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Ya, and I was loving the story he had me beta read. It was really good. Lol you should at least reread the first chapter. The fixed version is just being made to fix the mistakes I made in this one. I was still working on a lot of my story telling skills in the beginning and the fixed version is just that, a fixed and better version. Though for the most part, nothing story whise changes. It's still the same plot with some tweaks here and there. I also don't plan on doing this in till after summer, when I'll have a lot more time.

I still have the fixed version of this story I'm working on. though I think I'm going to need to find a new editor, the one who was helping me fix the chapters seems to have disappeared. (they haven't been on in a while.) when I get to this part in that version, ill add the stuff I couldn't and make this arc much better.

well, until summer hit, I was trying to get one chapter done a week. when summer hit I didn't have much time to write, and when I did I decided to try to stick to the main plot rather than adding side plots to flesh out the arc. my main reason for this is a lot of people have told me the main arc feels a lot longer then it is. mainly because of how long it takes for one of my chapters to come out...(you weren't the only one.) some of the side stuff I wanted to add would be fleshing out some of the new characters, showing off werewolves weakness to silver, and at least a little more mention of Alex's turning. thank you,

Dispight a lot of complaints, I'm happy to say we are almost done with the next chapter. Something I want to get off my chest, I personally don't like how I made this arc. There was a lot I had planed for it that I had to scrap because I didn't have time for it. I planed on fleshing out the sisters more and giving them more of a personality as well as more baby moments from Bab. A lot of it has to do with summer and just how little time I had. Plus now with a few more setbacks. But I want to say I do plan on fixing this later on.

another great chapter. just wondering though, wasn't Amani supposed to get a hammer? and just because I think it would be funny, I vote bunny girl.

Nice

lol, you don't have to do it. I just tagged the only people I know. but if you do post, I would suggest having a link to your story.

so I was tagged in an OC fact game were I had to tell 8 facts about one of my OC's. they chose Bab so here are some fun facts! fact 1: Bab's name is based on Barbados. Why? I don't remember lol. fact 2: Bab is 448 years old and has died 3 times. fact 3: Bab loves to read textbooks and hates romance books. she finds them boring. fact 4: Bab will go through 2-4 diapers a day depending on what she eats. fact 5: out of all of Bab's sisters, she has 2 favorite sisters, Coventina and Eva. she also hates just one sister... fact 6: dispight being very embarrassed by it, Bab actually likes sleeping next to Alex. she likes the warm and safe feeling she gets with sleeping next to Alex. fact 7: Bab was almost a mute character. but I found describing what she was trying to say very hard so I scrapped that idea. fact 8: Alex is the only person Bab would have no problem babying her at this point. she trusts he won't go too far with it without a reason.

Lol Thank you ^.^ and I will.

Hi, sorry I really haven't been on much. After what happened I've been in a very bad mood. First I would like to thank everyone for there support, you guys are awesome ^.^ With my hand broken, it's going to be a few weeks (5 if I'm lucky) for everything to be back to normal. It's been very hard to get into a writing mindset lately because of my hand. Honestly part of me just wanted to put it all on hold until my hand is better. Thankfully my friend pink, dispight already having a lot on there plate already, has offered to help me with the next 2 chapters of the story. I want to thank him for his help and so far we are already half way done with the next chapter. I just wanted to keep you all updated and hope you all have a great day ^.^

nice chapter ^.^

this chapter was great ^.^

sorry, I have been on in a few days. some stuff happened a few days ago. some of you might know, but to those who don't, my birthday was a few days ago. because a lot of my family was busy, we postponed my party for a few days and 3 days ago, we went to a bar. now I don't drink, I don't like the taste. so by 1 in the morning, most of my family is drunk except me and our designated driver. we had a few extra guests shows up so when it was time to go home, there wasn't enough room for everyone. besides the driver, I was the only one sober so I suggested I walk home, (about half an hour away). so at 1 in the morning, walking home, I got jumped by 2 guys. I wound up getting a black eye, my backpack got stolen, and I broke my hand punching a wall by accident when I was fighting back. good news is, I got my stuff back and those assholes got arrested shortly after jumping me. the bad news is whiting is going to take a bit longer. just wanted to keep you all informed.

john is in chapter 1, and Noah is a recurring character in the first ark.

