Escape from the Diaper Dimension

[YourFNF]

I decided to start a diaper dimension action adventure story using a self-insert character I created for GURPS. Not sure where this one is going but I figure this can be a side project to play with when I have the time.

 

CW: Self Harm/Suicide

 

 

 

Our story opens with a rather strange site. A person dressed head to toe in sealed jumpsuit and helmet, wearing some kind of space age backpack, charging down a suburban street. “Fuck why did it have to be this parallel, I would have taken a 4^th Reich parallel over this. At least there I could have had a chance to punch a clone of Hitler or something… Uriel give me a sitrep how close are we to jumping out?” The AI’s voice comes over their com speakers “Unknown the underlying quantum substrate of this universe is highly unstable. I can’t seem to punch through the interference, I’m sorry Director” “A signal pings over their com, pulling up the tactical data overlay they can see that Marcells vitals have gone flat. He must have activated his biocomp’s ‘last light’ protocols. Marcell was NeoCatholic for him to do something like that especially because he refused to use mind backup….. “Shit, Shit, Shit. They got Marcell, Uriel get us out of here!!!” Just then a hulking giant appears wearing what looks like a police uniform. Blap Blap! Two shots from a Kindari Thaum Stunner strike dead center, the giant staggers but doesn’t go down. Two more shots finish the job and the giant collapses out cold. Ash keeps running.

[SGTbaby]

Interesting so far.

[ELLIE52]

I like the Title and the concept.  It would be interesting to have it parallel The Planet of the Apes, and find out the LIttles were the original Amazons.  Not suggesting you do that, but it's fun to think on it.  You may want to get your Tag corrected.

[YourFNF]

21 minutes ago, ELLIE52 said:

I like the Title and the concept.  It would be interesting to have it parallel The Planet of the Apes, and find out the LIttles were the original Amazons.  Not suggesting you do that, but it's fun to think on it.  You may want to get your Tag corrected.

Yeah I have a hard time getting the tags to post correctly. Does anyone Know how to do the big red official Diaper Dimension tags?

22 minutes ago, ELLIE52 said:

I like the Title and the concept.  It would be interesting to have it parallel The Planet of the Apes, and find out the LIttles were the original Amazons.  Not suggesting you do that, but it's fun to think on it.  You may want to get your Tag corrected.

I was kind of playing off "Escape from New York"

[ELLIE52]

9 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

I was kind of playing off "Escape from New York"

It made me think of that one too.  Guess I am just more of a Planet of the Apes girl...  in addition to Fallout 4. LOL

[YourFNF]

            “Finally!” Ashley has spotted a rather large and generic looking grey SUV of the type that can be found in suburbs everywhere. At 5’8” there’s no way they can reach the peddles on a vehicle meant for giants. Luckily, they have Uriel. The cars engine revs and it pulls forward as Ashley runs up and grabs the door yanking it open and scrambling in. “Thanks for the assist Uriel! Nobody does an on the fly hack better.” “Your welcome director.” “Okay got to think, I’m mobile now. Uriel will have disabled the GPS tracking, so I’ve got a few minutes. But this car’s going to be reported stolen and they’ve probably got birds in the air. I need to think come up with a plan. First, I need to figure out what happened to the others Marcell activated ‘Last Light’ so confirmed one out three security officers KIA. Not sure what happened to Tashi or Krum. I doubt even these giants could handle that Krogan though. Consider them MIA. Same for the rest of the science team. Liandra, human, first contact specialist and anthropologist, Danwakia physics and gate tech/Kindari Technomancer, Latisha, human, geochemical specialist, MED Droid MED 346, medic. All MIA.”

 

“Uriel can you raise anyone?” “I’m sorry Director, but coms are being jammed.” “What the hell our gear is at least two or three centuries ahead; how are they managing that?!!” “Director the jamming signal seems to match a model commonly known to be used by the Syndicate.” “Oh fuck, this could have been a set up!” “Director your backup is current. I know you don’t like switching bodies because of your dissociative tendencies but I strongly recommend you activate ‘Last Light’.” “Not yet Uriel.” “I’m going to get some answers first.” “We need a base and fast cash. Find me something abandoned and industrial. Then go through their stock market liking a Viking through an alehouse.” “Acknowledge director.” “Just got to breath, you and Uriel have been stuck on hostile worlds before. This is no different other than the extra special sauce level of nightmare fuel. Go to ground, cash, weapons, find locals willing to help or that can be bought. You got this.” Ashley continues to take several deep calming breaths as Uriel merges onto the highway.

