The Most Unusual Amazon Chapter 17 (UPDATED 8/05/18)

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14 hours ago, Wannatripbaby said:

However, neither of those seem... Kinky enough for your tastes. 

Mmmm, you might know me a little bit haha.

But those are some good ideas.

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OK, Thanks to some comments on here I have actually changed a lot of what will happen next. I had some crazy ideas that will really help the story move forward. I just finished chapter 8 and I am working on getting it cleaned up and looking good before I post it. But I am very excited about the way things are going to be going for Jess. Thanks goes to several of you that have commented on this story so far, but the biggest thanks goes to @Wannatripbaby for pushing me further then I thought I could go. I hope you enjoy the next part, I call it ACT II and as far as I can tell thus far, there will be an ACT III which will be the final part, but I am not sure if that will be that the last one or not, as that is still some time away.

ACT II

Chapter 8

I slowly woke up, unsure at what it was that had awaken me from dreamland where I was fighting along side my trusty side kick, Pink, the Dinosaur. I tried to go back to my make believe dreamworld when I realized what it was that had woke me in the first place, it was Daria. I was laying on my side, somehow sucking on my paci that I don't remember putting in my mouth, with a blanket draped over me. The blanket must have ridden up as I rolled over in my sleep, because I could feel Daria patting my padded, wet butt and I could hear my diaper crinkle without it sounding muffled.
 

"Wakey, wakey sleeping baby. Time to get up and meet this wonderful day I have planned for you."
 

She was way to cheerful, as usual. I rolled over away from her trying to go back to sleep when I felt a hard sting in my thigh, right where the leg part of my diaper ended and my leg began. I yelp in surprise and tried to cover my butt as another blow landed.
 

"Don't you ever roll away from mommy like that again, you hear me young lady. I will tan your hide if you ever do that again."
 

I was really confused now as the memory of last night came into focus I clearly recalled that she was my Auntie, not mommy, wonder what in the world changed overnight. I rolled over and grabbed her arm as she was about to smack me again and spit my paci out of my mouth.
 

"You are not my mommy, you are my best friend, and if you want to, you can be my Auntie, but under no circumstances are you my mommy, got that?"
 

I tried to say with a stern and confident voice i could muster, for someone in a very wet diaper I doubt it was that convincing. I was in shock when she twisted the arm i had grabbed and now she was holding my arm in a death grip that was starting to hurt, but before i could say something about it she slapped my face real hard.

"You will never speak to mommy like that again and from now on you are my baby and I am your mommy. That is final."

She did not sound at all like my best friend, she didn't even sound like the same person from last night. I looked into her eyes and I knew what was happening and I was so scared my bowls released, filling my diaper. I was in to much shock and my cheek hurt too much to think of the irony of what just happened, but I really was scared shitless.
 

"Aww, did baby go poopoo in her big diaper. Don't worry, Mommy will get you all cleaned up after a nice breakfast, I know how much you like your poopy diapers, but I better not catch you touching yourself or you will be in big trouble."
 

Daria patted my bottom as she spoke in a tone that was so warm and motherly, I relaxed enough for her to put some sort of mittens on my hands and locked them on. I quickly realized what she had done, but it was too late and now my hands where useless. I tried to take them off when she helped me out of the crib, but after a hard swat to the seat of my messy diaper, I decided not too. We where almost to the kitchen before I found my voice again, luckily I didn't have my paci in my mouth or it would be hard to talk.
 

"What fuck has gotten in...."
 

I didn't even finish before she had another paci shoved in my mouth that was bigger then the one I had. She pressed some button in the center of the mouth guard and the rubber nipple inflated so I couldn't even talk or spit it back out.
 

"Don't use that language young lady, that is grown up talk and you are no grown up, at least not anymore. As an Amazon you should know better then to go potty in your pants. At least Mommy is here to take care of you now, so you don't have to worry about anything anymore, even that pesty little potty. You can play all you want too."
 

