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Ok this appears to be going the very dark route. I will say that perverted mage who comes up with sexual applications for spells and monsters, and heroine with a god complex who replaces the oppressive evil system with one based on her own fetishes are both characters I could actually see at an rpg table (or in an iseki) so good job there. I'm kinda interested in seeing what the Queen says when she finally explains why she doing this, and I'm also somewhat reluctantly want to know more about this worlds apparent population of sexual monsters, so I'll keep checking this out.
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Ok this is a very different setup, so I'm interested in where it goes, I can see two obvious directions, one sorta dark, and one very very dark.
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Ok interesting, I wonder how the test works exactly, I'm guessing different types of people react differently to the screen? Interesting premise I will be waiting to see where it goes.
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bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-28-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Well this has been a brutal arc, and that was a good twist, and it brought together allot of threads and answered allot of questions that have been running through this whole story. I was expecting next chapter would be a cool off but it looks like we're getting another twist with Matilda, so I'm eager to see more. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-28-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
To be honest I thought it was someone else, its to easy and neat for it to be Aiden, but I'm interested in where this goes from here. This story keeps me hanging on the edge of my seat. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-28-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Yeah I was thinking something like this was coming, but that didn't make it any less brutal when it finally arrives. Its interesting how this fic jumps back and forth between WAF and pitch black human darkness and still works, I'm looking forward to seeing more. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-28-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
this is really getting interesting, I love how you manage to keep blending the brutal with the heartwarming and the fantastic with the real, and I love how richly characterized everyone is, though one question, how hurt is Hortensia's hand? Looking forward to seeing more. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-28-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
I was kinda suspecting something like this for a while, but this is still bone chilling horrifying. And yet I still can't wait for more. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-28-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
These last few chapters are just on twist after another, I'm hanging on the edge of my seat to see where this goes. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-28-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Ok that took a turn, in several senses, just when things were starting to look up they're spiraling, I gotta say I'm impressed how you manage to keep me guessing and hanging on my seat. I'm defintly waiting with baited breath for the next chatper. -
Nice to see this one again, I was actually trying to read it from my Deviantart favorites but then I found it was missing, so I'm glad its somewhere, it remains one of my favorites our of all your stories.
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bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-28-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Last few chapters have been amazingly dark and visceral, but this one is actually pretty heartwarming, even considering some pretty messed up subject matter. (the bit about Matilda being on the spectrum was also unexpected)I continue to read with interest to see where this goes. -
CatFly in the Cradle: A Dragon Warrior Monsters 2 Story.
smilekat414 replied to Baby Jemma's topic in Story and Art Forum
Ok interesting, I'm a DQ fan but I never played this specific game, interesting to see where this goes. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-28-24)
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Seems like we get a plot twist every new chapter, I'm really interested in seeing where this goes. -
bedwetting Afternoon in the Chokey (Updated 4-28-24)
smilekat414 replied to SashaButters's topic in Story and Art Forum
Okay I didn't see this coming, but looking back I can see the foundation in previous chapters, gonna be interesting to see where this goes now that the can of worms has been opened