 

 

 

 

[Cya]

4 hours ago, ELLIE52 said:

It made me think of that one too.  Guess I am just more of a Planet of the Apes girl...  in addition to Fallout 4. LOL

If you like that "game" you'd probably be blown away by New Vegas.

 

The story is pretty unique and I look forward to seeing what yowrite next!

[SGTbaby]

This is very entertaining so far!!

[YourFNF]

Thanks for all the support in the comments everybody. I'm positively surprised at the reactions this little self insert fic is getting

[YourFNF]

CW:Self Harm/Drug reference

 

 

 

 

After about twenty minutes “Director we’re being scanned by a comparable to our level sensor suite.” “Shit, the locals are definitely  working with the Syndicate. Knowing this kind of parallel it’s probably a client arrangement with their sapient trafficking arm. This goes side ways you blow your housing and I’ll activate Last Light.” “That’s what I’ve been saying Director…” The AI’s voice has an obvious note of sarcasm. “I take it being capture by these… Amazons? Was that what you called them? would be particularly unpleasant?” “Search terrestrial data archives circa start of digital at roughly 2000 Gregorian to about 2400 for diaper dimension. Where on a mix of myth and black mirror parallel right now.” “Oh my…” “Yeah…. This sounds unpleasant even to me and you remember the time I tried mixing Fadeaway and FireIce?” “As I recall you consumed six times the normal dose and cut your own arm off in a dissociative state because you were, and I quote ‘bored’.” “Yeah so even by that standard this could be worse”.

 

 

“How long to contact?” “Less than thirty seconds before were in visual of a road block.” Uriel pulls up an overlay. Line of black and whites plus two tac wagons. “Sweet Powers why do people keep making it, so I have to kill them? Uriel block me out a good six months’ vacation when we get back. The usual bender then detox spa and therapy? Yep you got it bud.” “Contact imminent.” “Ughhhh, let’s get this over with. I want to spend the next week semiconscious in Gemma’s arms while they make the bad thoughts go away.” “The aftermath is always the worst director. Nothing for it but to push through.” “Yep, let’s get to work.”

 

 

            Because Uriel knows exactly how much of a drama queen I am “Short Change Hero” starts blasting from every speaker within half a kilometer. The door hinges prove no match for my cyber enhance left arm and it goes flying off. Tumbling and sparking as it skids down the road. Fifteen seconds to impact I bail, neuromods slowing everything to a crawl as I hanging in midair, watch the half a ton of luxury SUV slam into a line of cops cars. And all the while.

 

 

“This ain't no place for no hero

This ain't no place for no better man

This ain't no place for no hero

To call home”

[SGTbaby]

Contact is always fun!!

[YourFNF]

1 hour ago, SGTbaby said:

Contact is always fun!!

Yep this where things get full John Woo

I kind of wanted to do something that was both pulp/stylized and very self aware.  The protagonist is basically me if thrust through a 300 year gauntlet of every wonderful and horrible thing the multiverse has to offer and somehow against all odds survived(most likely divine intervention). So basically "crouching dork hidden badass". I like the idea of an antihero who isn't an asshole their just an ordinary person who constantly has to scramble to survive when the multiverse starts pitching flaming curve balls. This actually tied in well my self insert character from GURPS. Also expect them to be very aware of how completely bugnuts the situation is and to respond with snark and metahumor.

[SGTbaby]

I like snarkiness and fun humor so no worries there.  I do think the contact will be interesting he sounds like a regular joe just scrappy which is always important in the dimension. Looking forward to it.

[YourFNF]

31 minutes ago, SGTbaby said:

I like snarkiness and fun humor so no worries there.  I do think the contact will be interesting he sounds like a regular joe just scrappy which is always important in the dimension. Looking forward to it.

Also they basically cheat.....

