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@spankpaul_uk If you were a little more interested, it would be easy to put diapers on the girl too. 😉 You have laid the foundation for this, because the way she was spanked, would she automatically wet herself out of fear, even if she had been on the toilet a minute before. At the latest, if her father came to her, would it happen. But if you prefer a different fetish, that's completely fine with me, because I'm also a fan of spanking. Just wearing diapers, changing them, feeding them, cuddling them, and mothering them is way too boring for me! That's why I like your story anyway and look forward to more. And I know ... that it's all fantasy. Good Job And thanks for sharing.😊 @ Mary Moon So Mary Moon, now I just have to speak up because things are getting worse and worse with you and your completely weird ideas that you are spreading everywhere. For me personally, it is definitely clear that you are at least 40 years old (probably even much older!). You left school ages ago, and your level of knowledge is exactly where you were in the 80s or early 90s, and you haven't learned anything! How did I get that? Well, it's your scattered puzzle pieces and your wild fantasies about the welfare of children. You are as far away from the actual reality as you can possibly be! When ever possible, you don't forget to mention your incontinence, exactly the kind, as I knew, from a man! The persistent way of having to communicate doesn't exactly speak for you as a feminist either. Corona: Well, you want to have traveled across Europe at the age of 16 to get to Spain? Nice try! The fact is that Europe had massive problems from January 2020. Germany once again played fireman and admitted Italians, Spaniards, and French people to hospitals because the mass deaths had started in many countries! The Chinese even came to Italy to help ... You probably just forgot, right? There were many more countries that Germany helped, and it was a nice feeling to do good to our neighbors and to help them...Because these countries didn't even have nearly enough respirators! Note: "Merkel has completely failed here too! A few good politicians led us through this crisis, who helped in an unbureaucratic way, especially Markus Söder! Back to the topic... And you (at 16) are traveling to Spain irresponsibly as you are? And that when the borders in Europe were closed? That really leaves me speechless! You should be locked up for that alone, just to think about the meaning of life for two weeks. I don't want to know who you infected on your mad tour! If this tour ever really happened, which I doubt! You are a typical person who lives by the motto... "I am for being against it!" There is nothing more to you; I am absolutely sure of that! Raising children Since 2000, children in Germany have had a fundamental right to a non-violent upbringing! For me is it a kind of state patronizing at parents! I call that a massive attack on self-determination! Please note: I do not support violence against children in to the real life! BUT A spanking is not violence against children for me! Of course, what is described in this story is also violence against children for me and should be prosecuted in real life! No parent who loves their child would punish them so harshly, let alone make them count every single blow! But we're not in real life here. Right? Good! Because for me, it's a pretty good story that I really like. On the other hand, I've never read anywhere that you like anything! So I ask myself, Why are you here? Concretely; Why do you read many author's warnings and then read the storys anyway? Is that your true calling? To tell unqualified nonsense? Or do you just want to create a bad mood? There are lots of authors here that I don't read, even though they can write brilliantly. I just find their topics yawningly boring... wear diapers, changing diapers, feeding, cuddling, that's it, and that goes on for 20-100 chapters. Can you see any comments from me? Of course not, because someone likes it, and I don't have to add my two cents when I know exactly that I don't like it. I don't have to tell anyone that I don't like it. I don't like your babble about what you supposedly know. When I can clearly see that you know nothing! The reality in Germany is completely different from what is written in the law books! This also includes the Scandinavian countries, which have been practicing non-violent parenting since 1980! The fact is that the classic spanking still occurs much more often than anyone would like to admit! I myself was being spanked, and more often than I would like. And here we are now, on a "fantasy fetish-oriented site" where there are lots of multifaceted versions of stories! Nothing is true from this storys here!!! Mind you, it's only stories and not real life! Think a little bit more and longer, before you write anything. Better is, you stop it complet. If you could be ignored, so that I didn't have to read your superfluous comments, I would have done that a long time ago, believe me. Then I wouldn't have to invade your comfort zone now! Believe it or not, I hate having to write this. But at some point I've enough of it too, I mean from your person. And now if you want to discuss, so write me a pm. This is the only way for you, I wont give your a puplic stage!!! I hope you understand this clear message. thx

Hello I agree with you 100%! A mother always walks a fine line between right and wrong! A mother who loves her child will always want to protect it, even if that results in unpleasant consequences! I don't know a mother who hasn't spanked her child at least once! And if the laws of the dystopian world also state, that girls/young women aged 0-21 are forced, to be diapered and punished if necessary... well, then all I can say is that you are still very reserved with your story. I am very happy that you are continuing to write and how you are trying to build up a certain level of strictness without omitting the mother's secret tears. Very good work best wish Bad mad snowwhite

