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  1. FloridaKid
    I agree, but the hopeless romantic in me keeps looking for ways Elise can feel safe and loved. Depending on your point of view, it’s my strength or a flaw. ?
  2. FloridaKid
    Still not ready to give up on Julie. She seems to care for Elise for all the right reasons. But then I would not put it past you to flip the script…love can make you crazy.
  3. FloridaKid
    Not ready to give up on Julie. I agree she may think she has Elise’s best interests at heart. Julie’s own heart may be a factor as well…the clues are there, Elise just doesn’t see them.
  4. FloridaKid
    Love the dynamic you’re building between them. Bring on the snarky side. ?
  5. FloridaKid
    Oh well. Scratch another one off the list. ?
  6. FloridaKid
    Awww. *deep sigh from the hopeless romantic in me* ❤️? Several possible relationships for Elise…can’t wait to see what happens (after it all goes sideways again ?).
  7. FloridaKid
    What could possibly go wrong? ?
  8. FloridaKid
    Turned a corner…can’t wait to see what’s around the bend. Maybe Elise wanting it breaks the loop? Glad she reconnected with Eve in this loop.
  9. FloridaKid
    Love how you’re changing things slightly each time. Curious to find out how Alicia knows Elise’s name in later loops.
  10. FloridaKid
    I have no doubt it will be worth the wait. I highly encourage you to use your gift…regardless of the style/genre. You are an exceptional writer and it would be a shame to waste such talent. ❤️? Trying hard not to go all fan-baby on you, but I really do like your writing style. ?
  11. FloridaKid
    More stories from Lyra Silver, please?
  12. FloridaKid
    You have done such a great job with this story. ❤️ Creating a virtual character that is so creepy at first, yet easily believable and that I actually care about by the end of the story is wonderful. You also did such a nice job with Sophie’s character, making her someone I had compassion for right from the start. The EOF chapter is the perfect conclusion to this story. Went right back to being just a little creepy when Luna broke the fourth wall and was talking directly to me, but I’d have clicked DOWNLOAD in a heartbeat. I really do hope you continue to write for this genre. There are some talented writers here, and IMHO you stand out as one of the best.
  13. FloridaKid
    This is a very good story and I hope you’ll continue as you are able. I have to admit to being a little put off by most of the characters other than Melissa. Each seems to be taking gross advantage of her and right now I’d drop a piano on Sarah. Ironically, her mother is one of the only people who truly seem to have Melissa’s best interests at heart. As a hopeless romantic, I’d love to see Tammy develop more of a selfless, loving relationship with Melissa as the program progresses. There are plenty of other characters to create anxiety, I hope Tammy could be a true safe place for Missy. I fully understand needing a break and I hope you get the rest you need.
  14. FloridaKid
    So, Alicia’s recollection of Elise’s name brings up an interesting notion I almost mentioned earlier: that Elise might not be the only one who’s aware of the loop. Or Alicia is in on it somehow. We know so little about her. I’m sorry Elise didn’t go to the appointment with Eve. ? You gave us hope and then swiped it out from under us. Rats. ? And if you get “one phone call” in DD…who do you suppose Elise might call? Julie or Alicia? If she’s in WTF mode, might be Alicia.
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    I beg to differ. You’re doing a wonderful job. I hope you’ll continue beyond Luna! I would sincerely place you alongside two of my other favorite authors here: LittleFallenPrincess and BabySofia. I’ve mentioned in comments on their stories what a hopeless romantic I am, and the way I see a caring (dare I say loving?) relationship developing between Sophie and Luna appeals to that part of me. ❤️?
  16. FloridaKid
    Loving Nia! I appreciate the development of all the characters (which you do so well in all your stories) and can’t wait to see how you build the relationship between Nia and Victoria. Given her snarky personality, Nia’s “interrogation” should prove to be hilarious. ?
  17. FloridaKid
    The reference is in chapter 7 of “Lights, Camera, …What!?” and mentions other dimensions, including Paige and Alex’s “water dimension.” When I commented on it, this is what BabySofia had to say: “I have always tried to have some little ties in with other stories that I feel like are at the top level of writing in the dimension. LittleFallenPrincess wasn't the first to have multiple other dimensions, but definitely the first to really explore many of them the way she has. (Brilliantly!)” I can hardly wait for her to get back to that story, but understand she needs a break. You each take DD to a completely different level in your writing, taking care to focus on relationships and character development. I completely agree with her that you do it brilliantly.
  18. FloridaKid
    Awwwww. Each gift is quite special. With IoT, I guess there’s theoretically no limit to what kind of input Luna might eventually have access to. You’re developing this so well and I’m really enjoying the story!
  19. FloridaKid
    Indeed. I shall endeavor to be more attuned to those crossovers! I thoroughly enjoy your writing, especially when you thread stories together. For what it’s worth, I even caught a reference to the LittleFallenVerse in one of BabySofia’s stories. Kinda fun feeling like you’re in on the little secret (pun intended). ?
  20. FloridaKid
    Dr. Eve Wilson is Eve from LiL. Feel kinda dense I missed that, especially since I posted weeks ago how I hoped LIBRA would somehow save the day and Eve is one of their associates. *bounces in anticipation of more crossovers*
  21. FloridaKid
    Couple of nice little tidbits revealed in the appointment. Love and maybe a job prospect? Nice. Tom the bad guy? Hardly seems like it, but not too much of a stretch, I guess. Then again, maybe Elise makes it to tomorrow and has a chance to follow up with the doctor and Danny. Or one of the other sharks in the water pops up at Elise’s apartment. Gettin’ loopy just considering the possibilities at this point. ?
  22. FloridaKid
    Intrigued at the connection between the unknown trauma and the unknown “her” now that we have Niathruxzon (may I please call you Nia?) in the picture and Victoria is so fascinated with her. Oooohh…how will snarky Niathruxzon play this hand in Victoria’s world? Love her sassy character so far!
  23. FloridaKid
    Gyaaah!! You’ve been working overtime on this cliffhanger. I love the way you’ve developed Luna’s personality and begun regularly referring to how she feels about Sophie as opposed to what she has inferred from actions. It’s consistent with your explanation of machine learning. So now Luna has hope. What’s next, love? Seems the next logical step given their “mutual symbiosis.”
  24. FloridaKid
    Mmmmaybe. No worries. New loop. I still have hope for the one relationship @LittleFallenPrincess has been teasing us with: Julie. If she pulls that rug out from under me I may just go in a corner and rock back and forth for awhile. ?
  25. FloridaKid
    I like this doctor so far. How will this variation in the loop impact Lisa’s visit? Can’t wait to see the trigger.
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