NCIS playing mommy

[lolabunny]

       Prologue:

A kidnapping in Maine leads to a long investigation for Special Agent Paul, who will have to work as a team 

Hi, let me introduce myself, I'm Lola and I want to try to write an abdl story that mixes criminal investigation, this story is based on series of the genre, I hope you like it, please leave comments with criticism, praise and improvement, I'll make it clear that English is not my native language spelling and punctuation errors may occur

 

Chapter 01

    In picturesque southern Maine, a short, blonde girl ran along the wooded trails of a local park. Wearing a neon orange shirt with the word L.E.C printed on it and pink leggings, she enjoyed the sunny day while working out. Benson, as she was known, was a popular figure on social media, with a profile full of photos of herself showing her routine and her friends, she was a blogger, while she was running, Benson took her cell phone out of her pocket and captured a photo of the stunning scenery. around you. Excited by the prospect of sharing her activity with her followers, she posted the image on her social networks, adding the hashtag #vidaaoarlivre. Satisfied with the post, she continued her run, holding a bottle of water to stay hydrated.
        
        However, a small accident happened. Benson absentmindedly spilled some water on her pants. Although the incident was barely noticeable to most people, a young brown-haired woman was watching her closely from a nearby bench. Seeing the situation, she quickly got up and started running towards Benson. Upon reaching her, the woman accidentally hit Benson and immediately apologized:

"Sorry, oops! It looks like I spilled water on you." The woman was also carrying a bottle of water, showing a strange coincidence. Benson replied casually, "Don't worry, it's no big deal." However, the lady insisted, offering a solution:

 "Let's go to the bathroom. That way you can clean yourself better." Benson, feeling somewhat uncomfortable with the woman's insistence, hesitated for a moment.

            She didn't have much strength to resist, and before she could say anything, the woman grabbed her hand and started dragging her towards the park's bathroom. However, her words seemed to fall on deaf ears. The woman was determined and showed no signs of stopping. In a moment of desperation, Benson began to think something was wrong. Her heart was beating fast, and she felt a sudden dizziness take over her body. Before she could understand what was happening, the woman, with a cloth in hand, roughly placed it over Benson's mouth. The cloth gave off a strange odor, and the girl felt increasingly weak. It was as if some kind of sleeping medication was mixed into that fabric.
         
        The brown-haired woman went unnoticed by other people in the park, acting like any mother with a child. Her car, an ordinary black SUV, didn't attract attention. Opening the back door of the vehicle revealed a car seat used for children. Carefully, she placed Benson in the car seat and fastened the seat belts, treating her as if she were a child. Taking advantage of the situation, the woman inserted a pacifier into Benson's mouth, as if she was trying to maintain the appearance of an ordinary, harmless child. Once everything was ready, the woman quickly left, heading away from the park and southern Maine. The fate was uncertain, but one thing was clear: Benson was being taken away against her will.

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            Meanwhile, in Washington, D.C., a young special agent named Paul was lying in his bed, resting, when he received an unexpected call. When he answered, he heard a familiar woman's voice: "Special Agent Paul." She was Monica Martinez, the head of the F.N.C agency (FBI, NCIS and CIA) and a high-ranking figure in the intelligence service hierarchy.

             Monica got straight to the point: "There's been a kidnapping in Maine. I need you immediately. Come here in ten minutes." Paul recognized the seriousness of the situation and the urgent tone in his boss's voice. He quickly responded, "Okay, I'll be there." Paul hung up the phone

[diaper24/7]

I like story but do know want NCIS stand for because it stand for Naval Criminal Investigative Service Special Agent . So unless your girl is a navel officer missing this story make no sense.

[keith60]

is that it 

[Hello]

Hello Lola, the opening of this story was well detailed, engaging, suspenseful, and has me curious to hear more. Even though english is not your native speaking language you type in it very well. 

[littlebopeeper]

There is no F.N.C.  are you thinking of the DNI?

[lolabunny]

On 6/2/2024 at 3:25 AM, diaper24/7 said:

I like story but do know want NCIS stand for because it stand for Naval Criminal Investigative Service Special Agent . So unless your girl is a navel officer missing this story make no sense.

