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Ok this appears to be going the very dark route. I will say that perverted mage who comes up with sexual applications for spells and monsters, and heroine with a god complex who replaces the oppressive evil system with one based on her own fetishes are both characters I could actually see at an rpg table (or in an iseki) so good job there. I'm kinda interested in seeing what the Queen says when she finally explains why she doing this, and I'm also somewhat reluctantly want to know more about this worlds apparent population of sexual monsters, so I'll keep checking this out.
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Ok this is a very different setup, so I'm interested in where it goes, I can see two obvious directions, one sorta dark, and one very very dark.
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Ok interesting, I wonder how the test works exactly, I'm guessing different types of people react differently to the screen? Interesting premise I will be waiting to see where it goes.
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bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Well this has been a brutal arc, and that was a good twist, and it brought together allot of threads and answered allot of questions that have been running through this whole story. I was expecting next chapter would be a cool off but it looks like we're getting another twist with Matilda, so I'm eager to see more. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
To be honest I thought it was someone else, its to easy and neat for it to be Aiden, but I'm interested in where this goes from here. This story keeps me hanging on the edge of my seat. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Yeah I was thinking something like this was coming, but that didn't make it any less brutal when it finally arrives. Its interesting how this fic jumps back and forth between WAF and pitch black human darkness and still works, I'm looking forward to seeing more. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
this is really getting interesting, I love how you manage to keep blending the brutal with the heartwarming and the fantastic with the real, and I love how richly characterized everyone is, though one question, how hurt is Hortensia's hand? Looking forward to seeing more. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
I was kinda suspecting something like this for a while, but this is still bone chilling horrifying. And yet I still can't wait for more. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
These last few chapters are just on twist after another, I'm hanging on the edge of my seat to see where this goes. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Ok that took a turn, in several senses, just when things were starting to look up they're spiraling, I gotta say I'm impressed how you manage to keep me guessing and hanging on my seat. I'm defintly waiting with baited breath for the next chatper. -
Nice to see this one again, I was actually trying to read it from my Deviantart favorites but then I found it was missing, so I'm glad its somewhere, it remains one of my favorites our of all your stories.
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bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Last few chapters have been amazingly dark and visceral, but this one is actually pretty heartwarming, even considering some pretty messed up subject matter. (the bit about Matilda being on the spectrum was also unexpected)I continue to read with interest to see where this goes. -
CatFly in the Cradle: A Dragon Warrior Monsters 2 Story.
smilekat414 replied to Baby Jemma's topic in Story and Art Forum
Ok interesting, I'm a DQ fan but I never played this specific game, interesting to see where this goes. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Seems like we get a plot twist every new chapter, I'm really interested in seeing where this goes. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Okay I didn't see this coming, but looking back I can see the foundation in previous chapters, gonna be interesting to see where this goes now that the can of worms has been opened -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
This story remains really compelling and really dark yet still heartwarming, I look forward to seeing where it goes next. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-17-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Nice to see that this story is continuing, very interesting direction. -
So I'm guessing result D is dominant, and result S is submissive, though I'm interested to learn how exactly they judge these, what their plans are for the two groups, what the heck they're doing with the kids in the weird kennel (I have some guesses but its hard to say) and what this is all inate of. So I think I need to congratulate you on building a really effective mystery. I'm definently looking forward to finding out what's next.
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Reborn as the Tragic First Boss...(Chapter 4 02/27/23)
smilekat414 replied to InkuHime's topic in Story and Art Forum
Ok this is an interesting take on the isekai (or however its spelled) stories, be interested to see where it goes, in particular the world building to justify this setup with a baby who doesn't ages but has demon summoning power. Also kinda interested in where the heck the cannon story goes from "I killed a baby, heroically" -
AB Sitter (New Story Posted 6/22/23)
smilekat414 replied to SolSombraYSoldados's topic in Story and Art Forum
Ok this is a fun premise and both chapters so far have been really enjoyable. -
an AB version of changeling the lost, very interesting, look forward to seeing where this goes.
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[Preston] From Jo to Joella (Ch. 36 added 8/27/20)
smilekat414 replied to CynthiaCM's topic in Story and Art Forum
Interesting story so far, very dark and potentially nasty premise but so far executed in a compelling way, in particular I like how the lead has been up to some legitimately concerning behaviors, but is still clearly meant to be sympathetic. I don't have high hopes for her new plan succeeding but I definitely want to see what it is. That said I admit I'm wondering about the original story for the "preston universe" that's been referenced several times in the comments, is it somewhere on this site?- 257 replies
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spoilers Discussion: Barbara Davis, Why Thirteen?
smilekat414 replied to bbykimmy's topic in Story and Art Forum
I finally sat down to play through this, and I must say it was really something impressive. It had some pretty interesting moments and twists (in particular I thought the twins and the sack bad endings were very creative) and I think it did a good job of getting the player into the mindset of a little in the dimension. I won't say it was my favorite of your works but it was certainly one of the more impressive projects I've seen on this site. Thanks allot for sharing this with us. -
Okay this is a fun take on the whole amazon little dynamic, and I'm now officially on the edge of my seat wondering what the bad parts are
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Adopt a little. (TV commercial parody)
smilekat414 replied to Jessi_foo-foo's topic in Story and Art Forum
That was actually pretty funny, well done.