Special chapter: John *snap!* *snap! *snap! I opened my eyes in the dimly lit room as a man crouched over me. “You ok?” the man asked. “Can you tell me your name?” “J-John, John nile” i wezzed out while chained to a bed. “Good. now then, do you remember why you're here?” the man asked. *******************a few weeks ago******** “ALICE! JOHN!” one of the orphan children yelled as they came running into the orphanage carrying a news paper. “Its Ema! She’s in the paper!” “What!” Alice yelled as she and i rushed over to take a look. Sure enough, there was Bab and Alex’s names in the paper. *Pa’a kingdom finally has a new king! After being presumably kidnaped for weeks, Prince Lauren the youngest son of the late king returned! Upon returning he immediately challenged his brother for the right of the throne. Sources say he attacked the castle with his new companions. While most of their names have not been provided, sources have claimed some of their names to be, Alex, a young paladin who fought and killed lord Elroy of the Parïtet kingdom. And a small child named Bab*** There was more, like people seeing a dragon, or Parïtet potentially interfering, and other stuff. but none of that mattered. It was just nice to hear those two were ok. But how did they get involved in Pa’a kingdoms royalty? But i wasn't worried. Strangely, i was kinda jealous. There they were, having a great adventure, and yet i was stuck here. Had I and Alex formed the bond, would i be there too? I shook those thoughts from my head. Ever since Bab and Alex left, i've been helping miss Alice with the orphanage. I don't really know why, it just felt right. Not to mention she liked the help. But honestly, there just wasn't anything to do in this small village. Maybe i should think about leaving for my own adventure? ******4 days later***** “Are there any amongst you who are able to fight?” a strange man asked as he entered our village. His name was Morton Bunn and he was a werewolf hunter tracking a rogue wolf. He told us he had wounded the monster but it got away and is somewhere in the area. But he had underestimated the beast and now he is seeking some help in killing the monster. “I am not asking you to fight it. Just providing me in assistance with blocking its escape would be enough.” Morton told us. With a lot of hesitation, a few of us decided to except. Sadly it was only a few old men, and myself. The only reason we joined, was because the monster posed as a greater threat the longer it stayed alive. Morton gave the strongest of us, a 45 year old farmer, a bow with special silver tipped arrows. The rest of us had whatever we could find. I, myself, had a pitch fork. “What help are we to that monster?” i asked Morton as he lead us into the woods. “I mean, it can only be killed with silver, right?” “Common misconception my young protege.” Morton said as he gave me a smile. “Silver is the only thing that can hurt them. But there are other ways to kill them.” “W-wait, that doesn't make any since.” i told him. “Werewolves skin can only be cut by very special material like silver, but, they also can die in other ways. Such as drowning for example.” “Really?” i said slightly stunned. “Yep. but if you don't have magic or anything of the like, then go for the eyes.” Morton tole me. “Why?” i asked. “The eyes are one of the werewolves weak points as its not protected and can be damaged. But that should only be done in emergencies as it might still kill you from up close. I nodded, taking the advice to heart. Eventually, Morton told us all to keep quiet as he located fresh tracks and had us follow them. It was getting late as we neared a stream. Morton signaling us all to stop. Morton looked around until he spotted what we were after. But, i was a little confused. I had heard that all were wolves were large wolf like monsters, but this one, looked just like a regular wolf. If not smaller. “Stay here.” Morton whispered to us. “Don't engage unless i tell you to, or if it comes after you.” We all nodded as Morton made his way closer to the wolf. Taking his time to circle around it as the wolf drank from the stream. As soon as he was on the other side of it, Morton pulled out a silver hatchet in one hand, and silver brass knuckles in the other. “Hey runt!” Morton yelled and cought the wolf by surprise as he charged after it. The wolf immediately leaped out of the way and was dashing our direction when it suddenly stopped when it saw us. “Nowhere to run this time.” Morton said as he got ready to attack again. That's then I watched in horror as the wolf started to grow in size and stand on its hind legs. Its fur growing thick and its body mass expanding as it let out an thunderous roar at Morton. “FUCK!” the farmer yelled as he shot his arrow right into the wolf's shoulder. “No!” morton yelled as the wolf let out a roar in pain. The monster turned towards us and was immediately charging. All of us started to yell as some of the old men started to flee while i stood petrified. the monster charging closer to me. At the last second, i somehow managed to raise up my weapon in front of me to defend myself. But it proved to be useless. The monster leaped on top of me with my pitchfork in its mouth. After snapping it with its jaws it roared at me before leaping off and running into the woods. I layed there motionless. Paralyzed by fear as my ears continued to ring form the thunderous roar. I don't know how long i was there before Morton helped me to my feet and snapped me back into reality. “You stupid fool!” Morton yelled at the farmer after helping me up. “You showed