Yes, I know that NCIS is about maritime crimes, but I know how to tie it in, and that I'm based on NCIS and Criminal Minds. 

10 hours ago, littlebopeeper said:

There is no F.N.C.  are you thinking of the DNI?

I don't know this one but I'll take a look thanks for commenting 

[lolabunny]

Hello everyone, thanks for taking the time to read my story, please let me know what you think, did you like Paul or Lewis?         

                      Chapter 02 

 

         Paul was awake in his house, preparing breakfast, while talking on the phone to a young investigator. The special agent had an air of security and dominance, reflecting his experience and skills in the field. As he poured coffee into his cup, some of the hot liquid dribbled out and hit his hand. Paul sighed and thought to himself: "I'll buy another one on the way.”. On the other end of the line, the person Paul was talking to continued: 

 

"Yes, you need to work as part of a team. They want you closer to here, not just for the results, but also to help the newcomers. Also, take an aspirin, it's been a long night." Paul had a quick flashback to a poker table, with pretty girls and an intense game. He replied: "Don't worry, the guys had marked cards and tried to cheat me. I took a lot of money from them, but I'm on my way."

 

            In the NCIS office where Paul worked, three people were sitting at their respective desks. The environment was organized and full of computers and technological equipment. The walls were decorated with photos of agents in action and medals of honor. The place exuded an air of seriousness and professionalism. A man wearing elegant clothes, with impeccable hair, spoke with a sarcastic tone: 

 

"Will our little Gaspar show up today?" A woman looked in his direction and replied: "The way they called us yesterday, he might show up." The man laughed and teased: "Okay, oracle Cassie, what else can you tell us?" Cassie, a young woman with straight red hair tied up in a bun, replied: "The same as you, Lewis." Lewis laughed again, but before he could say anything else, a young African-American man interrupted the conversation: "Your little Gaspar will have to show up, or the sharks up there will swallow him." Lewis said: "Tonny, tell the gossip in full.”

 

         As the team prepared for another day's work, the elevator doors opened and Paul entered the office. His imposing and determined presence caught everyone's attention. The chapter ends with Paul entering the room, ready to face the challenges that awaited him. Paul arrived at the office, put his things on his desk and immediately addressed the team. He wasted no time and asked Cassie directly:

 

 "Have we had any ransom demands, Cassie?" She answered promptly: "No, and no sign of the kidnapper so far.”

 

Surprised by his colleagues' response, Paul realized that there was still a lot to share about his identity and the case in question. He picked up his coffee cup, took a sip and thought to himself: "There's someone funny on my team. The signs on the table are obvious." Paul decided to set the record straight once and for all. He looked directly at Cassie, then at Tonny and finally at Lewis. Calmly and with authority, he said: 

 

"First, I'm an MI6 agent specializing in cybercrime, Cassie Evans." Then he turned to Tonny and said: "Special Agent Tonny Shepar, ex-SEAL and Sniper." Finally, he turned to Lewis: "Senior Agent Lewis Bishop, former New York cop and one of NCIS's best interrogators.” After introducing each member of his team with a brief description, Paul began to climb the stairs, indicating that he had more to say. "My name is Paul Levesque, a senior ex-FBI agent specializing in cybercrime," he said. He paused briefly before continuing: "And the second question concerns a young woman who was kidnapped in Maine."

 

            Hearing these words, the team realized the seriousness of the case and the need to focus on solving it. Each member of the group felt the energy and sense of urgency that Paul was conveying. They prepared themselves to face the challenges that would arise in their mission to find the missing girl and bring justice to hose responsible.

[littlebopeeper]

Have to say that the flow here seems awkward.  It's almost as if parts of it have fallen out.  For example, why would he be surprised by his colleague's response?  How would he infer from it that "there was still a lot to share about his identity?"  But keep plugging away because it's great to read a story that takes its time getting to the diaper material.

[snowwhite]

So, what we have here?

Well, at the moment it looks like it's a mixed bag of special departments, each woman or men with special skills.

That suggests that you know and like all the crime series, that have been around in the last 30 years

JAG, NCIS, CIS NY/Miami, Seals, Sicario, Chicago P.D / Law&Order NY, MI5 and many more.

