Bob's Babies - Elfy and DD

[DailyDi]

Bob's Burgers takes a magical turn and big things happen when the Belcher's get little!

Written by Elfy - Storyline by DailyDi and Elfy

Bob's Babies.pdf

[Little Crusader]

hmm, Ill give it a read

[ELLIE52]

Pretty Funny.

[minachan16]

Completely outlandish plot aside, you did really well with the core characters. I could totally hear Bob and Linda's voices reading those lines, as well as Teddy's. The kids were a bit shaky though IMO, and Pesto wasn't a complete douchecanoe which felt odd reading. Everyone's interactions though were priceless. The competition scene and its utter cringe factor was classic Bob's Burgers humor. Very, VERY well done fanfic!

[Little Crusader]

Not exactly the best AR story, with the actual AR not really having too much use to the stories telling, but that aside it does well as being a bobs burger story, while I haven't watched that much of the show, the characters do feel on point, the interactions seem normal for the characters of the show, and the plot does follow the same sort of style the show would use. The only slight plot hole is the actual need for the money, considering when Bob is first looking through the magic burger cook book, he talks about there being a burger for getting more money.

[CDfm]

That was definitely different but I enjoyed it.