LilPeaches

I like theme of this story. Its very original and I'm actually surprised no one else hasn't thought of it yet. However, I think your rushing it a bit. You went from them living normal lives to complete changing everything over the course of a paragraph. I just feel like you could of done a bit more to build up to that moment. Also, maybe reread what you wrote. Some sentences don't make sense. I really hope you continue this though. Its a really interesting idea for a story. Thankies for posting!

Wow!!! Just, wow. That caught me by surprise. Your stories so far have be so soft and loving. This one was so dark and twisted. I enjoyed the amount of detail you put into describing each action without making it feel drawn out. Very well done. It was like a littles psychological thriller story. Thankies sooo much for posting!!!

Yup, I like Jamie's mom. That's all I have to say on the subject. Thankies for posting!!!

First off, I want to thank you for reply to my question. I had a feeling that both characters where peices of your personality. Its really nice to know they were. I really, really, really appreciate you opening up and sharing a peice of yourself in this work. I don't really see that much online. Not to this level. I think its unique that Madison found this connection with Jamie in High school. There is a level of maturity I still don't see in adults my age. A perspective that some of the 40 year olds I know haven't managed to get yet. So, to me this is amazing. Beautiful, splendid and refreshing, all words I would use to describe this story of trust, openness and understanding. Thankies for posting!!!

This story is awesome. However, I'm positive you already know that. I appreciate you sharing something personal to you. This story has some very real issues brought up and represents the truths behind what a relationship can be like. I'm curious, are both Madison's and Jamie's character traits a blend of yours and this partners IRL. Its just a suspicion I have. Thankies for posting!!!

Cute!!! Cute!!! Cute!!! There's mystery, a curious bond and complex characters. I'm constantly wondering what's happening or going to happen. The relationship between Jamie and Madison is unique and special. Its blooming from an unusual place. It very very very adorable. These no days are still confusing to me. I understand her taking advantage of a day she's free to be little. However, loud days seem different to me. I'm curious if its an emotional sensitivity thing. Sort of like borderline. I don't want to make presumptions though. Maybe its better not knowing and just accepting they are hard. Its a heart warming love story that I really feel a connection with. Thankies for posting!!!

This is super cute!!! It reminded me of a story my teachers might of read to me in kindergarten. It was beautifully childish, with just the right amount parental guidance. I giggled each time she said no to the fairies. I kept saying, "here we go again", in my head. Thankies for posting!!!

This story is incredible!! Ive read a couple alien ABDL stories, though this one is very original. I love the relationship between Val and Bridget. You can see it evolving as the story progresses and feels very natural. You have a beautiful imagination that's very fun getting to see posted into words. Thankies for posting!!!

Also, I made a pledge to your patreon. Just thought you should know that your story was easily interesting enough to want to pay to read more. You should be proud or yourselves

This story is kind of a roller coaster. There were moments that were cute and some scenes that were like a psychological thriller. I liked that she gets to feel loved and protected. I hated that she was manipulated and basically abused in the process. In fact I found myself kinda wining to my cat sparatically through out the story at how ludicris each and ever altercation ended. The fact that she submitted so easily kinda pissed me off. However that doesn't make this story bad. If anything it just made me more attached to it. I had to take breaks because it was evoking to high of an emotion response from me. So you could say that it made this story very interesting. You've done a great job on this. Thankies for posting

So far this story has been pretty eventful. I'm enjoying the flow of your writing. Each scene seems to progress at a reasonable flow. However I'm left curious as to why he is submitting to be a girl in his head so fast. Has it got to do with something in the milk? Im hoping there will be an explanation as to why. This story is off to a nice start. I can't wait to see how her family looks at littles in the following chapters. Thankies for posting

This was a great one shot. I really enjoyed her realizing who she was and who she has become. Thankies for posting

This is an interesting story so far. I like the perspective of both characters be added in. Thankies for posting :)