So I'm assuming you're of German origin, if it so, then we have that in common.
Well, I love these series too and my personal favorites aren't even included.
These would be "Seven, Silence of the Lambs, Kiss the Girls (Doc Alex Cross), Taken 96h, Equalizer 1and 2 not 3, or Jack Reacher (Tom Cruise) and not the Jack Reacher series with the completely overrated actor.

The way you tell it, it still seems a bit bumpy, but the common thread is already clearly visible and it's pleasing!

I realize that the kidnapping is just a very small subplot and you want investing more time in building up the framework.
That is realy fine.

But please make sure that you don't just tell a normal crime story, because, then you would undoubtedly be better on Wattpad, than here.

Here want all really just want see, how your character end up in diapers. And then how the character are treated happily and lovingly.

I'm completely different... it's important to me that there is no happy ending.
Because this site already has thousands of stories like that.
The darker you get, would I like it.
And I am sure I am not alone with that wish.

So now you have 2 options
1. you write a crime story with the main plot of the "new special unit"
(I am intrest, but i wont read it here)
or
2. your main plot will be the kidnapped girl Benson, and your special unit has only a small subplot.
Annotation;
Detective Olivia Benson... when comes Elliot Stabler? I like him so much cheeky grin.

But if you really want to write a good new sadistic crime story without rules and boundaries, I strongly recommend that you use "Archive of our own". Only there can you really write the way you want to tell it.

Here a dark story is told quicker, than you would like. (deleted)
And that's just because a stranger sees the genitals when a girl is being changed or spanked.                                                                          But with others who only write sweetly mostly, it is tolerated.                So double standards always apply here.
Always keep this in mind, when you write here.

I really liked your start, now you decide how you continue to write.    And I also decide whether I am still interested, or whether that is it.

thx for sharing this
best wish to you
The bad mad snowwhite

[lolabunny]

13 hours ago, snowwhite said:

So, what we have here?

Well, at the moment it looks like it's a mixed bag of special departments, each woman or men with special skills.

That suggests that you know and like all the crime series, that have been around in the last 30 years

JAG, NCIS, CIS NY/Miami, Seals, Sicario, Chicago P.D / Law&Order NY, MI5 and many more.

So I'm assuming you're of German origin, if it so, then we have that in common.
Well, I love these series too and my personal favorites aren't even included.
These would be "Seven, Silence of the Lambs, Kiss the Girls (Doc Alex Cross), Taken 96h, Equalizer 1and 2 not 3, or Jack Reacher (Tom Cruise) and not the Jack Reacher series with the completely overrated actor.

The way you tell it, it still seems a bit bumpy, but the common thread is already clearly visible and it's pleasing!

I realize that the kidnapping is just a very small subplot and you want investing more time in building up the framework.
That is realy fine.

But please make sure that you don't just tell a normal crime story, because, then you would undoubtedly be better on Wattpad, than here.

Here want all really just want see, how your character end up in diapers. And then how the character are treated happily and lovingly.

I'm completely different... it's important to me that there is no happy ending.
Because this site already has thousands of stories like that.
The darker you get, would I like it.
And I am sure I am not alone with that wish.

So now you have 2 options
1. you write a crime story with the main plot of the "new special unit"
(I am intrest, but i wont read it here)
or
2. your main plot will be the kidnapped girl Benson, and your special unit has only a small subplot.
Annotation;
Detective Olivia Benson... when comes Elliot Stabler? I like him so much cheeky grin.

But if you really want to write a good new sadistic crime story without rules and boundaries, I strongly recommend that you use "Archive of our own". Only there can you really write the way you want to tell it.

Here a dark story is told quicker, than you would like. (deleted)
And that's just because a stranger sees the genitals when a girl is being changed or spanked.                                                                          But with others who only write sweetly mostly, it is tolerated.                So double standards always apply here.
Always keep this in mind, when you write here.

I really liked your start, now you decide how you continue to write.    And I also decide whether I am still interested, or whether that is it.

thx for sharing this
best wish to you
The bad mad snowwhite

I will try to answer some things you said thank you very much for the comment yes I love police drama I have finished criminal Minds and law and order I am generating the classic series of NCIS and my second favorite genre, the film you mentioned is based on a book by a very good artist I think the same as Seven, the story is also being posted here and on Wattpad and AO3 if you want to help me how to get more people how do I make one, of your plans I will do both I will try to post extended versions on AO3.