[YourFNF]

There’s about thirty uniforms and a dozen SWAT guys. Unfortunately for them I’ve basically got “God Mode” on. The DCM AC 300 carbine goes from shoe box to implant of death in three seconds, the stock and barrel sliding out. The micro fission power pack has enough charge for 200 standard shots. Theoretically if you used all the charge at once, risking burning out the focusing array, you could punch through the front armor of a Soviet T72 and back out through the engine block. I snap a reflex shot without even thinking about it. SWAT mook one drops with a hole clean through their chest the shot continues for another 600m blowing a chunk out of the side of a building.

 

 

            Then I really get to work. Uriel paints the power supply for the cruisers. Glowing red on the AR display. Lithium ion, perfect. The reinforced battery compartments try their best but when you have an alkali metal suddenly exposed to oxygen and super-heated, in a confined space…… All twelve cars go in up in glorious action vid fashion. The suit doesn’t filter smells to preserve situational awareness, so I get a good whiff of scorched pork. Breathing deeply, I focus on tuning it out, way too many flash backs, meditation techniques, they help with holding it together long enough to get to somewhere you can have a breakdown in piece. The six or so surviving uniforms have broken and run except for one on the ground screaming. Four SWAT mooks are still up and firing, one’s arm is hanging limp. Their aim is good, but the shots bounce off my shield which momentarily flashes blue with each impact. Four shots, four people dead. I walk up to the screaming uniform. “Uriel gives me triage data.” The person’s entire left side is scorched and burned, the numbers don’t look good either. “I figure five percent survival chance?” “I concur Director.” “I’m so sorry friend.” I take an injector loaded with three times the recommend dose of a synthetic opioid and slam into their neck. I watch their eyes as the light fade, before closing them. “Go in peace to whatever it is you believe in.”

 

“This ain't no place for no hero

This ain't no place for no better man

This ain't no place for no hero

To call home”

[YourFNF]

            Looking around at the wreckage I try to plot my next move. “So, we need new wheels. I guess we could take one of the SWAT vans, the fifteen-year-old ‘Grand Theft Auto’ player in me really wants to do that, but that’s gonna be pretty dam conspicuous. I can’t fit in the uniforms, I don’t have a holoprojector, and I’ve never been good with illusions. To literal minded and difficulty with spatial reasoning/visualization. I could transmute the uniform, but I think in this universe I’m a little short for a SWAT officer.” “Sorry to interrupt the brainstorming session, but we have more incoming Director.” “Sitrep” “Two helos in bound, turbine chemical fuel engines, no weapons. I’ve just breached their coms. Looks like we warrant the attention of this countries paramilitary counter terrorism unit.” “Oh good, it’s nice to feel valued, really helps the self esteem issues.” “Also, they mentioned; high value target for our ‘off world friends’ and first field test of the new equipment.” “We are so screwed.” “I concur.”

 

            Two birds buzz the highway at 18m, black shapes jumping out and landing with a loud crash and the sound of crunching concrete. I zoom in to get a better look… “Very screwed…” My voice comes out in a whisper. Two ten-person squads of extremely angry special forces are closing in on me wearing heavy assault armor that is not domestic manufacture. “I’m going to lose this shell. Shame I was just starting to feel like it was actually my body.” I let loose with three round bursts but they just splat on the shields, no pen. Then there is a loud bang, and everything goes absolutely silent. “I can’t move why can’t I move limbs, am I paralyzed? No been paralyzed before this is not that. Shit the suit has lost power…. Oh, fuck sweet Rama Krishna no! They’ve got a mother fucking stasis grenade! How? Buying just one of those would clear out a billionaire’s savings account. You usually can only find the necessary components in elder civilization ruins from when the various universes were young. Local disruption of time stream. I can’t even activate ‘Last Light’. Didn’t think the syndicate considered me worth that kind of trouble.” The last thing I see is an armored giant standing over me saying “Tranc um before the stasis field wears off." I feel something punch through my suit and everything goes black.

[bbykimmy]

I'm glad to see you posting longer bits... my personal recommendation would be to collect these until you have about 2k words and post them all at once.  You're at about 1.7k, which is what I would consider a single, short chapter.  Otherwise it feels a bit disjointed, like you're getting interrupted for an entire day at a time while trying to read 1 chapter of a book.