 

I begin to cry right then and there, my legs grew week and I was having trouble standing. I was one hundred percent sure now what was going on with Daria, she has ABF, Amazon Baby Fever. It was a term I have heard Littles and some Inbetweeners use when i lived in the city. I asked one once what it meant and they told me that Amazons, mostly women, but on occation some Amazon men can get it too and that once they get it, they get this strong urge to baby someone cute. So usually Littles and some Inbeetweeners end up being the target of these Amazons. I didn't believe them for a long time, till I saw it once. I was walking in the park when I heard a comotion and when I looked across the park, an Amazon woman had picked up a female Little, the Little was as cute as a button, but had to be at least the same age as the Amazon that was now holding her. The Little was screaming at the Amazon lady to put her back down, but the Amazon didn't even seem to hear her.  I ran over to them to find out what was going on. When the Amazon looked at me I could tell right away something wasn't right with her. It took me calling the police and they had to take the Amazon and the Little to the hospital to make sure the Little was doing okay and that the Amazon lady could be treated. They actually had to sedate the Amazon. After that day I started noticing it happing all over the place. It started getting worse, I started seeing both Littles and Inbeteeners in diapers and some sort of baby cloths. I heard that Portal Littles where getting to expensive for most of the avereage Amazon to buy, so this ABF was getting more and more out of control. After seeing an Amazon women wet herself at this company party I was at and an Amazon couple dragged her to a corner of the room. While the man held her down, the woman stripped and diapered the Amazon right there. What was worse, no one cared. I knew then that if anyone found out about my diapers, i'd be in some nursery somewhere and with someone I didn't want. I left by the end of the week and moved to where I am living now.
 

"Come on baby, have a seat in the chair, I know it isn't a highchair, but it will do till I can get Joey to make one that can hold you."
 

She pushed me into a chair next to the table, I could feel the mess I had made spread all over the place. Normally I would be really enjoying this, but I was so scared of what Daria might do next that I was not enjoying this one bit. After being spoon fed some baby food and given a bottle to drink, Daria had me lay my head in her lap as I drank the bottle. I drank the bottle, hoping to gain some trust and maybe get the hell out of here the minute she turned around. As I started drinking the bottle, Daria reached her hand down between my legs and started rubbing the crotch of my diaper firmly against me. I tried to think of anything to keep me from getting aroused, but she started talking which made it very difficult.
 

"Baby likes her baba doesn't she? Yes she does, almost as much as she likes her wet, poopy diaper. Just lay there and drink your baba while mommy makes sure you really enjoy your wet, poopy diaper."
 

The way Daria said wet, poopy diaper, making it all drawn out and slow. I almost came right then and there. I started crying, but I didn't do anything to stop it. I reasoned with myself that if I let her do this, then she might let her guard down. Though I am most likely kidding myself, I was really enjoying this way more then I should.
 

After I had finished the bottle and made my diaper even stickier, I was taken back to the nursery where Daria changed me into a nice clean diaper. She dressed me in just a T-shirt that I had left there a few days ago and then pulled me outside into her back yard. I was crying from shame, but I was hoping this might be the chance I need to get away. If she let her guard down, I could jumped the short fence and get into the car garage through the side door. Thankfully I never take the keys with me when I am here, so they where still inside my truck. I could leave and never come back, at least not anytime soon. Daria had me set down under the tree where Mary and her wife stood the first part of the evening yesterday. I was glad I was now in a clean diaper, it would make escaping  a little bit easier.
 

"Now you set right here under the shade and color while mommy does some clean-up around here, this place is a mess from last night. To bad you had to be naughty last night and was put to bed early, it was a fun night."
 

Daria told me in that motherly, syrupy voice that did not sound anything like her at all. She set a coloring book and some crayons down for me to color with. I quickly grabbed the crayons and opened the coloring book just to make her think I was going along with things. I smilled up at her as she turned and walked away, leaving me there to color. I looked down at the first page on the coloring book and almost laughed. It was diffently not a kids coloring book, it was a porn coloring book. I thought for a moment if I should take this with me when I try to make my run for it, laughing a bit as I thought about it, but I knew I wasn't going to.
 