 

 

[Babypants]

15 hours ago, snowwhite said:

But please make sure that you don't just tell a normal crime story, because, then you would undoubtedly be better on Wattpad, than here.

This goes to the heart of the matter.  Historically, fan fiction crossovers have not fared well on this site.  Here, the readers prefer original stories, even if the product is a rehash of a theme already written up hundreds of times.  In discussion in other parts of the forum, many participants have made it clear that they want to see the diapers sooner, not later.  With fetish porn in abundance here, you risk losing readers at the outset if you don't get to the fetish very quickly.  Viel spass!

[lolabunny]

23 hours ago, Babypants said:

This goes to the heart of the matter.  Historically, fan fiction crossovers have not fared well on this site.  Here, the readers prefer original stories, even if the product is a rehash of a theme already written up hundreds of times.  In discussion in other parts of the forum, many participants have made it clear that they want to see the diapers sooner, not later.  With fetish porn in abundance here, you risk losing readers at the outset if you don't get to the fetish very quickly.  Viel spass!

I'm posting on Ao3 and Wattpad and I don't know which way to go, especially on Ao3, to reach the public, both Abdl and crime series fans, if you want to give me a tip I'll take it.

[Babypants]

8 minutes ago, lolabunny said:

if you want to give me a tip I'll take it.

A lot depends on how much time you can devote to this.  The easy but time consuming way out is to create a baseline for the story but edit the details for different audiences.  For example, get to the diapers very quickly in this forum, but focus on the crime and procedures to solve it in other outlets.  Your audience here is radically different from Ao3 or Wattpad.  

[lolabunny]

On 6/8/2024 at 12:27 AM, Babypants said:

A lot depends on how much time you can devote to this.  The easy but time consuming way out is to create a baseline for the story but edit the details for different audiences.  For example, get to the diapers very quickly in this forum, but focus on the crime and procedures to solve it in other outlets.  Your audience here is radically different from Ao3 or Wattpad.  

I'm already posting here and on the other two and that's what's going to happen there on Ao3 and the director's story without cuts here and with cuts but I'm not very experienced on Ao3 do you have any tips?

                        

                       Chapter 03 

 

            At a local gas station, a woman was standing in front of a television showing the local newspaper. The news was reporting that people had taken to the streets naked, causing a stir in the town. She bought a carton of milk at the store and returned to her car. In the back seat, Benson, a teenager asleep in her car seat, had not yet woken up. Benson's abductor took the milk she had bought and poured it into a bottle. She fed the child, saying in a sinister tone: "My baby can't wake up". Holding the bottle, she gave Benson a sadistic look and added: "It would be great if you had nocturnal enuresis. Then you'd come home wet." Benson didn't know he was in the hands of a disturbed person.

            Meanwhile, at the agency, Paul walked into his boss Monica's office and made a comment about the team he had been assigned to: 

"What an interesting team, but I prefer to work alone. I won't collaborate." Monica smiled and said: "You still don't want me to call you immature?" She let out a laugh and continued: "This is an important case, and you'll be working as part of a team." Paul replied defiantly: "You know what happened last time." The two stared at each other, knowing that there was a lot of history between them.

           As Monica and Paul exchanged words, there was a palpable tension in the air. They both knew they had a complex relationship, with a lot of water under the bridge. However, given the importance of the case in question, they would need to overcome their personal differences and work together to achieve justice. Monica answered Paul firmly: 

"You know what, that wasn't your fault, and everyone here knows it." These words caused Paul to have a flashback to the shootings and explosions that had marked his past. He tried to push these memories away and concentrate on the matter at hand.Curious about the identity of the kidnapped girl, Paul asked Monica: "Who is this girl?" Monica took a photo and showed it to him, saying: "Benson, a famous influencer, advertising girl for several brands and daughter of an important politician." Paul looked at Benson's file and noticed that her father was a member of the House of Representatives and that she was also the granddaughter of a famous general. He realized that this was no ordinary victim.