So, what we have here? Well, at the moment it looks like it's a mixed bag of special departments, each woman or men with special skills. That suggests that you know and like all the crime series, that have been around in the last 30 years JAG, NCIS, CIS NY/Miami, Seals, Sicario, Chicago P.D / Law&Order NY, MI5 and many more. So I'm assuming you're of German origin, if it so, then we have that in common. Well, I love these series too and my personal favorites aren't even included. These would be "Seven, Silence of the Lambs, Kiss the Girls (Doc Alex Cross), Taken 96h, Equalizer 1and 2 not 3, or Jack Reacher (Tom Cruise) and not the Jack Reacher series with the completely overrated actor. The way you tell it, it still seems a bit bumpy, but the common thread is already clearly visible and it's pleasing! I realize that the kidnapping is just a very small subplot and you want investing more time in building up the framework. That is realy fine. But please make sure that you don't just tell a normal crime story, because, then you would undoubtedly be better on Wattpad, than here. Here want all really just want see, how your character end up in diapers. And then how the character are treated happily and lovingly. I'm completely different... it's important to me that there is no happy ending. Because this site already has thousands of stories like that. The darker you get, would I like it. And I am sure I am not alone with that wish. So now you have 2 options 1. you write a crime story with the main plot of the "new special unit" (I am intrest, but i wont read it here) or 2. your main plot will be the kidnapped girl Benson, and your special unit has only a small subplot. Annotation; Detective Olivia Benson... when comes Elliot Stabler? I like him so much cheeky grin. But if you really want to write a good new sadistic crime story without rules and boundaries, I strongly recommend that you use "Archive of our own". Only there can you really write the way you want to tell it. Here a dark story is told quicker, than you would like. (deleted) And that's just because a stranger sees the genitals when a girl is being changed or spanked. But with others who only write sweetly mostly, it is tolerated. So double standards always apply here. Always keep this in mind, when you write here. I really liked your start, now you decide how you continue to write. And I also decide whether I am still interested, or whether that is it. thx for sharing this best wish to you The bad mad snowwhite

This is a fantastic, dystopian world that you give us here. What bothers me about Preston is that a lot of it is extremely unbelievable. Here a certain reality is possible at any time or not so far-fetched. Her narrative pace is great. Thank you so much for sharing this story. You caught me, I'm a follower from now on. I would love to read more. Thanks again best wish snow white

I don't particularly like these kinds of stories. I started it and really liked the basic idea, so I read all. But since chapter 15 there have only been "gap filler" chapters. This whole girls' night out seems forced and feels like an alien body. It doesn't fit together. You let Paige be a bitch and Noelle bought it too. So why drag this out with stupid video games? When there are so many other/better ways to slowly push Alyssa back. You doesn't need a girl gang that "happens" to meet on Friday night Sorry, but the last 5 chapters are incredibly boring and do nothing, to move your story forward. Instead, it would have been much more interesting if you had slowly mentioned to Alyssa what her parents were willing to allow in order to get a well-behaved Miley. An omission that the parents definitely messed up, so now it needs a Noelle to correct the omission. I agree with you 100% that spankings go very well with an age regression. And the way you described it, the way she was spanked, was very good. I'd love more of that. The screaming to law & Order is ....... Lol ... I'm not saying what I think ... lol Your character development and the pacing is very good. Your writing style is very good. You just dwell way too much on something, that your story doesn't need at all. You build up tension, but you destroy it just as quickly. Paige has done her share of work, why don't you just let her go to girlfriends and leave Aylssa to her weekend fate. From then on, the door is open to you. Starting with Ayssa's revenge or Alyssa's 8-week fate. With a strict governess, nanny or even your high school girl All in all, I like your idea the story and would it like to read more! Maybe can you win a patron more, I want now go to your webside and look at your other story best wish from bad mad snowwithe

Except for a sequel, that felt like it took forever, but finally came from (fiver), this is pretty much the best BDSM-oriented regression reading, what I have read, in months! Your pacing is very good. Since English is not my mother tongue, I get along very well with the past and present tense. What counts for me is the content and not any grammatical frills, especially since you also said it's just a draft! For just one draft, it turned out very well. Your story is easy to read and very enjoyable. Of course you can forced it even more if they don't know each other. But in your story it doesn't matter because the two characters are very well developed. The age of the two doesn't really matter either. In my life at elementary school I also had a teacher who I was very much in love with, she was slightly plump and when she read us stories in German just before the holidays when the lessons were over (Watership down). I melted when she read a story or spoke with authority. I hoped she would chastise me too and then she comforts me again. At the age of 10 it's was still prepubescent love! My parents were very strict, but Claire and her strictness are carrots and sticks. Very well dosed, it feels right and good. I am a woman who likes it very strict, but I also love such stories from time to time. In short, I love your story and I'm curious how it will continue. You really deserved the three trophies, very good work greetings from the bad mad snow white.

