littlebopeeper

Terrific chapter. The household is beginning to take shape, and Vickie's past is now catching up with her. Ian is in bed with the Mafia, and it's implied that the end of this story will be very bloody. Thank you for sharing such a complex story with us, and keep it coming!

Didn't she get turned down when she applied for a business license from the state? Then go ahead and begin operating without a license?

Definitely B.

Like thedman, I have a problem with this. As I write, Mike has received only $111 of his monthly $400 request. A contribution on your part would be a thoughtful gesture.

Thanks! Not an engineer, so had to look up minimal deflection. It looks like the table is not the hazard, but the wall mounting. What do you wanna bet that a mother who put a three year old weighing 52 pounds on the table, only to have it collapse and dump the toddler on the floor, would soon discover that she doesn't have a legal leg to stand on? Seem to recall that adult changing tables have been installed in some airports. Read it here, as I recall, but never seen it elsewhere.

I just have to ask. Does anyone know how much weight one of these infant changing tables will hold? I have visions of Courtney climbing aboard, and the whole thing collapsing and dumping her on the floor! Talk about a blow out!

Thank you! I'm hooked on movies, and I really like period pieces. Eight Men Out, Some Like It Hot, The Sting, Bonnie and Clyde-- and don't get me started on Bogart!

Thank you! What an honor it would be to contribute something to either of these two great stories.

A

Bernice is a neat character, in a really interesting profession. It would make a great story line-- dealing with girls who are still wetting the bed at 18 and above. A sorority that actively recruited bed wetters, maybe a fraternity house doing the same. The possibilities are endless. Are you planning on writing something like this?

As advertised, emotionally intense. Gotta admit that I didn't put the clues together, but now Vickie's character really makes sense. And she's bringing out the best in Sarah. I also love what you are doing with Bernice and Tippi, who seem so real. Another great chapter, in a terrific story. Can't wait for more.

Thanks for the heads up, but hope you will change your mind. The readers here are a really diverse lot, so this is a great place to get constructive feedback on your work as it progresses.

Have to agree with Little Lamb. The continuity problems make the story feel staged. And if AI reduced weeks to hours, should the story be credited to AI? By the way, it would help at the opening to spend more than one sentence on the goings on at the bar. I drink either Patron Silver or a reposado when doing shots, and I flat out guarantee you that I don't hit the floor after three. Are they drinking rotgut? Are they so poor that they can't afford the good stuff. In short, it would really help if you took the time to introduce your characters before diving into the diaper bondage stuff.

Love this chapter. It's funny in parts, but it is also warm and caring. The more I see of Suzie, the more I like her.

I share your concern for the future of this site. Spider crawls are going to make it very easy to scan content for violations of state laws governing adult content, and the absence of a solid age verification protocol in my judgment will make this site vulnerable on this score. The administrators do a great job when it comes to keeping minors out of sexual situations in stories here, but will that be enough?

D. My Lai

Emotionally, a very, very powerful chapter. The most recent chapter of Aardvark had me laughing, and this one brought tears to my eyes. My heart breaks for Janis. You are tapping into a parent's deep fear of losing a child, and having their children make terrible mistakes as they enter adulthood. This is the cord that's hard to cut. And how good it is to see Sarah helping Vickie as an act of love. Until now, I've wondered whether she was even capable of love.

Okay, I give up. Which Alvar print does Rita want to hang in her living room. The guy does a lot of red!!!

Fantastic chapter! You have to wonder how far down the rabbit hole Vickie will go before she realizes that Sarah isn't playing games. And the DA. What a hoot. Was he inspired by California's Governor Hair Gel? D (this one was a slam dunk)

Your post is well reasoned, and in the abstract I agree with you. Unfortunately, to judge from the comments that some readers leave on stories pursuing the child abuse through diaper humiliation theme, there are clearly people here cheering on the abuse, and just as clearly enjoying it. The power relationship between parent/stepparent/guardian and child is one-sided, and in the case of prepubescent children, extremely so. It seems to me, therefore, that every author mining this very popular trope should take great care with the subject matter. You have managed this issue very well in your own work, but there are others writing here that do not measure up to your standards.

Wow, what a fun read! From start to finish, the laughs just kept coming. You didn't take any prisoners here, but the take down of the Dean is a classic. Now, it's on to the parallel chapter in the Homage story. Keep them coming!

Another gripping chapter. Wondered if they left him alone on purpose, to see what he would do. Surprised that they went ahead with the forced breast feeding after seeing him free himself from the changing table. Looking forward to more.

Priscilla believes that Sarah will stay the course, but I'm not so sure. Sarah wants to rule her household with an iron fist, but she will soon learn that it will never happen. The head of security (Priscilla) will be the ultimate decision maker.

Amen! This girl has some serious issues. And what's wrong with Julia? Who drives around in an old beater in the dead of winter in the snow belt without a flask, a couple of candy bars, and some blankets?

Good to see that there's gonna be a follow up story about a nanny school. I have wondered how a kid like Veronica (19?) qualified for a job in an alternate sentencing program. Really looking forward to learning whether all the graduates had to experience at first hand the treatment that they would be doling out at a place like BB's.