After about 30 minutes of coloring I looked up and "mommy" was on the other side of the yard, then I noticed that she was on the other side of the fence as well. I couldn't believe my luck, now was the moment I was waiting for. I jumped up and ran behind the tree to the fence that was barely two feet from it. I jumped the fence as I heard Daria yelling at me to get back in the yard, but I ignored her as I ran over to the side door of the car garage near the fence. I couldn't believe all the luck I have had today. She had me coloring in the right spot for an escape. I got through the door quickly as I heard Daria yelling at me some more, this time i think I heard something about a spanking with switch or something like that. I tuned her out as I jumped in my truck and started it up and thinking about how this day just can't get any worse then this.

Edited June 10, 2018 by Aries

[Wannatripbaby]

Awwww, I feel so special. 

Honestly, part of the reason I haven't tried writing anything after Angel Hunter is that I believe my time is better spent in helping other authors improve their stories rather than writing my own.

I have no less than 5 authors here whom I actively help with their stories. Whether it's by proofreading & editing or (in your case) just by simply encouraging them and throwing around a few ideas when they come to me. My 2 greatest passions are Stories & Helping others. This way I get to fulfill them both!

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22 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

Awwww, I feel so special. 

Honestly, part of the reason I haven't tried writing anything after Angel Hunter is that I believe my time is better spent in helping other authors improve their stories rather than writing my own.

I have no less than 5 authors here whom I actively help with their stories. Whether it's by proofreading & editing or (in your case) just by simply encouraging them and throwing around a few ideas when they come to me. My 2 greatest passions are Stories & Helping others. This way I get to fulfill them both!

If you hadn't gotten me to thinking on your last comment yesterday, or the day before, can't remember, I wouldn't have given much thought into doing much changes, I was going to do this one chapter, something quick and easy, then go right into the final stages to when the story ends.

I realized there were so much stuff I could do that would be a shame to miss and be a good filler between now and when I start setting the scene for the ending, which would have taken a few chapters, but I wouldn't have even gotten to chapter 30 and my goal is to try to hit 30 chapters, or as close as I can get.

I haven't gone back to check, but I think one or two others have made the comments about Daria having baby fever, which I wasn't even going to do with her, but after your comments I started to think back a bit and remembered those comments and how the scene was already set. I knew I had accidentally set up a gold mine and didn't even notice it.

[Wannatripbaby]

Whoa, I didn't even notice you added chapter 8! You must've uploaded while I was typing my last one.

Anyway, this was an interesting turn that I was NOT expecting! I haven't seen a Diaper Dimension story like this. (Although I don't read that many DD stories.) A story focused on an ABF epidemic could be insane! They're like crazed Mommy-Zombies!

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37 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

They're like crazed Mommy-Zombies!

That is kind of what I think every time someone mentions an Amazon having baby fever. So i kind of made it my thing haha.

On 6/9/2018 at 1:14 AM, JonhSmith13 said:

Good story
The blackmailer is Daria
Amazonas in diapers have appeared in other stories like "ANABELLE" in "Making the Best of It"
It seems that Daria suffers from "Baby Fever".
"Baby Fever" is a psychosis, which generates extreme maternal instincts in Amazons, previously normal (without maternal desires). The causes are unknown, but it is believed that it is the fault of a medication or hypnosis on television, Others claim simple nature

This comment from @JonhSmith13 was what got me to thinking about that part of my story. So I give him credit for that.

I have been on a roll today, already have chapter 9 almost done haha. This has been a lot of fun to write, even more so now that I have a better understanding on what I am trying to do and the directions I want to go. The biggest question is, Does Jess get away? The answer to this and many more will appear in the upcoming chapters of this Big Little story known as The Most Unusual Amazon ACT II, now on story forums near you. (Well on this one anyway)

[Wannatripbaby]

21 minutes ago, Aries said:

That is kind of what I think every time someone mentions an Amazon having baby fever. So i kind of made it my thing haha.

