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junyour

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  1. A very good beginning. I am enjoying this story. However, I did see 1 minor error repeated. You used the word women several times to refer to one person, rather than woman. A miunor error to be certain, but one which you might watch for. Keep up the good work and I will keep reading. Thank you
  2. A fantasy come true, but all wrong. Keer up the story and I will keep reading.
  3. I agree with prior statements. Please go on.
  4. This is more of a play than a story. Written in the first person singular makes it a difficult read. Grammer and spelling wise it looks to be pretty fair, though. I agree with others who wonder why it is not posted on the story board
  5. A great story. Keep it coming, please
  6. A good start, but rather common. I noticed a few spelling errors and the like( it should be nurse, not nerse) so a spell and grammer check should be used if you decide to continue. Keep trying and I will try to keep reading
  7. Firsthand Experience is available in stories on this site if you care to read it. I can only hope White Badge Of Shame makes it back soon. As for Magicboxx, I am still waiting on moderators ok to read other stories. Hope it comes soon.
  8. A good story but I thunk I found a typo. I brlieve you meant"she led me to the changing table" rather than " she let me to the changing table. Other than that a good story.
  9. Interesting story. I hope others like it as much as I did
  10. An enjoyableread. Please add more
  11. This story is going somewhere. I really hope it goes on for a while. I am not into modern music but this sounds like a good time will be had by the protagonist. I can recall no errors in spelling or grammer, but I really wasn't looking Keep up the good work and I will keep reading
  12. Great chapter. I almost wish my family would tolerate it in me as much as Jon's family will apperently try to understand his needs. Hurry with the next chapter please
  13. A very good start. Please keep working on it. I am enjoying this story
  14. I am a 54 y/o divorced male who wants to be an adult toddler, but my gf does not understand the fetish, calling it porn etc. I wonder what a person should do in a situation like this?
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