               Based on the information available, Paul asked Monica: "Have we had any ransom demands?" Monica nodded, indicating that there had been no demand for money so far. Paul thought to himself: "It doesn't look like a kidnapping for money, there's something more to this story." He noticed that Benson's last post had been made in a park and this could be a starting point for the investigation.

[lolabunny]

Chapter 04 

 

Paul went downstairs, thinking to himself: "Looks like I'm going to have to work as a team this time... I can't think about that now, I need to focus on the girl." When he got to where the others were, he announced: "Guys, let's go. I'm going to work with you." Everyone in the room looked at each other, surprised to see the famous Paul willing to collaborate as a team. It was hard to imagine, but it was reality. Paul continued, trying to set the tone for the operation: 

 

"What did you find on the girl's social media?" Cassie was the first to answer: "Not much. She's had meteoric success, spending a lot of money on boosted posts. Everything she posts is boosted and she has a detailed schedule of her day-to-day life." Paul realized that this also helped the kidnappers track the girl's movements. Lewis added: "Her family is powerful. It seems her father is preparing to run for governor of Washington state. I've already set up a meeting with him." Tonny added: "We've warned the parents not to say anything to the media yet, and I'm holding the Amber alert until we have more concrete information.”

 

           Paul knew that if the kidnapper was a psychopath, he would probably want to see the repercussions in the media. Holding back could be the best option, as it could prevent the kidnapper from taking drastic action. However, Paul was also aware that this strategy had its risks, as it could lead to mistakes if the kidnapper behaved unpredictably, such as stopping at a gas station. Deciding to proceed with caution, Paul delegated some orders: "Tonny and Cassie, go to the scene of the kidnapping. Lewis and I will talk to the parents." Everyone began to move, putting the plan into action. Paul felt a sense of satisfaction as he gave the orders and saw the team moving towards their respective goals.

He realized that, although he preferred to work alone, coordinating a well-trained and committed team could be fun in a way

 

         On the isolated Maine property, Benson was still sound asleep. The kidnapper took her inside the house, which seemed extremely happy and welcoming. The yellow façade radiated a sense of joy, but there was something sinister hidden behind those walls.

As she entered the house, the kidnapper passed a mat on the floor that read "Mrs. Roberts' House". It was as if the house had a personality of its own. The kidnapper carried her into a specific room, which revealed a nursery. The nursery was decorated with antique furniture and dark wood furnishings. The walls were painted in pale shades of yellow and blue, with stickers of stars and moons scattered around. It looked like an ordinary baby's room at first glance, but there was an eerie aura hanging in the air, as if something wasn't right.The kidnapper carefully placed Benson in her crib, looking at her with a gloomy expression. She spoke in a threatening tone: 

 

"Poor child, your parents want to take you away from me. Washington? Seriously, how crazy to move there because only I love you only your parents don't love you. If you're a good baby, you'll have a long life with me here. But if you disobey, it will be tragic."

 

         After leaving Benson in his room, the woman went out, leaving the child alone. 

[lolabunny]

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Benson was dizzy, she couldn't see clearly. Everything around her seemed blurry, but when she turned around, she felt a hard, cold surface. They were bars. Benson immediately realized that she was inside a cradle. Confused and frightened, she tried to focus her vision and understand how she had gotten there. Gradually, Benson began to distinguish the objects around her. She was in a children's room. The walls were painted in soft shades of pink and blue, decorated with animal stickers and floating balloons. Shelves full of toys, colorful books and stuffed animals filled the room. There was a piece of furniture with drawers, probably a changing table, and a closet with baby clothes hanging on it. While Benson was trying to come to terms with the situation, someone entered the room. She staggered and fell sitting on the crib Benson was trying to get off. It was a tall, robust woman who said

 "look, the baby's awake". Benson looked at her suspiciously and asked: "Who are you? Who says I'm a baby?"

The woman smiled sinisterly and replied: "Of course you're a baby, dear. You can call me Mommy Mery." The woman's response left Benson even more confused and alarmed. She knew she wasn't a baby, but it seemed that the woman was determined to treat her like one.