it weakness and it used it as an opening to escape!” “I-i-i-” the farmer stuttered unable to fully process what had just happened. “All you had to do was be a wall so it wouldn't run away! Now i have to track it again before it gets away!” Morton yelled before turning off in the direction the wolf had. My legs were still shaking from fear. Coming close to death at that very moment. Is this what adventurers do? Constantly putting their lives on the line? Is this what Alex and Bab are doing? The moment i thought of them i knew i had to stop being afraid. If those two could do it, so can I! Sitting right next to the farmer were the bow and arrows Morton forgot to take with him. I qwickly snached them up and ran after morton to help take on that monster. Morton was already far ahead of me and was very hard to keep up with. Eventually i lost sight of him but i continued to run. I followed the sounds of shouting and roars as i tried to catch up. Hoping i could be of some help! Then i suddenly stopped as the werewolf appeared in front of me. It seemed to have a cut on its left arm and was panting as it stared right at me. For a moment, i was paralyzed with fear once more, but i had to shake that off. No, being scared will only kill me! I immediately went to grab the bow and arrows but realized in all of the commotion of the chace, i somehow dropped the bow! Trying my hardest not to panic, i raised up a single airow. The werewolf just stared at me panting still. Not moving a muscle. Then the wolf started to make heavy breathing noises. Almost as if it were trying to talk. Hhhhhhhhhhhlllllllllllllppppffffff was the sound it made. It almost sounded like… Suddenly the wolf roared in pain as it gripped its ears. The roar startled me and caused me to jump and nearly drop the airow. The wolf looked back up at me with furey in its eyes as it lunged at me while roaring! I had no option to run, i had to do something! Then i remembered something what Morton said, ‘go for the eyes’ Taking a firm grip of the arrow i lunged myself forward at the monster and amed right for its eye! But i couldn't reach its eyes… The wolf tackled me as we landed hard on the ground with a loud snapping sound. I started creaming out for the pain in right arm while the werewolf layed on top of me. A moment later, Morton ran up to see what had happened and was shocked to see me screaming in pain with my arm logged into the werewolfs mouth. The werewolf was motionless as it layed on top of me, dead. ********** A few hours later, after morton took me back to the village to rest up, he went out for a walk. When he was sure no one was around he pulled out a red gem. “Hello mistress, im calling in to report in. i have some good and bad news. “Morton, this had better not be some type of joke again.” Morton's mistress told him. “You know your mission. If it is not done as you were told there will be hell to pay.” “Well, you see, i had to use the whistle and kill the target.” Morton told his mistress. Despite being across the sea, Morton could feel her anger toward him. And it made him uneasy. “I'm sorry, she was proving to hard to capture alive and was showing signs of speaking. Had i not killed her, it would have driven us farther back.” There was a long pase. “And what of the other news?” his mistress asked. Morton could practically feel the announce she had for him. If this news didn't please her, he knew he wouldn't survive the week. “Before B13 died, she bit someone.” Morton told his mistress. “A young boy who already started healing a broken arm just 3 hours after being bitten.” Suddenly that bad feeling went away. “Interesting.” Mistress said, almost smiling. *********** Present day****** Morton is looking into the holding cell as a comrade of his is talking to me. A man in a full suit of black armor walked up to morton. “I heard B17 slit their own neck just to get away from you.” Morton said with a small smile at the circumstances. “That makes 12 of the 18 dead, and 5 recaptured.” The man said nothing to Morton. Just handed him a piece of paper of his next mission. As the man started to walk away, Morton stopped him. “Is it true about the last one? That it killed Ven and fed him to a vampire?” Morton asked. The man only gave a slight nod, and walked away. ***** inside the cell **** “A-after i ki-killed the wolf, i-i-i was brought here, to-to s-stop me f-from turning i-into a wolf.” i told the crouching man. The man nodded. “That's correct. Looks like everything went according to plan.” the man told him. “Your mind is still intact and you seem to be fine. We just need to do some tests on you to make sure nothing went wrong.” “T-that's fine.” i told him. I was still too tired from everything that happened and wanted to rest. “You rest up. And if you need anything, just ask me.” the man told me with a smile. “O-ok.” i told him. “Who are you?” “oh , right. I forgot to introduce myself. My name in Noah.” the man said with a smile as he looked into my now red and gold eyes. ********** sorry, I'm cutting into the story again. but this was an important chapter I needed to add. there are only 2.5 more chapters to this ark before its completed. which I'm hoping to get done soon. also, some of you might have noticed, that I haven't updated the fixed version in about a month. well, my friend who was helping me with my spelling hasn't been on the site for the last few weeks. so i wanted to ask if there was anyone interested in helping me fix this stories spelling mistakes? also, in the next 2.5 chapters, there will be a BIG announcement. so look forward to that!

