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    I enjoyed the newest installment.  Things appear to be progressing as expected.  Below are a few editorial items I think need correcting.  Are  you squeezing your creative writing in while still working on your PhD research and writing you dissertation?

    I can see my brother smiling on the screen, then in a nasal voice that he uses all the time when he wants to be koi coy 

    As my dad was hanging up, I saw Abby walk in holding a feeding back bag.  

    eyes at how good it felt, it was like getting my hair washed before a haircut.  

    I could not help but blush when she wasted washed my privates and had me lean forward against 

     

  2. I’m kind of embarrassed that I didn’t recognize the bride -> bribe thing myself. While I was reading the story, my mind was on a different track and I was trying to think of a clothing outfit or something and the misspelling just didn’t occur to me.  

    This is definitely the kind of story that appeals to me and I am looking to forward to future stories from you. 

  3. It occurred to me after I sent the comment that the IV could be fluids/electrolytes since Will hadn’t been able to drink water since before going in the coma. 

    To me, his smartass response seemed to come out of the blue since just minutes earlier he’d been feeling overwhelmed and afraid due to his reduced size and physical dependence on others.  It also seems like his “secret” just got exposed outside the closed circle of need to know people in such a way that it could have serious repercussions. 

    How was Dune part 2?  Does this movie finish the book or do we have to wait for part 3 and 4?

  4. Interesting chapter.  I’m curious to see how this plays out.  You’ve laid the ground work for several conflicts and future paths for the story with the obnoxious woman in the elevator and Will potentially exploring his feminine side.

    I rather doubt that a psychologist would provide as many direct answers and alternatives as Denise did.  A psychologist’s typical strategy is to ask lots of questions to get the patient to expound on their feelings and think of the alternatives on their own.  I understand that doing it the way you did speeds up the story.

    I’m curious as to why Will has a continuing need for the IV.  The only drugs he seems to be getting are the anti-nausea medication and the pain medication.  Both of those are given intermittently, not as a continuous drip and could be administered via an intravenous port.

    I’m looking forward to the future installments of the story.

  5. Understand.  I sometimes have difficulty keeping track of the timeline. A week of my time waiting for the next chapter is only a day or half day in Will’s time.  I know that I’d get bored out of my mind just lying in bed or watching TV.  At some point, I’d expect him to be asking for his father’s cell phone to get some more intelligent entertainment.  At least his reduced fingers will better be able to handle the small keyboard on the cell phone.  The character development is what makes this story so interesting, so I’m more than willing to wait and see how things play out.

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  6. I never thought I’d find an ABDL story educational.  Your description of some of the cell processes and genetics caused me to do some research on line.  I never knew there was an error checking mechanism during the cell division process.  Of course, I took high school biology about 60 years ago and those processes may not have been known at that time or maybe they were and my memory isn’t very good.  Biology wasn’t really my favorite subject.

    In today’s society, I don’t see a compelling reason why Will has to align his personality with his changed body.  Plus, at his apparent physical age, the only outward differences between male and female are the length of the child’s hair and the color/style of the clothes they are dressed in.  The only people who would know the difference are the one’s who change his diapers.  I’m very curious to see how the story progresses.

     

  7. I found a couple more items.  Sorry, I used to do a lot of technical editing when I was working.

    “I want you to try and stay upright a little more today if you can.”

     As your penis was ascending into your lower abdomen and pelvic region, your urethra urethral moved upwards as a vaginal opening formed. 

    I do really enjoy your writing.  I think you capture the human feelings and reactions of your characters well.

  8. 55 minutes ago, LGGrace said:

    Great chapter.  I’d say Will is having a perfectly normal reaction to his abnormal circumstances.  Below are some recommended corrections in bold.

     

    55 minutes ago, LGGrace said:

    All I could do was nod yes and hang my head in shame.  She gently picked me up and laid me down.  Once my gown was out of the way, she untapped my diaper, and when the front was lowered down, I almost wanted to gag at the smell.  She made quick work and used an ungodly amount of wipes to clean me up.  I was quickly taped up

    She said, “It looks like the mutations trigger an autoimmune response.  Your body started to pretty much eat itself and attacked your bones and tissue.  Your body also seemed to try and reject any food or water during this process and treated it like food poisoning. That is why you are not able to keep anything down right now.  It uses your tissue and bone cells as substances to sustain you and expel the rest.  As you physically got younger, your limb proportions changed, 

     

    Taking in a deep breath, she said, “The changes to your reproductive system were unexpected.  We noticed that your testicles ascended into your lower abdomen at first.  Then your scrotum, followed by your penis.  As your penis was ascending into your lower abdomen

    With those last words, heavy sobs begin to rack my body.  My mom quickly picked me up and held me tightly in her arms.  I clung to her shirt and buried my face into her shoulder as she slowly rubbed my back.  Her shirt became drenched in my snot and tears as I cried out all my anger

     

     

     

     

  9. I suspect less “accident” and more stupidity or at least a lack of experience and not thinking of the consequences.  My friend and I also had fun doing ricochet shots around the basement of his house.  We tried shots into the corner going two or three walls.  Sometimes the BB came close to coming back to where it started from.

  10. Ouch.  When a friend and I were playing with a BB gun, I managed to get hit in the nose with a ricocheting BB.  We were shooting toys off the back of his sister’s oak potty chair.  I shot a little low and the BB rebounded straight back at me.  I learned my lesson with little damage.

  11. I’m thoroughly enjoying how the story is progressing.  There are few stories where I could actually see myself in the role of the protagonist. This is one of those few. Of course, based on my background and sexual identity, there are times when my reactions to certain situations would be significantly different.  Wearing a diaper and being incontinent wouldn’t bother me in the slightest.  Even the unexpected change in genitalia wouldn’t bother me, though I’d have been far more curious about the change than Will.  In his place, as soon as I was told about the changes, my hand would have been inside my diaper checking them out.  What would actually bother me the most is the loss of independence.  However, with a good computer, an AI avatar, and the ability to work remotely he could have a satisfying future.

  12. I was at partially toilet trained during the day by age 3 or so, but I frequently wore diapers during the day because our trailer lacked in door plumbing and the central building with the toilets was some distance away.  I wore diapers at night until I was 10 years old.  After that, my reduced bladder capacity meant that I frequently wore diapers anytime I couldn’t be assured of getting to a toilet within an hour or so.  I was still wearing diapers until I was around 15 years old on vacation car trips.  They were supposed to be “just in case”, but I have vivid memories of some notable accidents.

  13. I don’t soak used diapers, wet diapers I just toss in the diaper pail.   Messy diapers, I rinse off with an hand sprayer before tossing them in a diaper pail.  When the pail is full (about every 3-4 days), I run the load through a cold water wash cycle with detergent.  Next, I run the load through a full hot water wash cycle with a prewash cycle using Dreft for the wash cycle and Tide detergent with borax for the prewash cycle.  I’ve found this procedure effective getting the diapers completely clean and eliminating all stains.

  14. If your mother does not know of, support, or at least tolerate your activities, I’d have to agree with the above comments and recommend that you postpone your diaper wearing activities until you have a place of your own where you will have the privacy needed.  I can tell you from personal experience that parents will find out no matter how careful or clever you think you are.

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