy told her as she let out a little sigh of relief. "Honestly, it would be hard to face her right now."

Nikkole noted that as Cathy seemed to go into a more business mood as she sat down at the table and pulled out some papers.

"As Madame Metztli has told me, you wish to adopt Ella," Cathy tells Nikkole.

“Yes,” Nikkole replied. "I know she is 18, and legally she is an adult. But she would still need her legal documents to do anything. And as is, with her considered missing, that would be hard."

"Yes, and Madame Metztli would like to keep it that way," Cathy told Nikkole. "This is why she would like to propose a solution to all our problems."

Cathy presented Nikkole with a stack of documents.

"Madame Metztli would like to keep the 18-year-old Ella to remain dead, and recommends changing Ella's legal documents to that of someone new."

"You mean to change her name?" Nikkole asked.

"No," Cathy told her. "These documents will change more than that, such as where Ella was born and when. Effectively, being a different person who shares a similar name and face but legally is different.

"Would that really be necessary?" Nikkole asked.

"The Metztlis are doing their best to push themselves as far away from Ella as possible without causing too many problems. This would be the best solution for all parties unless Ella tries to take her name back. And should that be the case, the Metztlis have a contract made for you both."

Nikkole was a little shocked. Was it as easy as just signing a few papers to get Ella away from the Metztlis?

Nikkole looked at all the documents and started to piece together what would happen.

As soon as Ella signs those papers, her legal birth would be changed to that of a more local hospital. Ella's age would be adjusted from 18 to 13, and her name would be Ellan Cooper Doe.

From there, Nikkole could legally adopt Ella as her daughter.

The contract itself was written in a rush and basically stated that the Metztlis would handle all of the legal processes so long as Ella never uses the Metztli name or Nikkole and Ella comes to the Metztlis for anything else in the future.

Nikkole would still need to closely look through the documents, but they were legit as far as she could tell.

"Is this really it?" Nikkole asked. "This seems a little too easy."

"I assure you, Miss, the Metztli family just wants this to be over. If they want, they have other ways to solve this problem. But with Mister Metztli's position, it could be a problem for them if any of this comes to light. Hence, they wish to keep this as quiet as possible." Cathy told Nikkole.

What's scary was that Nikkole had no doubt Cathy was telling the truth.

"When Ella wakes up, Please have her sign these documents and Mail them to this address," Cathy said as she wrote down an address on a piece of paper and gave it to Nikkole. "Now, if there is nothing else, I must be going."

"Please, wait a moment," Nikkole told Cathy as she stood up. "I'm sorry, but may I ask what you know about Ella and the Metztlis."

Cathy stared at Nikkole for a few moments before she sat down.

"I have worked for the Metztli family for the last 20 years. So I have known Ella for most of her life." Cathy told Nikkole. "I've acted as both Ella's and Eve's nanny on top of my duty as the head maid of the household.

"So you know what Ella went through at that house?" Nikkole asked.

"Regrettably, I do," Cathy told Nikkole. "As much as I wish I could, there was not much I could do to stop much of what happened to Ella at the time."

"What do you mean?" Nikkole asked. She started getting mad at her for letting Ella go through something like that and do nothing.

"At least one other member of the Metztli staff has brought criticism to the Metztlis attention with their treatment of Ella. Afterward, a great deal of miss fortune fell upon them."

"What did the Metztlis do?" Nikkole asked.

"That is just it," Cathy told Nikkole. "There is no evidence they did anything. Some were evicted from their home for reasons the landlord would not discuss, and the storage unit they were storing their belongings caught on fire. Their whole life was just turned upside down."

"That's awful!" Nikkole commented.

"To make matters worse, the Metztlis personally helped them. Got them a small house and helped get back some of what was lost in the fire." Cathy replied.

"Why would they do that?" Nikkole asked.

"For control," Cathy told Nikkole. "Despite not having evidence, most of us who work for the Metztlis know who they really are and what they did. And once they knock you down, they build you right back up. Leaving you indebted to them."

"But that still doesn't explain why no one comes out and tells someone," Nikkole told Cathy.

"But it does. If they come out and try to slander the Metztlis, people can look at what the Metztlis did for them and conclude that they are just trying to get more from the Metztlis by threatening their good name." Cathy told Nikkole. "Without proper evidence, no one would believe them."

As Nikkole thought of it, Cathy was right. If anyone had said the Metztlis were abusive to their kids a week ago, there would be no way she would believe it. It's like hearing Mickey Mouse kick kittens. It just would never cross your mind. It's only because Nikkole got to meet Ella that she now knows what the Metztlis are like.  

"Should anyone try to get in their way, they will make sure their name is safe by any means necessary," Cathy told Nikkole.

"How could you possibly work for such monsters?" Nikkole asked.


"I do not have much choice, miss Nikkole," Cathy told her. "As much as I disagree with many of the Metztlis parenting, I have my own reasons for staying with them."

"BUT WHAT THEY DID TO Ella!" Nikkole yelled before remembering Ella was asleep upstairs, hoping she didn't wake Ella.

But Nikkole didn't. Ella slept through the noise and rolled over before peeing into her diaper again.

Nikkole was trying her hardest to hold back her anger. The urge to get her gun was coming back.

"I know. And I've tried my hardest to be there for Ella whenever the Metztlis seemed to be mad at Ella for whatever reason." Cathy told her.

"They are sick fuck heads," Nikkole commented.

"You may not believe this, but I was relieved when I heard Ella struck Nia and ran away. I was not there then, but I have no doubts Nia started something, and Ella finally snapped. My only regret was that I could not find Ella to keep her safe and away from the Metztlis myself."

As Nikkole looked at Cathy's sad expression, her anger dissipated slightly. She was just glad someone tried to be there for Ella.

"Would you like to see Ella?" Nikkole asked. "I can go wake her up."

“No,” Cathy told Nikkole. "As much as I would love to see her again, I can't face her after what happened and not protect her myself. One day, but for now, please take good care of Ella. She deserves a good home."

Nikkole smiled and nodded in agreement.

With that done, Cathy set down a card with her personal number. She gave Nikkole one last smile before she left the house.

As soon as Cathy was gone, Nikkole let out a loud sigh.

"I need a vacation," Nikkole mumbled to herself. "A vacation from my staycation."

20 minutes later, Nikkole went into the nursery to see Ella still asleep.

Nikkole walked over and stroked the young girl's hair as the sleeping Ella unconsciously began nuzzling Nikkole's gentle hand.

Part of Nikkole wanted to keep doing this for longer, but she heard Ella's tummy rumble and knew it was time for lunch.

"Ella, oh Ella. It's time to wake up, sweety." Nikkole whispered into her ear.

Ella's eyes fluttered open as she began to sit up and rub her eyes. She yawned, looked around, and looked up at Nikkole. It took Ella a moment for her eyes to focus on Nikkole, but once they did, Ella couldn't help but give her a sleepy smile.

She could feel the wet feeling of a full, damp diaper under her bottom in her groggy state.

"Moma," Ella said groggily as she reached her hands up for Nikkole to pick her up. "Change?"

Nikkole giggled a little as she picked up the sleepy girl. Ella rested on Nikkole's shoulder as she just let Nikkole handle things.

"Of course, baby girl," Nikkole told her as she kissed Ella's cheek. "Mama will take care of it."

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These were very good chapters.  It’s hard to read about how some people can treat their children and this is only a story. By far the hardest cases I have had to work involved child abuse and neglect. That kind of thing causes the blood to boil and the stomach to turn. 
I look forward to reading about better times for Ella and Nikkole. 

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chapter 10

 

Nikkole placed Ella on the changing table and began undressing her as she slowly woke up.

After taking off the wet diaper, Nikkole cleaned up the little girl and helped her into her pull-ups before going to the closet and grabbing one of her outfits. A yellow t-shirt with a cat face on the front, a nice skirt, and yellow socks.

"Come on, Ella. Let's go have some lunch." Nikkole told Ella as she picked her up off the changing table and sat her on the ground.

"Okay, Nikkole," Ella said with a smile as she walked with Nikkole back downstairs and into the kitchen.

Ella saw two bowls of tomato soup and grilled cheese sitting on the table, waiting for them. Ella rushed to her spot and began eating while Nikkole made her a drink.

While Nikkole was away, Ella took notice of the papers lying on the table and looked at one of them.

Most of it was legal words and mumbo-jumbo that Ella could barely understand, but she noticed her name on the paper.

"Um, Nikkole?" Ella said as she turned around and saw Nikkole coming over with her milk. "What is this?"

Nikkole looked at the paper she was holding and cursed herself. She wanted to deal with this after lunch…

"I'm sorry, Ella," Nikkole said as she sat the glass down and took her seat. "But we were visited by one of the Metztlis servants. A woman named Cathy."

"C-Cathy!" Ella yelled with surprise in her eyes as she jumped out of her seat and grabbed onto Nikkole. "Why d-didn't you wake me!"

Nikkole could only look down at Ella's face and see no anger or pain but sadness.

"I-i would h-have liked t-to see Cathy again," Ella said as she let go of Nikkole and let her arms and head slump down.

“I'm sorry Ella,” Nikkole told her.

From there, Nikkole told Ella what happened while she was asleep. She told her all about the paperwork and what it meant for Ella.

Ella just stood, listening to everything Nikkole said.

"You okay?" Nikkole asked her as she tried to look at Ella's face.

With a single tear wiped away from her eye, Ella looked up and smiled.

"Y-yes."

Nikkole gave her a smile back.

"I will still need to look over these first, but are you sure this is what you want to do?" Nikkole asked Ella.

That was the big question, wasn't it? After all this time, fighting to be seen as mature. To be seen as an adult, as a woman. Was she really going to give all of that up?

But it wasn't something that needed to be asked anymore.

For once, Ella wasn't being shunned for not being normal. For once, Ella wasn't being yelled at for her diaper dependence or messing up her body just to please the people she hated.

Nikkole is forceful and can get mad, but it comes from a mother who wants to do what's suitable for their child. To make sure they aren't hurting themselves. To make sure they stay clean, healthy, and loved. Even if it has to be tough love at times.

Lossing her adulthood? Did she even have that? Stuck in diapers, treated as nothing more than a little kid. No matter what she did, that's just what people would think of her.

Maybe this could be a good thing. Getting back the years, she lost trying to be something impossible for the wrong reasons.

Lossing her name? If she could, she would have burned that name away years ago. But maybe it was some type of pride, or that it was the only thing Ella had that no one could take from her that she kept it.

But now? Now that doesn't matter anymore. She has something better than that cursed name.

"Yes, yes, I want this," Ella said without hesitation and a smile on her face.

Nikkole couldn't help but give her new daughter a huge hug.

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"MOM!" a young woman yelled as she marched through her home until she reached her mother's office and barged in.

"I'm sorry, something just came up. I must put you on hold for a moment." miss. Metztli told her agent over the phone before muting the phone. "Yes, Nia? What is the matter, darling?"

"I just heard from one of the maids that Baby Brat called you!" Nia yelled as she slammed her hands down on the desk. "I want to know why!"

"It's a matter that does not concern you, Nia." miss. Metztli said as she stood up and walked over to a small cabinet. "I've already handled the situation."

"Bullshit!" Nia yelled. "You're letting that diaper-wearing cunt walk away scot-free! Even after everything you and Daddy had to do, keep her from messing things up, and after what she did to me!"

Nia lifted up some of her long hair to show a small burn scar on the left side of her head that she used her hair to cover up.