so, I have a new chapter almost finished. but it might still be a few days before its ready. this week has been hell for my work and I haven't had a chance to finish the chapter. sorry

currently, I'm working on one of my other stories, (Dropped in a new world-*its not a diaper dimension story*), but as soon as I'm done with that ill be writing the 3rd and final chapter to this story.

thank you

so I got my first little today. (WHOOO!) its long distance but I will take what I can get anyway, she wants me to set up some rules and chores for her and I'm not entirely sure what I should do. does anyone have any suggestions?

thank you

Danny woke up to the sound of sniffling. Dan turned on a bedside lamp and looked over at Zoey who was sitting up on her knees. “What’s *yawn* wong Zo? Dan asked still very sleepy. “I-i w-w-went p-potty.” Zoey sniveled. Dan looked at her confused. It's not like Zoey hasn't woken up wet before. Heck, she’s used to it and can easily sleep in a wet diaper all night with no problem. But Dan then noticed the smell coming from the little girl. “Wwwwaaaa!” Zoey started crying. Zoeandra has had plenty of messy accidents in her life. Most because she is too busy with work to be bothered with going to a toilet. But she rarely ever has a messy accident at night. When she does have one, she absolutely hates it. She hates waking up feeling messy and dirty. And when she is Zoey, she hates it just as much. “Shhhh, it's ok. Big brother will fix this.” Danny said as he got out of bed and picked up the tinny girl. Zoey practically latched herself onto Danny just trying to get her mind off of waking up in a messy diaper. Danny went into the bathroom and sat Zoey on the toilet, and smashing the mess even more. Zoey was now crying again as Danny got the changing supplies out. Once laid out, Danny had to take off the bunny onesie and lay an almost completely naked Zoey onto the changing mat. Zoey was still crying, so to help quiet her, he stuck her thumb into her mouth. Which she started to suck on immediately, Zoey was still sniveling and looking at Danny with sad pleading eyes to get this diaper off her. Danny removed the messy diaper and proceeded to clean the messy girl before re-diapering her in a nice fresh diaper. “There we go, is that better?” Dan asked. Zoey nodded, still slightly upset about the diaper. “I don't think that's right, my baby sister would have a smile if it's all better,” Dan said before quickly giving Zoey’s exposed belly a raspberry. Zoey immediately came to life in a fit of laughter and a smile on her face, “Twank woo bwig bwofwer!” Zoey said with her thumb in her mouth. Danny smiled as he pulled the little girl up and put her back into her pajamas. “Ok, back to bed we go,” Danny said as he stood up. “B-but I'm wide awake now,” Zoey said as she pulled her thumb out. “I want to play.” “Zoey, its 3 in the morning, little girls like you need their beauty sleep,” Danny told her. “But I'm pretty enough as is!” Zoey huffed as she wanted to play now that she was awake. “Ok, Zoey, but I still want a little more sleep,” Danny said as he thought of something. “I'll make you a deal. If you go to bed with me right now and let me sleep till 4, I'll make you pancakes.” Zoey’s eyes lit up. In her current mind, she didn't even realize she was just played as there was no way she could stay awake an hour while laying in nice warm bed. As Dan was about to turn to leave the bathroom, Zoey rushed up and started jumping in front of Dan with her hand raised up. Telling Dan she wanted him to pick her up and carry her to the bedroom. Danny sighed and smiled as he picked her up. Zoey giggles as she is picked up and hugs Danny as he carries her back into the room. When he gets to the bed, however, Zoey doesn't want to let go. “No! To comfy!” she winds and holds on tighter. Danny sighs again and just gets into bed with Zoey holding onto him. ****** Danny woke up a few hours later with Zoey still hugging him. Just like he thought, Zoey immediately passed out as soon as he turned the lights off. It took him about 10 minutes to ease his way from the little girls grasp. After