Traycie

That is a distinct possibility after Heather would have been observed on the hotel Cameras going into Dawn's room and the TV in her room, that Dawn was suspicious of but promptly forgot about when she lost her pants, recording their discussion clearly for Stacy. With Dawn spilling the beans to Heather and the secret of the missing tourists now out of the bag there is no way that Stacy will allow Heather to go home with that information. She now needs to ensure that both little girl's stay put in Liberteria. Maybe that will also entitle her to a bonus payment for exceeding her little quota! If that occurs perhaps the woman in the adjacent room will get her wish after all and Heather is destined to become her little girls in diapers. With all of this suspense perhaps the diaper dispenser and change table in bathroom off the hotel foyer might be getting pressed into service sooner rather than later!

It is highly likely that there are cameras in the play rooms but not in the diaper bag storage or change table and bathroom areas. Kristin's would know this and have a plan to exploit it to her advantage. Possibly the other worker will explain to Ms Harris that the contents of Cammie's and two other other diaper bags had spilled out when she went to find an clean outfit for Canmie to wear, that one bag belonged to a boy and it was easy to sort out what belonged to him but other two were girls and she assumed incorrectly that the outfits which were very babyish belonged to the other girl who was younger than Cammie. That would be an easy mistake to make, play right into Kristin's hands and enable her to get away with spilling the three diaper bags earlier that afternoon during nap time when one was watching.

An outstanding update Mee, while it would have been good to see the brute from the opening chapters make her reappearance the encounter with the woman across the hall as James was carrying her to the lift has introduced new risks for Dawn, a possible foster Mommy and the threat of involving LPS? An offer to take little Dawn off James's hands... “Is that so…?” The corners of her mouth raised. “Well, I think you’ve certainly been patient enough with her? After all, tolerating a single tantrum I think is already being generous to these little troublemakers.” She leaned over to boop Dawn on the nose and it left the girl fuming, yet that only seemed to incite more intrigue from the woman. “Since you don’t have any real obligation to her, why don’t I take her off your hands?” She smiled at James sweetly. “I’ve actually been meaning to adopt!” Dawn’s look of fury as the woman tried to adopt her on the spot. James's surprise at the offer and his initial hesitation to decline it. Dawn being butt naked and the woman's offer .... “And look!” The woman continued to insist. “She is butt-naked! Heavens...it’s a good thing I’ve been carrying a diaper in my purse...” She muttered as she turned her head back into her room. “What do you say, though? I’ve always wanted to be a Mommy, and I’d love a little girl that needs discipline!” The woman's veiled threats when James eventually declined her offer ... “Really? .... Fine. I’ll just call the front desk to complain about all the noise that unadopted Little has been making. See you in diapers soon, sweetheart!” Will they get past the front desk unnoticed after the woman's threat, especially with Dawn butt naked? Or will Dawn have to submit to being diapered by the receptionist or her arch nemesis Stacy in the same bathroom where she had to eat liquid soap earlier that same night before she is allowed out of the hotel? The scene about to unfold in reception has a number of different possibilities including the woman from the hallway turning up with someone from LPS claiming that James isn't intending to adopt Dawn and that she has stepped in and claimed her ... that would also see Dawn begin her travels farther from the hotel, bus to the portal station and earth than she even imagined.... her first stop would be with a non nonsense LPS Foster Mon while the dispute over her ownership between James and the woman from the hotel was sorted out. Now that would be an interesting development with some serious conflicts for Dawn to manage as she promptly put back in diapers and treated as a toddler while stuck with the LPS fostermom. Either way she can't ride naked in the car seat....

Good to see you still busy posting new story themes Elfy. Your many readers who enjoyed Sam's adventure are forever hopeful that Sam, or another equally tiny girl, will soon feature in a similar chronicle of excellence to your epic 'A new life for Sam'.

I suspect the only writing Dawn will be doing in her immediate future will be with finger paints on an A3 sheet of butchers paper as Dawn's baby daughter.