This is a liiiiiittle too violent for my delicate sensibilities, but I wanted to check in on you!  You seem to really be enjoying the writing, and that's great <3

[YourFNF]

43 minutes ago, bbykimmy said:

I'm glad to see you posting longer bits... my personal recommendation would be to collect these until you have about 2k words and post them all at once.  You're at about 1.7k, which is what I would consider a single, short chapter.  Otherwise it feels a bit disjointed, like you're getting interrupted for an entire day at a time while trying to read 1 chapter of a book.

This is a liiiiiittle too violent for my delicate sensibilities, but I wanted to check in on you!  You seem to really be enjoying the writing, and that's great <3

Thanks. I tend to write in short two to three paragraph bursts because sustained attention is difficult for me to do. Then I get eager to see people reactions.....

Thanks for checking in

 

How are your projects going I thank you said you had six stories in the works?

[bbykimmy]

49 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Thanks. I tend to write in short two to three paragraph bursts because sustained attention is difficult for me to do. Then I get eager to see people reactions.....

Thanks for checking in

 

How are your projects going I thank you said you had six stories in the works?

I totally understand the craving for feedback.  I'll be checking in on this story from time to time, I'm looking forward to your main character getting captured

If they go on a killing rampage to escape, I'm out though   Too much violence in this one for me already!  But we both know I'm not your target audience

And no, I've got but two stories in the works.  Vacation, and one I'm writing collaboratively with my mommy-type - it's not ABDL related though so I doubt it will ever get posted here.

[YourFNF]

7 minutes ago, bbykimmy said:

I totally understand the craving for feedback.  I'll be checking in on this story from time to time, I'm looking forward to your main character getting captured

If he goes on a killing rampage to escape, I'm out though   Too much violence in this one for me already!  But we both know I'm not your target audience

And no, I've got but two stories in the works.  Vacation, and one I'm writing collaboratively with my mommy-type - it's not ABDL related though so I doubt it will ever get posted here.

Would you mind possibly collaborating on the amazon scenes? You always do a great job on those. Actually I think it would be kind of hilarious that this reluctant hero goes in resigned for full on SAW type shit and ends up being babied, maybe because the amazons know the jigsaw/Hannibal routine wouldn't work so they try something different.

 

p.s. character uses they/them pronouns

[bbykimmy]

22 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Would you mind possibly collaborating on the amazon scenes? You always do a great job on those. Actually I think it would be kind of hilarious that this reluctant hero goes in resigned for full on SAW type shit and ends up being babied, maybe because the amazons know the jigsaw/Hannibal routine wouldn't work so they try something different.

 

p.s. character uses they/them pronouns

Apologies and adjusted <3

I'm afraid you'll have to walk that path on your own, my dear.  You can do it!  If there is love in your heart, Amazon love can prevail <3 <3

[YourFNF]

3 minutes ago, bbykimmy said:

Apologies and adjusted <3

I'm afraid you'll have to walk that path on your own, my dear.  You can do it!  If there is love in your heart, Amazon love can prevail <3 <3

No probs. I actually had a really fun idea character gets "rescued" by another well intentioned group of amazons who treat them like any other little. I was already doing this as kind of a dark action comedy, maybe I should just go full farce?

[bbykimmy]

3 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

No probs. I actually had a really fun idea character gets "rescued" by another well intentioned group of amazons who treat them like any other little. I was already doing this as kind of a dark action comedy, maybe I should just go full farce?

I may not be the right person to ask - I have no idea what is 'normal'.  I like to build up the personality of each character in my head, give them a situation and a general direction and just see what they say to each other.

It's like playing an RPG all by yourself - sometimes the characters really surprise you.

[YourFNF]

3 minutes ago, bbykimmy said:

I may not be the right person to ask - I have no idea what is 'normal'.  I like to build up the personality of each character in my head, give them a situation and a general direction and just see what they say to each other.

It's like playing an RPG all by yourself - sometimes the characters really surprise you.

Interesting not that different from my method although I tend to put a lot of myself in. I think one of the hardest things about writing dialogue for me is getting into the head space of someone very different than me. I'm worried that it's kind of making a lot of my characters feel too similar.

[bbykimmy]

3 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Interesting not that different from my method although I tend to put a lot of myself in. I think one of the hardest things about writing dialogue for me is getting into the head space of someone very different than me. I'm worried that it's kind of making a lot of my characters feel too similar.

That just comes with practice - I'm a 20 year D&D veteran and have played more characters over the years than I could count