finally being free, Zoey roles over and starts sucking her thumb. “Good baby girl,” Danny whispers as he gives Zoey’s bottom a pat before leaving the room. He went to the kitchen where he made pancakes like he promised. He had just finnish making some when he heard his bedroom door open up. He turned to see a sleepy Zoey walk into the room. The smell of pancakes waking her up a little. Without saying a word, she walked over to the table and started to climb up into her booster seat. But after just waking up and having a wet diaper, that was a little difficult. Thankfully Dane picked her up and set her into the sceet and gave her a bottol of milk to suckel on while he finiehd making pancakes. When Danny returned, he could see Zoey slightly nodding off but trying to stay awake. “Looks like someone is going to need a early nap today.” danny said allowed. “Mooooo.” Zoey moaned in her sleepy state. Danny just smiled and sat down before cutting up Zoey’s pancake and holding out a peace for her. Zoey looked at it a moment before opening her mouth for Danny to feed her. After being fed breakfast, Zoey had finally woke up and wanted to go play. “Ok Zoey, go play with your toys while i clean up.” Danny told her. “OK!” Zoey yelled as she was freed from her chair and went to play with her toys for a little bit. It was now 9 Am. after a little clean up Danny would give Zoey a diaper change before they start their day. Over the next few hours, Danny played with Zoey with toys and video games until it grew time for lunch. “Ok Zo, i'm going to make lunch right now. You coller and watch tv while i'm gone.” Danny told the little girl who nodded. As Danny was making chilly dogs for lunch, Zoey was watching her favorite cartoon ‘Fefe’ while coloring in a Fefe coloring book. But as her mind began to wonder, she noticed something about Danny's living room table. The table had little dark spots dotting the table as part of the wood design. In her current state of mind, the first thing she thought of was connect the dots. “Zoey?” danny said as he walked back into the living room. “Danny look!” Zoey exclaimed brightly. “I connect dots!” “ZOEY!” Danny yelled angrily and he startled Zoey and rushed over. He immediately yanked the crayon out of Zoeys hand and expected the damage. “BAD GIRL!” Danny yelled. “You don't color on furnisher!” Zoey was in a little shocked. And in her mind had no idea what to do! Then Danny picked Zoey up and put her over his knee. Danny yanked her diaper down before giving her a spanking. Zoey burst out crying as she was spanked. Tears and snot dripping down as she felt the spanking go on forever. In reality, Danny only spanked her 10 times before pulling her diaper back up and sticking her nose into a corner. While Zoey was crying in the corner, Danny started to clean his table. Danny knew Zoeandra could easuly have someone clean or even replace his tabel. It wasn't even an expensive one. But when she is Zoey, they have an understanding that she is to be treated like any little girl. That includes punishments from time to time. “D-Danny.” Zoey snivaled as she turned her head to see a very saturn look from him which sent her nose back where it belonged. A new batch of tears crawling down her face and she started to hiccup. “Zoey, come here.” Danny said sternly as he sat on his couch. Zoey slowly turned from the corner and hiccuped as as slowly made her way to Danny, partly afraid he would spank her again. When she was finally in front of him, she was shaking and her lip quivered. She flinched as Danny reached over and picked her up and she started flooding her diaper in fear of another spanking. But danny just placed her on his lap and hugged her. “Its ok Zoey. big brothers not mad anymore.” Danny told her as he rubbed her back. “But you know why i was mad right?” Zoey quickly nodded her head. “You know big brother hates punishing you, thats why you need to be a good girl. Alright?” Danny told Zoey. “Y-yes.” Zoey whimpered out before she hugged Danny for comfort. “Theres my good baby sister.” Danny said with a small smile as he comforted his sister and gave her a kiss on the head.

