amandas_diapered_boy Posted July 22, 2023 Share Posted July 22, 2023 I have an idea for a story, but I don't really know how I want it to go or how to end it. The idea is a husband is tired of his wife's spending habits and her overall lazy attitude. So he sends her to a resort. She thinks it is for a vacation, but the resort is a front of an institute for wayward adults. They reduce the adults down to babies and then reraise them into being productive adults. I'm not sure if at the end when she comes back if she will be back to an adult, stuck in toddler in diapers or somewhere between the two. Any feedback on it would be greatly appreciated. Link to comment
Bladderbrain Posted August 16, 2023 Share Posted August 16, 2023 I think your best option would be to decide which ending sounds best to you. Write it from the perspective of what you would like to see. Do you want her to come back seeing it as a lesson learned, a new life style, a new outlook on life? The more you like the story the more you will put into it. Link to comment
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