Jump to content
LL Medico Diapers and More Bambino Diapers - ABDL Diaper Store

FloridaKid

Members
 View Profile  See their activity

  • Posts

    318

  • Joined

  • Last visited

 Content Type 

Everything posted by FloridaKid

  1. FloridaKid
    Elise going off script…how could that possibly go wrong!? At some point she has to see Julie as more than just a coworker. If there’s anything “cruel” in what you’re doing here, it’s teasing us with the prospect of a relationship but never pursuing it. Now that’s just mean ?. *but said with love and respect for such a wonderful writer as you*
  2. FloridaKid
    And Luna Mommy went for it…but then you knew that and played me like a violin. ? Nicely done. ?
  3. FloridaKid
    Great beginning! Hooked me again. Can’t wait to see where you take this one.
  4. FloridaKid
    And there it is…Lisa lives down to expectations and you’re keeping TomCat in play. It’ll be interesting to see where you take them in future loops. I agree with @Moon3ye that it seems you’re setting Elise up to view adoption as something other than a death sentence. She may not be ready to accept it, but she has seen that it’s not all bad for Danny. I don’t think you’re mean, although this has been more of a mind game than the LiL series. You do seem to derive pleasure from squeezing our brains just a little. ? Hope your stressful situation is resolved soon. (I really enjoy your comments.)
  5. FloridaKid
    Great short story. Looked for a second like you were headed into Quantum Leap territory, but happily you twisted that on its head rather nicely. I’m with @YourFNF here…little brain melting going on in my skull.
  6. FloridaKid
    I haven’t mentioned it up to now, but I love the lines of code at the beginning of each chapter! This is a terrific story and I really like your approach. ?? Indeed. I hereby rescind my quote marks on the word relationship. Go for it, Luna. Still creeped out and worried where Sophie will end up. ?
  7. FloridaKid
    Tom and Cat. Tomcat!? Should we be worried? Lisa is a piece of work. Tomcat catching a cute mouse for her? ?
  8. FloridaKid
    Love how you’re developing this “relationship.” If AI didn’t creep me out before, it does now. Although I wouldn’t necessarily object to Luna’s style of care, the idea that it could be off the rails in other directions is scary. Your narrative is pretty plausible. Looking forward to future chapters!
  9. FloridaKid
    So Elise has reached the “WTF…go for it” stage. Julie is still a sweetheart (thank you for that) and she keeps dropping little hints at how much she cares for Elise. Definitely interested to see where you go with that. I love the romantic side of your stories…so here’s to hope. You’re making Danielle’s Mommy seem not so bad here, but the unexpected guests have me flashing back to the robot from Lost in Space shouting “Danger!” *pulls down the safety harness and prepares for the coaster ride*
  10. FloridaKid
    I’m finally all caught up on BabySofia stories. Woohoo! I love this story and the continuation of the Exchanged story thread. I have a question that I’ve been dying to ask since chapter 7: Are the “four different dimensions” and in particular the “water” world an allusion to LittleFallenPrincess Little in Love dimensions? I don’t recall dimensions other than ours and DD in your other stories (unless you include Emerald Princess). LOVE this story and really hope you get some rest before tackling it again. As much as I love the story, like others here, I’m genuinely more concerned for your well-being. ❤️?
  11. FloridaKid
    @smokie 03…yep. What you said. I wonder if the connecting thread here is Elise’s deep seated fear of adoption and that is triggering psychological episodes instead of actual time loops. She did study psychology and maybe this is a side effect of a study she’s involved with…as in, she’s still in school. Hailey, Danielle and her Mommy are all known to her at that time and are central to her episodes. I know it doesn’t explain the other characters well, but I recall a few of those required psych participant deals from college. They usually left me a little uneasy and I never really knew what the true point of the study was. There is one interaction that doesn’t vary at all from loop to loop: Alicia. Scores 10/10 on my curiosity meter. Julie is still a sweetie. You wouldn’t take that away from Elise, would you? Silly me, of course you would. ?
  12. FloridaKid
    Luna’s “suggestion” is fairly predictable, particularly given where this story is posted, but I’m curious to see how the relationship progresses. Just how far is Sophie willing to go and at what point will Luna’s side hustle allow her to make real world purchases to “benefit” Sophie? Interesting story. Thanks for sharing it with us!
  13. FloridaKid