Hopefully I'll get the next chapter done soon so you don't have to wait long to find out

ch 34 3 days have now passed since that incident and things haven't been the best for me. Melanthe informed me that she had no idea why I was having my visions of my sister. “Different people see different things. From what you have described it seems like you are reliving parts of your past but in a distorted way.” Melanthe told me. Since then my visions just get weirder. One minute I'm reliving the time Bab and I meat Fran and were trying on clothes, the next I'm reliving my childhood with my sister. Thankfully she hasn't been cryptic or trying to kill me at those times. When I'm not losing my mind, I'm taking care of Bab and getting to know the Vampires and werewolves. With the werewolves, it's pretty interesting to watch how they function in everyday life. It's literally dogs running everywhere. Besides hunting and being a typical werewolf, during the day they also have their own form of jobs. Mostly as a delivery survive with little satchels on their backs and literally barking orders to other wolves. I'm honestly surprised I haven't seen some play poker yet. As for the Vampires, they do most of the work that would require thumbs and handle everything else. It was fun to meet some of them and they even offered to take me hunting with them a few times. Sadly I only excepted the first one and I wound up having to come back after hearing voices again. “sohdvh grq'w ohdyh ph, pdvwhu. qrw djdlq.” it said. I started taking twice my dosage of pills in order to fix that problem. Bab hasn't been too great. Despite her best efforts to put on a brave face, I can still see the sadness in her face every time she looks at me. Just knowing what's going to happen and watching me every time I have a mental breakdown. She sits in her cell and watches me as I talk to myself for hours. Melanthe and Layna have tried their hardest to cheer Bab up (when they're not babying her) but nothing seems to work. Even when I try to talk to her she tends to change the subject and pretend she’s fine. I've just decided to go along with it for now and have a talk with her about it later. As I woke Bab up from her nap and got her changed into a new diaper before we met with Fertuitus. “You both in luck, Dracula has returned from his mission,” Fertuitus told us. “Wait, Dracula, really!” I yelled. “Please tell me this is some type of joke now.” Next they'll tell me Frankenstein's monster exists somewhere in this world. But no, Fertuitus wasn't joking. As we entered the throne room we were introduced to a man who looked to be the same age as me. He wore a black suit with his dark hair slicked back. He also looked a lot like Melanthe’s vampire guard. “Bab, Alex, I would like to introduce to you Dracula. Next in line to be my royal guard after Alucard.” Melanthe told us. “Wait, your names are Dracula and Alucard?” I asked. “Yes, it is a family name,” Alucard told me. “Every generation the name is passed down and flipped for the next. When my son has a son they will inherit my name just as I inherited my grandfather's.” I really wanted to laugh at the situation but decided now wasn't the best time. “My queen, I bring you troubling news,” Dracula told Melanthe. “Despite our best efforts, we can not locate any trace of Xar’s master.” “Expand the search, if this master is as dangerous as Xar, we will have a big problem on our hands.” Melanthe told Dracula. “We already have my queen. We have tracked Xar’s trail as much as possible but have found no sign of any other vampire.” “W-would it b-be possible to h-hide one’s presence?” Simon asked as they entered the throne room with Harrison. After the Xar incident, Simon asked to accompany Fertuitus back to his kingdom in order to study vampires better. I've seen him around the last few days and he has been so focused on his studies on different parts of vampire life that he barely knew I was here. “Unlikely human,” Dracula told him. “We vampires and werewolves have special senses in order to track down the other. Had Xar interacted with another vampire, we would be able to track them. ‘Wait, couldn't Xar just infect himself with a vampire fang or something when the master wasn't around?” I asked. “Not possible.” Melanthe told me. “The toxins needed to turn someone cant be stored. Should our toxin mix with air it will become nonlethal. Which is why we don't use our fangs very often.” “But the way Xar acted, it was like he was calling out to someone who should have been there,” Harrison stated. “MY QUEEN!” a vampire yelled as he and a wolf ran into the throne room. “My queen! There is an emergency!” “What is it?” Melanthe asked. “It's the hunting pack. They disappeared!” the vampire told the queen. “What do you mean disappeared,” Dracula asked. “I was with them only a few hours ago they should be here somewhere.” “That's just it! They were supposed to return their equipment to their handlers but they never showed up.” the vampire told us. “Handlers?” I whispered to Harrison. “Hunters or vampires who help werewolves with there gear,” Harrison told me. “Have you searched for them?” Dracula asked. “We have. But not one of them can be located.” the vampire told him. “I don't like