My Sister’s Keeper

[Wannatripbaby]

Another great chapter.

for some reason I got a chuckle out of And apparently neoCatholic as well. 

[YourFNF]

3 hours ago, Wannatripbaby said:

Another great chapter.

for some reason I got a chuckle out of And apparently neoCatholic as well. 

That was intended as color and fleshing out the setting but I'm glad it worked as comedy as well.

[YourFNF]

Heading into the hallway they see that the gurney with the Lukorian strapped to it has been left sitting there. The mesh gauntlet on Danna’s hand appears to be jewelry at first glance but is in fact a compact gravbeam emitter. Rushing up she hits the straps with two quick repulser blasts and halls the Lukorian to their feet. Hauling them along as they gibber in terror “Oh god thank you! Thank you! My names Kibral, I was heading back from drinks after a meeting when they grabbed me and tranq’ed me. I think they were slavers! You need anything, anything at……”

 

Kibral is cut off as two uniformed giants appear at the end of the hall with batons. Danna triggers a pair of repulsor blasts sending them flying. As they barrel through what appears to be an ER lobby and out into the parking lot. Several giants are closing from behind weapons drawn. Mariata draws her TB-11 and lays down suppressive fire. The giants appear to have accelerator pistols. Rounds impacting the concrete sign the three are hiding behind. Danna draws her own weapon. A Kaowari Saber series accelerator machine pistol loaded with dragon’s breath flechette rounds and starts hosing the area. One of the giants goes downs screaming as the metal oxide compound continues to burn through their shoulder.

 

A plasma blast burst drops another one, but several dozen wearing full vests are coming. Mariata feels her injured bladder let out a few spurts unable to handle the stress. “This day just keeps finding new ways to suck.” It takes several hits, but she drops one of the armored giants. A stray plasma burst lights up one of the ground cars’ fuel tanks in a loud dull ‘crump’, sending sheet metal flying. Danna turns to Mariatta “Cover me I’m going to hack one of these cars and get us a way out.” Before Mariatta can say anything, another VTOL ship appears over ahead in a scream of jet wash. The door slides open revealing a short 5’ man operating a gatling twice as big as he is. The fire-support weapon opens up with an industrial saw-like roar. Two of the giants are almost cut in half as the others retreat to the building. Cars popping off like a New Hollywood action vid.

 

The gunship swings in to land behind them “GET IN!!!!!” No time to question it Mariatta and Danna hall ass dragging a terrified Kibral with them. This one thanfully has normal sized seats and before they can even get strapped in. “WE GOT THEM, TAKE OFF!!” The engines scream as they soar off into the sky, gatling pouring fire aft. In a few minutes there flying over the mountains.

 

“So, I don’t mean to sound ungrateful for saving our asses back there, but who in the nine thousand hells are you people?” A giant woman pokes her head through the door. “I know you have a lot of questions and we’ve got about twenty minutes worth of flight time so I’ll try and answer as many as possible. But it’s probably best to wait till we get back to base to give you all the full rundown. In short, my name is Quin and this is Lucas. The man nods. We’re part of the local chapter of ‘The Defiant’, and we try and save as many people from that place as possible.”

“Well thanks for the rescue.”

“Yeah!”

[Wannatripbaby]

Nice fight scene. My favorite weapon was the Gravbeam Emitter. Boy, I could have some fun with one of those! 

[YourFNF]

5 hours ago, Wannatripbaby said:

Nice fight scene. My favorite weapon was the Gravbeam Emitter. Boy, I could have some fun with one of those! 

Yeah looking forward to exploring the full capabilities of that one.

[YourFNF]

As the jumpship comes in for a landing they can see that their destination is a large compound of rustic looking buildings. There even appears to be some kind of cable car system. Lucas chimes in, “The company chartered to construct ‘New Haven’, originally wanted to market it as a resort planet to draw in targets. The plan was scrapped as to risky and likely to draw attention. So, we took over here and have been digging in to the mountain.”   As he says this they swoop in low, pulling into a hangar carefully concealed in the cliffside. About a dozen people are working here, servicing three other aircraft and a hand full of drones. As Quin exits the craft “So Mariatta we’re going to get you to a doctor who won’t scramble your brain, Okay?”