huhuhu How is one of my favorite authors doing? I hope You are fine. I am very sorry to hear about Queen Elizabeth but she was living to a very old age and more importantly she was fit enough under the circumstances. I think 2021 broke them. As queen, she was strong like no other person. As a human, she was more human than most humans will ever be. I will never forget how lonely and huddled together she sat on the bench at her husband's funeral. If I had been in church, I would have shat at the etiquette and given the woman a much needed hug. I was ashamed of Prince Charles, but I understand too why he diden´t can do it, but for me it was a fault, that no one sat an her side.

I criticized this story not, because it is bad, stupid, illogical or anything else! I criticized it, because it was either too fast in the narrative, there was too little interaction or something was wrong in the timing. Personally, the little sister was completely out of place, I would have swapped roles! That's hardly a reason to say or claim, I am giving unfair reviews. I reading a story that I do not like in any way. I reading never a story what I can´t like! Normaly I read the first 3-5 paragraphs, don't like what I read I walk out as quietly as I walked in! If I read already at the beginning age regression, little boy, sissy, babyfur, lovley mum, I do not even begin to read. The same goes for a lot of authors who just keep writing the same rubbish. And they don't even understand what MD/LG ; DD/LG actually means ... because these softys rape the word Dom Mum, Dom Dad! What they actually mean is NM/LG, ND/LG, normal mum, normal dad. This Author has wrote 2 scene what i hold for best moments ever. The interaction with her Mum is one of the best thing, what I have ever read. The same with the mute moment at the dining table as her Mum looks at her husband (her stepdad) eyes and both nod silently to initiate the next step for them. That was great cinema!!! . conclusion ... What you wrote or mean, is simply a lie! ... I loved this story and I shared that with the author both by pm and here. I deleted my comments only because I received no reaction from the author! This in turn tells me I am an undesirable person for this reason I deleted my quite justified criticisms and especially the praise I gave. At no time did I find this story bad. The same applies to you I warned you early that you write yourself into a corner, if you continue your story with the children to the point drift ... and that's exactly what happened! No one has actually torn your story, it's sad that you try your writer's block with cheap excuses to circumnavigate. think about it ... your story is all the time a great story but you wrote your self in to a corner! I belive the same is happen here too. Its never a good idea to diaper a Mum, from her daughter, or a younger sister diapered the older sister. That is a 100% thing, how you write in to a corner!!! That is only a story example you both diden´t yet that ... But here will at maybe soon happend ... @AndTheChips ... I had love it your story ... but the sister ... and your silence ... smile ... Now I will leave your dead story again! Maybe you come back with a nice turn??? ... big smile I was just important to set something right!!! best wish from the bad mad snowwhite

I hope you like an honest opinion! 1. your writing style is extremely hard to read! Your storyboard (idea) implementation, is unfortunately not so good. exemple ... what do you want your dock to be? changing table? whipping bench? 2. You mercilessly cross Lily's thoughts with the plot and sequences without appropriate paragraphs! 3. I love it when a story has a plot, but you drag it out, unnecessarily and then with incomprehensible expressions like "dock" or are they sitting on chairs around a changing table or on a bench? 4. Then all the word repetitions, it is enough to mention once how often who is changed, but then to call the prisoners as one changer, two changers, etc. is annoying. 5. your biggest mistake is... You should reconsider your statement about your story!!! It is not okay that you want to dictate something to someone! I live and represent BDSM, I know how to handle it. Beginners or people who think "the story of O" or "50 shades of grey" or "The secretary", is real BDSM life, should keep their hands off BDSM! Likewise people who watch BDSM movies on the internet on porn sites! 99% of all already make the first mistake with the safe word! No Dom would ever remind a sub (her or his ) of the safe word again! It is gennant once and that's it. In conclusion something positive! I like your story idea If I may give you a tip, then try never to drag something artificially in the length. Revise it and it can become a top story. sorry but that's how it looks and that might also be the reason why you hardly get any feedback. best wish from bad mad snowwhite

There is no need to apologize! Job is job! You have captured me since the 1st chapter and you know what I like! I has never covering it up and if other readers get out and I'm still in the story ... then is the storyboard also very good indeed! Because it is not a uniform porridge that you served us. ### Now let's move on to your 10th chapter "Toiletries". I bet, everyone who read this will now have expected the diapers ... Well, not everyone ... I had to smile when I read that ... what it means should be obvious. The chapter itself ... The forecourt to hell ... big smile I like how much depth you give the individual characters (bit-part player) and how you try to blur the track. Maybe you have already described Penny's fate, with a name from all of this bit-part player ... but I do not think so! Your pace is perfect for me! You turn the tension screw very slowly, that is so good, that I can´t wait for more, much more please ...