the feeling of this.” Melanthe mumbled under her breath. “Harrison go fetch my sister and bring her here.” “Yes, my queen,” Harrison told her and ran off. “Fertuitus, Dracula, and Alucard. I want you 3 to go search for the missing hunters. I find it suspicious that they disappeared after trying to hunt something we don't know about.” “As you wish my queen,” Alucard stated before bowing to the queen then the 3 vampires ran off. “Y-y-your highness. Might I go with them?” Simon asked. “T-this w-would be f-fascinating to s-see v-vampires hunt!” Melanthe thought about it for a moment. “Ok human, but do not get in there way.” Melanthe told him. “What about us!” Bab asked and I translated. “You and Alex are to stay here in the throne room. As it is we don't know what is going on and I would like to not risk anything.” Melanthe told Bab. Bab looked partly worried but understood what her sister was saying. “I'm sure everything will be fine,” I tell Bab with a smile. *******4 hours later outside the castle.****** “Dammit!” Alucard yelled as he was raising back to the castle. He needed to worn the queens what was happening. He needed to tell them what this threat was! But something caught up to Alucard and knocked him away. Alucard was smashed into a tree but managed to recover just enough to jump into the tree branches in hopes to slow down this monster. Hopping from branch to branch he seemingly lost the monster. That is until it grabbed Alucard's food and slammed his face into the ground. “Is that it?” Alucard heard the monster ask. “Is that how far the great Alucard can fight?” “I haven't even started.” Alucard groaned before leaping to his feet. In a flash, Alucard was up close to the monster that towered over him and began delivering devastating blows to the monster's stomach. Each blow pushing the monster back. Each blow that was strong enough to kill a single vamper, was pushing the monster back. Each blow, barely doing anything to this monster. with no other choice, he pulled out his pure silver sword and thrust it into this monsters chest. but it didn't pierce its flesh. "WHAT!" Alucard yelled as the monster grabbed the sword with its bare hands and snapped it like a twig. “My turn.” the monster said as it grabbed both of Alucard's hands and crushed them. “AAAAAWWWWW!” Alucard yelled out in tremendous pain before being kicked in the stomach and up into the air. Alucard landed hard on the ground and starts to cough up blood. “S-shit.” Alucard groans as he tries to get up. “15 years.” the monster stated as it started walking closer to Alucard.” I've been waiting for 15 years to finally kill you ratchet monsters.” “Keep your hands off him!” Dracula shouted as he leaped from a tree onto the monster and stabbed a knife into its eye! “REEEAAARRRR” the monster roared in pain and started to thrash as Dracula leaped off of it. “Dracula!” Alucard yelled. “Get away! Go tell the queens what this thing is!” “There is no need to father!” Dracula yelled back as he pulled out a second knife. “This will all be over soon.” Dracula stared up at the 9-foot monster as it angrily looked down at Dracula with its one bright red eye. *******3 hours ago in the throne room.**** Melanthe and Layna are acting far differently then I've seen them before. Normally when we're all alone, they are all over Bab and trying to baby her while forcing her to wear some type of baby dress they have. But right now they are having a discussion on what is going on. To be honest, I grew a little bord and asked Gideon to have a sparring match with me. Nothing too serious, just something to help blow off some steam. As we were sparing, Bab was sitting down reading a book. She was just starting to get into the book when she started to feel her bottom rise up slightly and noticed the cold clammy feeling in the front of her diaper. Bab lit out a sigh. “Alex?” Bab said as she called over to me. “Ya bab?” I asked as I turned my head to see her and was punched by Gideon. “Don't get distracted in a match,” Gideon warned me. ‘Alex, I need a change.” Bab told me as I recovered from the blow. “Hey, mind if we take a break? I need to deal with Bab,”I asked Gideon. He nodded in agreement as I went to grab Bab. “We're going to head back to the cells for some privacy,” I told the queens. But they didn't respond back. Most likely still deep in thought. We decided not to bother them. Well, be right back. Bab and I were only halfway to the cells when it happened. *** I opened the door and started running into the rain. “Fucking hell!” I yelled in frustration. “I fucking told Bab to stay in the house!” I was beyond worried for Bab as I saw ghouls start to come into view. "OUT OF MY WAY!" I yelled as I ran past a few ghouls and slashing at them with my sword. "I DON'T HAVE TIME FOR THIS!" "ALEX!" I heard Bab scream followed by a loud boom of lightning. "Over their!" Fertuitus yelled. "GO SAVE HER!" I yelled at the vampire who was keeping pace with me. "I’LL CATCH UP!" Fertuitus just nodded and leaped on top of the buildings to cut threw to Bab. As I turn a corner I could see many ghouls on their way towards me after hearing my yells. "I REALLY HATE GHOULS!" I yelled as I ran at them with my sword ready to kill them all! ******* In