Oh yes SGTBaby, hopefully you are right and we will get to read a lot more of Dawn’s adventure. While she looks to be in the clear for now hopefully that’s all a front just to make her comfortable before she finds herself taken by another Amazon and in an even bigger pickle than the start of the day where she was plucked off the street, stripped and put in pull-ups by the large Amazon woman who would have made a far from perfect mother. If she though that was bad wait until she is held down, diapered and secured on her back in a pram wearing a diaper and baby dress silenced by a pacifier.

Great work Elfy. Was hoping we would get to read more about Sam being babied by Karen's friend Martha after the home visit by Martha, the nursery change and the playground diaper change. It would have been interesting to read about some more of Sam's adventures as she came to the realisation that she was stuck as a toddler, e.g. more outdoor trips, time out at the mall daycare while Karen shopped, a playdate or being babysat by the Mum of the girl from the park (with the Mum thinking Sam was still a real toddler) or Martha getting more involved. Any of those situations would have posed a challenge for Karen, she would have needed more than the tongue numbing trick and it would been interesting to read how Karen and Mark would have pulled off the ruse and Sam's reaction to it. Hopefully our little protagonist Sam will make another appearance in a similar storyline in the near future

It is an intriguing premise that your have created Elfy, your readers are told that Sam "wonders how Mark and Karen plan to get her and Abigail into Canada when neither of them have a passport or any identification" and that "the answer to that question came later that day when they pulled up at a motel less than ten miles from the Canadian border", but no further detail on the 'how' is forthcoming? Sam "can see that her new parents are concerned and anxious but the reason for that isn't clear?" Is it because the border crossing will happen late that night, has something gone wrong with their plan or are they simply waiting for some one to turn up and give them new identities for the girls and then cross the next day? The tempo and intrigue also increase when Karen talks to Sam and sets out her expectations that she is to act as if she is still a toddler in public and for Karen's friends, and that if she doesn't comply she will regret the consequences. I these parts your story takes on a life of its own. Looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully more of Karen further regressing Sam, or perhaps we will learn what the consequences are for Sam when she pushes back against Karen's instructions to act much younger than she really is. For tonight though as Karen changes her for the night the immediate future for Sam is clear … You have again taken you readers on a journey of mystique and adventure with a story that still has a lot of potential to continue as we learn more in each chapter about Sam's ups and downs, surprises, tests of obedience and mixed emotions. Bravo! Hopefully this was not the final chapter.

Sam now has a new sister who looks just like her, her predicament made worse by Karen dashed her hopes while in the car for an early release. No wonder it isnt a surprise that she has also forgotten that when Mark was changing her after arriving home that he said “Karen likes the idea of Abigail having a little sister” and that “It’s probably best if you get used to all this for a while.” To top that off and despite her afternoon nap she felt very tired as soon as she was changed and put into the crib for the night. Did Karen put something into her food to make her feel tired and to ensure she will sleep through the night? Mark and Karen's comments and the fact that Sam was made to take an afternoon nap in the crib while Abigail was allowed to stay up and play reinforce the notion that Abigail is now the toddler and Sam is on the path to a permanent infancy. If that is correct how will it play out? Will she sleep through the night only to wake in a full diaper and have lost her ability to walk and maybe even crawl? Will Martha make a reappearance or will her life take another unexpected turn that will further cements her fate as the baby of the house, regressed to a point where she is made to nap every four hours, stuck as a crawler at most, find herself harnessed flat on her back when out in the stroller and transitioned to a to a breastmilk and baby formula only all the while see Abigail treated as a toddler learning to talk and all of big girl the privileges that go with a step up from infancy?

Were they denied the appeal? It read to me like they decided not to wait and risk losing Abigail to someone else and that was when they ended up with little Sam by mistake. Now that they have a real toddler who still isn't talking will Sam be expected to mirror her new sister's physical and metal development? Interestingly Karen made her crawl in the previous chapter, was that a sneak peak of where she will end up shortly especially having been told that nothing has changed for her, that Karen thought she was past asking for the bathroom and should know by now to use her diapers? The next chapter is shaping up to be a game changer for little Sam, will we see a return of Martha or another outsider?

