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    Looking for some feedback.

    in Critiques and Writer's Discussion

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    22 minutes ago, Apache Raccoon said:

    I've only read up to chapter 8 so far, but I'm really enjoying it.

    One thing though, I think it could be argued that a skirt that rests at the top of someones heels is a long skirt not a short one.

    Regarding the skirt, when kneeling the hem would fall to the heels. Probably didn't specify her position (sitting/kneeling) clear enough. Thanks for pointing it out

    7 hours ago, WBDaddy said:

    As far as the mechanics, I didn't pick up on a lot of problems other than sentence fragments.

    I do notice you use passive tense ("had done" instead of "did", "something was done by someone" instead of "someone did something") quite a bit.  You might consider rephrasing some things to create more of an assertive, action tone.

    The story itself (I'm on page 136 at this point) is interesting.  I'm not sure how far you're intending to go, but that was a hell of a long setup. (No spoilers given or accepted!) 

    Thanks for your input.

    With my often inconsistent use of tense its definitly something that I'm trying to work on so a big thanks for the detailed tips.

    And with the story sitting at around 187pg I'm estimating that I have another 30-40pg planned this far. Probably pushing it past the realm of a short story but at this point that is where it stands.

    diaper check during car rides and vacation trips

    in Our Lifestyle Discussion

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    On 4/30/2019 at 9:23 PM, herb330 said:

    The most annoying time is when my wife requires to stop the car at rest stops to have a diaper check.  It normally happens during long car rides.  She opens up the back of my diaper to check and feels the front.  If it is not wet  she will at least sprinkle a bir of powder in the back to keep the smell.  She will also from time to time give me a baby bottle to relax during the car ride.  It is usually filled with milk but sometimes just water or juice.

     

     

    For me this is something I would enjoy, you just need to find a compromise and explain how it makes you feel.

    Your ghost story

    in The Rest of your Life!

    Posted

    Apparently as a baby, my nursery was haunted, as long as I was at home I would sleep during the night and sometimes even laugh during the night. If I were  to sleep anywhere else it would be a long night for parents/family/etc.

    So yeah potential haunted farmhouse nursery :P

    What's your fursona?

    in Baby Furs

    Posted

    This is Tommy, he tries to be a big pup but he lacks the bladder/bowl control, and as such is kept as a baby all the time.

    He's a Mummys boy, loves meeting new people and will do anything to protect his friends.

    Enjoys playing with legos, hot wheels and his own tail.

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    in Diaper Lovers

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    There are some good DL accounts, and age players as well.

    Downside is it's a lot more open to criticism and shaming.. :(

    I still use it because there are some genuinely good people there

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    Diapers in highschool

    in [DD] Surveys

    Posted

    Living in a boarding school, made it hard but I still managed to sneak in some huggies dry nights and even wore one during school a couple of times.

    I wasn't at a wetting stage, just for comfort.

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    Wetting Till You Are Soaked

    in Diaper Lovers

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    The feeling of wearing a nappy that has been used to capacity feels great, you make the most of what you wear and the weight of it makes you feel babyish too.

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    The feeling of wearing a nappy that has been used to capacity feels great, you make the most of what you wear and the weight of it makes you feel babyish too.

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