"That little cunt needs to pay for what…" Nia began yelling before her mother, but her mother slammed the cabinet with a loud crack that made Nia jump and shut up.

"Nia, I know exactly how you are feeling." her mother said, as calm and composed as she could be, opened a bottle of alcohol. "But what Daddy is doing is something big right now, and we don't want anything to get in his way."

"But that doesn't mean you should just let the cunt go!" Nia told her mother.

"No, that is exactly what I should do." miss. Metztli told her daughter as she poured herself a glass. "Sometimes the simplest solutions to a problem are the best. As long as she doesn't get involved with us anymore, there should not be any problems."

"But…" Nia started but stopped as her mother gave her an ice-cold stare.

"Nia. your father is trying to win this election. how would it look if, by some mistake, it is revealed that Ella is alive and that we tried to get rid of her?" Miss. Nightster asked as she walked over and hugged her daughter. "one of these days, you are going to take over in our footsteps. But before that happens, you must learn when to pick your battles."

Miss Metztli then went back and sat back down at her desk.

"Now, if I'm correct, you have a violin concert to practice for. We wouldn't want another mistake like last time, where you messed up on a simple note."

Nia gritted her teeth but did as her mother instructed, apologizing to her mother before leaving her office.

"What am I going to do with that child." miss. Metztli sighed with a smile as she took a drink and unmuted her phone.

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After finally finishing their meal, Nikkole and Ella decided they needed to leave the house for a while and decided to go to plenamart to pick up some stuff and clear their minds.

Before they left, Ella changed her skirt for pants as she was still uncomfortable going out in a skirt.

Ella grew a little nervous as the car pulled up to the store.

"What's wrong, Ella?" Nikkole asked as she looked at Ella through the rear ver mirror.

"I-its n-nothing," Ella told her as she paused slightly. "I-im j-just a l-little nervous."

"Nervous? Why?" Nikkole asked.

"I-i hav-vent been in p-public like t-this before," Ella told Nikkole.

That's when Nikkole realized that she was right. While she might have gone to the doctor and prison looking like a little girl, she'd never been in public looking like this since she was young.

"Ella, we don't have to be here if you don't want to." Nikkole offered. "We can just take a drive and go back home."

"N-no." Ella stuttered. "I-i h-have to get u-use to it ev-entuly."

Ella gave Nikkole a nervous smile as Nikkole smiled back. Knowing Ella was really trying her hardest.

Nikkole exited the car and helped her little girl out before taking her hand and walking inside.

After getting a cart, Nikkole contemplated putting Ella in it but decided against it.

"Okay, let's get you a few more outfits, a toothbrush, and a few other odds and ends," Nikkole told Ella, who nodded beside the cart.

Once they got to the clothes, Nikkole helped Ella pick out a few new clothes and went into the dressing room to help Ella try them on. Most of them were pants and other garments for public use.

Nikkole partly wished she was wearing a regular diaper to get a few pants that would fit them, but that would be for another shopping day.

Next was the toothbrush and other hygienic products that Nikkole didn't have enough of. Even grabbed some Preas formula for Ella.

Before they could leave, however, Nikkole needed to make one last stop. The diaper section.

While Nikkole might still have some diapers, she doesn't have many, and Ella also needed more pull-ups.

And as they were turning into the diaper section, they were greeted by a pleasant surprise!

"Oh! Hay Nikkole, hi Ella. what brings you two here?" Rose asked with a small pack of diapers under her arm.

Rose was standing by a small, Preas-sized cart.

"Just getting some stuff for Ella and the home," Nikkole told Rose. "You?"

"Running out of my night protection," Rose said as she held up her diapers to show them. Making Ella blush at how blunt Rose was about her diapers.

"I-i didn't know y-you wore different diapers," Ella said shyly.

"Oh ya. " Rose told Ella, " three kinds, "plain hospital diapers for work because they are much easier to get while working. Regular diapers for home and sleep. And extra thick ones when I'm sick or on long trips."

Ella was shocked to hear all this.

"Speaking of, have you decided yet, Nikkole?" Rose asked.

"Yes, you two come on over tonight, and we'll have dinner," Nikkole said with a smile.

"Great!" Rose said with a smile. "

"TOMOS! SLOW DOWN!" someone yelled from behind Nikkole and Ella as they turned in time to see a cart rush past Nikkole and run right into Ella!

"Ella!" "TOMOS!" two mothers yelled as two kids could be heard whimpering and crying.

Nikkole and Rose rushed to Ella while another woman ran to a little boy pushing the other cart.

Rose was looking over Ella, who was hopping on one foot after being hit by the cart, though, thankfully, she wasn't too hurt. But her leg was bruised slightly.

"You'll be okay, Ella. Just stay off the leg for an hour or 2, and you'll be good as new," Rose told Ella, who gave her a teary thank you.

Then Rose went over to the little boy, who was crying even harder than Ella.

"I'm so sorry. He wanted to push the cart and got a little too excited." the mother said as she held her crying son.

"It's okay. Mind if I take a look real quick?" Rose asked,

When the kid ran into Ella, he hit his head on the cart and would no doubt get a goose egg for it, but otherwise, he was also fine.

Ella tried to put her leg down but winced in pain and tried to stay off her leg until Nikkole came over and picked her up.

"Here, this will be easier," Nikkole told her as Ella was placed in the cart.

As much as she didn't want to be there, she couldn't argue with Nikkole.

After a few more apologies, the whole ordeal was over. Nikkole and Ella said their goodbyes to Rose as they went off to pay for their stuff and go home.

They both got in line and waited for a few minutes until just one woman was in front of them.

That's when a little boy walked behind the cashier and gave her a few taps.

"Hey Candice, you can go on break, I'll take over." the boy told the cashier, who thanked him.

"Um, excuse me a moment, but could you ring me up first?" the woman in front of Ella and Nikkole asked the cashier.

"I'm sorry mam, it will just take a moment to switch over, and Jason here can take care of you." the cashier told the woman with a smile.

"No, I don't want him to help me, I want you to help me." the woman told the cashier as people started to look over, wondering what was going on.

"I'm sorry, miss, but is there something wrong?" Jason asked the woman.

"As a matter of fact, there is. I have a problem with plenamart having children working for them, and I want to be assisted by an adult." the woman told the little boy, to the shock of everyone.

"Mam, I'm a Preas. I'm 21 and working here part-time while I go to college." Jason told the woman, who rolled her eyes.

"Such a waste of money." the woman commented.

"Excuse me, what might your problem be with Preass?" Nikkole asked as she cut into the conversation. "My daughter is a Preas and you are being very offensive."

The woman looked at Nikkole and Ella before looking into their cart and seeing the diapers inside.

"I dont care what age they say they are. They are nothing more than sinful children refusing to grow up." the woman tells them.

"Mam, Preas is a well-known medical disease and disability." the cashier girl tells the woman.

"Such nonsense. This is what's wrong with the world. Would rather listen to nonsense and sin than follow the Lord's light. That is why he punishes brats like you." the woman said as she glared at the boy and then at Ella.

Nikkole couldn't believe just what she heard.

"Mam, I'm going to have to ask you to leave." the cashier told the woman with a slight glare.

"I will not! You are going to help me with my transaction, or I will call your manager." the woman told the cashier.

"Mam," Nikkole said as she stepped closer to the woman.

"And what do you want?" the woman asked before looking at Ella and giving her a dirty look, making her very nervous.

"You are currently causing a scene in public. if you do not leave, the police will be called to escort you out." Nikkole told her.

"Is this some type of threat?" the woman asked Nikkole as she started getting closer to Nikkole. "Are you trying to threaten me?"

"No," Nikkole said in a calm voice, pointing up, "but as a retired police officer, I would hope you take my warning and leave before the police have to review that footage of you causing a scene and getting in my face."

The woman looked up and saw the camera looking right at her. Deciding she didn't want to possibly deal with cops, she left. All the while yelling religious profanities on her way out.

Nikkole let out a sigh as she looked back at the little boy.

"I'm so sorry about that," Nikkole told him.

"It's fine, people like that all over the place," Jason replied. "Honestly, we prefer that over the people who treat us like babies. At least they voice why they don't like us."

Jason let out a sigh of his own before putting on a smile. He reached under the cash register and pulled out a little step stool for a better height.

"Alright, who can I help first?" Jason asked as he decided to ignore what happened and continue his job.

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Another really good chapter.  I love that they are coming so fast.  No wait time at all.😃. Ella is so much better off away from her family. I have to believe that no matter how mean and nasty they were to her the actual act of permanently loosing them has to hurt a little. I do believe that Nikkole will be so much better for her and that she will be so much happier in the long run. I will be looking forward to the next chapter. 

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7 hours ago, CDfm said:

Another really good chapter.  I love that they are coming so fast.  No wait time at all.😃. Ella is so much better off away from her family. I have to believe that no matter how mean and nasty they were to her the actual act of permanently loosing them has to hurt a little. I do believe that Nikkole will be so much better for her and that she will be so much happier in the long run. I will be looking forward to the next chapter. 

glad you like it. most of the story is already done, i just need to eddit 20% of the story and then i can post them. if i wasin't working irl, i would pump out the chapters faster.

as of right now, the story is now half done. equivalent to 13 out of 19 chapters. 

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chapter 11

 

"Are you OK, sweetie?" Nikkole asked as she and Ella drove home.

"Y-ya," Ella said as she shook her head to stop thinking about what that racist woman said and smiled at Nikkole. "I-I'm all good!"

Nikkole was still skeptical but decided to leave it alone for now.

As they got home, Nikkole suggested Ella watch TV while she started making dinner.

Ella agreed but soon grew bored with the TV and went upstairs to get her switch. She knew it had to be in one of her boxes.

As she went upstairs, she looked at her three boxes and opened the first. It was just a bunch of random stuff Ella had in her old room. But her DS wasn't in this box.

The next one she looked at had more of her stuff, including the broken heater she should have thrown away and her microwave. At the bottom of this box was her switch and a few games.

Ella smiled at the old handheld that was 80% of her entertainment in that apartment. Cathy got it for her birthday years ago, and it was the one thing she made sure to grab when she ran away.

As she turned it on, she realized the battery was almost dead and needed to go downstairs to charge it. As she ran off, she left one last box unopened.

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As a few hours passed, Ella was so immersed in her game she almost didn't hear the doorbell ring and remembered who was coming over.

"Ella, can you get that?" Nikkole yelled from the kitchen.

"OK!" Ella yelled back as she closed her game and went to the front door.

But when she opened it, she was slightly surprised to see a 17-year-old boy standing in the doorway. He was also just as shocked as Ella was.

"Um, yes?" Ella asked.

The guy said nothing but stepped back and looked at the numbers on the house.

"This is Nikkole's house, right?" the guy asked, confused as to why a little girl was at the door.

The guy was tall and looked like a punk with long, shaggy dark hair covering one eye, 

Ella was about to reply when someone else ran over to the door.

"Nathan! I thought I said to wait for me!" Rose yelled to the taller guy as she rushed up to Nathan. "Sorry, Ella, this is my son Nathan."

Ella's jaw dropped as she looked up at Nathan, a tall white boy, and down at Rose, a shorter 14-year-old-looking black woman.

"Y-your n-not…." Ella stuttered as Nikkole walked up behind her.

"Who's at the door?" Nikkole asked, wondering why no one had come in yet. "Oh! Rose and Nathan, it's so good to see you. Come in. It looks like it might start to rain soon."

