Indolence

I am not saying that it's wrong. Do you think every question is a hidden condemnation of someone? I can describe the things that fascinates me.. Sorry but my reply was not what you thought, might be my none native English skills. Theory : I don't share your feelings of the darkness inside every human when discussing online,so to you I might seem blunt.

I get this as little as I get mind control stories where the victims personality/mind is fully replaced, please explain the allure. The 'no hiccups' for the 'bad guys' are somewhat of a let down - it's Superman without kryptonite all over again. That said, I love how you write even if I don't get the plot itself. Thanks for sharing

According to some random fire fighter on YT you should kick er 'donkey kick' a door so not to hurt yourself and that is the last resort. To me that says something, maybe that was specifically doors that are external (leading outside)? But I don't think it's even possible for a light weight person to force a less sturdy door open, it maybe a cultural building standards difference that makes me think so, as usual I'm unsure. I just couldn't stop myself from replying. Otherwise I agree with your sentiment, I like the story and the fight that she puts up even if I she is no Mary Sue (luckily).

Let me be a bit narcissistic and say that my reaction probably should be taken as some kind of credit/praise, eg I read a lot (not necessarily AB or DL) fetish and otherworldly stories and I don't comment most of them (no feels). I really do appreciate you sharing free or not. I believe you helped me uncover a phobia for me and I am thankful. I find it fascinating how we as readers react. @RPMolly: Maybe due to my bad English skills (non native speaker here) but I don't think you can disagree with how I reacted to the story, I probably choosed the wrong word or used some odd grammar but I tried to express my personal experience reading.

Sorry for disturbing the pond. I really feel like I missed something here, the story hit something in me and it wasn't pretty. Not sure what, was it that I didn't get the immaturity of the male subjects, was it the cruelty of the wives, maybe it was the absolute absence of choice? Usually I love dark stories where the protagonist have a really bad hand (if not deck) to play, so I am miffed. Needed to vent sorry again if I sound like an idiot.