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Bel George

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  1. I don't mind the mix of English and French. I understand both and I enjoy it very much. I believe there are many possibilities in a story where a character doesn't understand the language very well. All sorts of misunderstandings can result from this. And when it has to do with weting accidens and diapers, than that is what we want to read about. I'm looking forward to the new chapters.
  2. What a pity that this story is among the completed stories ...
  3. Hi, It's really nice to see your story appearing here.
  4. I would love to be able to read the rest of this story. Are you planning to post more chapters?
  5. You probably should write the story first. Then peoplebcan read it (using google translate if they don't read french). Someone who likes the story might be interested in making a decent translation. I'm from Belgium and I can read French stories, but unforunately I'm not a good writer myself. Did you write abdl themed stories before? If that is the case, can you give a link where we can find them?
  6. Reading the summary and the new chapter made me realize how much I missed this story. I'm curious to see what Sarah will do in that half hour. I suspect something that seems smart at first sight but which she later regrets?
  7. That's probably the least realistic part of the whole story, isn't it? Other than that, I think it's an original idea, and although it's not quite my thing, I keep reading it, curious about what will happen to this family.
  8. I am always pleasantly surprised when there is a new chapter of this story. I love it.
  9. Well, I am looking forward to those next chapters. I usually try not to share my ideas about how a story should/could progress, since I assume a lot of authors don't really like that. But it looks like you would appreciate that, so I'll try to do it for this story. I don't really understand (yet) how the French family got to the situation where one of the older kids wears diapers, apparently without any inhibition. That is a bit strange, and I hope that gets explained in one of the future chapters. Also, since there is a language barrier, I guessed that would cause a lot of misunderstanding and unpleasant or surprising situations. Will not understanding the questions from his host family, or them not understanding his attempted answer. Of course, I would like to see Will wetting the bed, being forced in a diaper, trying to get out of this but making things worse. That way progressing into more accidents and diapers, at nighttime, but also during the day. He probably wouldn't be able to hide this from all of his school friends for a whole month, and at some point he might have to let a classmate (Phoebe?) help him check and/or change his diapers, or he might need a her to help him keep this a secret. Personally, I prefer that the diapers and the measures taken are intended as an aid and not as a punishment, at least in the beginning. Of course, @Back to Babyhood, it's your story, and I am curious to read what you have planned for Will during his trip abroad.
  10. After reading about Phoebe in on of the previous chapters, I expected Will and Phoebe to be together in the same host family, having the same issue at night. That doesn't seem the be the case now, but with Mr. Anderson hinting that someone else on the trip might have a similar problem, I believe that we have a lot to look forward to in the next chapter(s).
  11. I'm already looking forward to reading more chapters of this story. I don't really understand why she needs to be on the lap of someone else, when the new regulation demands only that she would be accompanied. But hey, I'm not complaining at all and I can't wait for the moment Sam realizes that a diaper is unavoidable.
  12. I don't write many comments, but this story deserves more than just a "like". A very nice start and very promising.
  13. So glad to have a new chapter with Amy. I would love to see back-zipper pyjamas should being used for real, maybe as soma kind of light punishment (maybe for taking of her diaper by herself). And I'm very curious to read about the type of work that Amy has for Emily.
  14. I'm not a writer myself, not at all. So I'm not going to comment much or anything about writing style or anything. I don't respond at all to stories I don't like. For stories I do like, I usually limit myself to a "like" or "thank you" (emoji reaction). Sometimes I write "keep it up" in the comments, but apparently some authors don't like that. Sometimes I add why I like a story more than others (adult main character, as far as possible a realistic scenario, ...). Very occasionally I write what I think will happen in the next chapter. It can sometimes be seen as a suggestion, but it is usually not intended that way. I usually assume that the author already knows in which direction the story is going and will not be influenced by my commentary, because that is never my intention. My sole purpose in writing comments is to let the author know that I enjoy reading it, thus encouraging him or her to continue a story and/or to create new ones. As for "the biggest little", I hope there are many more chapters to follow. The time between the appearance of 2 chapters is relatively long, but the length of the chapters makes up for that. I'd say keep it up.
  15. Thank you @Mee for adding a new chapter to this amazing story.
  16. Hi @Eagle0769, I'm not commenting very often and as I am not a writer myself, I find it hard to advize about how you could improve your writing. I would not do it any better if I would be writing stories. I read each chapter of your story. I enjoy reading it, even if it has some spelling mistakes (most stories have those). Now about the contents of the story, I would prefer to have little less details about the sex and some more details about the using of the diapers. The part about the very first messy diaper could probably benefit from a few more details, and I would certainly have enjoyed it more if that part got a bit more attention. For me personally, I don't like stories where adults with a diaper and a pacifier are suddenly mistaken for a toddler. I prefer stories that sound somewhat realistic. But I am sure, as you write more, your stories will improve. Also, if you would add the chapters as new posts in the same thread as the very first chapter (and updating the title with each new chapter), it would be easier to read the whole story. Now, with a seperate thread for each chapter, it is much more difficult to find all chapters and read them in the correct order. Hope this helps, George
  17. I like it so far. I'm curious to find out what surprises Dr. Dillon and Sarah were discussing that Jackson didn't hear.
  18. I'm not into petplay, but I do read these stories from time to time out of curiosity. However, I really enjoyed this story. Exciting, short but powerful.
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