Nikkole opened the door and let them in as Ella was still in shock.

Rose just giggled as the door was shut and faced Ella.

"Yes, Ella, my baby boy doesn't have Preas like me," Rose said with a Cheshire grin. She always enjoyed the look on people's faces when they met Nathan for the first time and learned that he was her son.

"Mom! I'm not a baby!" Nathan snapped angrily.

"You'll always be my baby, no matter how big you get," Rose told him.

"B-b-but how!" Ella yelled.

"Adoption, duh," Nathan commented, knowing the drill of explaining himself.

"I adopted Nathan when he was eight months old," Rose told Ella. "I just really wanted to be a mom."

"B-but isn't that illegal!" Ella asked. To which the other three laughed.

"No, sweety," Nikkole commented. "While it is sporadic, Preas can adopt as well. They just need to undergo a longer process to deem them fit."

"And that doesn't stop some people from still saying we shouldn't be allowed to," Rose told Ella. "And in some ways, they do have a point."

"Imagine how hard it is to raise a growing boy when you're not much bigger," Nikkole commented as she remembered Nathan being as tall as Rose at 12.

"I still remember changing our diapers and sleeping in the same crib for the first few years."

"Mom!" Nathan shouted as he was embarrassed by that story.

"Hack, taking him to school was hard when my little guy went to pre-school. People thought I was his big stepsister helping Mom drop him off. Still, as he got older and around my height, teachers thought we were friends or stepsiblings being dropped off and, on more than one occasion, tried to make me stay in the class thinking I was a student," Rose said as she pulled out a wallet to show Ella a picture of her and a younger boy hugging.

"B-but he's bigger than you!" Ella yelled.

"And?" Rose replied. "Doesn't mean I can't still put him over my knee and spank him whenever I have to."

That statement blew Ella's mind as she just stared at the two of them. Nathan rolled his eyes slightly at his mom's comment.

"OK, OK," Nikkole said as she clapped her hands. "I think that's enough of an introduction for now. Dinner is almost done, so why don't you kids go play."

"Whatever," Nathan said as he walked toward the old playroom. Ella was still so confused, but she did after Nikkole nudged her to follow.

"So, do you think we blew her mind?" Rose asked Nikkole as both kids went down into the playroom.

"Definitely," Nikkole said with a smile as they entered the kitchen to finish dinner.

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"Achu!" Nathan sneezed very loudly as he dusted off some of the toys. "Dusty."

"Y-ya," Ella replied, feeling very awkward at the moment. Part of her still did not believe the guy was Rose's son.

Who could honestly believe that? Nathan was almost a foot and a half taller than Rose's size! How could someone who looked like a young teenager care for a full-grown teenager?

"It's been years since I was in here," Nathan commented as he looked at everything around the room. "After Alex passed away, it didn't feel right to come in here."

"Y-you knew her?" Ella asked.

"Ya, she was like a little sister to me," Nathan told Ella. "We would always hang out. While she never matured much, it didn't bother me much."

Nathan let out another sneeze from the dust in the room.

"So, what about you?" Nathan asked as he turned to face Ella. "Did Aunt Nikkole adopt you? How old are you?"

Ella was a little shocked and confused for a moment over those qwestions.

"I-i um. S-she is a-adopting me." Ella told him with a blush, both from the embarrassment of the question and being alone with such an intimidating person. "A-and I'm…"

Ella stopped herself from saying eighteen. No, she won't be eighteen when she signs those papers.

"I'm fourteen," Ella told her.

"huh, it's always hard to tell nowadays." Nathan said. "what school are you attending? I dont think I've seen you around the high school."

"I-m not," Ella replied. She hadn't been to school since she was diagnosed with Pears and was homeschooled for years until she ran away.

"R-right, you're still adjusting. I understand." Nathan told her and decided to try and change the subject. 

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"So, any new development with Ella since we last talked?" Rose asked as she was given a glass of juice.

"W-well," Nikkole said as she thought of everything that's happened and told Rose.

"Holly fuck!" Rose said as she was shocked to hear all of that. "Is that even legal?"

"I dont think so, though they are definitely using some connections to keep it quiet," Nikkole told her friend.

"So, she's now 14, huh," Rose commented. "You thinking about putting her back into school?"

"I-I'm not sure yet," Nikkole replied. "I haven't talked to Ella about it yet and…"

"Nikkole. Just so you know, you will be her guardian," Rose reminded her friend. "Meaning you'll have to do what's best for her, even if she doesn't like it at times,"

"R-right," Nikkole replied as she began to fully realize that Ella wouldn't be an adult anymore. But a child needs to be cared for and raised until she becomes one once more.

A timer went off, and the food was finally done.

After getting the food ready and the table set, Nikkole went down to the playroom,

Nikkole smiled as she saw Ella and Nathan playing the board game Candyland to pass the time.

"Having fun?" Nikkole asked as she walked over.

"Ya," Nathan said casually as he took his turn and won the game. "I win."

"Well, dinner just got done. Why don't we go eat." Nikkole suggested as both agreed and got up.

But as Ella got up, she stopped and began blushing, and Nikkole could guess why.

"Nathan, could you go up first? I need to ask Ella something," Nikkole told the girl.

"OK," Nathan replied as he walked upstairs, already guessing what it could be about.

“You ok sweetie?” Nikkole asked.

"I-im wet…" Ella said as she looked down at the floor.

"Would you like me to change you?" Nikkole asked as Ella nodded.

Taking Ella by the hand, she escorted her to a changing table, picked her up, and laid her down.

"My, I really need to clean this room," Nikkole said as she took notice of all the dust.

Ella said nothing as her pants were removed and her training panties were torn.

"Would a regular diaper be OK?" Nikkole asked. "If not, I'll have to go upstairs to get you another trainer."

"I-its OK," Ella said as she tried to hide her embarrassed face from Nikkole.

Nikkole smiled and diapered her little girl before helping her with her pants.

"There we are, nice and dry," Nikkole said as she held her hand for Ella to take before they went upstairs.
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Dinner was great, and all the kids seemed to enjoy talking around the table.

Rose significantly as she pulled a few picketers out of her purse to show Ella, much to Nathan's embarrassment.

"Here's one where he finally went on the potty," Rose said as she showed a picture of a toddler, Nathan, sitting on a little potty.

"Here's one when we went to Disneyland," showing a picture of them next to Donald Duck.

"And here is one of me spanking Nathan after he said a curse word at me," Rose said as she handed the picture to Ella.

"MOM! DONT SHOW PEOPLE THAT!" Nathan yelled as his face turned beat red.

It was a selfy stile picketer of a 10-year-old Nathan laying over Rose's lap, his pants pulled down and his butt bright red.

Ella still could not believe it. Here was proof a Preas could, in fact, spank and punish someone without it. Ella couldn't help but laugh.

That laughter slowly died down when they heard a low rumble.

"Sounds like thunder," Nikkole commented.

"I think it might be about time we went home as well," Rose replied. "I already know I'll need a new diaper as soon as I get home."

Everyone agreed as they all said their goodbyes.

"Hey, let us know if you are going to my school. I'll make sure no one picks on you." Nathan told Ella, who could only give an awkward smile.

"I-ill have to think about it," Ella told Nathan.

"Aww, look at my big boy being all protective." Rose joked while Nathan growled and walked away. "OK, it's time to go," 

"OK, Ella," Nikkole said as she closed the door. "Why don't you go bathe while I clean the kitchen."

"l-let me help y-you with that!" Ella told Nikkole.

"I don't think so," Nikkole said as she lightly tugged on the girl's shirt. "You're all dusty and need a nice bath."

"B-but…" Ella started to say before Nikkole gave her a soft pat on hers.

"No buts, you can help me clean the playroom tomorrow if you want to help," Nikkole said with a smile, and Ella reluctantly agreed. "good girl,"

As Ella made her way upstairs, she decided to stop by the nursery to grab her pajamas and a diaper to change into after she was done.

She was about to bathe as she grabbed her pajamas and a new diaper when something caught her attention.

It was her last unopened box.

'What was in this one?' Ella wondered. From the other boxes she opened, it looked like all her stuff was in them. And she already didn't have much.

Ella sat her stuff down momentarily and decided to take a look real fast.

But as soon as she opened the box and looked inside, her heart began to pound. Her breath grew heavy and fast, and a cold shiver raced down Ella's spine.

 

 

 

 

============= note from auther.

this chapter took a little longer to redo, simple because i had to completely change one character to a new one. 

at fist i was going to just gender swap Adnat, from the orignal and be done with it. but after a bit of a thought, i thought it would be funnyer to use a charicter i already have and set up something else. so, my OC Street punk Nathan and his girlfriend Neon diva April are now cannon to the Tiny Intruder world. ^w^

i have a rough idea on what im going to do with Nathan and April, but im thinking of giving them their own little spin off. since it will be a while untill i can do it, here is an idea i have for it.

April seems like an ordinary girl, but after Nathan saves her from being a kidnapper, her mafia father makes him a deal. To watch over and protect his daughter in public. Why does she need protection? It's not because of her father but because she is special. Not only did she get Preas, but she is the only known case of someone getting it and recovering from it. She got it when she was 8, but when Apral turned 15, she started aging again. Now 23, she looks to be 16. those who know about her want her blood to study. But her father won't let anyone turn her into a lab rat.
Now, Nathan is forced to look after April. On the one hand, it's not so bad since she is very kinky. But if her father ever found out, Nathan would be dead.
Posable name. Abduction or diapers.

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chapter 12

 

Nikkole had just finished clearing the table when she heard a loud scream coming from Ella!

Rushing upstairs, she burst into the nursery in time to see Ella on the ground, clenching her head and mumbling to herself.

"Ella? sweety, what's wrong?" Nikkole asked as she knelt beside Ella and touched her back.

"GET OF ME!" Ella screamed as she jumped back and smacked Nikkole's hand away.

Nikkole could only stare right into the frightened eyes of the little girl in front of her. Panting and sweating as her mind raced with thoughts Nikkole wouldn't know.

"I don't want to go. I don't want to go back." Ella was mumbling to herself. "I can't go back…"

"Ella, sweety, just tell me what-"

"You're NOT MY MOTHER!" Ella screamed as she reached up and began pulling on her short hair. "Nononono!"

"Ella, what's wrong?" Nikkole asked again as she grew even more worried as she tried to get closer to Ella.

But Ella screamed and ran to another corner of the nursery, where she crouched and began mumbling again.

"I'm just a dirty thief who is going to jail!" Ella mumbled as Nikkole stood up.

'What is happening to her?' Nikkole wondered as her worry grew worse.

That's when she took notice of the open boxes in the room. The boxes that came from the hotel Ella was living out of.

But could they really have made Ella start to act this way? Most of it was just random stuff Ella had.

But Nikkole did take notice of one box. The only box of stuff Nikkole found in Ella's old closet. Stuff Nikkole didn't look at.

Taking a quick look, it was just a box full of random items.

Little statues, nice silverware, perfume bottles, a toy farting unicorn, and a rainbow pillow.

But what was so special about this…

Then it clicked. They were stolen items! But….

Suddenly, Ella began throwing up as Nikkole's head jolted back to Ella. Just in time to see Ella shoving her hand into her mouth!

Nikkole rushed over to stop Ella.

Ella was screaming and thrashing around as Nikkole had to hold her down.

"LET GO!" Ella screamed as she bit Nikkole's arm, causing her to yelp in pain and let go.

