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  1. thedman
    Wow, I love it, just long enough to hold the attention span without requiring multiple chapters and such a great concept and plot, beautifully played out, thanks for the great read
  2. thedman
    Wow, this is so dark, and enthralling, can't wait to read more
  3. thedman
    Hmmmmmm...... how does this end up? 2 that are in diapers, or 2 that have to change diapers? Tune in next week to find out
  4. thedman
    Great concept, could have used a proofread or three
  5. thedman
    People are always saying "There goes farmer Daffy, getting stuck under her tractor and saying those naughty words again"
  6. thedman
    Those darn farmers, always having the tractor fall over on them
  7. thedman
    Awww, this was too good to be a one off. Can we pretty please have one more chapter?
  8. thedman
    Wow.... that was a thrill, very well done
  9. thedman
    What an awesome plot twist at the end for the new fish, great work, thanks for sharing
  10. thedman
    Bernadette, don't ask why because honestly I have no clue, as soon as I saw that pepper the name popped into my head. She can be Bernie for a cute puppy name
  11. thedman
    Yeah, this is a bit extreme, at least a warning would do
  12. thedman
    I said it on Tumblr but I will say it here too. I love how much intensity you were able to build in such a short story. I think the shortness almost allows us to build in our own little portions of the plot in our mind and makes the reading experience even more enthralling. So glad to see you back in the writing game
  13. thedman
    You just know that Bala will find a way to get back at Ai for ruining her world. Can't wait to see how this plays out in future portions of these stories.
  14. thedman
    Bravo, perfectly executed! What an amazing way to bring it all to a conclusion that makes sense.
  15. thedman
    Well you've gone done and done it again... can't say that I was anticipating the outcome of this chapter any more than any of the previous. I'm starting to feel like I need a road map to help me keep track of all the twists in this one, I love it!
  16. thedman
    I like the start, can't wait to see where this goes
  17. thedman
    Oh this is definitely fun and interesting, I'm legitimately feeling the confusion and actually disoriented would be a fairly accurate description. I love that we never have a clue where this story is going. It doesn't fit into a trope or fulfill some usual fantasy storyline of a typical diaper story. It hits on little bits and pieces that I suspect might appeal to parts of various reader's fantasies but still manages to pull them all back into one (I want to use the word cohesive here, but I gotta read to the end before I can say that) storyline. Honestly speaking this is one of the most intriguing pieces of literature that I can ever recall reading and I can't wait to see how it plays out in the end.
  18. thedman
    Wow, just wow, this gets deeper and more twisted with every chapter, I'm always on the edge of my seat when I'm reading the new material
  19. thedman
    Wow, great twist to end that chapter off! Now, the big question, what did mom "forget".....
  20. thedman
    The plot is great, the switching between first and third person narrative, sometimes within a paragraph makes this last chapter hard to read. If you stick to one perspective it becomes a lot less confusing, IE instead of saying I/my use He/his or they/theirs or her/hers as would be indicated when referencing the character
  21. thedman
    Can't wait to see more added to this great story
  22. thedman
    Glad you decided to pose a "question" that has no relevance to the plot of the story to try and see if it can fall into your own FAP desires great commentary, I'm sure it will inspire the author to continue
  23. thedman
    Another great story in this series
  24. thedman
    I wonder if Evie staged the kidnapping..... A way to induce/ reinforce Stockholm syndrome
  25. thedman
    Wow, just binge read the whole story, it is awesome so far. Can't wait to see what happens with the new plot twist
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