“That definitely sounds good.”

 

            Mariatta and Danna are led through several hallways to the bunker complex’s infirmary, a rather impressive facility staffed by an ebony skinned enby in their forties and two med bots. Dr. Caulfield was a leading General Surgeon in corporate space five years ago, that all changed when they were selected as the fall-person in a boardroom spat at their hospital. Forcing them to flee to the outer territories where they were nearly grabbed by the Amazons before The Defiant rescued them.

 

Dr. Caulfield does a quick scan and physical, determining that Mariatta has bruised and torn several of her abdominal and pelvic muscles. A quick stem cell/RG factor injection is all she needs. Although Dr. Caulfield still recommends a couple weeks of physio and sends a regiment of exercises to her com. She also recommend sticking to period underwear to deal with any leaks and quickly prints a pack of normal if slightly thick panties. Marriatta hasn’t had to wear something like this since she had her cycle turned off at fifteen and flushes slightly.  Danna checks out out aside from some surface brushing and cuts from shrapnel and spalling. A quick spray of medplast and she’s good to go. After that the girls are left to take an hour to get cleaned up. Quin says that she will be debriefing them over dinner.

 

An hour later the two sisters are following Clare an excitable young woman standing only 142cm and full of energy. Clare handles base logistics and is their designated guide leading them to the mess hall. She excitedly lists off everything from the fusion reactors output to the amenities of the abandoned resort above. Apparently, it was easier to use that for living space and most people are up there. The bunker has emergency quarters, the infirmary, hanger, storage, armory, and utilities.

[YourFNF]

Ch. 2

 

The mess hall is in fact the main restaurant at the hotel and easily could have a Michelin star or two. Now it has this eerie abandon quality like something out of an apocalypse vid. Like you’d expect zombies or something to show up at any minute.  Thankfully Quin is there, along with Lucas and another woman who despite being only 91.5cm and north of seventy radiates a wolverine like ferocity. Despite her intimidating demeanor Elanor Black is quite gregarious and quickly has everyone laughing with tales of her, Lucas and Quins exploits over the years. The appetizers are plates of bread and dip + plus fried vegetables.  

 

“So, you’re from a parallel earth that has three different human subspecies?” Danna clarifies. “Yes dear, and unfortunately relations have never exactly been good between them.”

“Despite what propaganda put out by my kind would have you believe.” Quin chimes in, Lucas nods. Elanor and Quin go on to explain a brief history of humanity on their world. Referred to respectively as Amazons, Littles, and Mids. As they list atrocity after atrocity; enslavement, the bizarre compulsion to forcibly infantilize Littles, use of mind control drugs, surgical mutilation, the list goes on and on. Mariatta and Danna can only listen in stunned silence.

 

“And in Catalon the nightmare fuel is even more over top. They’re not only drugging Littles but other amazons, ramping their desire to possess littles up to eleven. It’s allowed the corps and their puppet government near total control. Taking the species caste system well beyond social conditioning.”  

“Jesus and I thought it was bad in corporate space.”  “I know right?” Thankfully the arrival of the food provides a welcome distraction, although it’s the beer, wine, and cider that fully deflates the tension.

The cuisine is classic western Teran hearty and filling. “This is so freaking good!!” Danna mumbles through a mouth full of pork loin. Clare chimes in “I’m glad you like it, we grow everything onsite and print the protein from our own stock!” Dessert is equally good and after several hours of good food and good conversation Clare leads them up to their room. Danna and Mariatta share a smile as they walk behind her, Clare’s obvious looks and not so subtle compliments did not go unnoticed during dinner.

 

Despite needing a good cleaning, the suite is Luxurious and has its own kitchen/living area and three bedrooms with in suites. Clare runs off to get a ‘welcoming present. The two girls whisper each other nodding. The welcome present turns out to be a gift basket of snacks, a bottle of Champagne and some kind of fancy alien liquor that tastes like fruit and almonds.  It’s now about 4 a.m. and somehow Mariatta finds herself leaning in close to hear something Clare is saying. Yet she still can’t rember what was just said. She’s two distracted. She can smell perfume masking sweat and heat can see Clare’s flushed cheeks. Then it’s her soft lips. Wait what!?. Mariatta pull back worried she’s gone to far, only to be greeted by a flushed and smiling Clare. At that point it’s all over as Mariatta surrenders and pulls Clare in tasting those wonderful lips as she slides her hand under Clares skirt and up her thigh…….