So close but so far with the young Policeman almost recognising her and then to have her hopes dashed by Karen telling her that she ‘thought wrong, do as you’r told’ and to use her diapers.... another cliff hanger Elfy, leaving your readers hungry for the next chapter.

Will the trip to the Little Care to have her wrist examined be the catalyst that cements Dawn's future stuck as a life size toddler in Libertalia? By the time she is checked in at the clinic for a medical examination her Littles Tour Visa will have, or be very close to, expired. That would make her an overstayer and subject to the local adoption law for overstayer portal littles. Will that be the trigger for the State of Libertalia to enforce its no free portal littles policy causing her to be registered as a portal little available for adoption and see her transported to an adoption centre for processing while James and Kathryn find themselves having to make their case before a court once a hearing can be arranged in two weeks. While they see themselves as Dawn’s new parents why would they be given preferential treatment and not another Amazon who has been on the Littles Adoption Waiting List for some time already? If that was to occur Dawn would be distressed at such an ordeal but she may then get to be reunited temporarily with her tour group. If that happened the sight of her new friend Heather, the brown haired girl who had been wearing jeans that Kathryn had first admired, stuck in a crib wearing a footed sleeper over a double thickness cloth diaper and plastic baby pants with a cute diaper butt would be enough to bring her to tears and the realisation that she is not going home any time soon. With Dawn already in demand for adoption she would need to be quickly moved on from an adoption centre to avoid being given to another Amazon on the waiting list. A littles fostermom would be needed to care for her while the court made its decision on who her new parents should be. In that scenario the chances of Dawn still being in pullups and big girls clothes after two weeks with an Amazon fostermom dispaling all the signs of baby fever would be highly unlikely. Dawn thought the Amazon who first snatched her off the street was scary, well the good news is she hasn't seen anything yet! ..... Turning her head Kathryn admired Little Dawn safety secured into her new carseat as James drove them to the nearest Little care... mmmm she thought, I wonder how she is going to react to being put back in night time diapers?

While Pampers are an option when Kim was shopping for the girls she saw these really cute diaper covers, preloved diapers and diaper pins from the 80s on display in a recycled baby boutique …. 'mmmm, she though to herself, those frilly waterproof plastic baby pants would definitely fit the girls but I would need to pin them into prefold diapers also to get that cute baby butt look'...

Now that would be a surprise for little Emmy being pinned into cloth toddler diapers and made to wear a frilly diaper cover (rhumba pants) that matched her soon to be cousin and an identical sundress so that they looked like toddler twins before no nonsense Auntie Kim takes the petite girls shopping or out in a double stroller for a play date with her friends toddlers at the local park.

Trouble is looming for Emily, she is already dressed as a toddler in a romper and is now being made to drink from a sippy cup. Although she has managed to escape the threat of an enforced early bedtime what will the inevitable bring for her? If she thinks that she looks like a toddler in her pink romper now that will be morph into an insignificant concern once Aunty Kim has her wearing a bib so she doesn’t spill her dinner on her romper and then appears with footed sleepers for the girls to wear to bed. That would be the big leap to babyhood that she has worked so hard to avoid since becoming a preteen, if Kim was to secure the zipper shut with with a diaper pin or use sleepers that have the zipper in the back she won’t be back to get the sleeper off on her own to use the bathroom, will she also be diapered and put to bed in a crib immediately or will that come after her first nighttime transgression since she was a real toddler with Kim using the excuse that only little girls wet the bed and that she isn't changing sheets in the middle of the night so it’s back to the nursery for little Emily? There are so many possibilities and avenues that Kim could take from here to achieve her aim, all of them have the potential to end in frustration, fear and tears for Emily. The weekend with Aunty Kim will change for life in a way that she could not have imagined in her wildest dreams before boarding the plane that morning to come to a new city with her Mom. While Emily will no doubt try to resist Kim’s attempts to treat her much younger than she actually is her passive resistance will have been anticipated by Kim and easily defeated. If the diapers come up in later conversation will Aunty Kim will simply tell Beth that her young daughter wet the bed because she was most likely struggling with the transition to a new life and a diaper helped her to get a good nights sleep without the fear of another accident. More likely the subject won't come up because Emily will be too embarrassed to tell her Mom that Kim made her wear toddler clothes for the weekend and not wanting to give her Mom any ideas on how to control her increasing defiant behaviour. Then there is the pending wedding, will petite little Emily be made to wear a diaper along with her 5 year old cousin under her flower girl dress and what will happen post the reception party when the girl’s are sent home with Kim who will be babysitting for the weeks that their parents are traveling for their honeymoon? Love your story Babydry, it has plenty of scope for further development.

