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I did kind of want to ask about the title but you are the writer so I figured there would be a payoff later, but I do prefer this non-sexual unhappy adult to happy child who then regrows up with a new happier childhood type of regression story better than a idea of diapered maid story (not that that wouldn't be fun). Now if I may offer some feedback as what you have is a good start; (I don't normally give too much criticism as I feel people write these stories in their free-time and post them here for free so who am I to criticize what and how they write) I would not worry too much about the title, what’s the saying "No plan survives first contact with the enemy"? so what if you had one idea when you started but then the writing took you on a different path, titles can be changed (I think?) Whilst the dialog is a little bit clunky at times that will improve with practice and is already an improvement over your prior story so keep at it. I do like the drugged bottle scenes as when she falls into a drug induced sleep it’s a good way to provide detail to the reader within the narrative and without the protagonist being aware. (I may have to steal this idea for any future stories I may write) Also as Disk said more affection from caregivers would warm them up a little as they feel a bit cold and formal atm (at least to me) IRL Aunts & Uncles do usually show affection to their niblings so it would be nice to see this reflected in Steven & Susan. Mariela's affection would come later when she is more comfortable/regressed. I would also argue (If I may) that Steven's & Susan's toilet rules are a bit complicated and arbitrary, in your previous story the rules were there to keep the girl 'safe' and were largely consistent, in this story they seem to change each day and with each character they also seem to run counter at times to the implied objective of getting Mariela to regress making the current rules hard to keep track of in my head. I would suggest that when Mariela is in diapers accidents and non-accidents would be permitted (but she is checked regularly and is treated like a toddler who can't be sure if they are wet/dry, clean/dirty), in training pants only genuine 'accidents' are permitted (she has to tell an adult she has to 'go' if she doesn't get there in time it’s an accident), and in panties no 'accidents'. After a few 'accidents' (that’s what the diuretics, laxatives, and sleeping drugs are for lol) she loses big girl panty privileges and is "suggested" she switches to panties with more protection aka trainers in the day and nappies (they do hold more) at night after a few wet trainer accidents, countless near-misses and a poopy trainer or two its finally suggested she wears diapers 24/7 as its better for everyone (less cleaning, more comfortable for her, etc... pick whatever reasons you like) from here she would regress back to however old you want (better have auntie and uncle stock up on Sippy cups and pacifiers). Personally, I think a maid story would be better with an immature adult who already has a weak bladder who starts/joins a cleaning service but keeps having to go to the loo (digestive/diet troubles?) and can't get as much work done and the client/boss threatens to fire the maid (but they need this job) so diapers are the logical solution (at least in this universe) offered by the client/boss and from there it become a selling point for the business, a possible age play relationship with the client? diaper dependency? who knows. These are just my thoughts and suggestions but already in my mind you are a better writer than I, having already written two stories to my zero. So, I once again do apologize if you feel I am being ungrateful but I am just wanting to give some honest feedback to someone who has great potential Good Luck and have fun writing.

This seem to fun begining looking forwards to where it goes from here.

Great chapter. I'd pretty much given up on this story being updated. Thanks.

Two chapter in two days you spoil us. Many thanks for another great chapter

What a wonderful way to start a morrning. ☺️

Yay ?

this is going to be fun, looking forward to hearing more. Thanks.

God this speaks to me ?, aspergers adds the worst social debuff

Keep going its great, and the speed is fine, often its more fun to just put the ideas down and get them out there, and move on to the next chapter than to spend hours up on hours perfecting the same chapter. Writing for fun should be fun, don't work so hard on a hobby that it comes a chore that the quickest way to burn out. looking forwards to hearing more and have fun writing more.

Ah I was initially confused as to who Hannah was so I went back to re-read and then was more confused, as initially she is described as much older, so I assumed you had changed it but hadn't edited Hannah's introduction yet. I was also wondering when is Alex's mother coming up to meet up with them Alex seems to think it's a couple of weeks away while everyone else seems to think its at the end of the week. Is his mum coming up early to surprise him? I also had a brief idea for the story if you haven't already though of it and feel free to tell me if I'm being rude suggesting it (I know some people who absolutely hate other people suggesting things when they didn't ask): Maybe Hannah could convince Alex to help out on her Mum's stall and as he would be hidden from the waist down by the stall, shorts would be optional of course. ? Also I am wondering where do you generally imagine the seaside town is as when I started reading this I imagined somewhere near Whitby/Filey where I went on summer holidays as they fit your description to a tee, and from your description it sounds like somewhere you know well and is special to you, but seeing you are from around Wales I imagine you have somewhere different in mind from me and I would think most other people would imagine somewhere different as well. So I am genuinely curious where you are thinking of when you imagine this town. Unless its totally made up in which case my hat's off to you truly are an amazing storyteller.

Is Hannah Angela's daughter as earlier (chapter 14?) they are both similar in age to Val, and now Hannah is closer in age to Alex. Which IMHO is far better as Alex now has someone less of adult and more of a friend and potential love interest which is cute, but other than that its a great story I had given up on it being updated, but am now glad to see being updated again, all the best and keep up the great writing.

hmmmm I honestly didn't think about them being that kind of 'naughty' I definitely have a more U imagination but your ideas certainly more entertaining.

One thing I wish was different is, I wish you had gone into detail about the sleep over as I was really looking forward to that before the chapter where everything blew-up. I imagine it with the girls playing with each other; soft toy fights (getting into trouble) maybe some video games, fighting over who gets to sit in the highchair, then been feed tea (pizza cut up in to small pieces?), whining about bedtime as they are having too much fun, finally ending with them both sharing the crib and falling asleep with their mummy and daddy watching them whilst a mobile quietly plays over the crib.

Well i'd chipin $5 for a ebook

Can't believe it is finished it was soooo good, thanks for writing such a great story also is there anywhere to get a PDF to save forever I love Person of Interest I'm currently chugging my way through I started watching it when it first started but then the channel I watched on lost it to another channel so I never saw past then end of S1 but its so relevant in current times

Wow did not expect that. Great story

Thanks just bought some Bambino Classico & ABU Cushies v2 from Nappiesrus heres hoping I like them

I did find nappiesrus not long after posting but I would still like to know which which ones have the gel stuff in them as I have not seen any that specifically mention it and I would just like some recommendations to just know where to start as for what they look like i'm not too bothered as I intend to get some plain one and printed ones

Hi there I am hoping people can tell me the some of the best online retailers for nappies in the uk I have used the cuddlz nappies (like these:

mmmmm I do hope so Mummy Kirsty has a nice sound to it

1. Yay update! 2. Great new chapter can't wait for the next one, and good to have you back

good to have you back and thanks for another great chapter