 

 

 

 

[Guilend]

It must be the wine, oh and i like this story thus far.

[YourFNF]

11 minutes ago, Aries said:

It must be the wine, oh and i like this story thus far.

Glad to hear Aries

[YourFNF]

Mariatta pauses looking Clare directly in the eyes. “Are you sure?” Clare stares back eyes smoldering and in a low breathy voice. “I’ve wanted you two since we met outside the infirmary.” Mariatta smiles and reaches the rest of the way grabbing Clare’s pantie covered mound. They duel with tongues breathing heavily before Mariatta moves to pull her panties off. They’re bright pink with lemons on them and Mariatta can’t resist getting a taste of the juice. She inhales the scent, breathing heavily as she sucks. Her hands reach down the borrowed sweat pants and underwear she’s wearing and as she begins to shamelessly frig herself.

 

But she wants more and she’s going to get it direct from the source. Tossing the panties aside she can see that Danna has taken Clare’s top off. As evidenced by the fact that Clare is now naked except for her rucked-up skirt and socks. Plus, Danna twirling a matching bra to the discard panties around her finger, grinning mischievously. “Gods she is so freaking cute, her sandy blond pixie cut, her perky a-cups, that smile, those eyes, and ancestors that bubble but and full plump lips. Contrasted against that petite frame. But more than that she’s got this life and energy. I don’t know if I want to fuck her or pull her inside of me and be her? Maybe both?”

 

Mariatta dives in planting sloppy kisses on Clare’s sex, slurping up the delicious fountain that pours from her, while Danna and her makeout. Danna tweaking her nipples right to the boundary of pain and pleasure. It’s all too much for poor Clare who scream seem to shake the mountains. As her thighs lock and body spasms she basically fucks herself against Mariatta's face. Meanwhile in Mariatta’s oxygen starved brain “So is this how I’m going to die? Smother and drowned by one of the most delicious girls I’ve ever had the pleasure of tasting?.... Honestly, I’m cool with that. Death by Snu-Snu FTW!!” The threesome slumps back spent staring at each other with vacant blissed out smiles. Clare is the first to break the silence. “So shall we take this to the bedroom?”

[Wannatripbaby]

Wow! You see this is why I'd love to co-write with you sometime. With my Grammatical skills & drive to actually finish a story combined with your big ideas, pseudo-science, and sex scenes we'd make an absolutely dynamite time!

I will say suddenly switching to colored text threw me off quite a bit. Not just because it was unexpected, but because you introduced it during a scene with like 5 different people which was WAY too confusing! I have no idea who's blue and who's pink and who's green. If you had started with colored text in the beginning then I could've familiarized myself with the Protagonists' colors before introducing more characters.

[YourFNF]

4 hours ago, Wannatripbaby said:

Wow! You see this is why I'd love to co-write with you sometime. With my Grammatical skills & drive to actually finish a story combined with your big ideas, pseudo-science, and sex scenes we'd make an absolutely dynamite time!

I will say suddenly switching to colored text threw me off quite a bit. Not just because it was unexpected, but because you introduced it during a scene with like 5 different people which was WAY too confusing! I have no idea who's blue and who's pink and who's green. If you had started with colored text in the beginning then I could've familiarized myself with the Protagonists' colors before introducing more characters.

Yeah sorry about that, I just realized the colored text was necessary when I realized I was going to have more than three regular speaking parts.

 

Also I agree we definitely have to do a collab at some point 

[Wannatripbaby]

17 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Yeah sorry about that, I just realized the colored text was necessary when I realized I was going to have more than three regular speaking parts.

There are other ways to denote different speakers. Such as accents and speech patterns. Not that I'm one to coach you on that since I generally try to avoid having multiple speakers as well.

20 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Also I agree we definitely have to do a collab at some point 

Totally! Ooo! Or an RP! If you ever have a story idea that you think would work better as an RP my offer is always open.

[CDfm]

Very good start! Actually several chapters which I hadn’t gotten to but I thought this was interesting and pretty well written. I was pleased to be able to give it a like and I am looking forward to reading more of it. 