This comment from @JonhSmith13 was what got me to thinking about that part of my story. So I give him credit for that.

I have been on a roll today, already have chapter 9 almost done haha. This has been a lot of fun to write, even more so now that I have a better understanding on what I am trying to do and the directions I want to go. The biggest question is, Does Jess get away? The answer to this and many more will appear in the upcoming chapters of this Big Little story known as The Most Unusual Amazon ACT II, now on story forums near you. (Well on this one anyway)

This could be your big break here on DD. I'm quite excited to see where this goes.

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3 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

This could be your big break here on DD. I'm quite excited to see where this goes.

hah Me too. I don't have it all planned out, I just plan a little at a time, so I don't end up coming up with an idea and then having to change everything to make it happen or I don't make some parts confusion since I didn't go that direction later. I won't get too far into the ABF just yet, but if all goes well, I will later down the road.

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Chapter 9

I looked back and saw the garage door closed, so I yelled at the security AI to open the garage door like I normally do, but it wouldn't respond to me at all. I then remembered that the night before it wouldn't respond to me either. Daria must have had it open somehow while I was talking to her last night. I heard her getting closer and closer to the side door where I had just entered from. 
 

"Baby, baby come out, come out where ever you are? I am coming for you and I might let you making cummies in your diapers all night long, won't that be fun. But first I will make sure your cute little diapered bottom is all nice and red, I know last night you just loved it when I spanked your cute butt. It made you all exited."
 

I was so frantic, looking around trying to figure out my next step. I know, I can ram the garage door with my truck, I mean it's a big truck for a reason. I put it in reverse and revved the engine a few times, trying to phyc myself out a bit. I saw the side door slowly open and I hit the gas peddle. I couldn't believe it, the garage door opened in the nick of time and I was able to escape. I was so excited as I pulled onto the street and quickly put the truck into drive. I  hit the gas peddle and floored it. I glanced back in the revue mirror and saw Daria just grinning from ear to ear. I didn't even want to think about why, I just wanted to get the heck out of dodge. Maybe after Joey comes back he can talk some sense into that crazy bitch. 
 

Right as I was about to pass Ma and Pa's Grocery Store my truck just died. I tried several times to start it back up, but it didn't even make a sound. After checking everything out, I turned on the trucks on board diagnosis monitor and after a minute or two it showed that everything was good to go, except in nice big red letters it said that the owner of the truck had manually shut the truck down. Fuck. I now know why Daria was smiling, she let me get away. Maybe I can make a run for it, I might be able to make it to Ma's house in the back of her store and she can help me.
 

I jumped out of the truck and I remembered I was in a diaper and T-shirt in the middle of the street. I am glad it's early in the morning on the weekend or everyone would be out here getting a nice look at me. I ran as fast as I could to Ma's house, just behind her store. Right as I got there I saw that there was a note on the door.

"Gone for the weekend, if you need me, tough shit."
 

Tough shit was not what I was wanting to hear, or read in this case. I looked around trying to figure out what to do now. I decided to try and make it to the police station across town. I wasn't about to go back out to the main street, Daria would no doubt be there waiting for me. I made my way down the back street and cut through a few back alleyways to stay as hidden as I could.  After a little bit I took a short break to catch my breathe, I looked down and noticed that my diaper was now soaked. I felt it a bit and couldn't believe I had peed in it without knowing it. Daria must have put something in those bottles she has been feeding me. I better hurry before this damn thing leaks, so I took off once more.
 

I only got another three blocks, about 7 blocks from Ma's house, before I had to stop again, this time it was due to some serious stomach cramps. I never pooped this many times before now, Daria must have spiked those bottles with a lot of crap, pun intended.
 

