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  1. AdultInnocence
    Liking the story so far. It is in the same manner of other stories of forced because of a legal reason, but the approach is very different and refreshing. I did notice a few grammatical errors but nothing that really throws the reader off. The biggest thing is when she is reading her e-mail, and it has therapy timeframe, I think you put PM instead of AM for counseling times? Otherwise that would be an 11 hour appointment
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    Been following along on the updates. I had to re-read the first couple paragraphs of the first chapter before reading the chapter before this to re-familiarize myself. After that it was a little easier to follow.
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    Another good chapter! I like how the story isn't all fields and roses so to speak.
  4. AdultInnocence
    If you do get another out before Christmas that would be awesome. It wouldn't bother me if this story went another 30 chapters. I hate seeing a good story end but it is one of those inevitable things. Glad the other story is going well for you too and that it is almost done. I am not sure how well I would handle writing two stories at once. I am afraid I would get one mixed up and then a reader would be like "ummm, is there something happening or happened that we don't know about" lol. Stay safe, have fun writing, and looking forward to more.
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    If you haven't read the first part of this series, it explains a bit. Without giving too much away, it's a secret community. Edit: I was thinking of Lulu and not Olive May. I may have to skim over part one and see. Was Olive the second person that was in with Lulu but we didn't really meet? Part 1 of Story
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    Yay for an update! I really like how this story is going. There is definitely conflict and it is different. I like that it isn't just an easy pick Olive up and take her home too. Looking forward to the next updates. The great part about reading a story that is not almost done is getting to give feedback. The bad part, waiting for the next chapter lol!
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    Enjoying it so far and love that the plot on this one is a bit different. I had imagined that it may have been in the hospital since the changes from the first part of this series (trying to not give away any spoilers) but you took it to a whole different angle. If it would be possible to fit in what ever happened with Willa's brother or if he knew what he was doing, it would be great to give us readers an idea of why, and especially how he found out about a program so secretive. If it wouldn't work with the flow that's okay too, I understand.
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    Enjoyed the story. Started reading it on another site, and couldn't find it here. Finally found it and glad I did. I loved the Dr's reaction to what happened to Luna and glad he was able to take care of things (not wanting to type spoilers out in case others haven't gotten that far). You completely could have wrote more with the new twist but I'm glad you didn't. Will have to go check out part 2 for sure.
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    I have been fortunate enough to not have to deal with one. I am pretty sure my friends child, it was a kidney infection because but early symptoms maybe? There was no pain just sudden loss of control. I like reading speculation when it follows where the story may be going. For example, I don't see her ending up in diapers at school, especially with the hint of her seeing someone else's non child like pull up. It's hard to differentiate sometimes between someones fantasy and if they actually see it being a possibility. I do like the story and looking forward to the next update.
  10. AdultInnocence
    Definitely going to have to subscribe to updates to this. I'm really liking the story so far. Side note really quick: Comments about how she will probably end up in diapers for school etc sound more like a reader's fantasy rather than following the story line. Saying the mother may come up with other rules, that is realistic. I try to leave speculation that sound like what may be my hope out of things. With that said, you described the Tranquility ATN's really well. They are one product that comes up easy in a search, along with Tena, Abena, and some others. At 15 the youth size would have been too small since those are generally geared toward pre-teen ages as an in-between to child and adult diapers, and are cloth backed. The small size, would have been the first size in the lineup to be plastic backed, and you portrayed Sarah's surprise to the four tapes really well. She didn't have a secret desire to wear, and you can tell the battle in her head each time she is diapered for the night. The mom is forcing her, but in a realistic way of a "my house my rules" type fashion and is applying the same rules to both girls regardless of age. I had a friend who one of her daughters all of a sudden started having day accidents so started having to wear her pullups during the day too (she was a bedwetter.) The mom made the comment that she was using them just like diapers and at the time I though maybe put her back in them. We stopped talking a little while after that, then it hit me that it may have been a uti, bladder, or kidney infection and I really hoped that the mom figured it out. Even though people say that the mom should be thinking of the doctor first, it is easy to know what should happen and something different when you are close being, or are involved in something like that. Really liking the story, and am just skipping over the comments that are trying to give you ideas. It really takes away from just waiting to see what will happen. I do think it is safe to say Lisa is the one in the other pullups, and we will just have to see what happens at her house. The realistic parts of her figuring out before checking Sarah's bag, is someone that has had to be so conscious about them, will see signs others that aren't used to wearing will not.
  11. AdultInnocence
    If I am following correctly the mother adds things to their drinks to make their tummy feel like it does and then they have no choice but to mess because they can't hold it. It doesn't explain if the cramps become stronger if they try or if they even want to try. They get in trouble for wet panties or pull-ups but are expected to use their diapers. It is like the mother is finding excuses to treat them more babyish. You have also hinted to the idea the mother could treat them like Aimee and use shots instead if they fussed too much. Will be interesting to see where this goes.
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