"Ella! You have to stop this right now!" Nikkole yelled at her.

"NO!' Ella screeched back as she frantically tried to kick at Nikkole to let her go. "I-i need to be an adult! I can't be a baby there! I won't! He's going to kill me! They will kill me!"

"No one is going to hurt you, sweety," Nikkole told Ella as she tried calming her down. "I promise I'll do everything I can to protect you."

"NO! YOU CAN'T!" Ella screamed. She kicked Nikkole in the face and finally got free. She then ran to the center of the room and turned around. "You can't protect me! You couldn't even protect Alex!"

In that one moment, Ella knew she had just crossed a line she couldn't come back from as she saw Nikkole suddenly stand up and look down at the little girl. A look of complete hurt and anger sprawled across Nikola's face at those words.

A million thoughts were racing in Ella's mind as Nikkole started coming closer. Ella became more terrified and tried to make a run for it.

But as she tried to run to the door, Nikkole grabbed Ellas' arm and yanked her back.

Ella spun around and bumped right into Nikkole as she knelt down. So Ella did the only thing she could to fight back. She turned, opened her mouth wide, and bit down on Nikkole's shoulder!

Nikkole yelled in pain. Ella braced herself for a hit from Nikkole, but instead, Nikkole wrapped her arms around Ella's small frame and held her close.

"LET GO YOU BITCH!" Ella screamed out before biting Nikkole again.

Again and again and again, she bit down as hard as she could until there was just sobbing coming from the girl's bloodied mouth.

Nikkole just held onto her and did not let go. No matter how much it hurt.

Ella had finally lost the will to fight and was too tired to do anything. After who knows how long of a struggle, Ella couldn't muster up the strength to do anything.

Even as Nikkole picked her up, Ella did nothing to resist as Nikkole began walking out of the room. Stopping only briefly to grab the diaper and clothes Ella had set aside just a little while ago.

Once in the bathroom, Ella was put down on the toilet seat as Nikkole began undressing her. Ella didn't bother looking up at Nikkole. Just doing basic commands, Nikkole gave her.

Nikkole ran the bath water before placing Ella gently inside the warm water.

Once she was in the water, Ella didn't move. Even as Nikkole went to the cabinet to grab a little first aid kit for her bleeding shoulder.

Nikkole returned to Ella and began cleaning the small girl using a wet washcloth. Even cleaning the blood and vomit off her face.

Once clean, Nikkole picked Ella up and stood her on her feet. Her eyes stared lifelessly at the ground as she was being dried off before being put into another diaper and a nightgown.

Walking over to the sink, Nikkole began brushing Ella's teeth and getting the taste of vomit and blood out of her mouth.

Nikkole didn't say much. The silence felt heavy in the air. 

With the little girl bathed, and her teeth brushed, Nikkole picked her up like a toddler and carried her downstairs and into the kitchen, where Nikkole prepared a bottle before going back upstairs and into Nikkole's room.

Nikkole placed Ella into her bed. Nikkole knelt down and tried to look at Ella's face.

But Ella's eyes, full of shame and regret, couldn't look at Nikola's hurt and saddened face.

After a few minutes, Nikkole stood up and forced Ella to lie in the bed before pushing the bottle past her lips. Ella's stomach growled as it wanted the food Ella forced out of it but would have to settle for the milk Ella was slowly drinking. 

Her eyes were red and heavy as she could no longer keep them open. Tears of regret ran down her face as Nikkole turned off the lights and left the little girl crying softly in the dark room.

There was a puke in the corner, a box of stolen items in the center of the room, and a small spot on the carpet, now stained with her blood.

Nikkole leaned on the crib as she lowered herself to the ground.

She pulled out her phone and called the only person she could.

"Hey, Nikkole, what's up?" Rose asked as she answered the phone. "Did we forget something?"

She didn't answer.

"Nikkole?" Rose asked as she grew slightly worried.

Then, Nikkole broke down and let out a sob.

"I don't know what to do!" Nikkole told her friend as more tears emerged from her red and puffy face.

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Great new chapter.  I did pick up on what I think might be a simple mistake that was repeated in the chapter. Picketers where I think it should have been pictures but I did see you had pictures written in the chapter as well. At any rate Picketer or picketers didn’t make much sense to me. 
I think Ella is going to be having her firse crush on someone here very soon. Nathan is going to become her knight in shining armor. 
I like the idea you have for the spin-off. I will also be looking forward to more of this. 

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Well now this last comment was actually for the chapter prior to this one.  You had the newest chapter up before I could get the comment posted. I also enjoyed this newest chapter. 
This new chapter does have me scratching my head though. I can’t figure out what it was that set Ella off.  She has known all along that she was breaking into homes and stealing.  She has also known that Bob is a total jerk and has threatened her. So there shouldn’t have been anything in the box that would have changed any of that. It couldn’t be the thought of being sent back to her family either because she has seen the paperwork and talked to Nikkole about it. She knows her family doesn’t want her back. I am at a loss. 
Guess I will just have to wait and read more to find out. 

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Great new chapter.  I did pick up on what I think might be a simple mistake that was repeated in the chapter. Picketers where I think it should have been pictures but I did see you had pictures written in the chapter as well. At any rate Picketer or picketers didn’t make much sense to me. 
I think Ella is going to be having her firse crush on someone here very soon. Nathan is going to become her knight in shining armor. 
I like the idea you have for the spin-off. I will also be looking forward to more of this. 

ill look into it and try to fix the spelling mistake. though i don't know what firse means. im guessing first. for that, i will say no. for Ella's story, its meant to be mommy/daughter story. plus, wile she will be considered 14, i don't want to do any form of love story with Preas since most look like kids. thats a can of worms i do not want to be involved it. (in the role play, the main character dose get sexual pleaser in her diapers, but i refused to write it in either story.)

5 minutes ago, CDfm said:

Well now this last comment was actually for the chapter prior to this one.  You had the newest chapter up before I could get the comment posted. I also enjoyed this newest chapter. 
This new chapter does have me scratching my head though. I can’t figure out what it was that set Ella off.  She has known all along that she was breaking into homes and stealing.  She has also known that Bob is a total jerk and has threatened her. So there shouldn’t have been anything in the box that would have changed any of that. It couldn’t be the thought of being sent back to her family either because she has seen the paperwork and talked to Nikkole about it. She knows her family doesn’t want her back. I am at a loss. 
Guess I will just have to wait and read more to find out. 

lol the last chapter was only 5 pages so it was easy to get done fast.
if i had to explane it, its the whiplash of effect on Ella. she's just spent the last two days slowly worming up to the idea of starting over, being with someone who will love and care for her. then she is suddenly whipped back into a dark mindset by seeing the things she has stolen and is reminded she is a bad person. one that shouldn't be getting love. her mind is jumping to the extreme dew to her Preas effecting her emotions. (think of it as something simaler to being bipolar in a way)
she is scared that because she has that box, it means Nikkole wont love her, that she is going to jail, that bob will now be after her, and so on. 

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chapter 13

 

Eyes slowly opened to the sounds of raindrops and a familiar stomach pain.

For a moment, Ella is back in the hotel room. Constantly waking up in pain. 

Why her? Why couldn't someone else have been given this curse? Why did she suffer for just being born the way she was?

It didn't help as her eyes adjusted, the first thing she saw was a photo of a happy woman holding her child.

The site made Ella sick as she knew she could never have something like that.

It was now that Ella began to wonder why she had something like that by her bed.

As she tried to move out of bed, she realized something was on top of her. Wrapping her up and holding her in place.

'h-huh?" Ella said as her mind began to wake up more, and she rolled over to get out the other way, only to be stopped by something soft on her face.

Ella looked up and could see Nikkole's sleeping face. Memories of last night popped back into Ella's mind as she realized Nikkole had her body wrapped around Ella.

Like a mother keeping her baby protected.

'how?' Ella thought as she looked at Nikkole. 'how can she be like this?'

Then Ella noticed the bandages on Nikkole's shoulder poking out from her shirt, and a wave of regret washed over Ella.

Nikkole woke as she heard a muffled cry and looked down at Ella with her face barred in her breasts, crying.

"Shhhh, shhh," Nikkole whispered as she wrapped Ella tighter and rubbed her head. "You're okay, baby. I'm here."

Nikkole could hear Ella mumble something, and Nikkole was forced to lift Ella's face up to listen to what she was saying.

As Ella's teary eyes looked up at Nikkole, a wave of guilt rushed over her as she tried to hide her face again but couldn't.

"Ella, I want you to talk to me. no, I need you to tell me what's wrong?" Nikkole told Ella as she refused to let Ella fight her any longer.

"I-I can't!" Ella replied, teary-eyed as her mind raced with everything and not knowing what to do.

"Yes, you can," Nikkole told her. "Please, just tell me what I did so I can make things better?"

That one line felt like a knife had stabbed Ella in the back.

"N-no!" Ella yelled. "Y-you d-did nothing -w-wrong! I-im the b-bad one!"

Nikkole took her sleeve and wiped away Ella's tears.

"Then tell mommy what's wrong?" Nikkole asked.

There was a short silence between the two. Nikkole awaits the response, and Ella is too scared to bring up what happened last night.

"I-im going back to jail…" Ella told Nikkole as she rolled over to try not to look at Nikkole.

"No baby, your…" Nikkole tried to tell her before Ella cut her off.

"YES, I AM!" Ella cried out. "I AM BECAUSE IM A CROOK!"

More tears streamed down Ella's face as thoughts of the box came to mind.

"I STILL HAVE THAT STOLEN STUFF! STUFF I STOLE! I-I DONT DESERVE THIS! A LITTLE CROOK LIKE ME DOESN'T DESERVE YOU!"

Nikkole was near tears as she held onto Ella, letting the little girl cry and let it all out.

When the crying finally stopped, Nikkole started to rub Ella's head.

"You're not going to jail, sweety. I won't let it happen," Nikkole told Ella.

"NO!" Ella cried as her voice grew horse from the crying and began to hurt. "NO, LISTEN! YOU CAN'T STO…."

But Nikkole silenced Ella with a finger to her lips.

"No, baby girl, you listen to me," Nikkole told Ella as she forced Ella to turn around and look at her again.

To Ella, she felt even smaller than she usually did around Nikkole.

"You are not a bad girl," Nikkole told Ella. "And I will never let anything bad happen to my baby girl. Do you understand?"

"Bwut I am! I am a bad girl," Ella mumbled past Nikkole's finger on her lips.

“No, you are not,” Nikkole told Ella. "That girl is gone. You are not Ella, the bad girl. You are Ellan. My beautiful princess little girl that I love with all my heart!"

"Bwut, noo, I," Ella tried to say back, but Nikkole cut her off.

"Do you not want to be my little girl?" Nikkole asked Ella. "Are you going to leave me alone again?"

"Noo, I, I," Ella said as she began tearing up again. Each word Nikkole spoke felt like Ella was being stabbed over and over!

"Do you not want to stay? Do you want to leave Mommy?" Nikkole asked as Ella shook her head and somehow untangled herself from Nikkole just to jump on top of Nikkole

Nikkole was on her back, with Ella hugging her as tight as she could as she balled.

"MOOOW! I-I w-want t-to be m-m-mommy's l-little girl!" Ella sobbed. "I s-sowry Mommy! I sowry, Mommy!"

Nikkole embraced Ella once more, and she too began to cry as she kissed her baby's head and told her everything would be alright. Mommy was going to make everything alright.

Their tears fell like the rain outside.

