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So I said...
*looks around cautiously*
Biiiiiiitch...
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Wow!
I haven't seen that cartoon since I was in kindergarten, but I remember liking it! Really pretty character design and animation! I would always change the channel really quickly when my older brother would walk in the room and make fun of me for watching it
Gonna have to pick some episodes of that up, I love 80's cartoons!
I think he's talking about the modern re-boot. I haven't seen the old episodes personally, but the new ones are amazing.
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But what doc file? I feel like I'm missing something here...
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No interest in what?
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It might also have to do with me not really connecting my sex life with the Amish. But that's just a theory.
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So, I'm trying once more to write a story, this time with more planning involved. Among other things, (Namely, threatening myself with no AB/DL roleplaying if I don't do.my writing,) I also am trying to plan ahead more, IE a full storyboard.
The thing is, I've never done one before.
I have a loose idea of plot in my head, (detailed below,) but don't know exact details or specifics yet. Or, for that matter, if anyone will like it. (If nobody reads my story I get kinda de-thused about it,hence I try and write stuff people will like.)
Anyone have advice? Either plot, or organizationally?
Plot: A team of planetary colonists (IE space pilgrims) crash-land their ship on an alien planet and set up a small colony. However, the local wildlife rips them apart, killing most. One of the survivors, (the main character,) gets separated from the group and attacked by a parasite which hurries into the colon and large intestine, essentially replacing them. This causes incontinence for obvious reasons, but may or may not give her super powers. (I can't decide.) She reconnects with the small band of survivors, they fight their way back to the ship, and manage to escape the planet. Or something. There would be on-ship (post-escape) drama too, probably ending with them making it home.
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Granted. Seeing as clocks cannot effect the overall flow of time, nothing happened and you wasted your wish.
I wish I could have all the diaper paraphernalia that I wanted, whenever I want, for free.
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"Eh, why not," Sarah said with a grin. "I beat one girl, why not you? C'mon, get two more drinks, we'll go," Sarah goaded.
The guy grinned, sitting down across from her as someone grabbed two more pitchers. Apparently, they had a lot of these.
"Okay, I'm game," he said, smirking. "But this time let's make it a bit more interesting."
"How so?" Sarah asked, curious.
"Oh, I dunno, a wager," he offered. "Don't know what we'd bet on, though."
Sarah thought about it for a moment, before deciding. "Tell you what..."
A. No bet.
B. Take the wager. (You decide the bet.)
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You do realize there is a roleplay section, right? I'm just saying, this would be far more appropriate there.
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Granted. But there's nobody to take care of you, so when you inevitably soil your diapers you get a terrible rash and you are hungry all day.
I wish I could master Lucid dreaming...
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No...
Have you ever crashed a go-kart?
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"Drinking contest sounds good," she said, handing over the cup. "I can knock down a few cups." Grinning, she followed him out back, sat down at the table across from another girl, maybe a year older than her, and was given a pitcher. "When do we sta..."
"Go!" Someone yelled, and the other girl started drinking.
Cursing, Sarah grabbed her pitcher and started chugging, feeling the cold beer down her throat. It felt like it was taking ages, but she couldn't check on her opposition without lowering the pitcher. Just a little left... And done. She tossed down the pitcher, looking at the other girl, who was barely halfway done with hers. Giving a victorious cheer, she stood up.
"Yeah! Woo-hoo!" She said, doing a celebratory dance and falling into the arms of the boy.
"Nice job. I'd make up a line about buying you a drink, but I think it'd be wasted," he said, grinning.
What do you do? (Trying something new here. Anything you say that could plausibly be done.)
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Dreams do have a meaning, like I said. They mean that the things occurring in them exist somewhere in your memory, and have probably been thought of recently. There's nothing mystical about it.
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Sarah decided, if she was gonna work up the nerve to talk to boys, she'd need to get a little bit drunk first. Walking over to the keg, she grabbed a cup and began filling it up. The yellow beer filled it quickly, and just as she was about to take a sip someone stopped her.
"First drink of the night, mate?" The guy asked, standing a few feet away. Clearly, he was *not* on his first drink of the night.
"Yeah," Sarah replied, a bit shyly. "Why do you ask?"
"Well, so long as you aren't drunk yet, we have a little wager goin' on some matches around back. Who can drink the most, fastest,that sorta thing. I'll put twenty quid on you, if you're interested," he said, grinning a toothey smile at her.
"I... Well, I guess..."
Do you:
Refuse, enjoy your drink
Try to drink the most
Try to drink the fastest
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Sarah couldn't believe her friends had roped her into this. I mean, sure, it was going to be great, and she was legally old enough to drink now, so that was no problem. But a frat party? Weren't those supposed to be alcoholic rapefests or something, according to TV? Nay, shed be fine. Besides, there were supposed to be a bunch of guys from the football team there, so she could probably flirt them up a bit.
