SashaButters Posted May 11, 2016 Share Posted May 11, 2016 Taking a chance and throwing this up here. I could use some help to make it better. Proofreading and editing aren't my strong suits. Love to hear your feedback (good or bad) I can take it XD Link to comment
SashaButters Posted May 27, 2016 Author Share Posted May 27, 2016 So, yeah, just finished posting the last of what I have done. I haven't worked on it in a few weeks. I've been going through and re-writing in from the beginning because I wrote myself into a corner. I know there aren't too many diaper scenes in this, so many (most) Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted May 27, 2016 Share Posted May 27, 2016 It's not that I'm not interested because of ABDL content, it's that sci-fi has never been a big attraction for me. Link to comment
SashaButters Posted May 27, 2016 Author Share Posted May 27, 2016 14 minutes ago, WBDaddy said: It's not that I'm not interested because of ABDL content, it's that sci-fi has never been a big attraction for me. Link to comment
critchy Posted May 27, 2016 Share Posted May 27, 2016 I love the Sphere! I think it's one of the most original and well written stories on this site! I've been hooked since the beginning, and like WB its not really my genre, but I think you've done it in a very interesting way 1 Link to comment
SashaButters Posted May 27, 2016 Author Share Posted May 27, 2016 6 minutes ago, critchy said: I love the Sphere! I think it's one of the most original and well written stories on this site! I've been hooked since the beginning, and like WB its not really my genre, but I think you've done it in a very interesting way Thank you! ^^ Link to comment
WordsmithAlice Posted June 15, 2016 Share Posted June 15, 2016 Wow. I just finished what you have thus far, and there is 1 Link to comment
SashaButters Posted June 16, 2016 Author Share Posted June 16, 2016 Thank you ^^ That was very well thought out! I genre hop. Once I tried romance, comedy, another time mystery, etc etc. You are definitely NOT the first person to say the story has a split personality. XD That's been the major complaint so far, with good reason. I'm trying to iron the kinks out. Think of this as a very rough first draft. I had written this for Nanowrimo. You don't have a plot in mind, you just write without really thinking. I am working on a different version of this to make it sound even. I didn't get a clear plot until half way through. That's why it takes such a sudden dark turn. Link to comment
WordsmithAlice Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 I can't exactly blame you Link to comment
SashaButters Posted June 16, 2016 Author Share Posted June 16, 2016 Hmm maybe it's different for everyone? I have a friend who won't write a single thing without a huge detailed outline. I cant come up with a SINGLE thing planning things out XD I sit staring at an empty computer screen or piece of paper. I take all my stories sentence by sentence never knowing where it's going to go. Some people tell me WOW what a twist! I never saw that coming! And I laugh because I didn't either =P 1 Link to comment
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