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The mother and daughter hadn't moved. Ella remained on top of Nikkole. Her head lay on Nikkole's breasts as she listened to the beat of Nikkole's heart and the breath in her lungs. While Nikkole patted Ella's back and mushy diaper. 

Usually, Ella would have been devastated to be in another messy diaper, but at this moment, she just wanted to continue to hug her momma and never let go. But eventually, the stench became too much for Nikkole, and she had to change her baby's diaper.

Having Ella roll over, Nikkole had her stay on the bed while she went to grab the diaper. When Nikkole returned, she held a regular diaper and changing supplies. But Ella didn't mind. She could wear her trainers another day. Right now, she just wanted Mommy to take care of her.

And mommy Nikkole didn't disappoint as she skillfully began changing the baby's diaper. Getting her baby nice and clean and balling up the used diaper nice and tight to prevent leaks. 

Before Nikkole could walk away, Ella raised her arms towards Nikkole, like a baby wanting to be picked up and just held. Mommy didn't hesitate to pick up her baby girl and carry her downstairs. All while Ella held on tightly.

As they distended, the sounds of faraway thunder could be faintly heard.

When they entered the kitchen, Ella was sat on the counter while Nikkole went to work on a quick breakfast, only stopping to give Ella a bottle of Prea formula. 

Once again, Ella didn't fight back at the decision and raised the nipple to her mouth to suck on the worm milk while watching Nikkole make their breakfast.

It was just simple oatmeal, but Nikkole made a lot to feed her baby. She knew Ella was probably starving after throwing up her food last night and would make sure her baby wasn't hungry.

The water on the stove was just about boiled when the lights suddenly went out.

Ella let out a small shrike at the sudden darkness, but Nikkole remained calm and took out her phone as a light source. 

"It's okay, Ella. I think the storm knocked out the power," Nikkole told her as she went to a cupboard and pulled out a few candles to light up the dark room.

Once there was a bit more light, Nikkole saw Ella dropped her bottle on the floor, so Nikkole bent down and picked it up for her, then gave it back just before her phone rang.

"Hello?" Nikkole asked as she answered.

"Hey Nikkole, it's Rose." Nikkole's friend responded.

"Hi, how are you? You affected by the storm, too?" Nikkole asked.

"Ya, the power knocked out ⅔ of the town. I got called into the hospital last night after helping you. Thankfully, backup generators kicked in, so it's not so bad at the hospital." Rose replied.

"That's good," Nikkole told her.

Last night, after Nikkole called Rose, Rose immediately drove back after dropping her son off.

After looking over the shoulder and bandaging it better, Rose did her best to comfort Nikkole after what had happened. Even making a suggestion on what they should do with Ella.

Rose tried to suggest taking Ella to a Preas care facility. One that specializes in helping Preas with mental and emotional problems. But Nikkole had to refuse.

As much as she wanted what was best for her baby girl, she couldn't risk putting Ella through anything that might put her at risk of exposing who she was.

Things would get worse if anyone were to find out that she was a Metztli.

Rose didn't like that idea but respected her friend's wishes.

"Ya, but the school is without power, so they canceled classes for today," Rose told Nikkole. "I've already called and told Nathan, and thankfully, we have power on our side of town."

"That's lucky," Nikkole replied.

"Ya, so if you want, you two can hang out at my place so you are not bored in the dark," Rose suggested.

"That actually sounds fantastic. The power went off just before I could make breakfast. I'll make Nathan something when I get there." Nikkole says as she decides to bring over her eggs to make something.

"Great! I'll let Nathan know his babysitter will be there soon!" Rose joked.

Nikkole lagged a bit before the two hung up.

"Come on, baby girl, we're going to see Nathan," Nikkole told Ella, who smiled at the news.

So, after packing a diaper bag and getting Ella changed into a new outfit, Nikkole got ready by grabbing her own clothes.

While Ella waited at the door, Nikkole returned to the kitchen to pack a few things for breakfast before noticing the papers still on the kitchen table. Nikkole grabbed them and put them into her purse before going back to Ella, and the two hurried to the car as the rain poured down on them.

The drive was short, and within 15 minutes, they were at Rose's house.

Nikkole knocked, and after a minute, the door opened to a shirtless Nathan who looked like he had just woken up.

"Hi, Aunt Nikkole; hi, Ella," Nathan yawned as he moved out of the way for them to enter.

"Our power is out, and your mom told us we could come over so we didn't have to be in the dark," Nikkole told Nathan as he stretched. Ella had to avert her gaze and wasn't sure if she should be looking at him.

"Ya, she told me." he yawned again. "Give me a moment to get dressed. I'll be right back."

As he returned to his bedroom, Nikkole set the diaper bag down while Ella looked around Rose's home.

It was a lovely small 2-bedroom house that was just the right size for their family.

All over the house were stepping stools, tools for longer reach, and other stuff for Preas to have a seemingly everyday life.

"Nathan, why don't you show Ella your room while I make breakfast!" Nikkole called out her suggeston.

"Sure, it's over here!" Nathan shouted back. 

Ella was a little nervous, but Nikkole nudged her to go to the boy's room.

Nathan's room was a slight mess, just like any teen's room, with clothes on the floor that Nathan quickly picked up now that guests were in the house. 

The room had a small bed and a small TV in front of it.
A large shelf filled with books, DVDs, and games covered one of his walls. Along with little toy figures on top of the shelves.

Ella was a little stunned by Nathans's collection.

By looking at him, you would expect some type of goth or punk theme to the room, but everything seemed normal. Some would even say it is childish.

What late teen had a collection of children's books like Percy Jackson? Or has box sets of Ben 10? She could almost understand the video games but was expecting primarily shooters or sports games. Not Legend of Zelda or Pokemon. And what was with the toys on the self?

"See anything interesting?" Nathan asked after starting up his room.

"N-no, it's just surprising," Ella commented.
"What is?" he asked curiously.

"W-well, most of this is kid's stuff. And you're not a kid." Ella tells him.

Nathan nods a moment when he hears that and looks at his collection.

"But you look like a kid and use a diaper. Does that make you a baby?" Nathan asked as Ella Blushed and got a little mad. 

"That's different!" Ella responds.

"Is it?" Nathan asked as he took a seat on his bed. "Just because I like and collect something, doesn't mean im a kid. Just like how, despite needing a diaper, you aren't really a baby."

Ella was about to respond but couldn't think of a response.

"When you get a bit older, you might miss some of the simple pleasures of childhood," Nathan tells Ella. Still unaware she was actually older than him.

Ella looked back at the collections and tried to wrap her head around what Nathan told her.

"Well, enough of that. Have you ever played Ninja Kart racing on the Switch?" Nathan asked as he went over to his TV and turned it on before handing a controller to Ella.

Nikkole could hear the kids Laughing and playing around, which made Nikkole happy hearing those familiar sounds she missed.

It felt like it was only yesterday that Nikkole brought Alex to play.

Nikkole quickly got breakfast made for the kids before she went to check on them. She smiled as she took a picture with her phone of Ella sitting on Nathan's lap, steering a game controller while looking so happy as she won the game.

"kids, breakfast," Nikkole told them as the two got up, went to the table to eat, and returned to their game.

The rest of the day was easy.

Nikkole had nothing to do today but relax while the kids played in Nathan's room.

So, taking her chance, Nikkole turned on Rose's TV and sat on her couch.

As Nikkole watched the TV, the last few days of running around, the stress, and waking up early hit Nikkole like a ton of rocks, and she soon fell asleep on the couch,

A few hours later, Nikkole slowly woke up and yawned as she felt something on her.

She looked down to see she was covered with a blanket, and Ella was sound asleep with her head resting on Nikkole's Lap. 

The TV was turned off, but Nikkole heard some faint noise from the other room.

Nikkole gently lifted Ella's head and used the blanket she had to make Ella a pillow before going to check on the nose.

Nikkole walked past the kitchen and saw that the bread and peanut butter were left on the counter.

As Nikkole approached the nose, she looked into Nathan's room and saw him playing a video game.

"How are you doing?" Nikkole asked and made Nathan jump in surprise.

"Oh, hi, Aunt Nikkole. Did I wake you?" Nathan asked as he gave Nikkole.

"No, sweety, I just woke up," Nikkole told the teen. "How long was I asleep?"

"Probably 4 or 5 hours," Nathan told her. "Ellan and I made lunch not too long ago before Ellan saw you asleep and put a blanket on you."

Nikkole turned and looked down the hallway at the sleeping little girl and smiled.

"Also, she used her diaper earlier," Nathan told Nikkole.

"Oh dear, she must have been in that diaper for hours," she comments, hoping there won't be a rash.

"I offered to change her, but she got embarrassed and turned it down," Nathan told Nikkole, much to her surprise. 

"You offered?"

"I've changed Mom's diapers plenty of times," Nathen explains casually. "Nothing I haven't seen before."

Nathen went back to playing his game as if nothing happened.

Nikkole wanted to tell him that changing a non-family member's diaper wasn't normal and that he shouldn't change their diapers. But stopped herself when she remembered what she had done just a few nights ago. At least Nathan offered…

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It wasn't long before Ella was waking up while in the middle of her diaper change. That was a strange experience for her, but one she knew she would need to get used to. 

With her diaper now clean and Nikkole awake again, Ella went back to play more games with Nathan while Nikkole began making dinner.

Once dinner was over, Nathan volunteered to clean the kitchen while Nikkole or Ella took a shower. An offer they took up as Ella went in first.

"Thanks for cleaning up," Nikkole says while helping. 

"No problem. Thanks for the food." Nathan responded as he washed the dishes. 

Once Ella was done, Nikkole took her shower after getting Ella into a new diaper and pajamas. When she got out, it was Nathans's turn.

While he was in the shower, Nikkole called Ella over and pulled out the documents she had.

"I want to ask you one more time. Are you sure you want to do this?" Nikkole asked as Ella looked at the papers.

Ella only had a brief moment of hesitation before she signed the papers.

With each paper she signed, she felt a heavy weight lift off her.

She signed away her age and stopped being an adult. She was now 14

She signed away her independence by making Nikkole her guardian. Her new mommy.

And she signed away her past by changing her name. Ella Metztli had now died.

But on this day, someone new was born. A little girl who needed someone to take care of her. A little girl who wore diapers had a stutter and was easily upset after every dark thing that had happened to her.

And now she had someone to take care of her. To change her diapers no matter what was inside. Who loved her stutter and would love and comfort Ellan whenever she was upset.

For the first time in so long, Ella didn't care about anything. She was no longer a crook, she was no longer a Metztl, and she was no longer an adult.

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  • PinkTheDinosaur changed the title to Tinny Intruder ch14 (formerly The little thief) (9-23-23)

chapter 14

 

Despite it only being 9 p.m., Nathan went to bed. With the teen in bed, Nikkole picked up Ella and brought her into Rose's room.

Rose's room was different from Nathans's. The room's farnichar was smaller for Rose's smaller size and was nice and clean.

On the other side of the room was a nice-sized crib with a nightstand beside it, diapers inside, and a few picture frames of Rose's family.

Nikkole walked over to Rose's crib, and Ella noticed it was slightly different from hers. It had laches on the inside for easy use.

"Why does she have a crib?" Ella asked.

"Because sweetie, Rose tosses and turns in her sleep," Nikkole told her. "It's one of the possible side effects of having Preas."

"Oh, ya," Ella said as she looked around.

She could see the diapers and the step stools everywhere. It was still impressive that someone like her could be a doctor but still be treated like a baby in her own home by using diapers and a crib.

