All That Glitters Leaves You Cold I - X

[Sarah Penguin]

Oh no!

[Crimson_Wolf]

Great little chapter can't wait more of your amazing writing.

[malus_infantia]

and here's more - woooo! Thanks for the comments and praise everyone.

[Sarah Penguin]

Oooh mysterious! I think something may be up.

[malus_infantia]

My formatting is not holding over too well. I'll come back and clean up the tabs an shite later.

[Bigboy85]

I absolutely love this story. The dream sequences are awesome. The way Nathaniel feels so vulnerable around Anya and her sweet maternal actions toward him are great. Bravo Sir!

[malus_infantia]

somewhere between a few days and when the sun dies. I'm hoping for the former

[diaperpt]

I'm finally getting to read this. malus, this is another great story. You write so well; the formatting is not a big deal. The story is. I'm looking forward to more as you're able to write.

[Crimson_Wolf]

Giving this a bump.

[dldad]

Quite some tale, and want to see more of it.

[Bigboy85]

Please continue this story!!!! Pretty please!!!

[Bigboy85]

I have to give this story a bump. It is one of my favorite unfinished stories.

[booboobritches]

Just found this story, excellent job, very interesting and well thought out, can't wait to read more, definitely hope you come back and add to it.

[sissydreams]

Wonderful writing, one of my favourite stories ever

[malus_infantia]

A few tears streaked from Nathaniel’s eyes as he gazed up at Anya’s heart shaped face, the care expressed by her green eyes keeping him from completely dissolving into a puddle of sobs at that moment. Despite the drugs he’d been administered, he was in a lot of pain – and his pain mingled and merged with the emotional weariness of the recent weeks, the trauma of his apparent seizure, and the humiliation of being laid out in a hospital bed, about to have his diaper changed by a woman who was nearly a total stranger to him. But he’d seen her in his dreams, or someone like her – a weird and confusing fact that somehow made his present situation nearly tolerable.

[Crimson_Wolf]

Great to see you continue this story, well written nicely done.

[Sarah Penguin]

Yay updates fanks

[Denube]

This story is absolutely wonderful. It's not often a tale can put you in the protagonist's shoes so fully. The reader feels confused, yet compelled to continue due to the desire to get an answer the same as Nathaniel.

[babygirl1025]

It's great! Please keep it up.

[Nika_lb]

End

[starman]

19 hours ago, Nika_lb said:

End

Why drag a dead story up for seriously 11 yrs since done ..

[keith60]

where is the rest of this story ?