Walking in, the music was loud, and the party was moving along nicely. Someone had brought a keg and a big pack of red Solo cups, so the beer was taken care of. Over in the 'living room,' the dance party was getting started, with a mosh pit forming and some good music playing. It looked like there was good food out back, too, someone had brought a grill and was cooking up burgers, hot dogs, and other great looking stuff.
Then of course there were the boys.
Do you...
A. Get something to drink from the keg
B. Join the dance party
C. Get some food out back
D. Chat up some of the boys from the football team.
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Just not at all, really.
Thanks, by the way. It felt a little awkward asking that, but I've been wondering a while and figured this was a fairly safe place to ask, so... thanks.
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I'm not exactly sure where to put this, but it seemed like the place...
I'm trying to figure out what my 'sexuality' is, and I really and kind of clueless. I'm male, and attracted to both genders, but...
I tend to find girls to be 'cute' or 'good looking' more often, physically speaking. However, when regressing, I identify more female and become more equally balanced. Also, while I think either gender can be 'attractive', I'm not turned on by men or women, with almost no desire to have sex with anyone...
I think this categorizes as 'bi,' but I really don't know and am kind of lost...
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Sounds good!
Now, for chapter one details (last setup, good old fashioned writing after this I promise:)
Is she:
At a party
In class
In the dorms, just waking up
At lunch
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Sorry, Rachie, but someone beat you to the punch.
Girl, 21 it is.
Now, one more setup question, pick one from every category:
Are in college
Have a job, but no college degree in sight
Are still living with your parents
Have daytime wetting issues
Occasionally wet the bed
No issues
Are straight
Are bi
Are lesbian
In a relationship
Single and looking
Single, not looking
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It's a dream.
Let me say that again.
IT'S A DREAM.
It means precisely Dick. A dream is your brain firing random synapses in a pattern that is translates in the most sensible way possible. Unless you were lucid during this dream that's all it was. Even if you were, it still means nothing. Basically, all that is a jumble of things you saw, heard, and thought about recently being processed in random ways. So, one more time:
It's a dream.
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So, I'm a little loopy right now, but I'll keep up with this even when I'm rested, I swear!
Basically, I will give two to four options, you pick one. I write that bit, give four more options, continue. First response gets the pick!
So, my first question will be just a bit different, a basic question plus one variable that is completely random. who are you?
A boy!
A girl!
And, how old are you? (16+)
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Well, I got it and I read it... Sorry, but I don't think I'll be getting anything else from you. The art was decent, (about what I expected from the sample photos,) but the story didn't really go anywhere, there was only one (fairly short) messing scene, and all in all I felt like there wasn't too much good stuff in there. The plot wasn't fantastic, but I can live with that, except there was a ton of buildup (nearly a third of the comic before you get to diaper content, two thirds before the first wetting). I realize that it wasn't just about the diaper bits, but all in all I honestly felt that out of 60 or 70 pages, (the PDF said 70,) there was only a small fraction of satisfying ABDL settings. I don't want my money back, but nor do I expect to get any of your other work...
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Okay then! I am totally buying this as soon as my paycheck comes in.
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One more question, what does it download as? Pdf? (Oh, and can I change the file name?)
Working On A Storyboard, Need Help
in Critiques and Writer's Discussion
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Well, um, since nobody responded, I'll just post what I made on my own. I probably should have put spoiler tags back there, but I didn't, and I won't here either due to certain reasons...
In other words: I don't know how to do spoiler tags on a phone. So, here's the warning now: SPOILERS!
(I just made something loose for storyboarding, I still would like help if anyone has advice! Please!)
Chapter 1ish? Spaceship crash-lands on earth. Small group (>11) survive.
Carry vital gear to best nearby campsite, unpack. Three of them sent to scout out the area for edible resources?
Vague foreshadowing bit to later catastrophe
Group Scouting group finds several edible resources, collects them, returns prematurely to bolster the low food supply. (Food damaged in the crash, we'll say.)
Food causes unexpected loss of bladder and/or bowel control, due to alien particle that was missed. (Maybe, or I erase this bit and the last bit to condense the storyk
line.)
Scout team goes out again for more full research, (this time on a longer journey,) lose radio signal, get lost and walk right into an ambush by alien predator animals.
Meanwhile, back at the camp/colony, another ambush, several die.
Reinforcement of camp as predator animals continue to circle them.
Um... Last survivor wakes up, starts trying to get back.
Attacks on camp continue, decision to evacuate made.
Back to survivor, trying to get home
Back to group, packing up vital gear and evacuating.
Attempts at repairing crashed ship
Survivor finds note, hurries to ship
Barely makes it in time for escape
Um... That's all I have right now. Am I doing it right?