Adjustment Chapters 1-7

[Babypants]

This story continues to intrigue, more so for what you are not telling us than for what you are.  I honestly did not think that, having written so many regression stories, you could come up with anything new, but you have proven me wrong.  I long to know "who done it," and how.  I'm guessing that it's an airborne virus tailored to the male chromosome.  What sayeth you?  And I continue to question how the species endures if you eliminate the male sex drive.  Now that you have painted yourself into this particular corner (an omnipresent threat to all serial authors who don't work from a detailed outline or delay publication until they have fleshed out several additional chapters ... hint, hint) it will be interesting to see how you extricate yourself.  

[Elfy]

Keep the discussion on topic please.

[SallyKAT]

It's about the development of the narrative, Elfy, and babypants is right. I won't take the hint though, and I'll have to rely on a miracle, amazing conincidence, or deus ex machina to get the characters out of the looming dead end. 

[Sarah Penguin]

2 hours ago, SallyKAT said:

It's about the development of the narrative, Elfy, and babypants is right. I won't take the hint though, and I'll have to rely on a miracle, amazing conincidence, or deus ex machina to get the characters out of the looming dead end. 

Invoke the powers of magical rainbow unicorns? That's okay but I think magical rainbow unicorns want to be paid off in author hugs? So you'll hafta hug a herd of unicorns? Lucky you

[ComfortablyCrinkly]

Loving this story SallyKAT - Thank you for sharing ;o)

[SallyKAT]

Thanks for the encouraging comments. I have some more to write, but I can barely keep my eyes open! 

[Tanya Wisheart]

Interesting this story. Sally KA has a mind set that is aligned to mine.

I have written a very similar story, including the AR disease. but it is quite long and has very little ABDL content. It is more an age regression to pre-teen with Wife as Mummy.

Not sure what to do with it at the moment. I had great fun writing it.

I notice that Sally has been influenced by some favourite stories of mine on fictionmania -- search author: Totok and read  'Peters' Girl' and 'Slip of the dimension'

My story is very much like Sally Ka's but in the vein of those two ohn fictionmania.

[SallyKAT]

Hi Tanya - I've read Peter's Girl. It's excellent. I haven't read Slip of the Dimension. I'll look for it. 

Sal

[DL64]

I like this story

Is this story going to continue soon or is it dead

 

[Safari Baby]

Me to this story is great and very creative

[Diapered Jason]

On 9/26/2019 at 4:22 AM, Zoroaster1985 said:

Most of the parties I go to are with other socialists and yes we have a great time because we're not surrounded by people who thinks it's more important to be personally happy than to have justice in the world and fairness and equity. THAT would make me happy. 

I don't really go to parties much, but I hear you. I put quite a bit of effort into equity. I always say when buying a home, put down 20% to avoid the PMI and go for a 15 year fixed. Best yet is to buy your house in cash, but if it is your first home, that can be difficult.

Good story Sally, looking forward to the next part of the story. I vote Democrat usually, but I enjoy political satire against both sides, because god damn, they deserve it, haha.

[SallyKAT]

Hi - I'll do some more work on this and try to progress it. : )

[DL64]

Is there still hope for the continuation of this story, because after a year without an update, I'm worried about a potential sequel, it's a shame because I love this story.

[Sarah Penguin]

Also enjoyed this

[therende]

Sally, I always enjoy Your stories, I also worry about your well being when you drops out of sight, especially in these Covid times. I hope you're OK down under!

[keith60]

i wish there was more to the story

 

[DL64]

Is there still hope for the continuation of this story, I really hope she is not dead, because I really want to see the end of Pat's regression.

[SallyKAT]

How embarrassing. All those ‘1 year later’ things. 
 

where there’s life there’s hope. I’ll try to write another chapter this weekend. : )

[DL64]

Thank you very much, I will be looking forward to the future update.

[DL64]

hello SallyKAT
Are you still working on the next chapter of this story ???