           Before Benson could protest, something was placed in his mouth. It was a pacifier. She tried to spit it out, but the woman held it firmly in her mouth. Mery pulled down the back of Benson's pants and said with a frown,

 "No poop." Then she looked at the front of Benson's pants and said, "No pee either. What a shame, don't you know it's bad for your health to hold it in. But we'll fix that. First, we're going to corral you."

Benson looked at Mery with surprise and incredulity. How could that woman speak to her in such an authoritarian and condescending way?

[lolabunny]

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Tonny and Cassie arrived at the city park, which was bustling and full of people. Observing the movement, Tonny commented:

"This park is very busy, with three entrances and exits and lots of children." Cassie took a deep breath and replied: "A woman found the girl's phone missing, and another witnessed her talking to this woman." Tonny agreed: "We'll investigate. The police left them apart, so we have two leads to follow."

             Deciding to split up, Tonny and Cassie went their separate ways. Cassie approached a young woman, dressed in yoga pants and a sweatshirt. Her name was Kelly. Cassie greeted her and introduced herself: 

"Nice to meet you, I'm Cassie, an NCIS agent. You're Kelly, right? Did you see where the cell phone was found?"Kelly replied: "Near those trees over there." She pointed to a group of tall trees that cast wide shadows. The spot offered a shady refuge in the middle of the sunny park. Cassie thanked her for the information and continued her questioning. She asked if Kelly had noticed anything unusual or if the girl had been talking to anyone while she was there. Kelly thought for a moment and replied: "Well, I was a bit far away, but I could see that she was talking to someone. The sun was strong, so I couldn't see clearly, but I'm sure it was her." Cassie thanked Kelly again for her cooperation and said goodbye. 

           Meanwhile, Tonny approached a woman in her 30s who was pushing a baby carriage. He introduced himself as an NCIS agent and asked her if she had seen anything relevant. The woman, called Nina, replied:

"Well, I was busy looking after my two little ones here." She pointed to a child playing in the park and another in a baby carriage. Then she continued: "I saw the girl talking to someone, but I couldn't see clearly because of the sun." Tonny thanked Nina for her cooperation and said goodbye. 

         He hoped that the woman would have more concrete information, but for now they would have to put the pieces of the puzzle together with the information they had obtained. Cassie approached Tonny and they shared the information they had obtained. Although it wasn't a definitive discovery, the two witnesses corroborated that the girl had been talking to someone in the park. 
 

[lolabunny]

Hello, a few messages Saturday or Sunday will be the update of this story, possibly we will have news about Benson.

Secondly, if you can, stop by Wattpad or my profile here and check out my new story Pyramid game: bully and your baby comment and have your say on the story here or there

 

The officers followed the information provided by the witnesses and arrived at a place further away from the crowds in the park. Cassie observed:

 

"With the sun up, you can't see properly. It looks like two figures over there." Tonny agreed: "Yes, and it's also about 500 meters from the exit." Cassie replied: "The exit leads to a quiet street. There must be a camera there."

 

Tonny decided to investigate and told Cassie to wait at the scene. As he drove away, Cassie began to think about the missing girl's cell phone. She pondered: "I wonder if the girl uses an AirTag. If I can unlock the phone, maybe I can trace it." While Cassie was immersed in her thoughts, Tonny returned and said,

 

"I have some news, but I don't know if it's good or bad." Cassie looked at him with a serious expression that sent a shiver down Tonny's spine. She encouraged him to tell her everything at once, and he continued: "Well, there's a camera on site, but the problem is that it's an old camera, from the time of the dinosaurs. It saves the images frame by frame. We're going to have to go through all the photos."

 

Tonny gave a yellow smile, realizing that it would be a long and tedious task.

 

------------ Office NCIS --------------

 

Benson's parents arrived in the interrogation room, as expected. Paul, a robust and strong man, was standing next to his beautiful wife, Sasha. Paul began to speak:

 

 "Your name is Oliver, right? Do you remember anyone threatening you?" Oliver looked at his wife and Paul before replying: "None of us have received any threats." The answer surprised Paul a little, considering Oliver's important position, but he kept his composure.