Another great chapter Elfy. Your readers are again taken on a journey with little Sam being so close but soo far from her old life. It is just as well that Karen again used the tongue numbing pill before leaving the house or her baby may have betrayed them to the Policeman. We are also left wondering if that was the only medicine she went to get from the bathroom cabinet or is little Sam in for another surprise, perhaps her bottle of juice had a surprise in it and she is yet to realise what it is? The double stroller had her perplexed initially until Daddy Mark let the secret out of the bag. He has joined her stroller and Abi's together using a stroller joiner kit to make them into a double, even if she is not keen on that idea she will be riding alongside her sister in the future. Karen making Sam 'crawl to Mommy' is an interesting development, we can only surmise if that is going to be her new status once Abigail joins her with Mommy and Daddy or will both of the girls be regressed to crawler status? Sam also suspects that Martha has something to do with her regression back to babyhood but she can't yet pinpoint exactly how Martha fits into the bigger picture. At some point she will be free of her mittens but will her little hands still be of any use?

Drawing out the likely possibilities of what surely will be coming Emily’s way in the near future is creating suspense in your story. Emily now finds herself playing dollies with her soon to be five year old step sister. Clearly her new step Aunt is planning on regressing the girl to a much younger age. Is her new Step Dad also in on the plan, will little Emily be regressed to the same age level as her soon to be five year old step sister or is there a more nefarious plan in play for the petite girl? Looking into the playroom from the scene you have described we see two little girls, one fully dressed and the other in just her panties and T-shirt dressed as if she was a toddler still in the potty training phase. The fact that her Step Aunt has dressed her in panties and a T-shirt and insists on carrying Emily on her hip as if she was still a toddler leads the reader to assume that Kim’s intent is to regress the girl to an age younger than five. While Emily is trying to open the baby gate are there a number of things that she should now be concerned about: - what has Kim has gone to collect from the car, is it just her suitcase and wet pants or something else? - she can only see the sitting room and TV over the fireplace from where she has been effectively contained behind the baby gate, what other baby furniture and trappings of toddlerhood will Kim’s surprise her with? - what is the plan for the rest of the weekend now that she is now stuck being babysat at Kim’s house? - she will need to be careful not to sit on a damp spot on the playmat if Sarah spills any water from her dollies bottle, or spill any drink that Kim gives her. - if that occurred how would she reasonably explain a second set of wet panties on the same day to Aunty Kim? Your story has a solid base, although it would be more realistic if you revised Emily’s height and weight to match that of the 95% percentile for an American four year old girl using the CDC calculators, that would make her 4 foot 2 inches and 45 pounds, even though she is actually thirteen her genetic inheritance with a petite Mom, delayed physical development and puberty would make that plausable. Your portrait of Kim as the no nonsense Aunt who is intent on regressing the girl for her own purposes is strong. What ever her intent and the full extent of the petite girl’s regression under Kim’s hand will unfold for your readers as they discover, along with little Emily, what the plan really is for her future as it is unwrapped in later chapters.

Any chance Dawn has of getting back to her own dimension will most likely depend entirely on what happens to her tour companions, are they going to be returned to the transport portal or will their tour bus deliver them to an adoption centre instead? If they are all like Dawn and had been preselected for the tour with the same targeted marketing as Dawn and the young woman with brown hair that Katherine and James has first admired and who Dawn had struck up a friendship with before being taken then I smell a rat.....