"She knows her limits," Nikkole said as she laid out a changing mat on Rose's bed before setting Ella on it. "But Rose decided she didn't want those to limit her on what she can do with her life."

Nikkole removed Ella's diaper and got her baby cleaned.

"And you can do that too," Nikkole told her baby as she lifted Ella's butt and slid a new fluffy diaper under her bottom. "Just because you have Preas, just because you're mommy's baby girl, you can still do whatever you want. And mommy will be there to help you."

Just hearing that made Ella smile as the diaper was taped shut.

"Ok, baby girl, it's time to go to sleep," Nikkole said as she pulled back a blanket from Rose's crib for Ella to crawl under.

Ella did as she was told and got into bed.

"Why do I have to sleep in Rose's crib?" Ella asked.

"The couch wouldn't fit both of us comfortably." Nikkole told Ella as she kissed Ella’s head. "Now, be good and get some sleep."

With both kids lying down and going to sleep, it was time for Nikkole to rest. She made a bed on the couch and let out a happy sigh. She closed her eyes and soon drifted off to sleep herself.

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Nikkole awoke with a startle as the sound of a shower was turned on. She quickly looked around the dark living room.

As she got off the couch and stretched, she remembered that Nathan still had school and was probably taking a morning shower to prepare for it.

Checking the time, it was 7:08 a.m. At least Nikkole wasn't woken up early again.

Nikkole checked on her baby girl, who was still asleep in Rose's crib, not even noticing the sound of the shower going.

After gently closing the door, Nikkole entered the kitchen and brewed coffee.

As soon as the coffee was ready, so was Nathan, who was finished with his shower and was already dressed for school.

"Morning Nathan, sleep well?" Nikkole asked.

"Ya," Nathan said as he yawned and grabbed some coffee and bread to toss in the toaster.

Nikkole was going to offer to make breakfast when she heard the door open and shut.

Both went to see who it was and saw a very tired Rose in the hallway.

Without saying a word, Rose dropped her bag, jacket, and keys to the floor and started walking towards Nathan with her arms raised up high like a zombie. Or like a toddler wanting to be picked up.

Nathan smiled as he picked his tired mom up with ease. He might have looked scrawny to most, but he was surprisingly strong for a boy his size. 

"Thank you, baby boy…" Rose said as she started zoning in and out from exhaustion.

"One sec, Aunt Nikkole, let me help Mom get ready for bed," Nathan told Nikkole.

Nikkole smiled as she remembered having to do something similar with Rose years ago. She would come home late, Rose would sometimes pass out on the doorway floor, and Nikkole would have to take care of her.

Now, Nathan was the one who was helping take care of his mother. Nathan knew just how much his mom worked and how hard. So, during days like this, when his mom pulled a very long shift, Nathan was always there to ensure she was okay. It's why he went to bed early.

Nathan started with a diaper change and light cleaning.

He took his mom into the bathroom and sat her down on a changing table made for her. At that moment, Rose was out as Nathan pulled her pants off and pulled off his mom's diaper protector.

After removing the diaper and cleaning the pee, Nathan took a warm washcloth and washed his mom's legs and arms. It wasn't a nice shower, but getting all the sweat and dirt off from a long workday was much nicer before being put into a fresh diaper and pajamas.

After a few hours of sleep, Rose will take a shower properly.

As Nathan finished getting his mom ready, he picked her up and carried her into the kitchen, wearing her hospital shirt and diaper.

"OK, Mom, try to eat something before going to sleep," Nathan told her as he sat her at the table.

"Not so fast, young man." Nikkole said as she turned from the stove, "I'm almost done with some eggs. You're going to have some too."

"Sorry, but I need to get to school," Nathan told Nikkole.

"It takes you 20 minutes to walk to school," Rose said as she looked up at her son sleepily. "You have time for Aunt Nikkole's eggs."

"But mom!" Nathan said stubbornly.

Rose let out a yawn.

"Butt. Down. Now. or it goes over my knee," Rose told him as seriously as she could in her sleepy state.

Nathan reluctantly sat at the table, again rolling his eyes at the threat.

"That's my good boy," Rose said happily as she reached over the table to give Nathans's hand a loving pat.

Nikkole brought over 2 plates of eggs and let the two eat while she got Ella.

A few minutes later, Nikkole sat down with a sleepy Ella, who had just changed her diaper.

As soon as Nathan was done eating, he grabbed his sweater and backpack.

"Love you, Mom," Nathan called out to his mother.

"And I love you more!" Rose said with a large, sleepy smile. Making Ella giggle a little.

The door slammed shut as Nathan ran to school.

"Such a good boy," Nikkole said as she gave Ella a bottle. "You stay here for a moment while I help Rose."

Nikkole helped Rose up and helped her walk to the bedroom.

"Sorry, it's unmade. Ella was sleeping here," Nikkole told her friend as they got to the crib.

"Aw, it's no problem," Rose said as she covered up. "It's still nice and warm with her body heat."

"Well, we should probably be going soon. Have a nice rest. You deserve it." Nikkole told her friend as she was about to leave the room.

Nikkole turned off the lights as she gently closed the door.

Returning to the kitchen, Ella had just finished her bottle.

"Come on, Ella, let's go home," Nikkole told her.

"Ok, mommy," Ella responded.

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After getting home, things were standard and straightforward.

Ella was in the living room playing and watching TV while Nikkole was busy doing her own thing upstairs.

That night, after dinner, Nikkole and Ella sat on the couch to watch a few hours of TV before bed.

But as Nikkole watched the TV, she noticed something. A single ad that stuck within her mind as she watched it.

It was an ad about college and stuff like that.

The ad itself didn't mean anything to Nikkole, but did get her thinking about what she should do with Ella.

Should Ella go to school? She's 14 now and technically should be in school. 

But as Nikkole looked down at her baby girl leaning on her, something else came to mind.

From the time Nikkole met Ella, one thing always stood out: Ella's not sociable.

Ever since she was little, they locked her inside when the Metztlis learned she was a Preas. Away from the real world. Away from interacting with other people and only knowing what they want her to know. She was worthless, and all Preass were brats who couldn't do anything.

When she ran away, it wasn't surprising she would run into someone like Bob and work for him. Not knowing any better and making her life even worse.

Just being around very few people. They kept her down and unable to see what the rest of the world was like.

Like meeting Rose and Nathan. Sampson or the Preas cashier boy(guy?). Showing Ella that just because she has Preas, not everything is terrible.

Maybe going to an actual school and being around kids (technically) her own age might be good for Ella.

But would sticking her into a school like that be good for her?

She hasn't attended school in years and hasn't been homeschooled for about five years. And starting school after it just started might be a bit of a rush. 

As Nikkole thought all this, Ella grew sleepy and started nodding off. Not knowing her diaper was growing warm and damp.

When Nikkole noticed this, she smiled at her baby, 

Nikkole momentarily played with Ella's hair before picking her up and carrying her upstairs.

"I think going to a school will be good for you," Nikkole said with a smile to the sleeping Ella.

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their is one more chapter to go, but before i finish it, their is a 3 part spin off i want to finish first as it loosely ties in to the last chapter and the sequel. please chack out How a business woman releases her stress. written by my friend Redwelch. ^w^

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  • PinkTheDinosaur changed the title to Tinny Intruder ch15 book 1 end (9-24-23)

chapter 15

 

It's been a week since the storm, and things have finally settled down for Ella and Nikkole.

After sending the paperwork, Nikkole received Ella's new birth certificate and adoption papers. Officially making Ellan her 14-year-old daughter.

Nikkole was also delighted to see Ella has finally gained 4 pounds and is starting to look significantly healthier.

But for that upside, there was a downside. Because of the damage Ella did to her body for years, she had problems retaining her poop.

At first, it was just a few messy nighttime accidents. But recently, Ella just barely feels the need to go, and before she can make it 10 feet, she releases herself.

Ella knows it's her fault, but that doesn't mean she won't still cry to her mommy to change her messy diaper.

Ella also has yet to be allowed into the nursery since the incident. Ella has tried to ask why, but Nikkole won't tell her. Telling her that she's working on something in there. Something she should have done a long time ago.

But Ella didn't mind too much. She didn't see herself staying in there for long periods anyway, and besides, she liked sleeping with her mommy.

Nikkole also took a day to clean up the playroom thoroughly.
Washing and vacuuming all the dust off the stuffed toys,
Cleaning the carpets, throwing away the old art supplies, and replacing them.

And also replacing some of the old baby supplies on the changing table in the room.

At first, Ella wasn't too sure what she wanted to do in that room. Part of her was still an adult, after all. But after a few minutes of playing with one of the stuffed toys, she lost herself and started playing with them all for a few hours. Growing attached to one in particular.

A light pink stuffed cat toy, Ella started calling prissy. Nikkole could only smile as Ella was getting attached to her new toy. Nikkole remembered how Alex used to get attached to her stuffed panda, Spot.

But today, Nikkole had something special she had to get done. Something part of her dreaded doing for a long time. But she needed to do it.

So, that's how Nikkole and Ella drove out of town and into a larger city to shop.

Nikkole had one item in mind she needed to get but decided to pick up a few extra things she needed for Ella.

The drive wasn't long, but Ella was fast asleep when they got to the mall.

"Ella, wake up, sweety," Nikkole said as she gently shook Ella awake.

Ella groaned as she rubbed her eyes and noticed they were at the mall.

Nikkole unbuckled the little girl and helped her out of the car before having her lie on the seat. She lifted Ella's dress, removed the wet diaper she was wearing, and cleaned her up.

But instead of another diaper, Nikkole gave Ella her training panties. They weren't as protective as her regular diapers, but Ella still felt much better with them in public over her thicker diapers.

After wearing regular diapers for a while now, Ella started to feel a lot better about wearing regular diapers at home. She no longer minds the bulk so much and, at times, is thankful to have been wearing them.

They also became weirdly comforting in a way. She felt like she had a safety pillow on at all times. But old fears die hard, as Ella still didn't want to wear them outside where people might see them.

With her training panties on, Ella was given some shorts to go over them before jumping out of the car and taking her mommy's hand to go inside.

One of their first stops was at a Prea's clothing store, where Nikkole and Ella picked out a few extra outfits to go into her slowly growing wardrobe.

Next was a look at some furniture. But Ella grew bored with this and just pulled out her switch and got sucked into her game. Not noticing what Mommy was looking at.

Ella was so engrossed with the game that she didn't notice her tummy turning until the realization that she needed to poop finally hit her!

Ella shot up in the cart and looked at Nikkole.

Nikkole was signing a paper when Ella shot up and caught her attention.

"Mommy, mommy, mommy! I got to go!" Ella said as her face turned crimson as she tried her hardest to resist going.

"Oh no," Nikkole said before turning back to a clerk who was helping her. "I'll be right back."

Nikkole started speed walking with the cart and was looking for a bathroom while Ella bounced up and down while they walked.

But that proved too much as when they turned a corner, the sudden movement forced Ella to spread her legs slightly, and she lost control.

Ella's eyes widened as tears formed as she looked up at her mommy. The shorts under her dress began to bulge outward as Ella's body forced the mess out. But the shorts were too tight, and the mess was forced to spread.

Ella tried to hold back her emotions. Remember that this happened to all Preass. that she wasn't a baby. But her face still scrunched up as she let out a high-pitched squeal as tears ran down her face.

