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The Aladdin rule as I know it.

I like how the bladder and bowel regression was stated to be greater than "normal". All but stating that some is totally normal and acceptable. I'm sure they knew pretty much what was going on. Northrup and Greene just overreached and made it too obvious and brought unwanted attention to their activities. I have a feeling Charlotte is gonna wind up missing at somepoint or start spontaneously having accidents herself. They'll try to use that to get rid of and discredit her. Makenzie seems pretty by the books but I'm waiting for a curveball at some point.

Charlotte now has a big target on her back.

I must admit I almost feel bad for Kelly with how much everyone else just treats her like crap. Almost. I know she's awful. I wonder if those protests are getting any publicity. Too much and it might make Emerson look bad.

That's low. I guess even in the DD the transphobia exist to the extent that it can be used politically. Cancelling my travel plans.

A little early for the "I loves you" but hey they are teenagers in college. Stacy makes a grand return to the DD to meet with Supreme Court Justice Cameron Sylvester and is like "Let us join our houses!" Here's hoping this pilot just stays as a pilot and Connor and Beth don't get roped into doing a full show. I'm starting to think Kelly's script getting selected has something to do with whoever is after Beth. It could be a coincidence but I don't trust coincidence here.

So no nanite shields going forward for a bit. I'm down for this development.

Clichés only suck when you do them poorly. My thoughts while reading the script were "yeah I'd watch it". You can almost see the seams where Charlotte and Sebastian tried to make it less humiliating.

Connor is freaking out about his character, but Beth is gonna be playing Callie, right? She's gonna be right there with him.

With how well known the effects of their breast milk seems to be, you would think Amazons would be very strict on weaning their biological children that they intend to grow up. I know its fun to mock how cliché the script is but lets face it we all love a little cliché every now and then.

More of the script showing a classic DD scenario overall. I did notice both the doctor and the judge still give Brian a chance to back out in the story. Thats generous... And yeah those extras Brian is getting in are suspicious. My guess: Since Sarah intends to free Brianna after a year, she was sure to add nanites that will age her up from toddler body to adult body when that happens. If that happens.

The sequel we've all been waiting for. So excited!

Good chapter. I don't think we got much in the way of winter scenes before in your stories. Geez that stuff they gave him is insanely strong. Someone's head should roll.

True, but to me thats on the author not the audience who will inevitably do what they do.

Why would it? Its what fans do. Besides, I think "I knew it" is a more rewarding feeling than the fleeting "didn't see that coming".

Getting a little meta here with the DD clichés. I'm now curious with how IVs work in this dimension.

Well that looks horrible for them.

Amanda's gonna be throwing so weight around to protect her grandchild. I'm curious, if Connor was to demerit out, couldn't Amanda claim him for herself?

Charlotte's nice. I'm instantly suspicious lol. So they are getting Connor some temporary nanite adjustments? I see nothing going wrong with that. Kelly is coming across as quite dumb.

When they say don't drink the water...

I'm pretty sure it was poop.

I knew Rachel was being screwed with. They were clever enough not to program her to see Beth as too little too soon. Well damn those other guys made the worst decision they could have made. Like others I'm curious about Lilly's mom. You don't just name drop that without it meaning something!

I'm more concerned about her being tampered with. Some unseen foe has it out for Beth and they can hack.

Yeah I'm keeping an eye on Rachel. I suspect she's gradually gonna get more and more... insistant with care of Beth. And yeah I'm face palming at the behavior of his nest mates. At the same time though I figured he would become an object of ire to them from the get go.

I read it on your patreon when it first released but chapter 100 is still my favorite.