Gawain

I'm so sorry for the bump, I would just ask the author to please give us another chapter? This was going somewhere, and I liked it. Anyway, I hope you'll see that people want more, and... Well. Give us more. No fair to just end it there, mate! x)

redneck: I don't think Iceland itself is the problem. It all looks a little fishy, if you ask me. The likelyhood of the person knowing someone uses diapers, then managing to steal some and then get caught? Sounds a bit like the storyline to every bad story written out there.

The grammar, punctuation, everything like that is pretty much self explanatory. It needs to be there, or the story will be pretty much useless to anyone but the author. Unfortunately. The thing that makes or breaks a story (in something else than preference, sissy/non sissy, whatever), is the setting. If the story is placed in a bubble, for instance at a school, in a nurses office, in a house, and it just never seems to leave or introduce new settings, it'll get old fast. Placing a story in a proper universe, be it sci-fi, alternative universe or pretty much just the one we live in is just so important to give a story life. Additionally, the Mary-Janes get old fast. It's a bit like Twilight. You find a an author who has pretty much written how he/she WISHES he/she was like, their life, lovers, everything.

I've been reading your stories for a while now, so thank you. Anyway, the idea of letting him struggle with his potty training is amusing. Very amusing, in fact. As it is, she's had more trouble than he has with her nappies, especially with the extra punishment she goes through. Him ending up more reliant on the nappies than she is, sounds like a good way to balance it all out. If you're planning on letting them end it anyway, I'm still fond of the idea of him becoming at least in part incontinent.