Eric Hardfellow Posted August 15, 2014 Share Posted August 15, 2014 Hey guys, one of the things that I thought could be helpful for writers is to post chapters that they are struggling to complete up for some help. The idea behind the Work In Progress (WIP) is to give an idea of where you are trying to take the chapter and what you are trying to accomplish. So with that in mind I am posting the latest instalment of Saol na Sclábhiocht. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted August 15, 2014 Share Posted August 15, 2014 I'm not entirely sure where you're going with this, but I don't really see anything wrong with the flow. Link to comment
Eric Hardfellow Posted August 15, 2014 Author Share Posted August 15, 2014 Ah yes I really didn't really explain the wip at all. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted August 15, 2014 Share Posted August 15, 2014 I think that's actually a good place to stop. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted August 18, 2014 Share Posted August 18, 2014 I like the pacing- and as WB Daddy said, since I don't know where you're going with it, I can't really comment on it. Link to comment
Denube Posted August 18, 2014 Share Posted August 18, 2014 A small disclaimer: high fantasy isn't my thing usually. Link to comment
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