I had to make it to the Police station very fast or I will be showing up in a very well used diaper and that would not help my situation at all. I was only 4 blocks away, it's around 7 blocks northeast and 4 blocks south from Ma's house, at least it is from the route I had to take to get there.
It seems that my luck decided to turn on me as I took one step and a cramp doubled me over and now I was behind some allyway of the bank I work at, knees bent in a squat potition, pooping my diaper again. I am glad no one could see me, I must have looked like a gaint toddler that went and hid so no one could watch them mess their diaper. 
 

After I was finished I started walking, very awkwardly and slow. I was crying pretty badly at this point, I was so distraught and humiliated. Under other circumstances I might have been totally turned on right now, being outside dressed in just a T-shirt and full diaper, but this was just to much for my emotions to handle right not. I might remember this later though during one of my morning pleasure sessions, but now is not the time to think about that.
 

I made it another block, but I had to cross another major street and that was scary. If I made it passed this street, I am sure i will make in the rest of the way without any issues at all. I looked down the street both ways, making sure that Daria wasn't just setting there waiting for me to come out of hiding. I didn't see her truck anywhere, so I made a run for it. It was weird running in a fully loaded diaper, even more so since it was practically the only thing I was wearing, it's a good thing I am used to go without shoes and socks or this might even hurt my bare feet.
 

I was about to step onto the sidewalk on the other side when someone walked right in front of me. I was so embarrassed being caught in public wearing what I was, so i couldn't even look at who this person was. I was about to say that it wasn't what it looked like when I looked at the shoes the person was wearing and started to cry even harder.
 

I almost made it.

[Wannatripbaby]

Shoes? I didn't get that part. Was there a previous chapter where someone was described as having distinctive shoes?

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No, but I was pretty sure that any best friend would know what shoes their bff wears, but I probably should have made it more clear. I will have to add something about that in the next chapter to help out. 

6 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

Shoes? I didn't get that part. Was there a previous chapter where someone was described as having distinctive shoes?

I should have caught that, but I was a tad wrapped up in the moment when I wrote that lol. thanks for pointing it out. Little details like that is what can mess thinks up for some people.

[Wannatripbaby]

Also I was confused as to how Daria managed to shut down Jess's truck. Could you maybe explain that a bit more? It said the "Owner" shut it off, but Jess is the owner, right?

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7 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

Also I was confused as to how Daria managed to shut down Jess's truck. Could you maybe explain that a bit more? It said the "Owner" shut it off, but Jess is the owner, right?

I forgot to add the part after that saying that Jess had given Daria the code to her trucks systems just in case she had forgotten it. The system is also part of the security so it's kind of like the key-less entry on some cars now, just enter a code into your cellphone and it unlocks, but in this case it's more then that. The owner can manually shut it down if someone steals it, start the engine, or even lock and unlock the vehicle. I had intended on explaining all that, but I must have forgotten. I thought I had that all fixed last night, I should have double checked before I posted it.

[Wannatripbaby]

I see. This is why having a beta reader can be INVALUABLE to a writer. They can pick out flaws and mistakes BEFORE you post them.

I'm not trying to condemn you. These things happen to everyone. You'll get better at it over time. You're still very new at this. Don't beat yourself up. :)

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3 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

I see. This is why having a beta reader can be INVALUABLE to a writer. They can pick out flaws and mistakes BEFORE you post them.

I'm not trying to condemn you. These things happen to everyone. You'll get better at it over time. You're still very new at this. Don't beat yourself up.

Thanks, I won't and I am still learning a great deal. I have even gone back and have started chapter 10 over, almost from scratch. I just didn't like the feel of how I had it, even if it was a rough draft I wrote last night. After I get it done and posted I will have to add DARK as a tag lol. It will also explain some on how an Amazon acts when under the effects of ABF. I am not sure if I will expand more on that in this story or after I am done with this story, make a spin off that focuses a lot on ABF. I guess I will decide on that later on when I get closer to the ending.

My Little was reading them first, but she hasn't felt like reading them and so I don't have a beta reader anymore lol. I would have my brother do it for me, but he will just say, "Looks great, can't wait to read the next chapter." So won't be that helpful lol

[Wannatripbaby]

You should ask you your readers if any of them would like to be your beta readers. Here, I'll do it for you.