Nikkole stopped the cart, picked Ella up, and let the little girl cry into her mommy's shoulder while Nikkole pushed the cart with one hand as she continued to look for a bathroom.

Ella was still sniveling as they entered the closest restroom. But someone was already inside the bigger stall with the large Preas changing station.

"Zoey, I thought I told you to tell me when you go." an older woman said in the stall.

"S-sorry. I got distracted." a younger voice replied. "I was looking at a table to replace the one at Danny's."

"I swear, where would you be if you didn't have someone like me to take care of you." the older voice asked.

"I would still be able to handle things on my...EEP!" the younger voice tried to reply.

"Says the little sweetheart getting her but whipped." the older replied. No doubt, causing the younger person to start blushing.

A few moments later, a tall woman with red hair and a little girl wearing a dirty sundress came out of the stall.

"Come on Zoey, we still need to get you a new dress." the woman said as she took the little girl's hand.

"y-yes, mommy," Zoey said with embarrassment, then looked up.

Zoey was blushing even more as she saw Nikkole and Ella. The moment the two Preases met eyes, However, they both looked away as Zoey and the woman walked out of the bathroom.

Nikkole wasted no time taking her little girl into the stall and placing her on the large changing station for Preas.

It was like a table with little steps for Preass to walk up and make changing themselves much more manageable.

After carefully removing Ella's pants, Nikkole removed the messy training panties and changed her baby girl.

"pew! Someone made a big stinky." Nikkole said playfully but made Ella blush more and try to hide her face with her shirt.

Once Ella was cleaned up, Nikkole tossed the dirty diaper into a trash bin and helped Ella into new training panties before helping her put her pants back on. Then, they washed their hands.

"Mommy just needs to finish getting one last thing before we go home," Nikkole told her.

"O-ok," Ella said with a slight smile as she finally calmed down now that she was in a clean diaper.

Nikkole went back to finish the paperwork she was working on before the two of them left to get what Nikkole needed.

As they were walking through the almost empty early-morning mall. They were passing an indoor play area near where Nikkole needed to get what she needed, and she also noticed a little bakery.

A few moments later, Nikkole sat Ella in the play area at a little table with a doughnut.

"Be a good girl for me for just a moment while momma gets what she needs," Nikkole said with a smile as she walked 10 feet to the store while Ella happily took a bite of her delicious pastry.

Two women are walking out of a music store on the other side of the area.

"Why did we have to come here, of all places, to purchase a new string." Nia Metztli asked, annoyed that she and her help had to come to a place she deemed under someone of her status.

"This was the closest store that did Violin repairs on such short notice, Madam Nia," Cathy said while holding the newly repaired violin.

"Those idiots should have already had a spare for me before we arrived," Nia complained.

"Madam, it's a charity venue, and you were a last-minute addition. They didn't know…" Cathy tried to explain but was cut off.

"It doesn't matter. Let's just get out of here and get back to it before I get sick just being here." Nia told Cathy.

"Yes, Madam, but could I be excused for just a moment? I've had 3 cups of coffee and could really use a restroom." Cathy told her.

"Fine, just hurry," Nia told her as she grew even more annoyed.

By this time, a few more people were starting to show up, and a few kids had entered the play area.

Nia did her best to ignore everything as she stared at her phone and waited for Cathy to return.

That's when Nia heard a little shriek. It wasn't different from the others she heard from the brats around her, but this one sounded odd. Like she had heard it before...

As she looked up, she saw two kids in the play area on the ground next to a little table. A boy and a girl. The little boy apologized to the girl as the girl picked up a half-eaten doughnut off the ground.

The two said something to each other before the boy ran off to play. The girl turned and faced Nia as she walked over to some trash cans and threw away the dirty, half-eaten pastry. Then, the girl looked up at Nia. A look of terror flashed on her face.

"Ella?" Nia said, almost shocked.

The two stared at each other for what felt unending when Ella suddenly took off running!

So much was spinning in Ella's mind as she tried to remember which stoor Nikkole entered. Taking a quick glance back, she could see Nia was now running around the large play area on her way to get Ella!

Blood pumping, mind racing, Ella didn't know what to do! She wanted to yell for Mommy. To have Nikkole save her from her evil sister. But her voice didn't work. So she ran into the nearest stoor she could in hopes of hiding.

It was a clothing stoor with rows and rows of clothing. With only one employee at the front counter listening to music and not paying attention.

Ella did her best to make it to the back of the store and hide behind some of the clothing. Her heart pounded in her ear as she hoped and prayed that her sister would not find her.

The clothes hiding her, however, were sadly ripped away as Ella stared up at the evil smile on her older sister's face.

Ella felt as though her throat swelled up as she could not make a single sound, even as Nia grabbed Ella's arm and dragged her into the closest bathroom a few feet away.

No one was inside, which was perfect for Nia as she picked Ella up and pushed her into the wall with both arms.

"Well, it's been a long time, hasn't it, baby sister," Nia said as that evil smile creped back on her face. "I heard you're still being a diaper shiting brat for some old woman now. Still need an actual adult to take care of you?"

Ella was too scared to say anything back. If she hadn't just pooped earlier, she was sure she would have been shiting herself now.

"But what should I have expected? Your whole life, you've been nothing but a burden on everyone. Never growing up and forcing the whole family to care for the little baby shit basket." Nia told her.

“N-n-no, t-th- thats…” Ella choked out.

"Daddy especially tried to give you every chance to grow up, to be a proper family member. But you didn't like that, did you? You are much happier being the pampered little baby while the rest of us work hard." Nia told Ella in an over-dramatized tone. "That's why when you were forced to grow up, you hit my beautiful face and ran away. I still have that scar."

Nia let go of one of Ella's arms and showed Ella the nasty scar barely hidden behind her hair.

"What do you have to say for yourself?" Nia asked.

"Y-y-you d-d-deserved it," Ella told Nia.

Nia grits her teeth as she digs her nails into Ella's arm.

"What did you say?" Nia asked.

"Y-you d-deserved it!" Ella said a bit louder and a bit braver.

"You ungrateful little brat!" Nia said as she began digging her nails into Ella's arms, making Ella cry in pain.

Pain. Pain. Pain.

Why did she have to suffer so much pain from her family? Didn't she suffer enough? She ran away just to escape the pain, but it kept forcing its way back! It should have been over. She shouldn't have to deal with her bloody family anymore! She has a new mommy. A better family!

As thoughts of her mommy came to Ella's mind, something snapped.

Ella lifted her legs, pressed her feet onto Nia's chest, and pushed with all her might. This made Nia stumble back and drop Ella on her butt hard. But Ella didn't care.

"IM DONE!" Ella screamed. "You and our parents are the fucking worst! Treating me like shit all because I have Preas! Making me feel like it was my fault! I've nearly killed myself so many times because of how fucked up my head is because of you!"

Ella got up, years worth of anger spewing out of her face as she screamed at her sister.

"I might have Preas, but it's because of you that I fucked up my body to the point that I really need my diapers! And if it meant getting away from you, I would gladly hit you in the head again! Your piece of shit cunt!"

Ella stood there, panting after letting out a lot of the pent-up anger she held inside her for so long.

But Nia wasn't fazed by it at all as she stood up. Towering above Ella.

"Looks like I need to deal with that potty mouth of yours," Nia said as she grabbed Ella again. "And I think we're in the perfect place to do just that. Permanently."

Ella was yanked over to a toilet as Nia grabbed her hair and pushed her head towards the toilet!

Ella tried to scream but was muffled by Nia's hand.

"You always wanted to use the toilet. Let's see your love for it now," Nia said as she began to push harder.

Ella frantically did everything she could to stop Eve, but slowly, her head was being pushed closer and closer to the toilet!
Ella's face was close to the water when her head was suddenly yanked back! Both she and Nia spun around to see Cathy holding Nia's arm, and looked as if she could have killed Nia right then and there.

"Release the child now, Mis. Metztli." Cathy told Nia. Her eyes stared daggers into Nia's.

"C-Cathy?" Ella said in shock.

"Release me!" Nia demanded, but Cathy's grip just tightened.

"I won't repeat it, Mis.Metztli. Release that child now."

"She is my sister! And I will punish her how I see fit!" Nia yelled.

"Your sister is dead. She has been for years. Now, unhand that child before I contact your mother."

Nia and Cathy stared into each other's eyes before Nia released Ella. Cathy lifted Nia up as the two glared at each other for a moment longer, and then Nia turned to leave. She slammed the bathroom door on her way out.

"C-Ca…" Ella started to say but was cut off.

"I'm sorry about that, sweetie. I hope she didn't hurt you," Cathy said as she crouched down and gave Ella a smile.

"Cathy I…"

"I'm sure your mommy is getting worried about you. We should probably go find her." Cathy interrupted again.

"Please Cathy…." but Cathy touched her lips and hushed her.

"You remind me so much of the little girl I helped take care of. Sadly, she was so mistreated that she died before I could save her. I felt so guilty for that." Cathy told Ella as a single tear fell down her face. "I'm just glad I got to save you, at least. Now, can you tell me your name, sweety, and we can go find your mommy."

Ella also began to tear up but understood what Cathy was trying to tell her. Ella is dead. Her Ella is gone. And as much as Cathy would love to have Ella back in her life, it would be better if Ella Metztli stayed dead for good.

"E-Ellan," Ella told Cathy as a tear also streaked down her face.

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Outside, holding a vase of flowers, Nikkole was having a mini panic attack! Her head snapped back and forth as she searched for her little girl.

Should she call mall security?! The police?! The FBI?!

"MOMMY!" Ella yelled and made Nikkole spin around to see Ella holding an older woman's hand and walking toward her.

A sense of relief washed over Nikkole after seeing Ella and noticing who the older woman was.

"It is nice to see you again, Miss. I believe this young lady belongs to you." Cathy said as she stopped a few feet from Nikkole and released Ella's hand.

Ella rushed over and hugged her mom.

"Ella, where did you run off to? And why is Cathy here?" Nikkole asked.

"That might be a better story outside of public eyes," Cathy told Nikkole, who was now very confused. "Just be assured it will not happen ever again. Now I must take my leave."

Nikkole was about to stop her and try to ask more, but Ella sprinted over to Cathy and quickly hugged her. Surprising both women for a moment.

"Thank you," Ella told Cathy.

"You welcome, honey," Cathy told Ella with a slight smile and gave her head a light pat. "You're a good girl."

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As Nikkole drove the car, she was upset by what had happened after Ella finally told her. And was just grateful Cathy was there to save her baby. But if she ever saw that Metztli bitch…

"You ok, mommy?" Ella asked from the car seat in the back.

"Yes, sweety. Just a little upset, but nothing to be worried about." Nikkole told her

"Ok," Ella said as she looked out the window. "Where are we going?"

"I need to go see someone, sweety. And I want to introduce you as well." Nikkole told Ella.

Ella was a little confused until she saw out the window where they were going and kept quiet. This wasn't the right place for her to speak at the moment.

It was a slow drive to where they needed to go. And as they got closer, part of Ella felt uneasy.

When they reached their spot, Nikkole parked and got out. Helping Ella out as well before grabbing the vase of flowers and following the trail.

About 30 feet from the car, Nikkole stopped and looked down at the tiny headstone in the graveyard.

"Hello, darling. Mommy brought you some flowers." Nikkole said as she bent down and placed the flowers on the grave.

Ella stood by awkwardly as she looked down at the stone.

Alex -----.
20XX-20XX
Loving little girl lost too soon.