@doogles ... I hope times very much that you have not meant me! Because, I am the very latest, to criticize his writing style, his narrative and his content! With one exception, his pace was way too fast for a brief moment, why he did it, he portrayed it very believably for me! I am here to be entertained and not to read inappropriate comments about politics! Of course he has to do that, a political story set, in to a timeline, that politically also allows women to be discriminated against and mistreated accordingly! So if you take to go back a few pages, you will inevitably find that you 100% agree with me, only in different words ... If they didn't mean me by that, then I say sorry! Sometimes I have a very thin skin and just because English is not my first language, I could easily get something wrong. I know I reflect strongly because most can't handle BDSM and diapers and like to try to deny the sexual aspect. That's a fact, nowhere are people as quick to hostile as in the AB/DL scene and gender doesn't matter! @WebDaddy Once again, for you and the co author all alone, I love your´s "dystopian world" your comparison to "the handmaids tale" came from yourself! (from the beginning). I have never seen this series, until today, but what I have seen is "One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest" ! The whole last chapter rams this comparison almost perfectly and why that is ... I could write a whole treatise about that as well! I am a fan of Jack Nicholson and there is both "shining" and "one flew over the cuckoo´s nest" duty. And despite being almost 50 years old now, this movie is still pretty relevant. But since, I think you're a great storyteller, I'm also absolutely sure, that's exactly what you intended! About the third point you brought into play, I could speculate now and would probably be right, but I have no interest in spoiling in any way! So you have continued to captivate me. Thanks for your work and for sharing this with us readers. best wish from bad mad snowwhite

Hello WBDaddy, glad you have some time and air to continue writing your story. I am very curious in how far your orginal story is from my story. I repeat again, I love your beginning and picked it up, but you won't recognize it from chapter three with me, especially after I read your 8th chapter. Which I find very interesting, by the way. "The Handmaid's Tale meets One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest" .... I'm curious to see what else is coming. You make a good and intrest job! best wish from bad mad snowwhite

Hello Fifers12 When I read your 4th chapter, I was completely confused! You did everything wrong for me in the 4th chapter that could possibly be done wrong! 1. no interaction between the characters involved 2. one enumeration chased the next 3. lots of time jumps ... 4. extremely fast narrative pace ... slower would be so much better, so much more exciting, keep in mind that in your (still 5th chapter) you use a much slower and therefore much more logical narrative style. This in turn allows your readers to dive much deeper into your story! Then you really take your readers on a journey full of BDSM eroticism! My personal conclusion for your 4th chapter is ... Nothing fit together Now came your 5th chapter ... honestly, I had very mixed feelings! I wasn't sure, if I actually wanted to read your 5th yet! However, curiosity got the better of me .... luckily ... your 5th chapter, is in fact your 4th, I am right or am I right? And that seems to have been noticed by no one but me. There I ask myself again, why is that so ... After chapter 3, your chapter 5 fits much better than your original 4th chapter. This original 4 chapter (which continues to be very poorly implemented) fits much better as a 5th because it continues your doorbell as well. If I may recommend something to you, it would be that you should swap places with chapters 4 and 5 and take the opportunity to completely revise chapter 5 again. I really like your story, even though it was picked up from somewhere else, I especially like, that you plan to finish it. I know this story as unfinished ... I'm looking forward like a little thief if you revise chapter 5 again and if chapter 6 appears someday. Thank you for your work and for taking us on your journey. Of cours a trophy for chapter 5th (maybe is it soon 4th) best wish from mad bad snowwhite.

Wow, Bonsai respect, I have no idea about metalworking, but I love your execution! And I believe every word you say! ? I was not aware, that you are a big BDSM fan! I will put my knowledge about metalworking with your knowledge (don't worry my knowledge is truly very small concerning metals!). I like it only to wear this, silver, platin, gold, A4 steel ... but never I can work with that! Back to result: We dress Bala nice and thick, so that she is sweated through very soon and her atoms can look for a nice position. Then we put Bala on a punish buck (not on an anvil!) and work (spank) her long and properly with the cane, paddle, belt, martinet, until her body feels comfortable (i.e. the atoms have aligned themselves so that she associates spanking with pleasurable feelings). Then we put her in a cold bathtub, and then immediately put her back in thick diapers ... now she is held captive in her excretions for at least 24-48h until she is perfectly hardened! Ready is our new Bala (no Krupp steel), but she is now hot, hard and full of SM eroticism ... Thank you Bonsai I love your way of living SM. Honestly I love your whole metaphor. You made my day, thx greetings fom bad mad snowwhite

Thanks for reminding me of one of the most beautiful songs ever!