[YourFNF]

5 hours ago, CDfm said:

Very good start! Actually several chapters which I hadn’t gotten to but I thought this was interesting and pretty well written. I was pleased to be able to give it a like and I am looking forward to reading more of it. 

Glad to hear

[YourFNF]

Which is how Mariatta finds herself in the bedroom fucking Clare with her own strap on. She looks up at Danna who smiles and gives a thumbs up as Clare goes to town between her legs. Both girls losing themselves in the heat of the moment. Marriatta rocking and circling her thighs, Danna holding Clare’s head. It isn’t long before all three explode into various orgasms. Clare’s high-pitched squeals setting of Danna as they vibrate her lips.

 

All three need a minute to recover and the pillow talk is pretty straight forward until “So I have a request….”

“Name it Clare.”

“Would you put my diaper on for the night?”

“Wait really?” “Yeah after everything we heard at dinner isn’t that kind of... I don’t know like messed up”

“I know, I know a Little who wants diapers. I’ve dealt with a lot of; ‘am I betraying my people? Here I am resistance fighter and I’m walking stereotype.’ Yeah I’ve thought about it a lot.”

“I’m sorry Clare. I came in and made assumptions about your struggle and what you go through. I’m sorry I rushed to judgement”

 

“Accepted, and yeah I don’t know I just like being padded after sex. It makes me feel safe, cared for. I want that even though I know I’m feeding the stereotype and I kinda’ hate myself for that but well… It is what is. Everyone here is pretty cool and Quin is actually really cool about looking after me without going full nightmare Amazon.”

“Tell you what tonight I’m wearing one in solidarity. Okay? Danna?”

“Ehh what the hell. Can’t hurt right?” She says grinning. I takes several tries for Mariatta to get Clare comfortably padded but she eventually gets it right, but still needs help with her own tapes from Clare. Much to Danna’s amusement. Who can’t help laughing as Marriata stands there red face as Clare does the adjustment. Finally all three get there teeth brushed and curl up next to each other spent from exhausting day.

 

 

[Wannatripbaby]

I kinda forgot this story was a thing. :/

One little critique I have with this chapter is this line:

15 hours ago, YourFNF said:

"Would you put my diaper on for the night?”

It sounded like Clare was asking Danna & Mariatta if they would wear her diapers. Not to put a diaper on Clare. Not a big deal, just try to be a bit more careful about your characters' dialogue in the future.

[YourFNF]

1 hour ago, Wannatripbaby said:

I kinda forgot this story was a thing. :/

One little critique I have with this chapter is this line:

It sounded like Clare was asking Danna & Mariatta if they would wear her diapers. Not to put a diaper on Clare. Not a big deal, just try to be a bit more careful about your characters' dialogue in the future.

Noted

[YourFNF]

The next morning Mariatta wakes up to something wet squishing between her legs. She scrambles out of bed confused palm landing on the swollen diaper. “Ah shit really? Fucking really? Well I guess this was a good idea in more ways than one. Doc did say it would take a couple weeks for everything to heal fully. Still I’m not letting anyone see me like this.” Mariatta heads into the bathroom burying the diaper in the trash can before hopping into the shower. She’s just started breakfast when Danna and Clare arrive. “Morning D, Clare. Didn’t know if you we’re going to miss breakfast.”

 

 

            “Not everyone has your unnatural energy Mars.” Mariatta makes a rude gesture.

“So if you all want I can show you around some more and then we talk with Quin about getting your ship fixed?”

“Yeah that sounds good.” “Same”

Clare leads the two around showing them the club that is the main hang out spot for the group. She also keys there bio signatures for the defensive systems and points out the various evacuation points. And gives them a heads on the various scheduled emergency drills.

 

 

            The tour ends with the food growing facilities. A good chunk of the mall was converted into hydroponics and fish farms. While at the tree line fields of wheat sway under camouflage netting. “And then we have the pigs and chickens. Most of our protein is printed from cell cultures but we like to keep a few live specimens as a genetic reserve and for the eggs. The waste is used for fertilizer of feedstock for making plastics……..”