 

Lewis, the other detective present, addressed his question to Sasha, Benson's mother: 

 

"You were moving out of here, correct?" Sasha replied with sadness evident in her tone: "Yes, we were getting ready to move." It was clear that she had spent the night crying, with clear signs of recent tears. Lewis continued: "Who knew about the move?" Sasha hesitated for a moment before answering: "Very few people. Benson's friends, the nanny and a few neighbors." She looked at a photo of her daughter on the table and, sobbing, said: "My daughter, my little girl..."

 

Sasha began to cry copiously, leaving both Lewis and Paul baffled. They decided to go out to get a coffee and give Benson's mother a moment to calm down. As they walked, they discussed the interrogation, trying to put the pieces of the puzzle together.

 

Lewis started the conversation: 

 

"We really restricted who had access to the information that they were moving." Paul agreed, adding: "Although Benson posted a lot on social media, she had a new routine every day and restricted the information about the move well."

 

The detectives realized that something didn't quite add up. Why were there no threats recorded, despite Oliver's high-profile position?

 

[lolabunny]

I haven't posted in a while but it's to prepare my second season of the story but in that time I lost it on my Wattpad I still have it here and on my AO3 but it's another blow it was big, now I'll see if I post it on my kofi and speaking of it follow there you'll know when I post a story or it's close but Wattpad sucks 

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[lolabunny]

Recap of NCSI playing with mommy:

 

1. Main Characters:

 

- Benson: The central character of the story, who mysteriously disappeared.

 

- Lilian: An authoritarian figure who imposed childish rules on Abigail.

 

- Abigail: Subjected to childish rules by Lilian.

 

- Paul: A detective involved in the investigation of the disappearance.

 

- Lewis: Another detective who works alongside Paul in the investigation.

 

- Oliver and Sasha: Benson's parents, who are suffering with the disappearance of their daughter.

 

2. Benson's Disappearance:

 

- Benson disappeared under mysterious circumstances, prompting an intense search by authorities and her family.

 

3. Interrogations:

 

- Detectives Paul and Lewis conducted interviews with Benson's parents, Oliver and Sasha, in search of clues about her disappearance.

 

4. Moving Information:

 

- It turned out that only a few people knew about the Benson family's impending move, including friends, the nanny, and some neighbors.

 

5. No Threats:

 

- Despite Oliver's prominent position, there was no record of threats received by the family, which puzzled the detectives.

 

6. Lillian's Rules:

 

- Lillian imposed childish rules on Abigail, including specific behaviors and attire, creating an oppressive environment.

 

7.  Character Emotions:

 

- Sasha, Benson's mother, showed deep sadness and emotion when talking about her missing daughter.

 

8. Ongoing Investigation:

 

- Paul and Lewis discussed strategies and next steps for the investigation, realizing that there are still many mysteries to be solved.

 

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Benson kept trying to get rid of the pacifier, but Mery, the woman who took care of her, wouldn't let her. Meanwhile, Benson thought to herself about how strange that woman was, considering that she would never in her life do something as childish as poop or pee on her clothes, convinced that she was no longer a baby.

Meanwhile, on the street, Tonny examined the photos on the camera frames, realizing that there was a lot to analyze. Cassie, in turn, investigated Benson's social networks and was impressed by the organization and the number of followers the girl had. Cassie commented: "Wow, how can such a young girl keep so many social networks in order." Tonny replied: "I can barely keep my Instagram. Have you ever thought about if someone is threatening her through a fan group?" Cassie said that she had already looked at some groups, but nothing seemed suspicious, and said that she had sent a message to Paul to check if there were any fans who were overstepping the boundaries.

Deciding that there was not much else to do outside at the moment, Tonny and Cassie decided to go back home. Tonny took the photos with him to look at more carefully later.

Meanwhile, inside the house, Benson noticed that Mery had a smile on her face, which made her suspect that the woman had something in mind. Mery, in turn, was planning something humiliating for Benson: to make her poop and pee on her clothes and put her in a diaper. Benson was led by the woman towards the kitchen.

When she entered the kitchen, Benson noticed several baby items scattered around the house, indicating that Mery was preparing something to treat her like a child. In the kitchen, there was a high chair where Benson was placed and strapped in. Benson was confused and anxious, with no idea of what was about to happen.

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