littlebopeeper

Been thinking some more about this. Should anyone marry when in serious therapy? Right now, Sarah is Ian's security blanket, but if he has a breakthrough, security will become suffocation. Maybe he should go to Poland just to get away from everybody.

Agree wholeheartedly.

I find myself thinking that Kerry has this right. Ian doesn't know about the house or the children, and no one is asking his opinion about the honeymoon, which is weird because he's been everywhere. He can't read Rita and he's not happy with Sarah. Until this chapter, I expected him to run off with Vickie, but now you have to wonder if he's found true love with Priscilla. One of the things I love about this story is that things keep going off the rails just like they do in real life.

Oh, wow! Ms. Francine's Nanny and Wet Nurse Academy definitely demands a story of its own. And how much is this party costing? Is this our taxpayer dollars at work?

Surprised that this doesn't have more comments. I really appreciate stories that take the time to construct a realistic setting; while this one is taken to excess, the sense of helplessness when you are caught up in a 72 hour psych ward hold is dead on.

Interesting. So is she flying under the radar, or is it more like she's watching the game from the bullpen, but sees it differently than the fans because she knows the players on the field personally?

Rita is really hard to read! Is she on Vickie's side, or playing both ends against the middle? Is this why she is the only major character for whom we have no back story? A great, psychologically complex story. Keep it coming!

Hope you will run with my idea! It's really flattering to think that a reader can influence how a story is playing out.

Great twist. Is Vickie gonna "retire" once Ian starts making the big bucks?

Should be one heck of a party. Wonder if Tommy will sit down for a chat with some of Veronica's earlier babies. One thing I've wondered about is how much the nannies got better at their jobs over time. Can't wait for the next segment.

Vickie's got a great job! Treat yourself to a nice mid-morning orgasm, write the experience up in a report, and collect your paycheck. Ah, but Sarah's on to her. How far down the rabbit hole will Vickie end up going?

Wasn't sure about this one, but it was easy to look up. Wasn't there a British version of this skit?

Fantastic conclusion to the season. I'm happy to say that I guessed right on one of the revelations, but missed completely on the other. Can't wait for the second season to get under way. Really want to know how far Sarah can take Vickie down to becoming a baby.

The moral of the story has gotta be, if you are gonna use a cleaning service., put things away before the cleaning lady shows up!

Hadn't thought of this, but it kind of makes sense because she is now openly talking about her diapers. I want to know more about scalp hunting. Because there's a bounty now on Ian's scalp, I'm assuming that this is a points system, not just who can bag the most professors. I loved these commercials, especially the one with Rodney Dangerfield chairing the meeting where they all get together to vote on who's the most popular.

Another nice piece. Like the way you use these interludes to show us familiar characters in a different setting.

Absolutely terrific chapter. In fact, if I had to choose, I'd say this was the best one to date. And what's the name of this resort?

Wow. Sarah is turning out to be a control freak with some seriously kinky fantasies, and she has a mother who is spurring her on to bring her fantasies to life. I wonder if Ian would still marry her if he knew what was going on in her head. But will he marry her? The last scene in this chapter makes me wonder who Ian really works for. Another great chapter. Will you give us the next one that ends the season as a New Year's Eve present? And when does season two start?

Nicely done conclusion. Lots of resolution, but still enough loose threads to demand an epilogue. I still haven't figured out who the bad guys are. Please don't keep us dangling so long this time! Will there be a sequel?

I urge you to edit the scene in which he is being changed in public, and is viewed by a mother and daughter. At the very least, please indicate that the daughter is 18 or older.

That will be interesting, especially with her interactions with Vickie. I had the same thought. If Vickie and Ian get wasted on Thursday night, both will need to be punished big time. Could this possibly be the weekend Sarah's mom comes to pay a visit? She's a scary lady.

VERY steamy scene! Sarah has lots of kinky fantasies, gets turned on by spanking and then paddling Ian's rear end, then Ian uses his tongue to send her over the moon. Wow! Getting smashed on Thursday night will surely earn Ian a repeat performance, but how will Sarah punish Vickie? A paddling for sure, but what else?

Me too. The opening paragraphs have her, at age 32, still huffing, and still with a limited field of view.

B (I saw the movie)

Good point about Rita. We have learned a lot about Sarah and Vickie, and it looks like you are going to flesh Ian out big time in the next few chapters. I'm looking forward to lifting the curtain on Rita as well. If she has an active social life, it has yet to surface. Will we learn more about her when she and Ian sit down for their talk on Thursday?