 

 

            “So here is the deal, I think we can help each other out. You have a ship that needs an engine over hall, right?”

“Yep? And I can pay credits that’s the one part of that last job that didn’t go wrong.”

“I was thinking more of a trade. You see we’ve found a facility on Catalon that produces ‘designer Littles’ including bulk orders and modification of captured off-worlders.”

“And their government knows about this?”

“Yes it’s all part of their strategy. Maintain power by creating a society centered around hierarchy and dominance. There have even been rumors of surgeries and nanites used to turn dissident Amazons into Littles. Not sure how much of that is prop bullshit but it’s been effective at making people to afraid to speak out.”

 

 

“Sweet maker you’re talking about a deep black state funded clone and biohacking facility…. And you want to take it out? That’s your next target?”

“You nailed it.” Gwen smiles grimly. “What’s more we had an amazon on the inside one of the scientist there feeding us data on the projects they missed their last three scheduled check ins. We have to assume that they’ve been compromised. We need a ship that can carry a strike team into hostile air space and carry a couple hundred prisoners out”

 

 

“I’m in. I haven’t wanted to see a place burn this much since the camps on Atlas four.” Danna flinches at the memory and Mariatta’s fist is clenched tight. “Damn straight sis, I want to help anyway I can.” Danna’s face has an uncharacteristically fierce expression on it. “Let’s get started then.”

“One question though, how are we getting the Kirita there?”

“We’ve just completed construction on modifying an abandoned particle accelerator in orbit around a dead rock a short jump from here. It’s now a ship sized dimension gate.” Both women’s jaws are hanging slack at this announcement.

 

 

            The next few days are a flurry of activity as everyone rushes to repair the Kirita. Three VTOL ships carry it to the hanger using mag cables. Sparks shower down inside the reactor chamber as Danna welds new mag plate in. Defiant ground crews run new superconductor lines and replace slagged breakers. Nanite spray is used to heal stress factures in the hull. After two all that’s left is to top the fuel tanks, replace the fission batteries and load new ordnance. In the morning at 06:00 the Kirata’s Light will fly once again.

 

 

[Wannatripbaby]

I have a feeling things are gonna get dicey real soon!

[YourFNF]

 

            The next few days are a flurry of activity as everyone rushes to repair the Kirita. Three VTOL ships carry it to the hanger using mag cables. Sparks shower down inside the reactor chamber as Danna welds new mag plate in. Defiant ground crews run new superconductor lines and replace slagged breakers. Nanite spray is used to heal stress fractures in the hull. After two days all that’s left is to top the fuel tanks, replace the fission batteries and load new ordnance. In the morning at 06:00 the Kirata’s Light will fly once again.

 

As dawn breaks over the mountain an intercom blares “All hands to action stations the Kirita’s Light will be launching in thirty minutes.” Ground crews scrabble and additional borrowed flight staff rush to board. Jocasta, The Defiant heavy weapons specialist assigned to the Kirita checks all weapon systems and arms the warheads on the missiles loaded into the fore and aft launchers. Down in engineering Danna starts reactor. The mag field goes up and multiple high watt laser’s strike the fuel pellet. A chain reaction starts and a miniature star springs to life in the ships heart. “Reactor status is green sis!”

 

 “Acknowledged. Initiating preflight checks.” Boots thump and clang on the gangplank as the fifty person compliment of 3rd platoon aka the salamanders, thunder aboard. Ground crews helping to move crates of heavy weapons. “Primary power, check. Fission batteries check. Secondary Relays and solar, check. Life support….”

“Status green across board engineering confirms” Danna slides into the flight officers seat buckling her harness while a Defiant officer hops into the copilots.

“Navigation?”

 

“Navcom is active and sensor integrated, five by five.”

“Weapon systems live and operational, all hands stand clear of launch tubes. I repeat stand clear ordinance is live.” Jocasta says as he takes a seat at tactical.

“Command this the Kirita’s Light requesting clearance for takeoff.”

“This command, clearance granted. Begin take off procedures.”

“Igniting reaction drive thrusters! All hands stand clear. I repeat thrusters hot, stand clear.” There is a massive as glowing plasma exhaust begins to pour from the Kirita. A klaxon sounds and the blast doors roll open. The Kirita rises on counter grav, maneuvering thrusters helping to stabilize.