reality, I was running past confused vampires and slashing at a few of them while out of my mind. “ALEX!” Bab screamed behind me and shot lightning at a vampire who tried to lunge at me with the intent to kill. “STOP! He doesn't know what he’s doing!” ******** I was running down narrow alleyways when I turned back to see the ghouls chasing me. One small one screeching at me to stop. LICK FUCKING HELL I WILL! “Ice wall!” I yelled and mad a wall of ice to separate us. I knew the ghouls would get past it but it brought me just a few more moments. “Why are you trying to save her when you didn't save me?” I heard my sister ask. “S-Scarlett?” I asked when I turned around and saw her standing right in front of me. I was a kid once more holding a plastic sword. “M-my name is a-Alex.” my young self said to introduce myself to scarlet for the first time. Scarlet was blushing and looked scared. like she was about to cry and run away when I heard a faint hissing sound coming from her. My young curious mind wondering what it was lifted up her skirt to see a pull-up on her. The little scarlet was embarrassed as she started to cry, “Hey, don't cry!” I told her “I wore pull-ups for a long time too! You'll grow out of them!” I smiled and held out my little hand. “Come on, let's go ask mommy for some help!” I told scarlet who stopped crying and took my hand. As I turned again, I was back in the alleyway. In front of me was a ghoul running at me on all 4 legs. Oh, fuck! I had just enough time to raise my hand just as the ghoul bit my arm! I screamed out in pain as the ghoul tried to bring me to the ground. “FIGHTER SOUL!” I yelled and punched the ghoul in its face and forcing it to let me go. I raised up my sword ready to kill the ghoul when something stopped me. “pdvwhu, sohdvh vwrs kxuwlqj wkhp! wklv lvq'w brx!” a voice told me. “Shut up!’ I yelled at the voice and winced in pain as my head started to throb. “vqds rxw ri lw. brxu qrw d prqvwhu. grq'w eh d prqvwhu,” the voice said. Suddenly the ice wall shattered and I could see an army of ghouls start to rush through from it. I didn't have time to think, I just ran. I just needed to find Bab and get away! “She’s not me you know.” I heard scarlet again. You can't make up for what you did with her.” “What are you talking about!” I yelled, “BAB WHERE ARE YOU!” Somehow I made a wrong turn and ran straight into a dead end! FUCK! I turned around, knowing my only option was to kill as many of them as I could to… My sword suddenly fell to the ground, too heavy for me to left. “What the hell?” I asked as I tried to lift it, but it wouldn't budge! “Whats going on!” I didn't have the luxury to find out as the ghouls appeared! “FUCK!’ i yelled as I ran toward them and started punching them. I still had fighter soul up, I just needed to get away before it ran out! Ghouls lunged and tackled me in all directions but I either grabbed them and threw them into other ghouls or I hit them and knocked them out. But one ghoul was able to tackle me to the ground and I was forced to kick them away. Before I could get up, however, another one jumped on me! No, not it wasn't a ghoul, it was scarlet! Blood dripping from her eyes as she grabbed the color of my shirt and screamed at me. “YOU LET THEM KILL ME!” She screamed! “NO!” I yelled back, “YOU'RE NOT SCARLET!” I punched the fack scarlet with everything I had into her face to get her off of me. My body felt beyond weak as I slowly lifted myself up to my knees and looked at the ghouls surrounding me. I was panting like crazy as I looked at the fake scarlet on the ground. Suddenly, her red hair started to turn into a light blond. “What the?” I said as I started to notice the rest of the world around me start to deteriorate and change. I was now on my knees in some halfway in the castle. Moaning vampires surrounded me as I notice a few of them grown and move. Then I looked down at the small body in front of me, and I suddenly couldn't breathe. Bab laid face down on the floor with her skirt slightly revealing her used diaper. “B-bab?” I asked then looked at my hands. “What did I just do?” “GET AWAY FROM HER!” Layna screamed as I was suddenly tackled to the ground. “BAB!” Melanthe yelled as she picked up Babs body and started shaking it slightly. “BABY BAB! WAKE UP! “B-bab,” I said before Gideon smashed my head into the ground. **************** Alexander March !- lv18 2- 106 (+4) A-73 (+3) )-67 (+5) 5-63 (+2) M-12 (+1) ?-70 %-2 N-* 3- B #-6 partner-Bab Ados Stats- lv19 HP-95 (+20) Attack-25 Defence-25 (+95) Speed-25 (+9) Regen-35 (+3) Manna-346 class-Sage Skills-Healer + Weapons-none Element-lightning Money ---- gold 30) silver 30) bronze 30) copper 32) ***************** the monster looks up at the castle with his now healed eye. a wide smile on his face. "finally. time to you monsters to go extinct." the monster said as he dragged Dracula's body on the ground.

I tried to edit the old one. but I just couldn't. I don't know why. hence why I made a completely new one. on places like DA I can edit the chapters themselves so I don't have to worry about that there.

ya, but i will be leaving the better version of the story. this way if more people want to get into the story and they read this, they are more likely to stay.