Another great chapter Elfy leaving your readers in suspense over what is next in store for Little Sam? Will she wake in her crib and find that she has again soaked her diaper while napping and that Karen has removed the baby scratch mittens as her treat? If her are hands freed of the mittens will she now try and remove her diaper by pulling on the tapes and will Karen have anticipated the temptation by dressing her in baby clothes that are designed to defeat little fingers, e.g. a footed sleeper with the zipper held shut by a diaper pin or a sleeper that is zippered up in the back where she can’t reach the zip? Has Sam been given medication in her bottle of juice that will relax her muscles and regress her to a state of limited coordination where she now has to crawl to move around and can only stand when there is furniture, her crib, playpen or stroller to hold onto? Now that Sam has been taken out of the house for the first time as a toddler and no one at the playground or on the street was any the wiser will Karen and Mark be comfortable to take her out most days in public as their baby girl? I also suspect we haven’t seen the last of Martha yet, her visit to the house; Sam’s loss of ability to talk coupled with the playground visit and Matha’s interest in Sam’s diaper changes set the scene for her to be more involved in Sam’s new life. Top effort Elfy, looking forward to reading your next chapter!

Another great chapter Mee, you have again lead your readers on an another chapter of Dawn’s adventure with plenty of detail to enable a visual picture to be imagined. While Dawn may not yet have fully grasped her current situation her demise is quickly ramping up..... strapped securely in her comfy baby car seat she is likely to fall asleep from the motion of the car before they get to the doctors.... With her well meaning caregivers doing such a good job to ensure she is taken care of will she simply have her wrist put in a cast and then be taken to a family restaurant for dinner, or will she be admitted for overnight observation and find herself stuck in a diapers and a hospital crib with strict no nonsense nurses dictating her immediate future for the next 24 hours? The suspense is too much, can’t wait for more!

Great teasers into Dawn’s potential future Panther Cub.... clearly a number of surprises are headed her way... looking forward to reading about little Dawn being carried in a backpack or a pushed in a stroller on hikes and toddling around with Katherine while she tends to her garden. ?

Reviewing the earlier chapter when Dawn was rescued by Katherine and James, on their way out James had to sign some papers to get her release. Where they simply medical forms or given that she was at an adoption facility her adoption papers? While Katherine has been patient so far she is also clearly wanting Dawn as her babygirl, Amazon hormones will be raging through her body by now, the pull-ups are clearly a transitional step and it won’t be long before Dawn finds herself back in full time diapers as her new parents diapered toddler. Perhaps Katherine will also be focussed on the environment and get her own Momma to show her how to fold cloth diapers and pin little Dawn back into them covered with plastic baby pants, the bulky diapers and puffy baby pants pushing Dawn’s legs apart reducing her to toddling vs walking further reminding Dawn of her new position in the family and eliminating her ability to run away again.

Or she makes a run for it when she realises just what Katherine’s intentions are for her immediate future and ends up in a worse position with another nonsense Amazon Momma who immediately puts her back in full time diapers and on a baby formula only diet.

Another enticing chapter Elfy that you have successfully ended with a triple cliff hanger. We’ll be going in a minute.” Karen muttered, “Just keep the game up and you’ll get a nice reward.” ... Sam took a deep breath ... she was curious what a reward from Karen might be ... I think we should go.” Karen said as Martha walked back from the trash can ... I’ve got things that need doing at home.” ... When she finished her bottle she placed it on the seat between her legs and closed her eyes to rest, before she knew what was happening she had fallen asleep. What will Sam’s nice reward be, what things does Karen need to do at home and was Sam’s bottle of juice more than simply juice given she couldn’t taste it with her numbed tongue and quickly fell asleep as she was pushed home in the stroller from her ordeal at the park by Karen? You are a master story teller leaving your readers in suspense wanting more. ??✍️

That’s great news Panther Cub, Dawn’s adventure has already snaked its way through a series of unexpected u turns, what may have seemed to her as a successful escape from the original Amazon only to be eventually put in training pants by Katherine has her on edge. Looking forward to following more of her harrowing adventure as it unfolds and she is unable to stop her demise back to a second babyhood.