 

“Maker be with you Kirita and may you always stand defiant.”

“And with you command, Kirita out.” And with that the Kirita once again roars skyward on column of fire. Reaction thrusters howling their song as the shields glow cherry red before punching out of the atmosphere. Swirls of condensing gas spiraling off. For a moment the they hang there motionless against the rising sun to starboard and the planet below, then vanishes in a flash as the jump drive engages.

 

[Wannatripbaby]

Pseudoscience! Woo!

... I don't really have much else to say about this chapter. 

 

BTW that other story you said you just finished, did you ever have it moved to the "Completed Stories" section?

[YourFNF]

3 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

Pseudoscience! Woo!

... I don't really have much else to say about this chapter. 

 

BTW that other story you said you just finished, did you ever have it moved to the "Completed Stories" section?

Not yet, I guess I should do that.

[Wannatripbaby]

7 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Not yet, I guess I should do that.

I'm surprised at how many people forget to do that. Even the Great Sophie hasn't had her last 4 stories moved there! For me, I couldn't wait to have Angel Hunter moved once it was finished! It's like putting it on display as a crowning achievement. Look what I did! It's finished! You may now bask in all its completed glory!

[YourFNF]

Ch. 3

 

            The Kirita reappears in a flash around an airless rock orbiting a cold dim star. Directly in front of them is a lower midsized toroid station, 5km in diameter. Zooming in on optical they can clearly see the pylons that The Defiant have attached to direct the particle streams outward. Thirty-six satellites hang in a precise arrangement to reflect the beams and generate the gate. Mariatta goes through the prejump procedures with station control before they power up. Sensors pick up a massive energy build up. The first beam exits the emitters and hits the reflector dish on one of the sattelites. More beams are added, and the gate begins to take shape. A cat’s cradle of fiery glowing energy suspended in the void. The ship actually begins to vibrate from the gravitational distortions.

 

Then it appears, a swirling vortex of energy as space and time are momentarily torn asunder. Energies not seen since the birth of the universe bleeding through. Mariatta give a small amount of power to the thrusters and the ship disappears into the gate, leaving our universe behind.

 

The Kirita rematerializes in orbit of an earth parallel solar system. Luckily the Amazon’s need for secrecy has prevented them from being able to acquire the tech to deploy and FTL sensor net. So the Kirita will go undetected. Still they have to be careful. Smuggling had been lucrative for the sisters and reinvesting that has outfitted the ship with active camouflage and infrared masking. They accelerate to FTL for thirty seconds then coast the rest of the way in. Slipping into orbit on a steep trajectory. A klaxon sounds.

 

“All hands this the captain. We are go for insertion at suboptimal angle of entry so it’s going to be rough ride. As we are now entering the operations zone I’m calling for general quarters. I say again general quarters, general quarters!! All hands to action stations this is not a drill!!!” The klaxon continues to sound

“Acknowledge captain this is lieutenant Veaw, the young Kindari answers. Salamanders stand ready, bring the fire.” The ship shakes and rocks as it descends at steep angle shields glowing orange. The assault team sits in the cargo bay lit by red emergency lights. All they can do is wait for the Kirita and her crew to carry them to the target.

 

“Shit sis we’re lighting up like festival fireworks on the air defense net! We have missile launch!! Activating dazzlers.”

“Spotted going evasive!” Mariatta activates the intercom, Celtic synthmetal blasting. The ship roles and yaws, screaming as it spirals through the upper atmosphere. Missiles flying wide denotate and the whole night sky seems like day for a few seconds. The Kirita blazes defiance the counter missiles roaring earthward to meet challengers as the point defense lasers engage. At this range a few get through, but the shields hold pulsing with light as they bleed excess energy.

 

            They are now over the target and Mariatta can see the large concrete buildings making up the compound. “Most of those missiles were national defense grid. This site only has a few accelerator chain guns and I’ve got them painted and locked.”

“Concussion missiles only. We can’t risk killing the people we’re trying to save with cluster heads or micronukes.”

“Roger Cap! Concussion missiles locked. Missiles away!” The facilities air defenses main gate and vehicle depots go up in a flash.  The Kirita banks in low preparing for air drop…..