    OK @LittleFallenPrincess, you’ve got me going back for those clues, and now it seems like Julie has enough going for her that she bubbled to the top of my (now very short) list. She’s sweet, clearly cares for Elise, has even asked her if she ever considered dating an Amazon, and treats her with respect. I just want to drop a piano on all of the others. Don’t know enough about Alicia yet, so not totally ruling her out. Going back and seeing things through a different lens, I’m not sure why I was so hung up on Hailey. Well, saving Elise’s butt did help, but now we know why.
  14. FloridaKid
    Rats. Love the story but had hoped Hailey was above the crazed Amazon mommy obsession.
  15. FloridaKid
    Whelp. Damn. Just damn. Have to wait and see what Hailey’s explanation is. She still might be the best “option” if her motivation is love. I just hope it’s what Elise wants. That or you’re just teasing us. You, being mean? Say it isn’t so.
  16. FloridaKid
    Gotcha. (Count me in as a Star Trek fan…)
  17. FloridaKid
    Same here. I don’t want to suspect that Hailey has an ulterior motive (hopeless romantic that I am) and so far I hope she’s the one, but I know littlefallenprincess well enough to know it’ll be anything but a smooth ride getting there. This is the fourth pass. She started feeling that things were off in the second pass (that we know of), but our author has taken great care to have her gradually realize more and more about each pass and become more proactive instead of reactive in successive passes. Call me silly if you will, but I keep a chart for littlefallenprincess stories to keep track of characters and settings. Maybe it’s just OFS (old fart syndrome), but it helps. ?
  18. FloridaKid
    And Luna isn’t creepy. Nope. Not at all. *cautiously picks up iPhone and checks the permissions for every installed app*
  19. FloridaKid
    I’m definitely enjoying your story. I like the slow burn of Luna’s developing “care” for Sophie. Your portrayal of her evolving AI personality is quite intriguing. Yes, things happened pretty quickly in the last chapter, but I like how you’re moving the story along. Nice work!
  20. FloridaKid
    Thank you. Wasn’t too bad where I live (Virginia). The wind was the worst of it…blew for a couple of days at 30+mph, but nowhere near the intensity with which it struck my home state of Florida.
  21. FloridaKid
    Maybe our protagonist has been through this loop before we see her for the first time? Is Act 1 merely a continuation of Elise’s hellscape and we’re joining a program already in progress?
  22. FloridaKid
    *hopeless romantic cheers from the sidelines* However, given your first two acts I’m sure Elise isn’t out of the woods yet. I have to admit you’ve got me going here. I’m looking for clues and patterns…I know they are in there somewhere. Yes, I know gumdrop is Liv’s safeword, but since the loop seems to be hypnosis-centric, I can always hope Elise has one, too. Love and hope…love and hope. Holding on to what I can! ❤️?
  23. FloridaKid
    GUMDROP!!! (Heck, it’s worth a shot!)
  24. FloridaKid
    Whew! Finally caught up. I love the LiL references that would only be noticed by your “regulars” yet not detract from the story if someone hadn’t read that series. Part of me secretly hopes LIBRA will swoop in and save the day…nah, I guess not. There’s a little purple devil sitting on your shoulder full time for this story, so that’s not going to happen. Poor Elise. Even though she’s figured out the trigger for a new loop, she still has to endure the process leading up to it…and each time it seems to ratchet up a notch. My heart can’t take it. ? That said, it’s a great story so far and you’ve sucked me into another series. Bring it.
  25. FloridaKid
    Woohoo! What a ride! Being late to the party has an upside…I read the last 20 or so chapters back to back in one day for a white-knuckle-edge-of-the-seat-oh-crap-we’re-all-going-to-die roller coaster ride. *checks pulse for at least the third time today* For what it’s worth, I kept waiting for Paige’s “acquisition” to be revealed. Nothing in your writing happens by accident and the lack of details or further mention was in itself telling. I knew you wouldn’t disappoint. Several of your plot twists at the end were very good and caught me by surprise. The parallel between the High Priest and those IRL who refuse to relinquish power or impose their ideals on others at the expense of an entire society was not lost. *quickly jumps off soap box for fear of raising his blood pressure* Through it all I am amazed at how you managed to keep love and hope at the center of the story. Some stories within this community hint at it, only to dive into dark places and stay there, or at least seemingly lose focus. Thank you for your epic littlefallenverse saga. Can’t wait for more. *pulse ok. BP ok. life is good* Finally, your exchanges in the comments, particularly with @Moon3ye and @YourFNF, were absolutely priceless. I looked forward to those almost as much as the story itself. You’ve gained a faithful follower here and I’m excited to see what you publish next. ❤️?
×
×
  • Create New...