"Alex, I want you to meet someone," Nikkole said as she looked over to Ella. "This is Ella. She's going to be staying with me for a while."

"H-hello," Ella said nervously to the gravestone. "I- im Ella. Th-thank you for letting me stay."

There was a long, quiet moment as they looked at the gravestone.

"Ella?" Nikkole said without looking at her. "Could you be a big girl and go back to the car? Mommy needs a moment alone."

Ella nodded. Knowing she needed this moment for herself, she returned to the car. Nikkole waited until she heard the car door open and then close.

Then, the sobs escaped.

Staring at the grave made Nikkole relive those last few moments over and over. Nikkole was just getting off work and not feeling like cooking that night, and Alex wanted pizza.

It was supposed to be just a simple car ride. Nothing more. Halfway home, someone ran a red light and smashed into the passenger side.

And like that, Alex was gone.

Losing her was nearly all-consuming. Some days, Nikkole couldn't get out of bed. Others had her holding a kitchen knife in her hand for a long time.

All she wanted was her baby back in her arms. It wasn't fair.

But Nikkole got through it. Thanks to her friends and early retirement. But nothing could fill that hole in her heart. The same one that led her to spend so much time in an empty nursery.

That is until a tinny intruder broke into her home and stole her heart.

"I miss you, Alex. I miss you so much." Nikkole told the grave. "Please don't be mad at momma. Ella could never replace you, but she needs a mamma too."

Taking a deep breath and wiping away some of the tears.

"She might not look like it now, but she was in so much pain when I found her. She needed a momma to help her. Someone who could care for and love her for who she really is." Nikkole said as she thought of all the hassles she went through with Ella, turning her into the lovely little girl she is now. "I've been trying to hold onto the past far too tightly, and now, Mamma has to finally move on. Ella needs me, just like you did. And momma needs her. So please, look after momma and your little sister. I love you, baby girl."

As Nikkole stood up, it felt like a weight had finally been taken off her shoulders. She couldn't have her baby girl back, but she needed to look after a baby that needed her far more.

As Nikkole looked into the car, she saw Ella holding her stuffed kitty close to her chest. Ella looked back and gave her mama a small, reassuring smile. Nikkole got into the car and took one last look at the grave before giving it a smile.

"I love you, baby girl," Nikkole whispered.

"I love you, mommy," Ella whispered back.

Nikkole's smile grew, and she took that as a good sign as she started the car and drove home.

A little brown-haired girl sitting on the grave smiled back as she watched the car drive away. She had a big smile, knowing she didn't have to worry about her mama anymore. 


*************************** book 1 end.****************

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Tinny Intruder 2 (Beta outline.)

This was a rough draft for the planned “the little thief” sequel. Dew to one controlling asshole, i decided to step away from the project and distance myself from them. 

I kept the story up dew to it being my work and at the time best story. But i refused to do anything more with TLT.

But a few years after i left the project and repeated over and over i didn't want anything to do with it, that same asshole came back and doesn't know what “fuck off” and block means. 

Using other accounts, they said some things to piss me off and i realized i can be petty asshole back. Dew to TLT only using 20% of the role play the story was based on, i removed that 20% and remade the story as Tinny Intruder.

Thankfully this outline has nothing to do with that asshole and i can now reuse it and continue my story by filling in the unfinished storylines and plot holes the original left. 

I dont plan on working on this outline right away, as i have 3 other stories i need to finish first. But once one of them is done, i will be working on this story. But so that you dont have to wait so long for a sequel, here is the planned outline of the session to tide you over.

And for the asshole that is probably reading this and still has the original outline, i no longer give anyone permission to use my work. You had years to find someone to start it, but didnt. So now you have lost out. Good luck to you on finding someone to finish your story now. ^w^


Tinny intruder: Metztli (temporary title for the story.)

 
The story will start in a courtroom. A lawer will be listing a number of charges against Ella before a lawyer puts her on stand to tell the gudge and the jury everything that had lead up to the burning down of Zoandra’s house. The proper story will then begin with an epilogue and Recapping significant points. The first chapter ends with Nikkole revealing to Ella what she had planned for Alex’s old room.

Alex’s old nursary was completely taken apart. It was time to move on. But instead of just giving Ella a hand-me-down room, Nikkole decided to convert it into a new office space while converting her old office space into Ella’s nursery. one personalized for her. 

**************

Jump eight months, and things have changed a lot.


Ella has fully become comfortable with her new lease on life. Nikkole is also happy to have a baby girl around. But sadly, the fun, happy times at home will have to change.

Not only would Ella be starting high school all over again, but Nikkole would be coming out of retirement to work a desk job at the police station. With a new baby around, the budget was getting a little tight on her retirement fund. 

Not much focus will be on Nikkole but Ella in her new school.

Ella had a tutor over the last few months to prepare to become a freshman in high school. But being in school would be a whole new ball game.

A few chapters will focus solely on school. Making new friends, bullies, and other typical school stuff.

(just to note, the school is a regular school. One male teacher in his 40’s is a Preas.)

********

After the school stuff, we cut over to Bob, currently running from the police after a botched robbery. Bob’s new partner, a regular person, just keeps fucking up all of their jobs. He reminisces about Ella and how despite being small, she could use that to her advantage by sneaking around and getting into places.

To get away from the cops, Bob shoots his partner and kicks his dead body out to distract the cops long enough to getaway. He begins to think of a way to force Ella back.

***********
Jump to the Metztlis, and Father Metztli is dealing with an annoying problem. He is trying to be elected for presadent, and his team tells him he is trailing behind in early polls. 

He needs a way to remain relevant and get more voters. 

That's when a member of his staff brings up a potentially untapped market. The Preas vote. In the last four months, support rallies for Preas awareness and such are trending recently. 

Someone brings up that due to his daughter’s “death,” they could potentially spin a campaign around supporting Preas. Father Metztli is intrigued and wants to hear some ideas.

********
One day out of the blue, Nikkole takes a day off and has Ella skip school to do something special. Nikkole takes Ella to spend an unforgettable day at an amusement park where Ella enjoys a full day of fun with mommy. Just before the day ends, Nikkole pulls out a cupcake with one candle on top and wishes Ella a happy birthday. This day marks the one-year anniversary of when Ella came into Nikkole’s life.

******
 
Back to father Metztli, they call in Nia to tell her about their plan. To get the Preas vote, they planned on pandering to their base, which included adopting a young Preas. 

Nia is annoyed but doesn’t think it will affect her in any way. Oh was she wrong. 

In order to pander to the Preas audience, Father and Mother Metztli spoil the new Preas. The Preas is still young and don't fully grasp what's going on around them. Nia begins to get more and more fed up as her parents continue to ask more and more of her yet still expect their perfect child.

Eventually, at a meeting with a charity, Nia snaps and lets out the secret that Ella is not dead.

******

Nikkole and Ella are shocked at the news, and Ella's secret of her death finally leaked out and now people are wondering where she is.

Nikkole gets a call late at night after she had just put Ella to bed and it’s from Mother Metztli.

Dew to everything that has happened, they need Ella to come back home. 

Nikkole screams at the phone and lays into the Metztli about how Ella is not her daughter and that she is her baby.

Mother Metztli then decides to try a different approach. Blackmail. Both are in a sticky situation as mother Metztli has access to all the info needed to prove Ella's new birth certificate and such are all fake. If it turns out that the former cop illegally adopted someone, it could be very bad for them. 

So she offers to meet up in person to have a little talk about what to do. Reluctantly, Nikkole agrees.

*********
Nikkole did not want to take Ella anywhere near that woman and decided to leave her at home for a little bit. She asked Nathan and his girlfriend to come over to hang out (babysit) with Ella but he was running a little late. Ella told her mommy she would be fine by herself until Nathan shows up. Reluctantly Nikkole agrees and leaves her baby home alone.

Not even 5 minutes later the doorbell rings. Ella opens it expecting Nathan but is greeted by Bob.

Bob threatens to expose her for what she really is. A tinny intruder who is from a rich home and is now playing dress-up with an ex-cop. If she didn't want to be exposed for the fraud she was, then she needed to help him with one last job.

***********

Nikkole reaches the night star's home and has to hold herself back from attacking mother Metztli.  

They talk about what to do with Ella, but before they could get anywhere, Nikkole reserves a call from Nathan saying Ella wasn't at the house.

*********

Ella is desperately trying not to cry as she is seated right next to Bob. Right Back where it all started.

Due to the botched jobs Bob had done in the last year and getting in debt with some shady people, he needed to find a way to make a lot of money fast. So they needed to risk a big score.

They pull-up in front of a very nice expensive house. (owned by Zoey) and Bob forces Ella to break in. and if she fucks up this time, then Nikkole will be in a lot of trouble.

So Ella does as she is told and breaks in. disabling the security and opening the front door for Bob. 

Bob deals with the big stuff while Ella grabs the small stuff. But as she realizes this is a Preas home, she notices a picture of Zoey in her little state, smiling and playing happily with some guy(brother). Just like how she and Nikkole are right now. Through the waves of guilt, Ella turns the silent alarms and cameras back on.

*********

Nikkole is freaking out when her cop friend calls her. Telling her that security cameras have seen Ella and they are currently going to get them. The Metztlis overhear what's going on and follow Nikkole as she rushes to her baby.

*******
As the cops start showing up, Bob gets panicked before putting two and two together and realizing Ella just snitched. Ella tries running away in the large house but Bob follows. He knows the cops will be inside any moment and there's nowhere to run. But he will at least kill the little brat who sent him to jail. During the chase, something catches fire and the hose begins to burn.

He catches her and begins to choke her out as he slams her tiny body into a wall.

Ella goes limp before Bob is tackled by cops.

Nikkole and the night stars arrive just as they bring Ella out on a stretcher. She is barely breathing and unconscious. Nikkole tries to rush over to her but Father Metztli stops her for a moment to tell her that no matter what if reporters ask her any questions not to answer them. His legal team is going to come up with a story to spin this all around.

Nikkole just punches him right then and basically tells him to fuck off and she goes to be with her baby.

Father Metztli tries to compose himself and again instructs his family about what to do. But Nia has had enough and like the spoiled brat she is, she begins screaming at her parents about everything that is going on and how she is fed up pretending to get along with the Preas brats just for his political bullshit.

All this in front of a few dozen police with cameras on.

**************
Ella is in a coma due to being shocked and slammed into the wall, causing shaken baby syndrome. The doctors don't know when she will wake up, or if she will have permanent brain damage. 

But thankfully she wakes up. Completely fine.


**********
The final chapter is the aftermath of what happened to Ella who is now in cort.

After finally being arrested, Bob was sentenced to 50 years in prison for everything he stole and asult.

A cop’s security camera video was “leaked” online and caused an uproar. Forcing the Metzli’s to be investigated. Both father and mother Metztli was arrested on multiple charges. 

Eve, due to only being a minor when most of it happened, wasn't given jail time but now was penniless due to all her family's money now being taken. 

Having heard Ella's story, Zoey hired a lawyer to help both Nikkole and Ella through their court battles. One on Nikkole forging documents, and of Ella theaving. The lawyer managed to get them both off. 

The end.


Just a reminder, this is just a rough outline of the story and may have changed down the line.
 

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i want to once again remind people i have not given permission for anyone to re-post my work. cute little kokiri girl has already attempted to re-post "the little thief" without editing out my involvement on Deviant art. i have already started the posses of reporting them on DA, and will do so here as well if they attempt to post my work again.

 

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