"If anyone reading this would like early access to new chapters and is willing to give constructive feedback on them, please say so now."

Normally I'd offer, but I'm already beta reading, like, 4 different stories.

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18 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

You should ask you your readers if any of them would like to be your beta readers. Here, I'll do it for you.

Thanks, i do need the help lol.

 

18 minutes ago, Wannatripbaby said:

Normally I'd offer, but I'm already beta reading, like, 4 different stories.

I knew you were, which is why i never asked you to be my beta reader. Also i do have chapter 10 all done and a lot better then i had it last night. I guess i just needed to sleep on it.

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On 6/10/2018 at 4:41 PM, Aries said:

I slowly woke up, unsure at what it was that had awaken me from dreamland where I was fighting along side my trusty side kick, Pink, the Dinosaur.

@PinkTheDinosaur 

[JonhSmith13]

Princess Pottypants, He wrote 2 stories, in which the existence of an amazon in diapers is mentioned. These stories are:

https://princesspottypants.wordpress.com/2016/03/23/baby-fever/

 " Baby Fever"

Josie and Cindi are 2 teenagers and friends. but Josie is an Amazon and Cindi is a Little.

Cindi visits several times with Josie's parents, and considers them reliable giants. for this reason Cindi ends up living with Josie's parents voluntarily. but the personality of the parents changes suddenly. Cindi ends up in diapers inside a daycare center.

Cindi asks for help from Josie. Bequeathing that her parents have gone crazy- Josie just ignores . One day Josie is  in diapers inside a day care center

https://princesspottypants.wordpress.com/2016/08/02/the-nightmare/

"The Nightmare"

Kayla works in a daycare as the main nanny.

Kayla added, several clauses in the staff contracts. Due to these clauses several employees who were not Amazonas ended up in diapers and adopted.

but one day, Kayla has an accident and ends up in diapers adopted by the sister of a former employee

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Thanks, i think I've read at least one of those, if not both, but it's late here so i will take a closer look at them tomorrow. 

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On 6/11/2018 at 12:20 PM, Aries said:

Chapter 9

 

I almost made it.

Damn this is so tense. If I we're I would fight, like I don't want to hurt my friend but kidnapping is crossing a line. Also cursing the fact that this sites limits likes for whatever reason.

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5 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Damn this is so tense. If I we're I would fight, like I don't want to hurt my friend but kidnapping is crossing a line. Also cursing the fact that this sites limits likes for whatever reason.

I am sure most of my readers are wondering why she isn't fighting, but i already have the next chaper written and it will answer that question. I am also writting a spin off from this story to show more in-depth of the ABF epidemic. 

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11 minutes ago, Aries said:

I am sure most of my readers are wondering why she isn't fighting, but i already have the next chaper written and it will answer that question. I am also writting a spin off from this story to show more in-depth of the ABF epidemic. 

So it's gone full epidemic then? I'll have to pull our consular reps before things get to crazy.

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5 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

So it's gone full epidemic then?

Well, epidemic might be the wrong word to use, but it will look like it is for the first few chapters or so. I would say more, but it would give to much of the mystery away. The spin off is around the same time Jess left the city and moved to the country. I wasn't sure I'd make a spin off or add some of it in some sort of backstory told by someone in this story, but after writing chapter 9 and 10 i realized it wouldn't give it justice.

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4 minutes ago, Aries said:

Well, epidemic might be the wrong word to use, but it will look like it is for the first few chapters or so. I would say more, but it would give to much of the mystery away. The spin off is around the same time Jess left the city and moved to the country. I wasn't sure I'd make a spin off or add some of it in some sort of backstory told by someone in this story, but after writing chapter 9 and 10 i realized it wouldn't give it justice.

Definitely giving the order to evac the consulate and alerting the rest of the council then. (moves at a noticeably nervous clip)