It's just great how you've been slowly turning the tension screw since chapter 8. The instrument strings are slowly getting tighter and the sound is getting higher and better. I'm really curious where you're sending your readers and what the real goal of this organization is. I wrote a similar story, only I have to honestly admit, your beginning is much more mature and insidious. My focus was more on, what became of the diaper slaves after they were sold by the organization. With you, it's not even clear why it's being done to them and what will become of them! And the best part is, that you still manage to be unpredictable! Great cinema, even if you should now go a different way than I hope, I will not forget your story as soon as. Of course you get a trophy more from me, for your good work.

When I move you have to jump ... jump little boy, jump now...

Hallo dear Turntup35 Here a small selection of BDSM oriented diaper stories in a Diaperdimension There are a few more, but these were either never finished, or take a turn shortly after a few dark scenes, that turned these stories into an AB story! The most promising was Lionsheart's story "The Little Hunter" but I dropped out after chapter 10 I think. Why? well you have to see for yourself, because my soul and taste is deeply dark, as you will notice from my small selection! The 4th recommendation from me, is not a Diaperdimensions story and was never finished too, but is my absolute favorite story here on this DD site! But be warned ... It is also the hardest, what you can find here! bbykimmy ... Is one of my absolute favorites of the active authors. I have a personal ranking in which names like WBDaddy, The dark dweller, YourDiaperCute, Fifer12, Cya, That is a few name , where it is worthwhile, to look in. But sometimes, some of them often lose themselves in unimportant details just to fill chapters ... then dubious video games or cheerleader training have to hold out ... Master in this for me is MennisotaWriter ... sorry my friend, you know I love you and your writing style. My favorite story of him, is the "King" of this kind of acts, I would take without exaggerating at least 10 chapters and delete them without replacement, so badly he has lost his way in parts, these chapters really hurt, so much BDSM, I can not stand it anymore ... hahaha hahaha hahaha Tastes are different, thank goodness. And so this is just my personal opinion and not a call to follow me too! You must find out for your self what you like and what not! MinnesotaWriter, should you read this any time ... I like and love you realy! ... Oh no no no, I mean not real love, more platonic you understand? me ... you ................ Cya mastered this also excelent! Always starts very very well and then ... well you will find out I guess For soft BDSM I have a few names like Elfy, Mia Moore, MennisotaWriter, Babydry ... All are great Story-teller. All the ones, I mentioned, are really good writers, some of them even inspired me with topics, that I took up and wrote much more harder. First and foremost Elfy, bbykimmy, WBDaddy, Lionsheard, MinnesotaWriter. And no fear, no story is a cheap copy, you recognize, if at all, at most the beginning, in the first 2-3 chapters have a certain similarity, but then the post goes on ... My stories are also definitely not for AB's or real underage readers. And you can read it only in German! So, I hope you find now what you search, have fun too read of this 4 story´s, I had it too! 1. 2. 3. 4.

Hello Mia Moore I have been following your story´s from the beginning. I'm not sure if I should love your story´s or hate it! Untile to day, I only follow your story, because your writingstyle is fantastic and I still hope something will happen. With chapter 8, my perseverance of things was finally rewarded. You did more for the content in this one chapter, than in all 7 chapters before. If I were to summarize these 7 chapters they would become 2 and I would write them as sterile as this cold sterile room was. It would have also become only a protocol of the events as Bala was changed in her thought psyche. In chapter 8 you have now managed again that I even wanted to answer you and had to! I will not speculate, because your story is impossible to predict. That's the best compliment an author can get, when he manages to keep his readers interested without giving away his content! Realy good job! Your pacifier as a profile picture, has already deceived me perfectly once. In you as an author is both a dark and a gentle side. And that is the reason, why I am not able to predict your story. That makes your story especially worthwhile. Let's take the coloring book... Aliens was clear to me right after chapter 1 but at the latest after chapter 2! But now after chapter 8 ??? Wrong track or right track? I am not shure that it be aliens! Not so, how you write ... (damed) I don´t know! ... big smile But I belive AI has problems now ... if I think on your dark side ... Therefore I can only repeat myself ... very good work I'll be honest, I always hope that more the dark side wins, simply because I'm not an AB. I am excited what happend next Thanks for sharing this best regards, from bad mad snowwhite

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